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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome prts,riya is so happy feel so bad 4 geet n their daughter.hope armaan succed in unitng dem.thnxs 4 pm daer
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both Maan and Geet have to look beyond their egos! Both of them have to share the blame for their differences. I sympathize with both of them.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
glad geet is not getting married
loved maan nd riya
sooo cute
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! I want Maan to find out the truth soon! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i still need to get back to u about the pm...sorry have not been able to...cousins r here from US...will get sum time before the end of this weekend...
love
rachana
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey sweet heart .. sorry for the late comment .. just finished reading the last 3 chapters and I choked on many instances ' u've written them really well ' 👏

and now my two cents ' Edit: OK this has gone much more than 2 cents 😳

both Maan and Geet are at fault and there are no doubts about it ' its obvious ' but its much more of Geet's fault that the things so went out of hands ' Maan reacted coz he dint know the background of the things .. he dint know the involvement of so many ppl who were trying to break their relationship ' but Geet ko to pata thaa ' she knew wat happened and who were responsible ' when he said that he slept with t he woman ' any fool wud also have realized that he's saying it just for the heck of it ' he's admitting to nurse his bruised ego ' since Geet questioned him ' the same Geet who told him that she had betrayed him and moved on ' and when that person questions him .. obviously he will react the way he reacted .. he wanted to hurt her .. the way he was hurting ' if at all Maan slept with that woman, that was out of pure rage and anger ' Geet's acceptance of betrayal instigated him to do so '

Geet is hurt coz Maan dint trust her and questioned her ' but did she trust him enuff to confide in him ' no ' she went to Yash ' and discussed the matter which was personal to Maan and Geet and their relationship ' why did she assumed that Maan will regret that night which she cherished the most ' she did not trust him with that ' did she had doubts on his love towards her ' she was the one who inlvolved a third person in their relationship ' be it Maan or anyone else ' no one wud bear that some one else is intruding in to their private space ' she accuses him of not trusting her after 16 years of relationship but she did the same ' not trust him with their 16 years of relationship ' they were not just lovers .. they were best friends too ' then why did she involved Yash in it ' apart from all this the thing which really pisses me off is that Geet knew that Brij was the one who misused their MU .. she knew wat Armaan did which escalated the issue further ' yet she is not ready to see things rationally ' she's not seeing that Maan's reaction was the outcome of mere rage and hurt ' she knew that he doesn't know all this ' wasn't that enuff to make her understand the gravity of the situation ' yet she let it go out of hands '

In all this fiasco the worst I guess are the so called near ones of Maan and Geet ' Yash , Armaan , Arohi ' I really feel like killing them all ' these jerks knew the whole story yet they just sat as an audience and watched things go haywired ' especially Yash .. am sorry he is not a friend of Geet which he proudly considers himself to be ' he knows every single thing .. he knows that despite of everything Geet and Maan are still madly in love with each other and instead of trying to make Geet see the things more logically he always ends up instigating her .. preventing her to think on her wrong decisions '

The scene when Maan came her drunk and admitted that he loves her better than that Yash was sooo heart wrenching ' cudnt she see his helplessness '. His hurt ' his pain ' I dint understood her when she said that how cud Maan stoop so low when he said that he can love her more than Yash ' he asked that question out of pain ' she herself admitted that she betrayed him for Yash '

Wat about Reya ' whats her fault in all this ' doesn't she has the right to know her dad , to get her father's love ' doesn't Maan has the right to know about his daughter '

Plzz no more ego clashes ' this complicated mess is the result of their stupid egos only ' plzz let Maan know about the facts now ' he will surely regret his behavior ... but mostly I want Geet to repent ' she needs to realize Maan's pain and wat has she done to him ' she needs to re think about her wrong decisions ' and repent ' someone needs to knock some sense in her ' someone needs to make her realize that the accusations she has for Maan are very well valid for her too '

I know u said that apparently Yash will be instrumental in uniting Maaneet but I want him to first realize his mistakes ' and repent ' his foolishness worked as an oil to already raging fire ' ohh how I hate him and want to kick the shit out of him ' arrgghh ' and why did Armaan gave him the fake letter ' 😡

Ok ' u wanted the comments and I gave u an overload of them '

comments chahiye thaa na .. ab bhugto ' 😆
Cant wait to read more '

love

Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

i still need to get back to u about the pm...sorry have not been able to...cousins r here from US...will get sum time before the end of this weekend...

love
rachana



Its okay dear;D;D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

hey sweet heart .. sorry for the late comment .. just finished reading the last 3 chapters and I choked on many instances ' u've written them really well ' 👏

and now my two cents ' Edit: OK this has gone much more than 2 cents 😳

both Maan and Geet are at fault and there are no doubts about it ' its obvious ' but its much more of Geet's fault that the things so went out of hands ' Maan reacted coz he dint know the background of the things .. he dint know the involvement of so many ppl who were trying to break their relationship ' but Geet ko to pata thaa ' she knew wat happened and who were responsible ' when he said that he slept with t he woman ' any fool wud also have realized that he's saying it just for the heck of it ' he's admitting to nurse his bruised ego ' since Geet questioned him ' the same Geet who told him that she had betrayed him and moved on ' and when that person questions him .. obviously he will react the way he reacted .. he wanted to hurt her .. the way he was hurting ' if at all Maan slept with that woman, that was out of pure rage and anger ' Geet's acceptance of betrayal instigated him to do so '

Geet is hurt coz Maan dint trust her and questioned her ' but did she trust him enuff to confide in him ' no ' she went to Yash ' and discussed the matter which was personal to Maan and Geet and their relationship ' why did she assumed that Maan will regret that night which she cherished the most ' she did not trust him with that ' did she had doubts on his love towards her ' she was the one who inlvolved a third person in their relationship ' be it Maan or anyone else ' no one wud bear that some one else is intruding in to their private space ' she accuses him of not trusting her after 16 years of relationship but she did the same ' not trust him with their 16 years of relationship ' they were not just lovers .. they were best friends too ' then why did she involved Yash in it ' apart from all this the thing which really pisses me off is that Geet knew that Brij was the one who misused their MU .. she knew wat Armaan did which escalated the issue further ' yet she is not ready to see things rationally ' she's not seeing that Maan's reaction was the outcome of mere rage and hurt ' she knew that he doesn't know all this ' wasn't that enuff to make her understand the gravity of the situation ' yet she let it go out of hands '

In all this fiasco the worst I guess are the so called near ones of Maan and Geet ' Yash , Armaan , Arohi ' I really feel like killing them all ' these jerks knew the whole story yet they just sat as an audience and watched things go haywired ' especially Yash .. am sorry he is not a friend of Geet which he proudly considers himself to be ' he knows every single thing .. he knows that despite of everything Geet and Maan are still madly in love with each other and instead of trying to make Geet see the things more logically he always ends up instigating her .. preventing her to think on her wrong decisions '

The scene when Maan came her drunk and admitted that he loves her better than that Yash was sooo heart wrenching ' cudnt she see his helplessness '. His hurt ' his pain ' I dint understood her when she said that how cud Maan stoop so low when he said that he can love her more than Yash ' he asked that question out of pain ' she herself admitted that she betrayed him for Yash '

Wat about Reya ' whats her fault in all this ' doesn't she has the right to know her dad , to get her father's love ' doesn't Maan has the right to know about his daughter '

Plzz no more ego clashes ' this complicated mess is the result of their stupid egos only ' plzz let Maan know about the facts now ' he will surely regret his behavior ... but mostly I want Geet to repent ' she needs to realize Maan's pain and wat has she done to him ' she needs to re think about her wrong decisions ' and repent ' someone needs to knock some sense in her ' someone needs to make her realize that the accusations she has for Maan are very well valid for her too '

I know u said that apparently Yash will be instrumental in uniting Maaneet but I want him to first realize his mistakes ' and repent ' his foolishness worked as an oil to already raging fire ' ohh how I hate him and want to kick the shit out of him ' arrgghh ' and why did Armaan gave him the fake letter ' 😡

Ok ' u wanted the comments and I gave u an overload of them '

comments chahiye thaa na .. ab bhugto ' 😆
Cant wait to read more '

love

Sana


WOW yaar...all your points are valid and plus i want to clear some things out..all my flashbacks are not in order..some happened before..some after!!
and plus what Geet did was not because he sad he slept with someone...she didnt believe that but she got hurt when he said he remembered that night between them as well!!!And after remembering that night he accused her and the baby?
That flashback is still to come..where he accuses the baby!!
So you see...
Both are at fault...at some point it's Maan and at other's Geet but i agree Geet's friends and family could have done more!!
Aniwaz really loved your comment;D
All your points are valid;D;D
Thankyou for liking my story;D;D
Love,
Nina

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

hey sweet heart .. sorry for the late comment .. just finished reading the last 3 chapters and I choked on many instances ' u've written them really well ' 👏

and now my two cents ' Edit: OK this has gone much more than 2 cents 😳

both Maan and Geet are at fault and there are no doubts about it ' its obvious ' but its much more of Geet's fault that the things so went out of hands ' Maan reacted coz he dint know the background of the things .. he dint know the involvement of so many ppl who were trying to break their relationship ' but Geet ko to pata thaa ' she knew wat happened and who were responsible ' when he said that he slept with t he woman ' any fool wud also have realized that he's saying it just for the heck of it ' he's admitting to nurse his bruised ego ' since Geet questioned him ' the same Geet who told him that she had betrayed him and moved on ' and when that person questions him .. obviously he will react the way he reacted .. he wanted to hurt her .. the way he was hurting ' if at all Maan slept with that woman, that was out of pure rage and anger ' Geet's acceptance of betrayal instigated him to do so '

Geet is hurt coz Maan dint trust her and questioned her ' but did she trust him enuff to confide in him ' no ' she went to Yash ' and discussed the matter which was personal to Maan and Geet and their relationship ' why did she assumed that Maan will regret that night which she cherished the most ' she did not trust him with that ' did she had doubts on his love towards her ' she was the one who inlvolved a third person in their relationship ' be it Maan or anyone else ' no one wud bear that some one else is intruding in to their private space ' she accuses him of not trusting her after 16 years of relationship but she did the same ' not trust him with their 16 years of relationship ' they were not just lovers .. they were best friends too ' then why did she involved Yash in it ' apart from all this the thing which really pisses me off is that Geet knew that Brij was the one who misused their MU .. she knew wat Armaan did which escalated the issue further ' yet she is not ready to see things rationally ' she's not seeing that Maan's reaction was the outcome of mere rage and hurt ' she knew that he doesn't know all this ' wasn't that enuff to make her understand the gravity of the situation ' yet she let it go out of hands '

In all this fiasco the worst I guess are the so called near ones of Maan and Geet ' Yash , Armaan , Arohi ' I really feel like killing them all ' these jerks knew the whole story yet they just sat as an audience and watched things go haywired ' especially Yash .. am sorry he is not a friend of Geet which he proudly considers himself to be ' he knows every single thing .. he knows that despite of everything Geet and Maan are still madly in love with each other and instead of trying to make Geet see the things more logically he always ends up instigating her .. preventing her to think on her wrong decisions '

The scene when Maan came her drunk and admitted that he loves her better than that Yash was sooo heart wrenching ' cudnt she see his helplessness '. His hurt ' his pain ' I dint understood her when she said that how cud Maan stoop so low when he said that he can love her more than Yash ' he asked that question out of pain ' she herself admitted that she betrayed him for Yash '

Wat about Reya ' whats her fault in all this ' doesn't she has the right to know her dad , to get her father's love ' doesn't Maan has the right to know about his daughter '

Plzz no more ego clashes ' this complicated mess is the result of their stupid egos only ' plzz let Maan know about the facts now ' he will surely regret his behavior ... but mostly I want Geet to repent ' she needs to realize Maan's pain and wat has she done to him ' she needs to re think about her wrong decisions ' and repent ' someone needs to knock some sense in her ' someone needs to make her realize that the accusations she has for Maan are very well valid for her too '

I know u said that apparently Yash will be instrumental in uniting Maaneet but I want him to first realize his mistakes ' and repent ' his foolishness worked as an oil to already raging fire ' ohh how I hate him and want to kick the shit out of him ' arrgghh ' and why did Armaan gave him the fake letter ' 😡

Ok ' u wanted the comments and I gave u an overload of them '

comments chahiye thaa na .. ab bhugto ' 😆
Cant wait to read more '

love

Sana


agree with u totally all these friends of are the main reason for their separation i personally hate yash he doesnt did anything to save maaneet relationship and claims that he is her friend i seriously dont want him to be the reason for maaneet reunion plz drop that idea they both should help themselves for their reunion i hate yash😡 armaan i feel like crying😭 for riya and maan as he missed his daughter's love for 5 years and now also geet shouting at him atleast geet had riya with her but whom did maan have when he was going through all this all this is mainly because of geet's lack of trust in maan and she says he has lack of trust in her
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys another update ;D;D
Thank you..it is because of you all i am here today;D
LOVE YOU ALL...
Okay...wont keep you all waiting...

Part 13:
Maan looked at Geet and said:'We were just talking..no need to raise your voice...'
G-Mr.Khurana you are holding my daughter...you have no right to do so UNDERSTAND?
Geet's words pierced through his heart he didnt know why?
His mind knew very well that Geet was right that he had no right to hold her daughter yet his heart screamed that he had the right to hold Riya...she was someone special to him..but giving in to his mind..he let Riya go...

Geet saw him letting Riya go so she called:'Baby come here..'
Riya came rushing forward...
R-Mamma yeh dekho mera new friend Maan...
G-KYA?
R-Haan mamma...
G-Beta aap jao Khushi aunty ke paas...mujhe apke friend se kuch baat karni hai...
R-Okay...Bye friend..see you soon..
M-Bye baby princess..see you!!
Geet's eyes popped out...did she hear right?Baby princess?
G-Mr.Khurana after your last visit i dont like you being in my HOUSE..so if you would..
M-Miss.Handa i have no interest to come here anyways...i have just come here for our project..i have been trying to get in touch with Mr.Garewal regarding the colours...Roman black texture is not available...what would be the alteration?
G-Red..RRT would be the alteration...
M-You seem to be pretty confident..shouldnt we consult Mr.Rahul?
G-There is no need...i have worked with him for a long time..i know his choices..
M-Yes yes ofcourse..you seem to choices of other people really well..
G-Infact I do...Anything else?
M-No just you and Mr.Rahul have to come to the site we will see how the construction is going and a few designs needed to be discussed...
G-We will be there..Time?
M-11am
G-Okay..Thankyou Mr.Khurana and next time please send a message through...
M-Ofcourse if you ever pick up the call...
G-I will keep in mind next time...
M-Hope so..
Maan left...Tears formed in her eyes..she didnt wany him to leave..she wanted him to stay with her..with them..she wanted to have a happy family with the man she loved but she couldnt because this was the same man who had accused her..had said those things about her daughter...she cringed and shut her eyes...
**Flashback**
G-Maan..how can you say all this?Im pregnant...
M-I know that...but wait do you even know who the father is?
G-Maan...
M-Nahi...Geet its not Maan..it may be Yash or wait maybe someone else..No one can be sure who's child you're carrying..
G-Maan please...dont say all this...
M-Geet im just saying the truth...tell me who's the father?But im sure you've slept with so many you dont even remember do you?
G-Maan...
M-You know what they call kids like this?
G-Dont say it Maan...you'll regret it...
M-Hmm..lets see illeg..nahi nahi..thats very nice..this child is a BAST**...
Geet slapped him before he could complete...
G-BAAS MAAN KHURANA...BAAS..YOU HAVE SAID ENOUGH!! YOU DOTN WANT TO BELIEVE ME DONT!!!!BUT DONT YOU DARE SAY A WORD AGINST MY CHILD!!
**Flashback ends**

Yes he was the same man who had refused to believe it was his child after remembering that night...she could never imagine a life with him!!

Maan walked towards his room..his heart longed to be with Riya again..he didnt understand what he was feeling for this strange child..all he knew was..he had to be with her...that's all he knew...he closed his eyes...he never wanted all this to happen..how he had imagined a small happy family with Geet but what had happened?

Arjun walked with her..thinking what to say...when she broke the silence...
Aro-Arjun..i feel something for you..I LOVE YOU
Arjun's mouth opened wide and all kind of thoughts raced his mind:'Was this the same girl he had met?What was she saying?Did she really mean that?
Arj-KYAAA?
Aro-Arjun ...

Arohi knew what she was doing was wrong..she was voicing her feelings...feelings she had hidden for 7 years...yes Arjun was the same guy she had loved...but looking at Arjun's face it was clear he didnt harbour the same feelings...her face fell...she hadnt expected anything but still a part of her longed...she couldnt take his silence anymore so she decided to walk away...

Arjun saw the change of expressions and then he saw her leaving thats when soemthing triggered inside him...his mind shut down and his heart started doing its work..he rushed after her and pulled her by the wrist...she banged into his chest..he looked deep in he eyes..all he eyes were reflecting was hurt and pain...Tears flowed down her eyes...he wanted to kiss the tears away...
Arj-Where were you going?
Aro-Im...**sob** sorry Arjun i dont know where that came from...it just sort of slipped my ...im sorry i better leave..what was i thinking..we just met..you dont feel for...
Before she could complete her sentence he slammed his lips on her's...he saw her eyes opening wide...she didnt respond at fisrt..but then slowly she closed her eyes...and started responding...he was enjoying this...this was his first kiss and that too with the girl he loved...his thoughts froze..LOVE?
What was he thinking?He was doing all this for revenge..yes revenge for his brohter..he didnt love her...this is what he wanted her to say she loved him and then leave her...in pain...so he could hurt Geet..then why was he kissing her?why was he affected by her tears...he closed his eyes to enjoy the moment letting all other thoughts leave him...after a few moments he pulled away and said:'You got your answer?'
All she did was nod..Arjun chuckled...and with that chuckle he realized he was in love with her...he couldnt deny his feelings anymore...all thoughts of revenge were gone...he knew he couldnt make her pay as he was madly and deeply in love with Arohi Handa...

Arohi's face glowed with happiness...she had gone with the intention to hurt Arjun..but she couldnt do that...instead she ended up voicing her feelings...she had loved Arjun for as long as she remembered but couldnt say it to his face...today she had done it..but when he finds out that?
She left that for later..she would tell him later...Arohi thought today was the best day...she knew she couldnt hurt Arjun ever...coz if he was hurt so was she...

Next Day:
Y-Armaan you sure about this?
A-Haan..aab jao...
Y-Theek Hai..
He walked towards Geet..
Y-Geet..aaj mein baher ja raha hoon..
G-Par Riya?
Y-Its important work..
G-Umm..Arohi is at college..Rahul is attending the meeting..i have to go to KC...umm..
Y-Umm.why dont you take her with you?
G-Yash?
Y-Haan kuch nahi hoga...
G-Haan..theek hai..
Yash sighed in relief and winked at Armaan who gave him a thumbs up!!

Geet headed towards KC with Riya...they reached KC
Geet headed towards Maan's cabin..she paused took a deep breath..preparing herself and knocked...she heard his deep voice from inside saying:'Come in'
Geet entered the cabin with Riya behind her...she saw him immersed in a file when she said:'Mr.Khurana...the blue-prints please?'
M-Ms.Hand...oh wait sorry..Mrs.Singhania wait for 5 minutes please...
Geet forced a smile...and said:'Sure why not?'
That's when she got a call and excused herself and went outside for a bit...

Maan saw Geet cringe when he called her Mrs.Singhania...he smirked...Geet moved to sit down thats when he noticed Riya...his face broke into a smile...his heart jumped in joy at the sight of the angelic little beauty...and he called out her name very softly..:'Riya..'
At the exact moment Riya looked up and saw Maan and screamed:'Maan friend..'
She rushed to him and sat on his lap...Maan chuckled..how he felt at peace and a deep connection with this girl..
M-Haan baby princess it's me..
R-Maan friend yesterday i was looking for you..why did you leave yesterday?
M-Woh..kaam tha...
R-Nahi..you left without playing with me..you're not my friend..im not talking to you...
M-Arey..yeh kya baat howi?
R-...
M-Riya darling talk to me na...
R-...
M-Acha baba im sorry..He held his ears and made a puppy face and said sorry
R-Nahii..you're a bad friend..you left without playng with me..
M-I wont do it again..please sorry..
R-Promise?
M-Promise..i will never leave like that...
Riya's face broke into a huge grin and seeing that Maan smiled automatically...he felt good that she was happy...it felt his only reason now was to see her happy..but he didnt understand why?
R-Maan friend...
M-Haan?
R-Mujhe ice-cream chahiye..
M-Abhi?
R-Haan..woh mamma doesnt allow me na...
M-Par kyu?
R-She says:'Dont eat too much ice-cream Riya..'
Maan chuckled at how she was imitading Geet..
M-Okaay...i will order ice-cream for you..
R-Yayy!!Thankyou...with that she pecked his cheeks and all Maan could do was smile..he had grown so close to this girl in just 2-3 meetings..it felt like she was the sole reason he was alive...
Geet saw Riya and Maan chattering..she hadnt seen both of them this happy...and this was the second time she was questioning herself:'Was she wrong?..Was it right to keep Riya away from her father?Did they deserve it?'
Yes her mind said Yes she had done right..Maan had choosen not to believe she was their child so he didnt have any right on her daughter...Riya was only her daughter...she brushed of the tears and said:'Mr.Khurana designs please..'
M-Ofcourse have a seat..
and then he turned to Riya and said:'Baby go and sit on the sofa...we will talk later..'
M-Geet..can i call you Geet?
G-Sure..Mr.Khurana...
M-No i insist you call me Maan please..
G-Okay Maan...
They sat and discussed the project for about 2 hours...after 2 hours..Riya came up to Geet and said:'Mamma...im hungry..'
Hearing that Geet said:'Maan can we continue this after lunch?
M-Ofcourse...
Riya rushed to Maan and whispered something is his ear which made Maan smile and then she ran out of the door...
Geet got up and was leaving when she tripped...she was about to fall down..she closed her eyes expecting the fall..but it never came instead she felt a pair of strong arms around her waist...and she knew who it was..it was Maan...she knew his touch all too well...
She clutched on his shirt in fear and his arms were locked around her waist...

He saw her falling down and instantly he went to save her...his hands locked around her waist and her hands clutched his shirt...he felt this moment was perfect..he felt all the passion of these 5 years resurfacing...he saw her eyes closed in fear...and all that innocence reflecting on her face which she covered behind her mask...his hand moved automatically to caress her face...when she opened her face and that's when his hand froze midway as he got lost in those eyes once again...those hazel eyes spoke volumes..they spoke of pain..of hurt..of relief..of happiness...

Geet opened her eyes and looked into his chocolate deep ones...they were like an open book..she could see pain..hurt...relief..happiness...and something else she couldnt tell..was it LOVE?...No how could she see love for her?..Those eyes were showing how much they cared about her...she slowly closed her eyes again to capture his touch...and her lips parted...

Maan saw her close her eyes and her parting lips which evoked a desire he had never felt...he slowly bend his face towards hers...unaware of what he was doing..he had completely surrendered to his heart and to his feelings...their lips were inches away...

Precap-I still love her..
Maan...that's my fathers name...
Riya?Daughter?Maan?


Okay guys:HOW WAS IT?
SUCKISH?
I KNOW...ITS NOT VERY GOOD BUT THIS IS THE BEST...
I HAD TO MOVE ARJUN-AROHI'S STORY FORWARD REALLY FAST COZ THEN ONLY CAN THEY BECOME CUPIDS FOR OUR MAANEET?
HOW WAS THE MAANEET PART?
HOW WAS THE ARJUHI PART?
HOW WAS MAAN-RIYA PART?
PLEASE GIVE YOUR FEEDBACKS...AND YOUR POINT OF VIEWS...PLEASE...
IGNORE ANY SPELLING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES...
DONT FORGET TO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT..
THANKYOU ALL MY READERS AN
SORRY I DONT REPLY TO EACH AND EVERYONE BUT I DO READ;D
I APPRECIATE ALL OF IT;D
THANKYOU...AND ANY OF YOU WANT A PM JUST LEAVE A COMMENT!!!;D



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Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

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