Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Wonderful update...

Loved it so much...

Please update soon...cannot wait for the next part...

when will Maan find out the truth...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

hi..thanks 4 da pm n intense n sad update! Poor Geet! Armaan is da cause of everything...update soon

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mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Awsome prt.their daughter is so cute

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mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

Poor geet hw much she sufferd in past.nice prt

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

Please update soon. waiting for the update...

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Water.
Please update soon. waiting for the update...

Im so sorry...but an update will take time now...coz all my files are lost and my laptop has gone for repair..so a few more days for the update rreally sorry😭

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preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

wow interesting ff...

liking the way u r taking the story...

lets c when maan gets to know the truth wat he does...

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#188

Sorry Sorry..i know the update is late but plz forgive me..my laptop crashed and its gone for repairing...and it still hasn't come back..i lost my files...but somehow i wrote everything again...and here it is...plus i was sick...so that's why didn't update..sorry!!!Enjoy the update!!!
Part 9:
Her phone rang bringing her out of her thoughts'.she picked it up'
G-Hello
A-Hey
G-Tum'.why did you call me?
A-We need to meet'we have some things to discuss'
G-Armaan'.there is nothing left to discuss'
A-Im also the reason Geet'.that night'I convinced Maan about the whole things because I choose to believe what he said rather then you'.i have somethings to tell you'.please meet up with me'.
G-Theek Hai'.tomorrow at 11 at Shell cafe
A-Okay...thankyou
G-Hmmm...
Geet kept her phone away and thought about what Armaan said...could it really be?
Did he say something to Maan?
She knew what she hid from Maan was not something she should have done but he mistrusted her as well right?
All confused she headed towards Yash's room...She gave a knock and saw him looking at a photo frame..she sighed she knew the pain he was going through just because of that one secret...
G-Missing her?

Yash looked up and saw Geet standing there...he gave and sad smile and nodded...
Y-But what can we do?
G-You should have explained..
Y-Did you?
G-It was 16 years...
Y-Did Riya sleep?
G-Yes...why are you running away?
Y-So are you...
G-Yash...
Y-Geeettt...
G-Armaan called...
Y-Why?
G-He wanted to see me...
Y-Why?
G-Something about that day...
Y-You're not going...
G-I am...
Y-That was the past...
G-Im strong now
Y-Geet please...the past always hurts you...
G-Yash im stronger now...
Y-Theek Hai but im coming with you...
G-Nahi..this is my matter
Y-Oh so i support you..and that's you're matter haan?
G-Yash..its
Y-Baas Geet you're going with me otherwise you're not going..
G-Okay theek
Y-Thats like me...
G-Hahaha..waise how come Riya called you Dad?
Y-Oh that well before coming I told her to call me Dad
G-And she listened to you?(lifting an eyebrow)
Y-Well..i kinda bribed her..
G-Your spoiling her...
Y-She's my princess...
G-Acha Goodnight...
Y-Geet come here...
He embraced her in a huge hug to which Geet responded...He felt so much better...he felt good...he knew he was right...

Tears flowed down her cheeks remembering all the pain Di and her had faced...she remembered how it was months before Di started speaking...and while her Di was there in pain she sat here and trusted the man who had in return hurt her Di...
**Flashback**
A-Di...please eat something...
G-...
A-Di...
G-Maan...Maan i didnt...please listen to me once..
A-Yash bhai dekho Di is not eating anything...
Y-Choor do...
A-WHAT?
Y-I said leave it..she will not eat...
A-Bhai...
Y-Aru leave it...
A-What about you?
Y-Im fine...
A-No you're not...
Y-Aru leave...
A-Bhai...
G-Aru leave...
The plate fell from her hands..this was the first word she had spoken to her in 2 months...tears of joy clouded her eyes and that day she knew that Yash bhai was the only one who could bring back Di...but HOW?
**Flashback ends**
The door bell bought her out of her thoughts...she looked at the time and wondered who could it be..she went towards the door and opened the door...her mouth opened wide...

Arohi opened the door and he could see the shock playing there...he just smiled...but then his heart ached when the expression changed to disgust...he remembered the time when that face glowed with happiness at his sight but now...he just sighed and asked in the most ruthless tone he could manage:'Where's Geet?'
A-This is not the time...
M-Geet...
A-Inside...
He just came in and headed towards the room she pointed to..he went there but saw no one then he heard voices from the room on the otherside...and walked towards it...what saw hurt him...it pained him when he saw Geet in Yash's arms...he felt this ache to take Geet in his arms but restraining all his emotions he said:'Miss Geet...or should i say Mrs.Sighania?'

Her heart sank..when she heard his voice she knew that something bad was going to happen...
she got out from the hug and turned to face the one Maan she hated...
G-What are you doing here?
M-Did i disturb your moment here?
His voice was filled with hatred and disgust which pained Geet...but keeping on the mask she asked again:'Why are you here?'
M-Well i came to give you the project details...since you left early in the evening..
G-Keep it on the table...
M-Okay Mrs.Singhania...
G-Mr.Khurana...
M-Im leaving...
Y-You better...
He was about to leave when a worried Arohi barged in the room...
A-Di...woh...woh...Riya...
G-Aru kya howa Riya ko?
A-Woh attack...
G-KYA??
A-Haan woh...sleep..phir...
Geet started crying...and said:'Yash..riya..woh..'
Y-Dont worry Riya will be fine...
G-Lets go...
They rushed towards the room...

Maan didnt know what compelled him to follow them..the anger the jealously present moments ago vanished..it was all replaced by concern for a child he didnt even know...he followed all of them...

Arohi smiled inwardly hoping that her Di would smile..seeing the surprise...

Geet was scared...she opened the door which was plunged in darkness...she entered the room when suddenly all the lights went on..and she heard a huge yell of surprise...she calmed down knowing what they had done..she remembered what day it was..it was her birthday and they had done all this top surprise her but soon the relief and happiness changed to anger..she had been so worried...they thought it was funny?
G-Aru WHY?
A-Di..woh i..
G-Did you know how scared i was?
Y-Geet calm down we wanted to surprise you...
She turned towards Yash and pointed a finger at him:'YOU...you knew..how dare you?You know how scared i was?BUT YOU THOUGHT IT WAS FUNNY to do this??
Y-Geet im sorry na...
When a voice said from somewhere:Geet let it go na...dekho hum agaye..'
A smile formed on her lips when she realized who it was?
She turned around and ran towards the person...and hugged her and said:'Khushi tu?'
K-Haan Haan hum...arey humare dost ki birthday thi toh hum kaise na ata?
G-Im so happy..par tu toh next week
K-That was to surprise you..
G-Hows everyone at home?
K-Everyone's missing you..
G-I am too...
The dried tears started making their way back when:
R-Mamma sorry...i scared you
She picked Riya up and said:'Nahi baby im not angry at you...i just got scared..'
R-Mamma Riya will not to this again..Riya bad girl...
K-Arey nahi my Riya is a very good girl...
R-Khushi AUNTY!!
K-Come here...
Riya went to Khushi..Geet smiled all earlier worries forgotten...

Maan looked at all this with a smile...but then he remembered the days he used to be with Geet celebrating her birthday's but now?
He couldnt even wish her...and yes all that had happened on her birthday as well...it was her 19th birthday...and he was so happy..but then he had found out about her betrayal...and that day everything had been destroyed...he couldnt bare the happiness in front of him so he turned to leave...

Arjun paced his room thinking about the meeting he was suppose to have with Arohi she had cancelled it and said they would meet tomorrow...he was getting restless he didnt know why..he had a feeling something wrong has happened...but he couldnt pinpoint it...he went and stood on his balcony when he remebered her...yes her the girl he had loved for the past 7 years and still loved...and he knew he will always love her..
**Flashback**
He was chatting with her when he asked her:
Rockerboy24-Do you love me?
Shygirl96-Ummm...what makes you ask that?
RB24-Do you?
SG96-Yes...
RB24-When are we going to meet?
SG96-Soon...
RB24-I Love You
SG96-I Love you too
**Flashback ends**
And that was the last day he had spoken to her...he had send her numerous messages but he hadnt heard from her after that day...and it was that day Geet had destroyed his life...
and that day was today..yes it was the 16th of August that day as well...A day he couldnt forget and didnt want to forget..because as long as he remembered it...he would be able to avenge himself...
Geet made her way to Riya's room and tucked her in..she kissed her forhead and murmered a goodnight..she was about to leave when Riya caught her hand...
R-Mamma..papa nahi aye?
Geet closed her eyes she knew that this question was going to come up sooner or later...
R-Mamma..apne kaha tha na ke papa will come on your next birthday as he missed my birthday...
Geet bend down and said:'Beta Mamma hai na?'
R-Par aap papa toh nahi ho na?
G-Woh apki next birthday pe honge pakka!!
R-Pakka??
G-Haan baby pakka...aab aap soo jao...
She left the room in tears...she knew that her father would never be back...but she couldnt tell her little baby that..
K-She asked again didnt she??
G-Hmmm...
K-Geet kab thak?
G-Till she's not old enough...
K-You should tell him..i saw him here today...
G-He came to give a file...
K-Geet you should tell him...
G-Khushi baas...he is never going to know...aab so jao..bohut
K-Nahi Geet...by avoiding it..it will not
Y-Khushi nahi...Geet is right he hasno right to know...
K-But Riya has the right to know..
A-Di..kab thak?
G-Aru...you better not speak in this matter...
A-Di..im not a kid...
G-ARU JAO..tum sab JAO...im not going to tell him THATS FINAL..
Tears streamed down her cheeks...and she kept repeating:'Im not going too...**sob**..not going too...'
She fell down on her knees...everyone rushed to her...Yash,Khushi and Arohi embraced her..but the only touch..the only embrace she longed for was his...but she knew she couldnt get it...

Maan sat there...he had drank 7 glasses already..but he still continued to drink but as much as he drank the pain didnt reduce...the picture of them hugging still invaded his mind...his heart screamed..he wanted to take her in his embrace...hold her..touch her..but he knew he couldnt do that...she was not his anymore..the thought itself killed him...he drank...he was trying to drink the pain he felt..trying to drink the ache..the emptiness...he was trying to wash it away but with each drink it only increased...

Armaan sat there..wondering how he was going to tell Geet about it all...when he recieved a call...
A-Hello...
Other person-Hello...Armaan?
A-Yes...
OP-Well..hello we speak again...
A-Brij?
B-Yes you're right...
A-Tum?

Arohi sat there tracing the words written in the book with her fingers...these words had meant so much to her...but that one day destroyed everything...she had loved him so much...but...Destiny thought otherwise...she sighed closing the book and lights...she thought about tomorrow...how she would face him...

Geet tried to sleep but she couldn't the images of her and Maan flashed before her eyes..yes it was this exact date when she had lost all her happiness...tears poured down her eyes when her phone rang..she picked it up..
G-Hello
A-Geet..mein Armaan
G-Bolo
A-Brij called...
The phone crashed down...what she had been running from...it had..Noo...how?

Precap-You cant run away from it...im going to tell Maan everything even what he doesn't know..
Nooo...you cant do this..

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Edited by Danina - 14 years ago

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sweety

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Posted: 14 years ago

#189

nice part...cont soon...thanks 4 pm

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Danina

Im so sorry...but an update will take time now...coz all my files are lost and my laptop has gone for repair..so a few more days for the update rreally sorry😭

Hey no worries...I got ur PM n saw that u updated...now I will go back and read it. 😊