Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

awesome...

what does armaan know that he wants to tell her??

riya still is waiting fro her dad...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

loved the update...

now wats brij to do with this and y armaan is a part of their separation...

y geet is scared of brij...

i think he has to know the truth but he shud go thro the pain of not being with her...

pl cont soon

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

ossum part

this time i searched but next time pls give the correct link dear

lovely one

hope soon he knows about the truth

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

sorry dear but i still do not have an idea about what happenned that day...hope mystery solves soon

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: -divya-
thanks for the update!! please update soon! who's this khushi?

A good friend of Geet

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: sindu555
nice update ...

when will this pain reduce .. both of them are suffering ... watever they say they're still very much in love ...

Maan bechara to bewra ban gaya is gham mein ... btw since he's become one ... it will be nice to see a drunk Maan pouring his pain out in front of Geet ... atleast Geet will know that he still loves her ... just a suggestion

continue soon

love
Sana

Actually that's what im planning for my next update a drunk Maan telling Geet his feelings;D

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan
ossum part
this time i searched but next time pls give the correct link dear

lovely one
hope soon he knows about the truth

Yes im soo sorry about that..i'll give the correct link!!

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Hi..thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update. It was sad, intense n painful...Maaneet suffering...update soon

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Part 10:
She sat there waiting for him...she looked at the watch he was late...she looked up to see him coming..
Arjun-Sorry...traffic tha..
Arohi-Its okay
Aro-Why did you want to meet me?
Arj-Im seriosuly sorry all that happened..
Aro-Its okay..that was the past...lets start fresh...Friends?
Arj-Ofcourse..Friends...
Arohi felt happy deep down to be smiling with Arjun but her mind was reminding her the only reason she was doing this was to hurt him...

Arjun saw her lost in her thoughts..he smiled looking at her serene face...she was so beautiful but unfortunately he had to break her heart..when his heart asked:'Do you have to break the girls heart?'
While his brain replied:'Yes for my brother...'

Geet sat there waiting to hear what Armaan had to say:
G-Bolo why'd you call me?
A-Geet woh uss din...woh Brij told me and i wrote that note and...Im sorry
G-Armaan this matter is not so simple..a sorry cant change anything...
A-He still loves you
G-I dont care...Love is incomplete without trust..it is like a body without a soul..his love is not enough..he didnt trust me...
A-It was a misunderstanding Geet
G-If one small misunderstanding can break 16 years of trust..then
A-Geet...
G-Nahi Armaan..if you've come here to dwell the past..dont im over it i have a happy life now..
A-With Yash?
Y-Yes with me
A-You dont love him Geet?
G-No i dont...
A-Okay...
G-What about Brij what did he say?
A-He said he was back..and he's not going to let anyone stay happy..
Y-Hasnt he done enough...
A-Geet it was all because of Brij..
G-Maan didnt trust me...leave trust didnt even let me explain...
A-Okay..i gotta run now...we'll meet over dinner at my place..need to discuss a few more things...
Y-Theek Hai..Bye
A-Bye...
She saw Armaan leave...tears choked her but she controlled them...she couldnt break down but she knew how difficult it was to say those words...how could she stop loving him?
He was in her every heartbeat...she would love him always...she couldnt even forget him...how could she when the sign of their love was with her?

Yash saw her...he knew she was about to cry...he put his arms around her to comfort her...
Y-Geet...
G-I Love Him
Y-I know..
G-How could he do this to me?
Y-Shhh...baas kuch nahi hota...
G-I will not cry im strong..
Y-Yes...you are but why didnt you tell Armaan the whole thing?
G-What do you mean?
Y-The reason you're scared Brij came back..
G-I cant tell that...
Y-You should...
G-Doesnt matter anymore...
Y-Chalo...ghar chale...

Armaan put his head in Shilpa's lap...
A-Shilpa...its my fault...meina Maan ko yaqeen...
S-Shhh...Armaan but why didnt you tell him when you knew?
A-He wouldnt listen and he was recovering as well...
S-You should tell him now...
A-Geet doesnt want that...
S-But you should tell him everything..
A-Okay i will but not now after a few days...im going to collect the proof...i will reunite them..
S-But she's moved on?
A-No..she hasnt i know it...Maan and Geet will be one again...
S-Hmmm...

Maan was still sitting in the bar...replaying Geet's words that till now pierced his heart..
**Flashback**
G-HAAN MAAN I LOVE YASH...YES I DONT CARE ABOUT YOU..I CHEATED ON YOU...HAPPY?
YES WHAT YOU SAW WAS TRUTH...
M-FINE THEN GET OUT
G-I AM I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN MR.KHURANA
M-LEAVE...
**Flashback ends**
How easy was it for her to say she loved someone else...how easy it was it for her forget him...but he still couldnt forget her...why his mind questioned his heart..why cant you forget her?His heart only said one thing...because I love her...
Yes he loved her...but she...how could she...the bar-tender's voice bought him out of his thoughts:
BT-Sir...its 9 you've finished 3 whole bottles..dont you think you should leave...
M-Yes..you'rre right...i will..i have to go to her...tell her I Love her...
BT-Ji..sir go...tell her
M-I will...
Maan got up from his seat...he tried walking towards his car but stumbled..somehow he reached the car opened it and drove...he reached Geet's house somehow...he reached the door-bell...and pressed it...Geet opened the door...Maan's face broke in a smile...His heart felt at peace seeing her...
M-Geet...(he extended his hand to touch her face)
When she pushed it away and said:'Mr.Khurana you are not in your right mind..please go back home...'
M-This is the first time in 5 years i am in my right mind...
G-Mr.Khurana please LEAVE...
M-Nahi...Geet...
He came forward.c..cupped her face in his hands and bought his lips towards hers and whispered:'I missed this Geet..holding you...touching you..'
G-Maan..please you're not..
M-Shhh...let me enjoy this...
He felt so happy after years...he felt peace...
He pressed his lips on hers...gently...and kissed her...his heart fluttered with joy...peace spread through his body..all the pain and anguish of all those years left him...He stopped kissing her and asked:'Did you miss me?'
He just saw tears running down her eyes..he felt his heart wrenching and said:'Shh Misthi dont cry...i cant see your tears..I still Love you...'
G-Hmmm...
M-I love you more than that Yash...i can give you whatever you want...im a much better kisser...right?

Geet saw him drunk and tried pushing him away but he did the unexpected he kissed her..and all was forgotten as his lips covered hers..all the anger pain was forgotten...her heart fluttered to life again..it started beating and unknowingly tears streamed her eyes...she felt complete after many years..but when she heard those words..everything returned the pain...anger and the hurt..her heart dropped dead again...
G-Mr.Khurana how dare you?Is that why you did all that?To prove your better?
M-Am i not?
G-You disgust me...and yes you're not...You can never be what Yash is
M-WHYYY?WHAT DOES HE HAVE THAT I DONT?
G-EVERYTHING...GET OUT RIGHT NOW...
M-NOO...I WANT YOU RIGHT NOW...
And thats when her anger clouded allother emotions and she slapped him..and in his drunken stae he stumbled...she pushed him out the door..and said:'GET OUT NEVER SHOW ME YOUR FACE AGAIN'
M-Geet mein...
She closed the door on his face...and fell down on her knees..sobbing uncontrallbly...she couldnt believe it...how could he stoop so low?
He wanted to prove himself better?
She felt disgusted at herself..to love a man like that...she could never forgive him now..NEVER!!!
She heard the phone ringing...she got up and picked it up..
G-H..heelllo..
OP-Hello
G-BRIJ?
B-Guessed right...
G-How dare you call me?
B-Well...you know i started missing you...and though why not go and meet you..
G-Dont dare..
B-You know i heard Maan doesnt know about Riya?
G-Chup...Brij dont...
B-I thought to go meet him..what say?
G-Nahii..Brij..
B-I will tell Maan everything
G-What will you get by doing this?
B-Everything
G-Briiij...
The call got disconnected...Geet's heart was beating eraatically...all thoughts were racing her mind...what if he told Maan?What would Maan do?No she had to stop this...she rushed to her bedroom and thanked babji that Yash and Riya had gone to the park..she took out a book and looked at it and thought:'Maybe the times come for me to clear a few things out..but i promise myself Maan Singh Khurana will never know anything about the past...'

Maan sat there on his knees crying his heart out holding that note...which had taken his happiness away...the note which said:'I love you...Yours Geet'(Guys the note is not complete...the dots represent the incomplete words...sorry guys...the rest i will tell the rest later..)

Arjun sat there on the bed smiling...finally Arohi and him were friends...now it was time for payback...he took a book out...and again the letter fell out..he wondered what it was?
He picked up and started opening it...

Arohi sat there crying..how could she tell him?He had broken her heart..she looked at the words in her diary..he had said he loved her..but what had he done?
But she couldnt share her pain with anyone couldnt burdern her sister more...

Precap-Maan?
Brij?
Yes humare deal hain na?
Armaan maat karo yeh...
He needs to know..

Okay guys how was it?
Tell me..i tried updating fast..even though im freezing to death now..im sick..my eyes are watering guys..and really sick...but i had to update guys...couldnt make you wait so much..i know this update wasnt much..but this is the best i could manage sorry if it doesnt reach your expectations!!!
Plz ignore any grammatical and spelling errors...
PLZ PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT...
DO TELL ME HOW IT WAS?
BAD OR GOOD?
THANKYOU FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS...I READ AND APPRECIATE ALL OF THEM...
AND GUYS THE ONE'S WHO ARE GUESSING THE STORY ARE SOMEWHAT CORRECT..I MEAN THIS IS MORE THEN A MISUNDERSTANDING...ALOT MORE!!!
REVIEW:)
LOVE YOU ALL;D

Edited by Danina - 13 years ago

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