Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

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hiii
awesome and fab update
who is geet hugging?
who had hit msk?
loved it
keep it up
cont soon
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Welcum:)
and dont wrry you will get all ur answers in d next part:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Danina


i did thankyou glad u liked it:)
i will update by 2nite...:)

ok im waiting for asap
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 6:

Arohi looked at him weirdly what was he up to?

This sadu was behaving nice with her?

Hmmm'.

Aro-Nahi'who sorry I have to meet my friend in sometime'I need to leave for college soon

Arj-Its okay'

And that's when someone tapped her shoulder,she turned around and hugged Sid'he was always late'

She parted from the hug:

A-Sid'tum late hoo?

S-Acha'tu phir tumne muhje hug kyu kiya?

A-Woh'.toh I haven't seen you from yesterday na'

S-Arohi we met on the beach'?

A-Okay'.whatever shall we go now?

S-Jaise aapki marzi sweety'.

A-Siiddd'''.

S-Acha baba chalo..

They both left'.she didn't give a backward glance to Arjun but she had this nagging feeling to turn around once and look at him but she ignored it and went away with Sid'

Arjun felt devastated when she said No'.well she had all rights too how can she trust him?

He had to make her trust him'when from somewhere a voice said:'Make her trust you so all you can do is break her heart and hurt her?'

Is that really what you want to do Arjun?

Hurt her?

One part of his heart said:'No'I want to see her happy while the other longed to take revenge from Geet for what she had done to his bro'.so making his mind he listened to the part wanting to take revenge'.he was pissed now that a girl had dare reject him and on top of that she hugged that guy'Sid'.URGHHH'he felt the urge to kill him how dare he touch Arohi?

And he didn't get Arohi one moment she was with Sid and then with Vicky?

What kind of girl was she?

Angry and frustrated he headed towards his car and drove to the office'

Geet looked at Maan on the floor'her heart longed to help him but keeping her firm she looked at the person who had hit him and to her surprise it was Yash'''she jumped in joy and hugged him'

G-Tu yahan'I thought we were meeting tonight na?

Y-Arey'how could I control myself I had to meet you'I was dying sweety'.

G-Awann'CHUP 'dying my foot'don't use cheesy lines in front of me?

Y-Theek hai baba'

She looked at Maan who had gotten up by now and Yash too looked at him and then at Geet with questions filling his eyes:

Y-Geet you are not working here anymore'where people don't know how to treat you'

G-Yash'.calm I can handle it myself I don't need anyone to take care of my matters'.and like I have said Personal and Professional are two separate things for me' my personal matters will not affect my work life'and that is final..

Y-But Geet'

G-Yash'its final I am not at fault if Mr.Khurana here doesn't know how to keep personal away from professional'but I am a professional woman and I will work with KC'.but will not tolerate Mr.Khurana's behaviour'

Y-Okay Geet don't get angry at me..

G-Okay'.chalo

Y-Chalo'

Maan saw someone with Geet and as his view came to focus he saw that that someone was none other then Yash Singhania'What was he doing here?

Did Geet and he still have?

No couldn't be possible but what if?

What if he was?

He shook of all such thoughts when he remembered that this Yash had hit him and thought he was not going to leave him..

M-Mr.Singhania don't you have any respect you come in my office and hit me?

Y-Mr.Khurana I think you are the one that doesn't have any respect'manhandling a client that too a female one?

How dare you even touch her?

M-That is between me and Miss.Handa'

Y-Anything related to Geet is my business do you get that?

M-Who are you?

Y-Now that is not your business'

M-You have no right to'.

Y-RIGHTS?WHAT RIGHTS DO YOU SPEAK OF MR.KHURANA?

I HAVE THE RIGHTS TO DEFEND GEET TAKE HER SIDE'.YOU ON THE OTHER HANDS HAVE NO RIGHTS'YOU ARE NOTHING BUT AN INSECURE'

G-Yasshhh'''baaasss'enough I told you na I can handle it'

Y-But Geet'

G-Yash'

Y-Theek hai chalo'

M-So Mr.Singhania Geet's pet I suppose haan?

Y-Maan don't exceed your limits I will not tolerate it'.and let me make myself clear DON'T YOU DARE EVER TOUCH HER AGAIN?

M-I will what is you problem?

Y-Then face the consequences'

Maan just smirked'his face was calm but only he knew the storm playing inside his heart'why was Yash here with Geet?

What was between them?

Did they?

No'.no maybe'that is why Yash was being so protective of her and taking her side?

But?

So many questions but no answers'he had to find out?

But something was eating him up inside that he didn't have any affect on Geet?

Had she forgotten all those moments?

That is why she hadn't reacted when he had called her Misthi?

Questions and more questions'he thought his brain was going to explode any second but keeping his mask on'he said:' See you soon Miss.Handa...'

Geet took Yash's hand and lead him away'she didn't know what would take place'but before she left'.she got a call and seeing the id she quickly answered it'

(one-sided convo)

Haan'kya howa'riya?

Baby are you alright?

Haan'sweety Mamma is coming'

She hung up'She gave one look to Yash and Yash said:'Geet kya howa, riya theek hai na?

G-Nahi she's crying continuously'

Y-Okay chalo lets go'.

G-Haan chalo'

Geet was nervous'.why was Riya crying so much?

Hoping all was alright she sped off with Yash'.

Maan stood there shell-shocked he replayed what Geet had said on the phone'.

Riya?

Mamma?

Sweety?

Did it mean she had actually?

She was a mother?

Was it true?

Did he really not make a mistake?

He gulped down his saliva'and then his heart broke'.it shattered in a million pieces'.tears stung his eyes'.she had moved on then his mind started working and he quickly regained his firmness and said:'Ms.Handa what I thought was all correct right'and now you're going to pay'pay hard for betraying and playing with Maan Singh Khurana's emotions'.i am going to make you suffer'.

Just wait and watch'I will destroy your life so bitterly you will never be able to live again!

Arohi was sitting at home and trying to calm Riya down but she was continuously crying and screaming:'Mamma'Mamma''

She looked at the door for the umpteenth time Di still hadn't come what was she to do?

She didn't know what to do to keep riya quiet'

So she waited while consoling riya...:'Baby kuch nahi hoga'mummy ati hogi''

Geet was damn nervous why was riya crying'she hoped everything was okay'.she looked at Yash with a worried expression'Yash just nodded and put a assuring hand around her shoulder and pulled her closer to himself and Geet put her head on his shoulder'.

Y-Geet riya ko kuch nahi howa'don't worry...

G-Par Yash she never cries like this especially when Arohi is with her'

Y-Kuch nahi howa don't worry'we are going na...

Geet just nodded hoping everything was fine'

Arjun sat there on his bed thinking how dare Arohi reject him?

He had gone and so sweetly asked her to come with him but she had rejected him?

No one ever dare reject Arjun Khurana'.

And he thought:'Ms.Handa wait and watch I will make you suffer like anything'you will beg me'.just wait!

Maan called his assistant and told him that they would start working on Rahul's project straight away and for that he call Geet and inform her she need's to be here right now'and with that he called Armaan his best friend to come to the office as well'and smirked his plan would work!

Maan smirked and leaned back on his chair

**Flashback**

M-Haan toh you want to go that yash na?

Theek hai jao uska paas'.wahi hai tumara sab kuch na mein hoon kaun?

G-Haan wahi hai mera sab kuch and whatever you heard was correct'I don't give a damn about you I don't love you'.

M-Haan you have found a new love now right?

Fine go I don't care'

G-You don't trust me do you?

M-No after whatever I witnessed NEVER!

G-THEEK HAI I DON'T CARE I HATE YOU MAAN I HATE YOU'I LOVE YASH DO YOU UNDERSTAND?

His heart broke listening to these words but keeping his anger intact

M-FINE GO TO HIM GET MARRIED TO HIM WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?

GET OUT NOW MISS.HANDA'

G-IM GOING I DON'T HAVE ANY PLEASURE STANDING HERE!

And she just walked out'out of his life...without giving a backward glance without showing a tinge of emotions she had just walked out after 16 years of being together'.she just left him all alone while she got someone else but she had left him with a heavy heart'.she had left him in a dilemma'

**Flashback ends**

The knock on the door bought him back out of his thoughts and seeing the person on the door he stood up and went and hugged him!

Armaan just stared at his friend'his eyes were closed and his face was full of pain'he saw tears make there way out through his closed eyes'and he knew he was thinking about Geet'.Armaan thought:'If he loves her so much why doesn't he admit it?'Everyday he tortures himself but why doesn't he accept he still loves her'the pain is clearly visible in his eyes'.but his stone face has fooled many''

Sighing he knocked on the door and saw Maan look up and smile but that smile was empty'.but he noticed Maan didn't rub his tears away then it struck him the tears were there without his knowledge'.he was unaware of them'and then sighing deeply he thought his heart longs for her he is in so much pain'pain the heart cant bare that tears come without his knowledge'he hugged Maan back and decided today he would ask all the questions he wanted to ask'

Yash sat there comforting Geet'they were stuck in traffic till now'yash sat there thinking about the past'seeing Maan today had fired many emotions inside him which had been put to rest'.firstly pain then anger then pity and at last more pain'he looked at Geet and saw her faraway expression and knew the turmoil she was in'.but what could he do?

That one incident had destroyed not only her's but his life as well but he didn't blame it on her'it was just the lack of trust in both the relationship's'.

Then he thought of Riya'.how she had bought happiness in both their lives when they were lonely and in pain how had it affected their relationship?

Everything had changed for better or worst he didn't know but right now all he cared about was Riya and Geet'.

**Flashback**

Y-Geet'.what is your answer?

G-It's a yes'

Y-are you sure?

G-Haan im sure'im ready for this!

Y-Theek hai but remember no pressure'

G-Yash this kid has bought happiness for both of us how can I not be sure'I think with this kid we may get out of this emotional state'.this kid will bring light in our darkness'

Yash just nodded his head'but the big question was Am I in love with her?

But bracing himself' he asked:'Will you marry me?'

**Flashback ends**

And her answer had changed both their lives forever'they were not as happy and lively as before but they now had a reason to smile'a reason for their hearts to beat'.a common goal on which they both worked on'they had found their RIYA!!

Precap-She's your kid?

Haan'she's my baby'

Why did you do this to me?

I owe you no answers'

Yes you do!

Okay guys so how was it?

I know haven't updated for long but was kinda busy'okay I know this much have confused you more but the story is taking a big twist'this will reveal a lot of past'.so guys don't worry'more of Maaneet coming up in the next updatesJ

Till then enjoy this part and give me your feedbacks and tell me if you want me to improve give me your suggestions and predictions on what the past is?

Have fun guessing!!

Sorry for any spelling or grammatical errors i didnt revise...please ignore them:)

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I DON'T REPLY TO EACH AND EVERYONE OF YOU BUT I READ ALL THE COMMENTS AND SEE ALL THE LIKES'A HUGE THANKYOU TO YOU ALLJ

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Edited by Danina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT!
cont soon plz plz plz
and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update looking at this situation i think geet should be blamed for not clearing maan's doubt he even asked her but she didnot want to tell him anything looking forward for geet's MU towards maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
so manu confused states
pls reveal the falsh back at a time so that we can know clearly dear
is riya is maneet baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting to know the past
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
she has got daughter with maan and he is not even aware of it

cool what else i can say aap tho twist pe twist de rahe ho
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Posted: 13 years ago
i know probably maan did not trust geet in the past, but if Riya is his baby, then geet should keep him informed...hmmm

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