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Posted: 14 years ago
congooss boss ji 🥳u have reached 50 pages...





wishing u heartedly to reach 100 pages soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

now i totallyagree with u darl...

i wud love to wait afterall we r loyal readers...😆😆
and haaan boss update plzzz😳

THANK GOD DEAR
FINALLY U AGREED WITH ME

AND YA BOSS CONGRATS
AS U REACHED 50 PAGES
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ssch

will be updating shortly

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey boss ji
come on update na

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thumnay hamea abhi update nahi diya😒😒😒😒😒😒😒...
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read the remaining parts!
awesome!!!
I guess a storm is about to come!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pms!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey all thankyou for your suppport
here is the next update
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Part 40:

Geet was driving home when her cell started ringing

She looked at it it was Maan.

Hello geet

Maan.

Geet I wanted to tell you k I have to go to the rural areas actually right now I m going toward it . I will be back in 3 or 4 days.

Acha to rural area ja re hai janab very funny

Geet me mazaq nahi ker raha. Mere baat sunu yaha signal network nahi hai. I wont be able to contact you . ok pareshan mat hona I will be back before the shaddi ok.

Oh yeah sure she was smiling.. she knew he was llying.

I will miss you geet.

Maan itni dair me hi miss shoro hogya. I will not miss you me to bohat busy tumhare bare me sochne ka time nahi mile ga

Ye baat hai' to thk hai me phone rakh raha ho..

Maaan

Kia hai

I m sorry

I am already missing you and cant wait to see you

Well baby you gotta wait for 4 days atleast

Yeah right maan.

G e e t

Maan what are you saying

S ignal kh atam h o re hhhaaa i

And the line disconnected

Maan bhi na

As soon she stepped in her house. She became rooted to her space

There they were sitting in front of her

Dadi dev and nivi

Dev nivi tum log yaha kia ker re ho?

Arey geet baita tu ne kabhi hame kuch bataya q nahi wo to acha hua nivi dev k sath ai or is ne hame sab bata diya.. by now geet was fully confused.

savitri ji arahai hai apne pote k sath shadi ki date pakki karne. Ranos words were ringing in her ears. Dev maan ka bhai. Nahi she was getting teary already

kia baata diya she said in a shaky voice

yahi k tum or dev aik dosre se pyar karte ho. Infact hum to surprise daine wale thy tumhai per dev ne kaha k tum se aik bar poch liya jae isliye tujhe aaj bulaya.

2 hafte baad Friday ko date set ki hai. Tum log court me ja ker register marriage karo ge. Court se approval agya hai. Thursday night ko party hai or Friday eve dinner.

Geet could not hear anymore her world had shattered.

Savitri ji stood up baite aap ko koi itraz to nahi hai.

Geet stood silent maan ko kia jawab do gi me kitne sapne sajae thy humne

Baite hum aap se kuch poch re hai aap ko ye rishta manzoor hai?

Rano tapped her on shoulder

Ha?

Everyone smiled the girl had said yes

Geet mujhe pata that um mana nahi karo ge dav came forward.

She looked at him baffled

Just then her mom came with mithai

Le puttar mu meetha ker le she looked at her

Tera rishta pakka hua hai kha le

She was shocked. Just then her cell rang

It was maan she smiled through tears

She pcked up the phone

Hello

But cd not hear him properly

She ran out to talk

Ppl at home thought she was to shy to face them that's why she ran.

No body saw the tears in her eyes.

She sat in her car

Maan

Geet ha I called to tell you I love you

Or mere geet ki hifazat karna me wapis a ker use hamesha k liya apne sath lijane wala ho no paper marriage only real marriage

Achi tarah se samajh lo

And then it stuck her what happened inside

She cdnot control anymore. She cut the call

Maan took it as signal problem and smiled imagining geet to be blushing only if he could see her now.

She drove madly toward a deserted area and came out of the car.

She screamed with all her heart.

Nivis words were ruuning in her brain.

Dev is your soulmate.

Nivi : tu kis se jhoot bol ri hai. Hum dono jante hai k tum logo k beech frnship se kuch barh kr tha or hai.

Tujhe yad hai 4 saal phle us astrologist ne kia kaha that k u 'll meet your soulmate on 10th may 2011.or tu daikh meri flight usi din ki hui hai.

Nivi: ha or usne aik or prediction bhi kit hi k 10th may 2009 ko tum or tumhara soulmate phli bar sath aoge

Us din tu ne kisko daikha tha nahi yad? Me yad karati ho . uni me convocation hua tha or tujhe medal mila tha or wo celebrate karne k liye DEV ne party rakhi thi sham ko.

Geet : u are such a spoilsport. Can't u for once say k my dreams are true.

Nivi : no I can't cuz I know u r going to marry dev.no matter how many times u say no but in your heart u know I am right.

Nahi nahi nahi

She fell down on her knees how can it be. If dev was my destiny to mujhe mere destiny k sath nahi jana mujhe mera maan chahiye..

She cried her heart out but the damage was done she could not change it..

Precap:

dil roe ya lahi tu aja mere mahi.😭😭😭
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Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

sad & emotional part

love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update i know u would torcher us by not giving the update quickly hopefully we would get the update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
senti and nice update...
ooh no dnt seperate them...pretty plz...
thank u 4 pm...
continue..
chao
p.s :- HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY...

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