hey friends i am back with the update... first of all thank you so much for your love by sending very beautiful comments.. i am so happy friends...sorry friends aap logo bahut intezaar karna pada from now i will update only on sunday's because i am busy in my job but i will try to update as soon as possible also bec i cant stop writing..hope you all will undestand and forgive me...
PART-12
abhay smiles and sees sleeping piya.. he goes...here abhay goes and metri comes in...she sees piya sleeping and got annoyed.. she comes to piya... she sees her.. she took her blanket away and throw on floor..piya wakes up and sees her...she is shocked to see metri there...
metri: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...what's up? ha yeh mera aur abhay ka room hai... how dare you...
piya {sees metri}: actually i was not feeling well so i thought to take nap...
metri: itna boley baneney ki zarurat nahi hai... i know you down market girls...
piya: what the hell you are speaking?
metri: ohh bura laga baby ko...hmmm so sad...but mujhe achey sey pata hai..why you are here?
piya: really tell me kyu hu mey yaha pey...
metri: hmm i know you very well tum abhay ko fasana chahti ho...right...
piya: mujhe usey fasaney ki zarurat nahi hai... ok aur ladhko faseney ke new ideas tum jaisi ladhkiyo ko aatey hogey..
metri: piyaaa {she shouts}
piya: stop it...what do you think ki agar mey chup hu toh kuch bi bolegi ha...waisey bi is bed pe koi heerey moti nahi
jadey huey hai...samjhi tum...
metri hits piya but piya stops her hand and give her tight slap...piya is very angry... metri puts one hand on her cheecks
and sees piya...
piya: now dont ever say me a word..aur yeh thapad mainey tumhey isliye maara hai taki u should leran ki ek girl ki self respect bahut important...tum pata kaisi antic ho jisey khud ladhki hokar pata nahi yeh sab pata nahi hai and yeah one more thing aainda mere raastey mey kabhi mat anna.. i sware i gonna kill you...
piya goes and sees gurumaa is standing there...piya sees her and goes from there... metri comes to gurumaa crying {drama queen}...gurumaa stops metri speak...she becomes angry...
guruma: kitni baara kaha hai humney metri tumsey ki apney gusey pe kabu rakha karo...lakin tum kabhi baat nahi manti..
metri: lakin gurumaa..
guruma: ek dam chup... tum agar aisa karogi toh abhay ko kabhi bi paa nahi sakogi...smajhi..phir humarey pass mat aana
gurumaa goes from there... and metri thinks to herself
" yeh thapad ka badla toh mey tumsey lekar hi rahungi piya...aur tumhey bataungi ki mujse panga lena bahut bhari padega"
metri come down... abeer is sitting and doing something on mobile...he sees metri...vedh is talking with piya...suddenly he says...
abeer: vedh bhai {vedh looks at abeer} aaj log kitney batmiz hogaye hai...kuch bi boltey rehtey hai aur baad mey chehra latkakar aa jaatey hai..yeh bi nahi samjhtey ki soch samaj kar bolna chahiye...waisey bhai aisey logo ko jab thapad padtey hogey toh kaisa lagta hoga...
vedh sees abeer and gives him naughty smile...metri looks at abeer with red eyed and comes to her.. vedh signals that metri is coming and winks her eyes...abeer smiles...
metri: tum mujhe kuch keh rahey ho abeer
abeer: nahi bilkul nahi kya mainey tumara naam liya...hmm vedh da kya mainey metri ka naam liya..nahi na phir kya hua?
metri: dont try to oversmart abeer... i know you very well...
abeer: whatever metri... tum maano ya na maano..
metri: sahi keh rahey ho jin bacho ko godh liya jaata hai woh bachey anaath hi hotey hai chahey maano ya na maano right..
aarzoo listens this and she got super angry..she shouts...and comes to her...vedh and piya stands up...
aarzoo: kya kaha tumney? who the hell you are to say my abeer like this...
metri: kyu aur jab tumara so called abeer mujhe bol raha tha then why didnt u utter a word aarzoo...
aarzoo: well metri it was a general talk and he didnt take your name... tumarey pass koi proof hai... {she sees everyone}.. kya kisney metri ka naam suna abeer ke muh sey...
metri: well yeh kyu kuch bolgey...they are your frnds tumari hi side lengey...
aarzoo: you are mad metri...
metri: aarzooo
abeer trys to control aarzoo temper but all in vain then piya comes to aarzoo and trys to calm down her...vedh goes to metri...
vedh: sachai sabko kadhvi lagti hai metri shayad islye tumara koi dost nahi hai...just see your self yaha hum sab tumhey jhel rahey
hai because tum gurumaa ke sath aayi ho that;s it..so stop this nonsense okay...
metri: oh really vedh tum bi boltey ho...gud to hear that...
vedh: yeah you should bi...bec u know jab mey bolta hu toh you know ki tumarey pass shabd kam padh jaatey hai bolney ke liye...
metri goes from there and abhay listens all the this and come to them...
abhay: yeh sab kya hai...jagada karna jaruri hai...
piya: abhay why are you defending her?
aarzoo: yes bro piya is right...you shouldnt be
abhay: i am not defending her okay...see hum itney time ke baad gather huey hai...and you people are fighting...
vedh: abhay da koi bi jagad nahi chahta hai yaha pe...everyone wants to be happy...but there are lots of distrubing elements here...
abhay: ok ok now dont get angry friends...{he sees piya} and you piya tum kyu aayi yaha pe..I told you na to go and have rest...
piya: abhay woh... [piya feels dizzy, abhay catches her..piya comes to senses]
abhay: {gets worried} i am calling doctor and i dont want to listen any word piya... you never listens me...
SCENE SHIFTS:
doctor is examining piya... abhay is there including vedh, aarzoo and abeer.. doctor takes out a thermometer and puts in piya mouth.. after 1 min he checks out and sees it..doctor is worried...
abhay: kya baat hai doctor...everything is fine...
doctor: Mr abhay patient ka BP bahut low and she is having a high fever... i am giving injection.she will get relief...
piya: " Injection" {she gets up, she is scared} no abhay no i wont take injection...{tears rolls down from her eyes}
vedh: piya kuch bi nahi hoga...infact tum jaldi theek ho jaaogi...
piya: nahi vedh da mujhe {vedh smiles} mujhe injection sey bahut dar lagta hai {piya gets scared a lot}
abeer: arey piya bhabi kuch nahi hoga..pata bi nahi chalega..hum hai na aapke sath...abhay da samjhaiye inhey
aarzoo: yes bro...
doctor: injection toh aapko lena hi padega... warana aap theek kaisey hogi...
piya starts crying and abhay comes to her and sits with her.. he puts his arms on piya shoulder and take her face to his chest...and puts his
one hand her cheecks...aarzoo, vedh and abeer goes from there...doctor also goes out...
abhay: piya... kya hua? just calm down...mey hu na tumarey sath...{piya cries} shhh no more tears...
piya: abhay mujhe injection sey bahut dar lagta hai..i cant bear pain...
abhay: u believe me na... [piya nodes her head] toh kuch nahi hoga...
piya: but abhay...
abhay {puts fingers on her lips}: i told you na kuch nahi hoga...
piya nodes her head and abhay calls doctor in...doctor comes in and takes out his injection...piya looks at injection and hold abhay tightly and closes her eyes...abhay turns her face towards him...
abhay: piya just looks at my eyes...
piya sees into abhay eyes....
abhay: kya dikhta hai piya...
piya: bahut saara pyar abhay...
doctor gives injection to piya...piya tears drop on her abhay hands..abhay hugs piya tightly... piya cries...she feels pain and she feels sleepy...she closes her eyes..abhay makes piya lay down...he kisses on her eyes...he gives her blanket... doctor gives a prescrition of some medicine to abhay and goes
SCENE SHIFT:
aranab was in great tension and he was walking here and there...arnab gets a call and he smiles, he rushes to home... arnab reaches home and madhu smiles arnab comes to her and hugs madhu...
arnab: madhu kya baat hai kyu bulaya mujhe itni jaldi...
madhu:arey baba kal karwachauth hai...mujhe kuch paisey chahiye
arnab: iske liye mujhe bulaya madhu {madhu doesnt know anything about his tension..so he pretends to smile and happy}
madhu: ha ha iske liye bulaya hai...is din har patni ka right hota hai...
here panchi and sid comes...
panchi: yes mom you are right aapney bilkul sahi kaha...mainey bi sid sey kaha...mom lets go for shopping
sid: arey abhi kal hi toh shopping ki thi aa j phir angel {sid calls panchi angel}
panchi: yes yes yes...
arnab: sid beta jeb dhili karney ka time aa gaya hai beta...paisey de hi do...warna yeh biwiya kal humara vrat bi kar wa dengi
all off them laughs... madhu thinks about piya
"piya ka bi pehala karwachauth hai.. but usey toh kuch pata hi nahi hoga...hey bhagwan mey usey kaisey batau? arnab ko pata chala oh gussa hongey..kya karu kya?
panchi shakes madhu...
panchi: mom mom kya hua kya soch rahi hai...
madhu: kuch bi toh nahi beta...
misha comes here..she gives hi fi to sid and hugs panchi then her dad...
panchi: mishu whats up ha u will never change atleast ab toh ladhkiyo jaisa kuch act kar...
misha: well moti u do that all behanj waala drama..i am ok with this...waisey kaha jaaney ki tayaari ho rahi hai..
panchi: well mom aur mey shopping pe ja rahey hai...
misha: shopping...oh wow
misha comes to sid and say something in his ear..
misha: jeeju tumari toh watt lag gayi...beta bahut hardwork karna padega paisey ko liye...poor jeejz...
sid: saali sahiba do help me na...
misha: what i will get in return?
sid: aaa i must say saali ji u will be perfect business woman...ek dam jhakass waala ha
misha: why so jeejzs
sid: bec deti toh tum kuch nahi ho ulta in return mangti rehti ho..
misha: arey diya toh hai
sid: kya?
misha: {points panchi}: yeh jo hai antic peice...
sid and misha laughs and panchi sees this...misha winks her eyes...
Scene shift:
piya opens her eyes slowly and slowly..piya sees abhay reading a book...piya smiles at abhay. abhay comes to piya...he kisses piya on her cheeks..
abhay: {holds piya in his arms}: lets go for shopping
piya: but abhay metri and guruma
abhay: piya jab mey aur tum toh sirf mey aur tum dusra koi nahi...
piya: {smiles} ok baba mey tayaar hoti hu..
abhay: hmm
piya is happy after long time abhay and her will be together... abhay and piya goes down...abeer watches them going, he doesnt say anything and let them go..abhay drives a car and piya put her head oh his shoulder...
piya: abhay i am so happy today...
abhay: i know piya...
piya: waisey bi ghar pe toh its very difficult to spend time...
abhay: dont worry piya sab theek ho jaaayega...
piya: hmm
abhay and piya reaches shopping mall... piya and abhay comes out from car.. abhay holds piya hand and pulls her towards him...and hugs her...
abhay: so piya wat will u have?
piya: hmm i will have chinese
abhay: chinese hmm ok we will have that my sunshine...
they both were walking abhay was looking at piya..she was smiling at abhay..suddenly they colide with someone...piya is shocked to see both of them...she smiles and hugs madhu and then panchi...đđ {emotional scene}
madhu {puts hands on piya cheeks}: kaisa hai mera bacha, humhey itni jaldi bhul gaya humari kabhi yaad nahi aayi tumhey piya..
piya: {she cries} aisa koi din nahi jaata jis din mujhe aap sabki yaad nahi aati... duriyaa badh jaaney sey rishtey khatam nahi hoti... woh kaisey hai {she is talking about arnab}
madhu: he is fine, chup rehtey hai but he misses you...{madhu sees abhay} abhay beta how are you?
abhay: I am gud...{he smiles} piya lets go...
madhu: piya beta jaaney sey pehaley kuch kehna chahti hu kal karwachauth hai beta yeh din ek suhagan ke liye bahut bada din hota hai.. tum abhay ki lambi umar ke liye vrat zaruar rakhna beta...
abhay thinks
" no piya tum yeh vrat nahi rakh sakti...kyunki yeh vrat insaano ke liye raha jaata hai na ki vampire ke liye...lakin mey tumhey kaisey rokhunga..i dont know...tum bas zidh mat karna"
madhu and panchi goes from there, piya looks at abhay...
abhay: come piya lets go..
piya hold abhay again..
piya: abhay...
abhay: no piya tum yeh vrat nahi rakhogi because you are not well.. just see your condition..doctor ney tumhey bed rest diya hai totally.. you are so weak..so dont ask me again...
piya: but abhay yeh zaruri hai na..
abhay: no piya this is not so important zaruri sirf tum ho merey liye nothing else..now dont spoil my mood lets go...
piya thinks to herself and smiles
" vrat toh mey rakhungi abhay chahye tum gussa ho jao kyunki mujhe tumhey manna aata hai my love..."
Night Scene...
abhay and piya reaches at home... it was too late... abhay takes piya in her strong arms...abhay gives naughty smile to piya...
piya: {whisper slowly in her ears} abhay koi jaayega...
abhay: {whispers slowly in her ears} toh aa jaaney do...
piya: now no drama time abhay... {she smiles}
abhay: no its romance time..
piya: no romance
abhay: yeah i am so tried {he acts}
they both reaches in their room...abhay goes for change.. piya was making bed..abhay comes throwing himself on the bed. piya gets angry and pulls the bed sheet but she ends up falling on abhay. They share and eyelock for a moment but piya shoves a pillow in abhay face and tries to run off but he holds her hands and pulls her back... piya hits abhay with a pillow.. abhay holds piya hands and pulls her towards him...her hairs comes on face..
piya blushes and looks the other way. abhay pulls her face with one hand and blows the hair on her face away. He looks deep in her eyes and leans in. piya locks her hand behind his neck and they both kiss each other passionately.
so friends here i end this part..hope you all will like this...
Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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