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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: pujagiri
hey just luv your ff...I had not read it earlier..but I liked it so much that I went back and read all the parts...awsome ff I tell you...now I am waiting for part 11...can;t wait to read it...I just hope you bring in a guy to make abhay jealous...haha ..it is just that I just luv when he becomes all lal hara peela with jealousy when someone is with piya or touches her...but again awsome work👏

I agree! I would love to see a guy brought in the story to make Abhay jealous! That would be awesome! 😃

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Nice update! I'm really feeling very sad for Piya! Poor girl has to put up with so much! I hope Piya's misery ends soon! And that was very sweet of Abhay to force her to rest when she was sick. Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

kajal why didn't u reply to anyone

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K.S.

@K.S.

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

i like ur story so much.plz update next part.

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: peehu24
gret update...loved it...poor pia...uus metri aur gurumaa ki wajah se she has to deal with a lot...
abhay was cute lovable and caring...n arnab ke paseena chutne wale hai...

thanks peehu... i m sorry i cant update,,,i will update on sunday...

till then enjy and tc

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: gnits
i like ur story so much.plz update next part.

thanks dear and sorry i will update on sunday..

till then tc and enjy...

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Nice update! I'm really feeling very sad for Piya! Poor girl has to put up with so much! I hope Piya's misery ends soon! And that was very sweet of Abhay to force her to rest when she was sick. Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

thanks dear...i will update on sunday ...

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: pujagiri
hey just luv your ff...I had not read it earlier..but I liked it so much that I went back and read all the parts...awsome ff I tell you...now I am waiting for part 11...can;t wait to read it...I just hope you bring in a guy to make abhay jealous...haha ..it is just that I just luv when he becomes all lal hara peela with jealousy when someone is with piya or touches her...but again awsome work👏

thanks puja.. it really feels grt when someone read ur ff in first go and appreciate it thanks a lot dear.. i will update on sunday...

till then tc and enjy

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: sweta-mony
Nice update but ye Guruma ne to Piya ko rula ke marne ke dane hai hope wo jade se jae or Abhiya ko alag-2 na rehna pde or Piya ko rona na pde. 😔

thanks dear i will update on sunday...

till then enjy and tc dear

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
wow nice update.Feel bad 4 Pia.I hope ab Abhay sab handle kar le & me excited ki guruma kya kehna chahti hai.Wnt 2 kill metri & guruma.Abhay will surely ruin Arnab 4 wht he did.Hope Abhiya ki married life mai sab theek ho jaye😊

thanks dear...hmm so many suggestions and advises..

just thinking and thinking..wanna say thank u

i will update on sunday

till then tc and enjy