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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shefali_goenka

Hey Kajal Awesome story yaar...Very beautiful, very well-written, romantic and awesome story😊Please add me to your PM List.



thanks dear a lot..i will update soon



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stary_kajal



yeah i was sad...where were you...hmm just kiding
thanks u r my lucky charm ...
i will update soon..till then tc


i wasn't online yr!nahi toh i keep checking ...thanks anyway that u take me as ur lucky charm😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY KAJAL...
WHEN R U UPDATING????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: missglam

HEY KAJAL...

WHEN R U UPDATING????



wait i am updating dear...



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stary_kajal



thanks dear.. i love your comment dear
yeah sweety i will updae soon dear
till then enjy and tc



dear...
how can i enjoy without ur updt...
plzplz updtt...😭😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
part-11

Night scene:

abeer and aarzoo was in one bed and vedh was next to piya {both have different beddings} abhay was about to sit with piya, metri comes and takes abhay with her in her bedding..piya was face was like a crying baby..abhay cant see tears in piya eyes...he was becoming frustrated...metri put her head on abhay shoulder.. piya and abhay
were looking at each other... they were sharing a eye lock... vedh sees this and understand, here comes the naughty abeer...

abeer: bhai logo mey kya bolta hu...kya hum puri raat aisi hi ek dusrey ko dekhtey rahengey...have some fun...
aarzoo: shh abeer...we are not here to play some games...

abeer sees aarzoo and becomes naughty...

abeer: acha toh kya karney aaye hai... {he trys to kiss aarzoo}
aarzoo: stop it you naught man...
abeer: no i will not..what can you do...
aarzoo: abeer da is here i dont like this...
abeer {puts hands on his head}: da ki toh khudh wattt lagi padhi hai ek thi pehaley sey ab yeh dusri...hmm kash humari kismat aisi hoti...{then he see vedh} ek humarae vedh bhai ko dekh lo jab dekho ya toh chup rehtey hai ya phir kitabo mey khoye rehtey hai...

vedh sees abeer and smiles...abeer feels strange.. piya feels awkaward and she sleeps and turns her face from abhay..abeer sees this and looks at abhay...abhay sees piya like this... aarzoo sense something about abhay da she smiles...suddenly aarzoo takes metri somewhere for work...abeer and vedh also goes with them...

abhay comes to piya..she closes her eyes... piya was sleeping...abhay comes to piya... abhay kisses on piya neck... piya tears rolls down from her eyes... abhay turns piya towards him... piya crys... she didnt look at abhay... abhay kisses on her eyes... piya turns from abhay...abhay comes up and piya is down

abhay: piyaa kya hua?
piya: abhay please you go from here, i dont want to talk with you...
abhay: piya you know the reason then why?
piya: yeah you are right isliye tum chahye kuch bi karo... i know the reason, islye she got the reason to touch you...
abhay: someone is jealous...
piya: no i am not jealous but abhay mujhe dar lag raha hai ki kahi metri tumhey mujse dur na le jaaye...
abhay: shh shh no one can take me from you piya...

piya cries...and abhay kisses piya on her lower neck..she closes her eyes... abhay kisses her forehead not caring about her anger and continues to go down and kisses her nose then lips then neck...piya lays down and abhay covers her face... piya sees abhay...

piya: abhay please leave me...
abhay: why?
piya: please...

abhay leaves piya and piya gets up and runs from there..she was crying badly... piya goes to her room and locks the door. piya sits down and crys...abhay senses piya is upset and sad because of him..abhay thinks

" mey kya karu piya, sab jantey huey bi merey hath bandey huey hai...mey tumhey is terha nahi dekh sakta lakin phir bi mujhe tumhey aisey dekhna padh raha hai... merey liye bahut mushkil ho tumhey is terha sey dekhna... lakin mey kya karu..."


In the morning:

piya gets up and her eyes were swollen and she came down..vedh, abhay sees piya...abhay trys to talk with piya but she didnt talk with abhay...piya was feeling dizzy at that moment...abbhay watches piya...he comes to piya...

abhay: piya are you okay?
piya: hmm i am fine you dont have to bother?
abhay: tumhey fever hai piya dont go college today ghar pe rest karo..
piya: mujhe koi rest nahi karna hai abhay...
abhay: piya i said go to your room, and dont argue...
piya: abhay but
abhay: piya go {he shouts}

piya sees vedh and vedh looks at abhay...piya goes to her room..piya jumps on bed and crys, abhay comes to piya...

piya: why abhay why are you doing this to me?
abhay: I love you piya dont do this to me? mujhe kuch time do? i will sort out.. something...
piya: abhay u have to tell metri and gurumaa about this bec i cant take it anymore...
abhay: yes jaan i will dont worry now stop crying...

piya hugs abhay and abhay too...abhay makes piya sleep...abhay thinks again...aarzoo and abeer is doing shopping...abeer is annoyed little bit..

abeer: yaar aarzoo pehaley hi itney kapdey hai tumarey pass and now again..
aarzoo: what do you mean?
abeer: fisul kharchi kyu yaar?
aarzoo: acha aur jab tum kartey ho tab kuch nahi...
abeer: oh madam i use money on good things not on unccessary things...
aarzoo: oh really..
abeer: yes..
aarzoo: dont talk with me nw...
abeer: really [he hugs aarzoo] do you think ki u can leave without me?
aarzoo: yes {she thinks} no...no..hmm kitny naughty hogaye ho tum sab jantey ho.. then also...

abeer and aarzoo goes for home...vedh is reading something...suddenly he feels visualization that someone is asking for help but he cant see clearly... vedh opens her eyes...gurumaa comes to vedh and sits...

vedh: gurumaa aap..
gurumaa: ha hum vedh...
vedh: kuch kaam tha...
gurumaa: nahi hum bas tumarey baarey mey soch rahey they...tumara satthi kaun hai vedh...{saathi akka girlfriend}
vedh: saathi...
gurumaa: ha saath yani girlfriend..
vedh: koi nahi gurumaa
gurumaa: hum jantey hai jo tum abhi ho bhavisya mey waisey nahi raogey..
vedh: mey samjha nahi..
guru maa: samay sab tumhey batyega...

here arnab dobiryal is in gret loss and he is thinking to get a project in any cost otherwise he will lost everything..he has to compeite with raichand company...arnab is in great tension and abhay gets a call and he simles...

so friends here i end today...











Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
gret update...loved it...poor pia...uus metri aur gurumaa ki wajah se she has to deal with a lot...
abhay was cute lovable and caring...n arnab ke paseena chutne wale hai...
Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res no no no peehu is first😭

i logged in just now...ughs!!!!to hell with my coaching i am late bec of it😡



-----edited-----

hey its so sad yr!!i fell so bad for pia poor girl!!!!hope abhay finds some way soon...abeer is so funny i like him in between!!😆😆
i wish to kill that metri!!but what will happen to vedh and was it pia's call??
update soon sweety😛
Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
awww...poor pia...she must be shattered..seeing abhay with sum1 else...
that metri...arrgghh..i hate her...
i just loved abhay when he orderd pia to go to her room...yup..he shouted but it shows his concern for pia...
well..who is going to be the partner of vedh.??.eager to know...
continue soon...tc
Edited by missglam - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

res no no no peehu is first😭



aww...its ok...next time u be first...😛

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