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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Part-15

piya stops and looks at abhay.she was expecting that abhay will do something but he didnt utter a single word...abhay sees piya...

misha gets angry and looks at metri...

misha: what the hell is this, jeejz why are you not saying anything?

abhay: mey yaha kisi ka jeejz nahi hu...okay and one thing let me clear you i love metri...

piya was shocked to listen this and she was in tears... piya comes to abhay and gives him a tight slap...

metri: *shouts* piyaaa how dare you?

piya: just shut up metri... you dont need to tell me about my dareing and my limitation..better stay of it...

metri gives her dangerous looks..she was about to convert herself into vampire when abhay calm her down by holding her hand..piya

sees this and gets angry more...

piya: why abhay? kyu kar rahe ho aisa merey sath?

abhay: what i am doing?

piya: kyu nahi bata detey sachai ki humarey bich kya rishta hai...

abhay: {comes to piya} kaun sa rishta piya...

piya: we are married?

abhay: {laughs} kaun si shaadi acha woh shaadi jo ek naatak tha merey liye...tumare us so called uncle sey badlaa leney ke liye...

piya and misha both are shocked to listen this...

piya: yeh tum kya keh rahey ho abhay...

abhay: aaj mey tumhey apni asliyat bata hu piya...mey abhay raichand ek vampire hu...

piya: what?

misha: tum majak kar rahey ho kya bec u really do very bad...

abhay: tumhey kya lagta hai hum sab jo yaha khadey hai woh sab insaan hai...

abhay {points out at vedh}: yeh vedh, yeh abeer...aarzoo hum sab vampires hai...tumarey baap {point at misha} meri behan ka katil hai

piya was under shock and she was standing like a statue...

misha: yeh tum kya keh rahey ho...

abhay: yahi sach hai misha aur mey tumarey baap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta...never isliye mainey socha ki aranb dobriyal ko bi waisey

hi takleef di jaaye jaisey tumarey baap ney meri behan ko maarkar merey pariwaar ko di thi...panchi toh sid ki already shaadi ho chuki thi.

bachi tu...you are not mine types aur phir aayi piya...mausum si pyari si gudiya...aur mujhe mauka mil gaya...

misha: mey janti hu ki papa ney jo bi kiya galat kiya lakin ismey piya ki kya galti hai

abhay: meri behan ki bi kya galti thi...misha...

misha was silent...abhay was standing in front of window..piya comes and puts her hands on abhay shoulder..he turns...piya was in tears

abhay sees piya...

piya: abhay did you never loved me?

abhay: {looks somewhere else} no piya

piya: {turns his face} nahi abhay meri aankho mey aankhey daal kar kaho...

abhay: {looks in piya eyes}: no piya i never loved you...

piya start crying slowly slowly... her tears were rolling down from her eyes...it was making abhay uncomfortable...

piya {shouts}: jhooth bol rahey ho tum... u loved me abhay... {piya comes to abhay holds his collars} abhay abhay tumhey yaad hai

jab tumney mujhe pehali baar chua tha..yaad hai tumney mujhe kaha tha ki tum mujhe chodh kar kabhi nahi jaaogey...{abhay was silent,

piya was crying badly} abhay yaad karo tumney mujhe promise kiya ki mey tumari zindagi hu...phir mujhe kyu alag kar rahey apney aap

sey... I prmoise mey kisi ko nahi bataungi tum vampire ho pacca waala promise {she takes sware} but mujhe chodh kar mat jao abhay...

piya uske collars ho dheere dheery chodhkar uske pao mey gir jaati hai...vedh and abeer was shocked and misha was in tears...piya was crying and crying... abhay sees piya...he moves from there...

abhay: koi isey lekar jao yaha sey, i cant handle her anymore...please piya apna rona dhona band karo...

abhay goes from there...misha comes and make her stand...piya sees house and then abhay room..

misha: chalo piya...

piya: lakin abhay bi toh aayega na merey sath {she was behaving different}

misha: abhay nahi aayega piya

piya: nahi aayega misha usney mujhe kaha tha ki woh hamesha mera sath dega mujhe chodhkar kabhi nahi jaayega...

misha: piya abhay nahi aayega {misha shouts}

piya: {start crying} misha tum mujhe daant kyu rahi ho {she was behaving like a mad girl now...}

piya comes to vedh...piya smiles at vedh

piya: vedh mey toh tumari behan hu na tum mujhe khush dekhna chahtey ho na,,,toh abhay ko lekar aao na...

misha comes to vedh, she sees him with teary eyes

misha: acha hua tum sabki sachai pata chal gayi warana jaisa haal meri behan ka hua shayad mera bi waisa hi hota

vedh:jaisa tum samaj rahi ho waisi koi baat nahi hai...

misha: mey jo bi samaj rahi hu bilkul theek samaj rahi hu... sharam aati hai mujhe ki i loved you

vedh: what? what did you said?

misha: yes mr vedh raichand...i loved you...but you all our loosers actually vampires are loosers...

vedh was shocked to listen this...abhay was watching piya condition from his room window, but no one is seeing him...abhay was in tears and he crushed his hand with a silver. It was hurting him a more {vampires cannot bear silver, they are allergic to silver}...

piya: abeer abeer tum apne da lo kelar aaogey na...{abeer was in tears and he was silent}

misha comes and takes piya from there...metri was smilling and seeing all of them...piya and misha was walking

piya' :mishu koi meri baat kyu nahi sunta... abhay aayega na toh mey usey bataungi yum sab ne mujhe kitna tang kiya...dekhna {she was

talking like a child and she is mad through this shock} hmm...{misha was about to cry she cant see piya in this conditon}..

scene shifts:

misha takes piya home...arnab was on phone he sees piya and comes to her, he was shocked to see piya like this...madhu also comes and hugs piya seeing her like this...

madhu: piya mera baccha kya hua tumhey? kya hua isey misha..

misha tells everything {accept that abhay is a vampire and his whole family is same}...madhu crys a lot and hugs piya...piya was in great shock... aranb remembers about a accident he was also in tears

piya {small child}: mumma mumma abhay wapas aayega na dekho mujhe kitna tang kartey hai... aap abhay ko dantna...

madhu {😭}: ha beta mey dur daantungi...

piya: mishu mishu {piya ka seer ghumney lag jaata hai...she feels dizzy and she fells down...

aranb makes a call to doctor...abhay feels that there is something wrong with piya but he cant do anything as he was sitting with metri and all others. vedh was thinking about misha and yeah he was worried about piya also...

doctor comes and sees piya...doctor checks her nervous...he sees watch...piya was unconscious and she was totally pale...doctor checks her

eyes...arnab and madhu was looking worried and misha was sitting with piya...doctors gives her injection...

piya ko hosh aata hai...she gets up...

piya: mishu abhay nahi aaya abhi tak..hamesha late kartey hai... mumma mumma aap abhay ko abhi ph kijye i dont know where he is and like mujhe mera fast break karna hai...

doctors sees and observed piya condition... piya was walking here and there...{like she working a lot}...misha makes piya sits...

misha: piya abhay jeejz bas aaney waaley hai..you are not well na that why dear...common sit otherwise he will be angry...

piya: nahi nahi mishu aaj ke din i dont want him to become angry on me...

doctors: mr dobriyal aap merey sath aaiye...

arnab goes with doctor and madhu also comes...

doctor: piya ko bahut bada sadma laga hai...aap inke husband ko bulaiye yaha pe...he can only comfort her...otherwise we have to take piya with us to hospital for check up and admitt her there...

arnab: nahi nahi doctor i will tell her husband to come...

doctors: hope so otherwise situtation will be bad...

arnab and madhu was shocked to listen this and they are in great tension and he doesnt know what to do or not? arnab decides to call abhay and madhu calls panchi and sid...

arnab calls abhay and he picks up a call...

scene shifts

arnab: abhay arnab bol raha hu

abhay: toh mey kya karu

arnab: ek min abhay ph mat rakhna mey tumsey piya ke baarey mey kuch kehna chahta hu...

abhay was in tears...

abhay: mr dobriyal kaun piya mey uske baarey mey kuch nahi sun na chahta...

arnab: abhay galti mujse hui hai sazza mujhe do us bachi ko nahi woh tumsey bahut pyar karti hai abhay woh mar jaayegi...

abhay controls himself...

abhay: i dont care and i dont know anything..please dont call me again

abhay cuts the call and throws is cell phone on floor..it breaks into peices.. abhay kneels down and shouts "piyaaa"

arnab: madhu humhey piya ke baarey mey kuch sochna hoga... mey usey is halat mey nahi dekh sakta...ek kaam karta hu mey usey apney bhai rohit ke pass bhej deta hu...

madhu: lakin hum piya sey kahengey kya...

arnab: wahi toh mey soch raha hu ki kya karengey...

scene shifts...

haseena and chand enters with gurumaa..abahy feels happy to see him..but they feel their son pain also and they know about gurumaa threat and supreme also...abhay was in tension..he hugs his parents and goes out in his car...here he drives a car...in full speed...and falsh back of piya was going on their in his mind...he was sad and in stress...and suddenly he makes move and he doesnt see it and a car falls from a cliff...

piya was sleeping and he shouts "abhayyy"

here i end this part...hope you will like it"

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Part-17

hey friends thanks for the support and sending lovely comments...well friends since abhay is died i am taking a leap of 1 yera here...so i wish you people will not mind taking leap...here i begins...

all the things suddenly change for everyone. After 1 year sab ki zindagi badal gayi, misha becomes serious for her career and she left all her masti and all.. she start helping his father in his business...panchi give birth to baby boy. his name is prateek... panchi and sid settled in newzealand.. ...arnab and madhu are same and here comes the piya sad and alone waiting for abhay to come...

Scene:

Well wind is blewing some is standing beside window..after few seconds she comes and sits on a chair..she opens a dairy and start writing... meri nazrey kisi ke aaj bi uske intezaar mey palkey bichaey huey hai.. merey ziney ka maksad uski ek aahat sun na hai...bas woh ek baar pukarey aur mey bas uski ho jau..mujhe tumari bahut yaad aati hai abhay kaha chale gaye tum mujhe chodhkar..vaada kiya tha ki hamesha stah nibhauga lakin bich rastey mey mujhe akeley aur tanha yu chodhkar chale gaye ...come back abhay!!!! please come back!!!!

*piya, piya beta piya come and have dinner* she stops writting and close her dairy and goes...

madhu: come beta and have a dinner...

piya: mumma misha kaha hai

madhu: beta she is busy in a meeting...woh late aayegi tum khaana kha lo

piya: mumma you know that ki mey hamesha misha ke sath hi khaana khati hu

here comes misha...she listen and smiles

{misha looked is changed now she wears formals and she wear specs, she looks cute}

misha: yes piya you are right and you know aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakta ki piya misha ke bina h khaana kha ley...chalo lets eat...mujhe toh bahuy bukh lagi hai...

misha and piya sits. madhu serves food to piya. she was about to serve misha...she gets a business call and she moves from the chair..madhu feels sad and goes from there...piya begins to eat...someone hold her hand...she looks {shadow of abhay appear in front of piya, he was smiling}

abhay: piya aaj merey bina khaana kha rahi ho...

piya: nahi abhay woh mey bas

abhay: okay go i will not talk to you...

abhay shadow goes and piya stands up...she starts crying...madhu and misha comes running to her...piya holds misha hands...piya is crying

piya: misha dekho abhay mujhe chodhkar ja raha hai misha roko usey

misha: piya just calm down just calm down..mom call the doctor..

madhu calls doctor...piya was going out of control... piya fells down and become unconscious...misha takes piya to her bedroom with a help of maid...

here doctors come and examine the piya... Meanwhile arnab also reaches there and sees doctor. he understood that it could be piya.doctor looks at arnab...

doctor: Mr dobriyal piya ki halat pichley 9 mahino sey aisi hai... mey aapko kitni baar keh chuka hu ki please send piya to rehabiltaion centre but aap meri baat hi nahi sun rahey hai... piya kii body ney medicines ko respond karna chodh diya hai...i guess agar aapney jald hi koi decision nahi liya toh aap piya ko hamesha ke liye bi kho saktey hai...

arnab: nahi doctor aisi baat nahi hai. mey bas apni beti ko theek dekhna chahta hu...and i know ki is ghar mey uski puri terha sey care li ja sakti hai...

doctor: dekho arnab mey ek doctor hi nahi tumara dost be hu...mey janta hu tumari takleef ko lakin piya ki dimagi halat theek nahi hai..abhay ke gam ney usey bejaan bana diya hai...abhay ki death ke baad uski toh jaisey zindagi hi ruk si gayi hai...she is not normal at all...

arnab: lakin doctor koi to ilaaz hoga koi toh medicine hogi jo meri beti ko theek kar sakey...

doctor: aranb mey pichely 9 mahino sey tumhey yahi samjhney ki koshish kar raha hu ki piya ko agar theek karna hai toh uske abhay ko lekar aao...abhay hi uske dawaa hai...

arnab: doctor agar mey usey apni beti panchi ke pass newzealand bhej du toh kaisa rahega...kya pata jagah badlney sey uski halat mey kuch sudhar ho sakey...

doctor: well aranb yeh bi karke dekh letey hai...kya pata chamatkar ho jaaye..merey waha ek friend hai...he is a doctor and he knows about piya case..toh waha kuch problem nahi hogi...

misha heard this, she comes to arnab...doctor leaves from there...

arnab: misha i guess piya ke janey sey tumhey koi dikat nahi hogi

misha: dad i know piya ke liye yaha sey jaana zaruri hai waha jakar hi shayad woh abhay ki yaadein ko bhul sakey...

madhu: lakin piya ke sath jaayega kaun aur aisi halat mey toh usey akeley nahi bheja sakta...

arnab: u r right madhu, i guess hmm misha ko uske sath bhej saktey hai waha panchi aur sid hai toh koi problem nahi hogi...aur beta tum sath rahoegi toh humhey ek tasli rahegi...

misha: dad please aapko itna bolney ki zarurat nahi i will go with piya...lakin yaha ka business...

arnab: dont worry i will handle that u just we with piya..

misha: okay dad

arnab: toh mey tumari aur piya ki parso ki ticket buk karwa deta hu...

misha: okay dad...

scene shifts:

piya is sitting there holding abhay picture... she sees abhay picture and tears rolls down from her eyes on a picture...she talks to abhay picture

piya: abhay tum kaha ho? tumari piya tumarey bina kitni akeli hogayi hai.. tum kehtey they na ki tum meri aankho mey aansu nahi dekh saktey toh phir kyu nahi aa jaatey abhay... mey tumarey bina nahi ji sakti abhay...ya toh tum merey pass aa jao ya mujhe apney pass bula lo...

misha was listening this from a door of piya room...she sees piya crying..she moves from there and bend on wall and start crying...madhu comes and consoles her...

piya: abhay dekho na yeh log mujhe yaha sey bahut dur bhej rahey hai...

tum please jaldi aa jao {she hugs abhay pics}

scene shifts:

Somewhere in countryside a stadium is covered with heap of people staying and they were chearing for a group of bike riders...girls for chearing up and people are standing wth flags...judges are having a sip of coffee... commentators are ready to hold mike...its a night so flashes of camera is just going on and on...from the helicopter veiw is just like flashes of camera is just like sparkling stars... big woofers are ready and the watcg begins for the countdown to be started at any moment...stadium is fully with crowd chears...

the competition is about to begin... a group of bike riders comes and stop their modified bikes stop at the start line...commentator speaks

commentator: are you ready guys... {voice echoed at stadium and the crowd was excited and cheering for the bike riders}... ok then the countdown begins

3- bike gears start

2- bike race was given at fully

1-engine starts

{hey friends may be i am wrong in describing the scene sorrry for that friends}

a race begins... people start cheering up and in the race two bikes fall down..the fire comes out from the bike and it skits on the road...

bikers were on full speed and they were chasing each other...the competition was between three bike riders...commentators were confused because it was a very tough competition...

suddenly the third bike ride gets slow his bike. now the competition was between two bikes and they were riding very rashly and it was a tough competition between both of them...{commentators were sweating} suddenly one of the bike rider bike was disbalance and so the other one give him a support made him up... and the one of them reaches to winning point...all the people shouts...girls run to take autogarph and hugs...the shower of sparkles were pouring on the winner...

he open his helmet {hey friends u can see this link on youtube and listen the music according to his entry pkyek rock tone}

http://youtu.be/JW_Yo-ut91E

and it was none other then vivian dsena hmm he was giving flying kiss to girls and he sees up and give salute to sky...reporters come to them...

interview:

so aadil how you are feeling on great success?

aadil:wow it great what can i say just wanna say i am the winner and i am the successor...

well you are wining competition from 5 years now to whom u give the credit?

aadil:well my parents offcourse and my team obviously evey one...

what about the girlfriend?

aadil:well no comments on that but when right time will come i will say... thanks...

scene shift:

piya and panchi reaches delhi airport, misha and piya goes to counter for check in...misha and piya comes after completing formality... misha hugs madhu and arnab tightly...she was having tears in her eyes..madhu hugs piya but piya was not reacting...madhu kisses on her forehaead...aranb hugs piya...he wipes his tears... misha and piya leaves...they take their flight and sit on their seats...plane takes off piya was thinking something and misha sees that...

scene shifts:

aadil and his friends were doing party in pub and the scene was that aadil was dancing with his friends and drinking wine, one bottle, two bottle and the third bottle he was drunk fully...he came one of his friend and sit with him.. aadil {vivian dsena} see many couples on the floor... his friends say something

friend: hey dude kya soch raha hai

aadil: nothing yaar

friend: abey yaar terey passe kisi cheez ki kami hai hai kya itna bada oberoi business empire hmmm uper sey you are a pilot...what do you want some dude?

aadil: yaar ts not like that i am happy...

one girl come to him and kisses on her cheecks...he smiles

aadil: dekh yeh sab ladkiya merey ek isharey pe apni jaan tak de sakti hai lakin mujhe koi aisa chahiye jiske liye mey apni jaan de saku...

scene shifts:

misha: piya are you okay?

piya: yeah i m okay...

misha: dont say lie yaar i know you are not...see piya mey tumhey hurt nahi karna chahti hu lakin jo keh rahi hu woh bahut important hai...

piya looks at misha

misha: kabi kabhi humhey lagta hai jo log humari life mey bahut important hotey hai woh humhey kabhi chidhkar nahi ja saktey lakin yeh toh god ki marzi hai ki woh humhey kiske sath rakhna chahtey hai aur kiske sath nahi..toh life ruk nahi jaati

piya: misha tum kehna kya chahti ho

misha: bas yahi ki abhay ja chuka there will someone who is waiting for u

piya: aisa koi bi nahi hai misha kyunki mey janti hu ki abhay sey jayada koi aur mujse pyar nahi kar sakta...aisa koi bi nahi hai na kabhi hoga

scene shifts:

aadil stands up and comes to window of pub with his friend and sees moon...{abhay and piya music starts}

aadil: mey usey itna pyar karunga itna ki log bi kahenge bi agar kismat ho toh aadil ki girlfriend jaisi ...jiska har gam mey bas apney seeney mey chupa lunga..uska har ek ansu apni palko pe sazaa lunga...

friends sees aadil smiles they go again and start dancing...

here piya plane land on auckland international airport where panchi and sid are there to recieve them with their son prateek...they saw misha and piya coming there...misha waves her hand and so panchi also...misha and piya comes to panchi...panchi sees piya...she hugs her... piya smiles little...misha hugs sid and sid hugs misha then piya...misha takes prateek in her arms...

panchi: how was ur flight? hmm piya are you okay

misha: yeah flight was okay

piya: i am panchi...

panchi lets go home

misha: ha yaar badey zoro ki bukh lagi hui hai

sid: yeh nahi sudregi pehaley bi petu thi ab bi petu rahegi...

panchi and sid leaves for home with misha and piya...sid was driving car and they stop at a traffic lights...piya was lost in abhay thoughts, when a some bikes come and stops there...he opens the flap of helmet...he looks at signal and then his eyes drops on piya...who was lost...yes he was aadil who was lost in piya's eyes...piya was not looking at him... aadil was mermerized by that innocent beauty...signal goes green and aadil have to go from there...here sid cars also leaves...

so friends here i end this part hope you will like it...

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Part-23

thanks friends for your love and support...I am sorry not getting enough time to update...sorry

aadil holds piya in this hands took her to bedroom and make her lay down on bed.. he puts piya head on pillow and sees her.. he was looking at beautiful angel.. piya was having tear on her cheeks...aadil wipes it and sees her...ajay comes and put hand on aadil shoulder...aadil comes back to his senses...panchi calls doctor and misha sits besides...

aadil: yeh abhay kaun hai.. jab piya mujhe milti hai hamesha abhay ka naam leti hai...

misha and panchi looks at aadil, sid comes ...

sid: aadil abhay woh insaan hai jisey piya...

panchi nodes his head...

aadil: piya kya

sid: jisey piya apna best frnd manti thi... actually tumara chehra usey abhay ki yaad dilata hai... a kind of similarity..

both aadil and ajay was shocked... here the doctors come and checks piya... he gave injection... he tells all of them to come out...

doctor: dekhiye piya is not fine...

panchi: doctor what are you saying?

doctor: yes panchi beta mainey piya ki reports padi hai and examine bi ki hai...agar aisi hi haalat rahi toh i am sorry we have to admit in hospital...

ajay: what reports?

aadil: and what hospital? kya hua hai piya ko?

misha: panchi aadil sey chupkar koi fayada nahi hai i think its time to tell aadil...

misha takes aadil and ajay with her and panchi sees them going with worried look... misha, aadil and ajay comes to piya room... he sees the room... and piya pics..ajay comes sits on chair...

aadil: misha kya baat hai batao mujhe? ho sakta hai mey kuch help kar saku...

misha looks at piya pic with teary eyes...and start telling

misha: aadil and ajay yeh kahani hai shuru hoti hai dehradun sey jaha pe ek rajkumari ki shaadi tey hoti hao {flashback of abhay and piya} hai ek rajkumar sey... lakin kuch problems hui aur rajkumari ney raj kumar ka sath diya aur woh hamesha ke liye sab kuch chodhkar rajkumar ke sath chali gayi..

aadil: misha be clear...we are not kids... yeh rajkumar aur rajkumari kaun hai...

misha looks at aadil,ajay looks at aadil and then misha..he was so shocked...

misha: aadil rajkumar tha abhay raichand aur rajkumari thi piya...

aadil was so shocked... thunder strike and aadil pic was cracking into peices.. aadil was nt able to believe that piya is married... he was having tears in his eyes...ajay sees aadil and put hand on aadil shoulder...

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misha: shaadi ke baad dono bas ek dusrey ke hogaye hamesha ke liye.. piya ke naye rishtey baney {remembering vedh, abeer. kabir aarzoo} abhay piya sey itna pyar karta tha ki uske liye kuch bi kar sakta tha,, piya abhay ki zindagi thi aur abhay piya ke jeeney ki wajah... phir achank ek {flashback of guru maa and metri} aur sab tehas nehas hogaya..abhay aur piya ke bich duriyaa bad gayi lakin piya ney abhay ka sath kabhi nahi chodha... lakin jab kisi ki nazar lagti hai toh toh koi kya kar sakta hai...ek din piya ko pata chala ki abhay is no more aur pichley ek saal sey piya aisi hai...piya ney apni zindagi abhay ke naam kar di...piya abhay ki yaado ke sath ji rahi hai...zindagi sey toh jaisey naata hi todh liya hai usney...piya ki ek smile pe college ka har ek insaan fida tha woh piya toh maano jaisey hasnaa hi bhul gayi ho...doctors kehtey hai ki agar yahi haalat rahi toh piya ko mental hospital bharti karna padega...misha start crying

ajay and aadil was shocked to listen this...aadil was feeling so bad for piya and he was heart broken and he was just remembering misha words.. ajay comes to misha and gives her a glass of water... makes her sits... aadil was silent...he looks at misha... he stands up...

aadil: misha

misha and ajay looks at aadil...

aadil: mey piya sey shaadi karna chahta hu...

ajay stands and as well misha also... ajay comes to aadil

ajay: paagal ho gaya hai yeh tu kya keh raha hai...

aadil: ajay mey piya sey pyar karta hu...jis din mainey usey pehali baar dekha tha mainey usi waqt soch liya tha ki piya hi woh ladhki jiske sath mey apni puri zindagi beeta sakta hu...

misha: aadil tum pura sach nahi jantey ho...

aadil: aur mey jaana bi nahi chahta kyunki piya ke sath mey future dekhana chahta hu na ki past...

misha: nahi aadil yeh nahi hpo sakta piya kabhi nahi manegi...

ajay: misha sahi keh rahi hai aadil.. mujhe tere pyar pe koi shakh nahi hai lakin piya ki jo haalat hai...

aadil: ajay piya ko isi haalat sey toh bahar laana hai mujhe bec jab woh theek ho jaayegi toh uske face woh ek mushkurat hi hum sab ki zindagi dubaara normal ho sakegi...

ajay: aadil mom, dad aur nani maa kaisey samjhogey aur sabsey pehaley piya...

misha: ajay sachaai yeh nahi hai...

aadil: toh sachai kya hai

misha: mey nahi bata sakti...

misha goes from there...aadil looks at ajay...

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misha comes to panchi... panchi was looking at piya...

misha: panchi how is piya?

panchi: doctor ke rehey they ki piya ko wapas laney ke liye ek nayi starting karni hogi...humhey uski life mey koi aisa aana hoga jo piya ko normal kar sakey...humhey uski phir sey shaadi kar deni chahiye lakin kaun karega piya sey shaadi {misha looks at panchi}

mey karunga piya se shaadi {panchi and misha turns} sees aadil standing there...shcoked and shocked

aadil: mey piya sey shaadi karna chahta hu...

panchi: kya are you joking aadil...tum piya ke baarey mey jantey ho na

aadil: ha jaanta hu...why u people are reacting so wired? ismey galat kya hai... piya has every right to live her life as normal...toh merey sath kyu nahi

panchi: lakin aadil kya tum jantey ho

aadil:kya

panchi: toh suno abhay ki shakal hu bu hu tumsey milti hai...meri aankho ko toh yakin hi nahi hota ...ek hi chehrey ke do insaan...

aadil and ajay are now shocked and shocked what are they saying

aadil: u must be joking with me... show me his pics...

misha brings the album and shows it to aadil...aadil and ajay was so shocked and in tension...

aadil: how could be so possible?

ajay: aadil he is just like you?

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aadil was walking with ajay he was silent and ajay was walking and looking at aadil... they reaches home...nani maa opens the door...nani sees aadil...she looks worried...

nani holds ajay ears...

ajay: oouch oouch nani maa kya kar rahi hai aap.. mainey kya kiya hai..,,

nani: humara aadik itna chup kyu hai... hum jantey hai zarur aapney hi koi sharat ki hogi

ajay {put his hand on her head}: aapki kasam kuch nahi kiya mainey...arey koi samjho humari nani maa ko...

aadil looks at them and walks away...ajay notice that and takes nani to her room...

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piya wakes up comes for breakfast and everyone was silent.. here at oberoi mansion everyone was having breakfast... aadil comes and sits.. megha comes with rishab...nani looks worried and rishab sees this

rishab: maa kya baat hai aap pareshan ho?

nani winks at aadil...rishab sees aadil and then ajay

rishab: bhai humarey ghar mey do shaitaan ghumtey they kisi ney dekha hai kya... {rishab calls every servant, megha also comes}

boliye ajay aur aadil naame ke do shaitaan kaha hai...

megha: mahant kaka nashta dijye sabko...aaj mainey aadil ke khaas aloo ke paranthey banaye hai..lo beta have it {she serves to aadil and then ajay}

aadil eats nothing

megha: kya hua beta tum kha kyu nahi rahey ho...

rishab: kya baat hai aadil..

aadil stands up and goes from there...

ajay: badey papa woh baat yeh hai {ajay told her whole conversation of misha and them and then panchi}

rishab smiles...

rishab: megha humarey betey ko pyar hogaya hai... congrts

ajay: lakin badey papa kya apko koi farak nahi padta ki piya vidhwa hai

rishab: beta vidhwa honey sey pehaley piya ek insaan hai kya usey jiney ka koi hakh nahi... ismey piya ki kya galti hai... usey bi jiney ka pura haqh hai...aur ismey aadil ki kya galti hai woh abhay jaisa dikhta hai...

megha: ha beta yeh sahi hai agar kisi zindagi sawar jaaye toh isey badi aur kya baat ho sakti hai aur phir merey kanha ji bi toh yahi kehtey hai na prem ka roop hai anek...

ajay stands up and hugs rishab

ajay: papa mainey is ghar mey janam toh nahi liya lakin ha yeh zarur ke sakta hu ki pichley janam mainey zarur kuch acha kiya hoga jo bhagwan ne aap logo ko mera maa baap banaya,,,,,

rishab holds ajay cheeks

rishab: arey mera ajay putar toh bada hogaya hai,,,arey bhai itna bi bada honey ke liye nahi kaha tha...{every one laughs}

nani: rishab

rishab: ji maa

nani: hum piya ki family sey milna chahtey hai...

ajay: nani kyu na hum un logo ko aadil key birthday pe invite karey

megha: ha yeh toh acha idea hai... kyu rishab

rishab: jaha biwi khush waha mey bi khush ho...jai ho...

every laughs...

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piya: no panchi tumney aisa soch bi kaisey liya...

panchi: piya try to understand...kab tak aisey rahogi...zindagi bahut lambi hai usey jiney ke liye koi sahara chahiye...hum kab tak sath dengey tumara...

misha: panchi is right piya... koi tumhey aisey nahi dekhna chahta... yaha tak abhay bi nahi

panchi: did you ever see yourself piya... what had you done to yourself?

you are so selfish...tumhey apney aagey kisi aur ka dukh nazar nahi aata... mey misha,, sid, mom and dad... hum kuch nahi lagtey tumarey..

piya: mey aadil sey shaadi nahi kar sakti...

panchi: theek hai piya toh ek kaam karo hum sabko apney haatho sey zehar de do...kyunki hum tumhey aisey nahi de sakhtey

panchi start crying...

sid: panchi theek keh rahi hai piya...aadil tumsey pyar karta hai... woh tumhey bahut khush rakhega... tum janti ho piya tum bahut lucky ho.. jo bhagwan ne dusra mauka diya hai...aur woh aadil hai... tum kehti thi na bhagwan kabhi chamatkar nahi kartey...dekho tumara abahy bhagwan ne tumhey dey diya ek naye naam aur pehchaan ke sath... plz piya maan jao

piya cries and hugs misha...

here landline rings and sid and all of them sees it...

so friends here i end...hope u will enjoy it...

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Part-8

abhay is worried, haseena comes to abhay...

abhay: mom mainey piya sey shaadi toh kaar li but i dont know ki aagey kya hoga?

haseena: i know abhay lain piya ab tumari responsiblity hai...

abhay: mom i know lakin aap metri ko toh jaanti hi hai..how i will make him conrol?

haseena: wahi toh mey jo soch rahi hu... phil haal enjoy the party...dont spoil ur mood..

piya needs you...jao piya ke pass jao...

abhay goes to piya... piya smiles and abhay holdes piya... suddenly a girl comes and opens the door... "surprise dada..." abhay looks at aarzoo.. she smiles at him..abhay leaves piya...😲

abhay comes to aarzoo...abhay hugs aarzoo

abhay: hey sweetheart how are you? hmm missed me my little angel..

aarzoo {kiss on his cheeks}: yes dadu {big bro} i love you so much aur mainey aapko bahut bahut misss kiya? aur aapney mujhe kitna miss kiya..?

abhay: mainey tumhey...ahhh

aarzoo was curious to know... she was serious...abhay looks at aarzoo...

abhay: mainey tumhey bilkul miss nahi kiya...

aarzoo: dada masti nahi, i know you misses me...

abhay: who said this?

aarzoo: me aarzoo raichand abhay rachand small sis..

abhay {laughs}: come here my sweet cute angel {he hugs her amd kisses on her forehead.. waise you put weight ha motu

abeer and vedh smiles and misha was just looking at abhay and aarzoo.. aarzoo gets angry and goes to chand...

aarzoo: dad dekhiye na dadu mujhe kaisey tang kar rahey hai {she hugs chand}

chand hugs aarzoo...haseesna also hugs aarzoo...

haseena: papa ki ladali beti...mumma ko toh koi puch hi nahi raha..

aarzoo: oh common mumma i love you so much,...but i love my dad and dadu so much...

abeer: waah waah isey kehtey hai maa beti ka pyar...kyu vedh bhai...😉😉

vedh: koi problem hai kya? tu chup nahi reh sakta kya?

abeer: aapsey toh jayada hi bolta hai hu bhai...kuch sudaar karo...😉😉

vedh: not again abeer...😡😡😡

piya looks at aarzoo...she comes to piya...she hugs her tightly jus like misha...misha feels jealous...

aarzoo: you are piya...right dadu ney mujhe sab bataya...

abhay comes to piya...abhay sees here and there...aarzoo looks at him

aarzoo: dada please dont look here and there she is not here,..oh shit shit i forget to tell dad

piya: abhay yeh kiski baat kar rahey they...ae you waiting for someboday

abhay: no jaan nothing just like that...

aarzoo goes to chand...

aarzoo: dad i wanna give you special message guru ma is cominh with metri...

chand: what guru ma is coming here...when bachey?

chand us to call aarzoo bachey...he is worried that guru ma is coming, and she didnt know about abhay and piya marraige...misha sees all of them in worried look...misha comes to abhay and piya...

misha: piya lets go its already night i think you should sleep now...

abeer: ahhh hmm kya baat hai misha ji first night abhay aur piya ki hai aur jaldi aapko lagi hui hai

misha: kya karey {looks at vedh} kuch log interest hi nahi dikhatey dude...so cut the crap...

abeer {vedh ears slowly}: bhai ladhki line de rahi hai maukha hath sey jaaney na do warna kuwarey reh jaaogey

misha: what did you say?

abeer: kuch kuch bi toh nahi

vedh: not interested {looks at vedh} any prblem...

abeer: no prblem big bro...

aarzoo: kyu vedh ko satatey rehtey ho...u know he is different...

misha laughs and says on piya ears...

misha: different to lag hi raha lagta hai zombie ke planet set aaya hai...

piya: stop it mishu...😆😆😆

kabir: well guys bahut late hogaya hai aur ab humhey chalna chaiye...

misha: but abhi toh aaye hai...

kabir: but its 11 o clock yaar, uncle sey hum jhooth bolkar aaye hai pic ke bahney sey...

misha: oo yeah man i forget...piya got to know i will meet u and yeah takecare {she looks at abhay then piya}

piya undesrtands what misha wants to say..she feels shy,,,chand tells abhay to come in his room..haseena and aarzoo takes piya into abhay's room...abeer stands there and thinks...vedh first goes and then comes to abeer..

vedh: kya hua kya soch raha hai...

abeer: bhai mey soch raha tha hitler {chand} ki kya entry becharey humarey abhay {puts hand on his head} da socha tha biwi ke sath baat karegey lakin yaha toh hitler sath le gaya...pata nahi ma kaisey yeh sab hogi...

abeer calls haseena ma {with love, he rspects her a lot as mom}

vedh: unki chodh aur apni soch...tera honey waala sasur hai aur usey hi hitler bol raha hai saaley?

abeer: arey yeh toh izaat dey raha hu na mey matlab hitler ek mahan parakrani yodha waisey hi humarey sasur ji hitler sey kam hai kya...

vedh: acha ab chal mujhe kitab padhni hai...

abeer: tum jao bhai mey aata hu...

vedh nodes his head and goes to his room..abeer also goes from there...here haseena and aarzoo makes piya sit abhay bed...piya is feeling shy..aarzoo laughs...

aarzoo: mom piya kitna sharmati hai...mujhe toh pata hi nahi hai ki sharmatey kaisey hai..

piya: jab tumari shaadi hogi toh tum bi seekh jaaogei.. {haseena smiles}

hassena: lets go beta {aarzoo} abhay aata hi hoga...

aarzoo: all the best piya... i mean piya bhabi

piya: mom thodi der rukiye na mujhe dar lag raha hai [how cuteee]

haseena smiles and so as aazroo because how piya is feeling now...

Scene shifts:

Scene shifts to abhay & abeer!

abeer: Bhai, as much as i would love to celebrate your marriage, i think you should go before piya oops piya bhabi comes and beat me up!

abhay: Yes i am going! Don't follow me ! And dont disturb me ok?

abeer: Sign* Ok ok i wont, make sure you lock your door! *He winks at abhay*

Abhay gives a smile and walks up the stairs towards his room.

He's excited as well as nervous! He was going to be with his lady love for the first time ever however he kissed her many times but today he was going to be hers forever! He couldnt control his emotions. Thinkin about all this he didnt notice he was outside his bedroom door. he knocks the door...aarzoo opens the door and winks at him abhay gives cute smile to her...aarzoo turns...

aazroo: mom lets go.. dadu is here...

haseena comes there and smiles to abhay also gives smile in return...

abhay enters...

He looks around the room and smiles. it was decorates with flowers and candles. His eyes searching for his heart (piya).

He spots his beautiful bride on the bed waiting for him! ONLY HIM! abhay comes to piya, here piya is breathing heavily getting nervous and happy...

abhay next to the bed looking at piya who is still in her veil! The beautiful Lengha was blue and pink with matching jewelleries.

The moon was shining on her making her dress glow!

He touches her hand and she close her eyes to absord the feeling inside her! She breaths heavily and opened again!

Slowly he lifts it and gaze into her eyes! She looks at him with full emotions in her eyes. He smiles at her and she gave him a sweet smile back!

abhay goes forward to kiss her when she gets off the bed and runs to the window! (Stop blusing girls)..

She closes her eyes and smiles shyly. abhay follows her and stand next to her. she realise he was ryt there and could feel his hand holding hers. abhay pulls her towards him, lock her in his arms facing her. He looks in her eyes and vice versa!

abhay: piyaa

piya: Hmmm

abhay: Your Beautiful * While running his fingers on her face*

piya: Hmmm

abhay: I need to tell you something!

piya looks at him with a questioning eye!

abhay: What if i say you complete me? what if i say that my life is hell without you!!!!

Actually piya, i dont have words to describe you! My whole life i searched for true love, little did i kno i wud get someone who loves me this much! Your like a god-send angel!

THE NEXT SCENE IS NOT FOR KIDS... IM WARNING RYT NOW! Dont say i didnt warn anyone! LOL😃

*Roshni Se Bare Bare*(Ashoka) Music starts... (just imagine lol)

piya hesitates but gives in after feeling his touch!

He lifts her up and carries her to the bed. He takes off her duppata from her shoulder and unpins her hair!

He then takes off her jewelries leaving it beside them on the bed. Meanwhile abhay kisses her forehead and

eyes in shock! He smiles and she blushes...she closes her eyes!

abhay gives a naughty look at took the opportunity while her eyes r closed, he kissed her lips and she opened her closed eyes!!!

Scene shift to abeer,

He decides to go call him!. He walks up the stairs n towards abhay's room and is about to knock when vedh comes He is drinking a wine glass {containg blood} and and he forgets its abhay's first night 2day!. vedh comes and stops him!.

abeer: What happened bhai? Any problem?

vedh: You idiot, dont disturb Da!

abeer: why? is he ok?

vedh: you know that. dont do nonsense and go to your room...

abeer: yes da i am so tired...

vedh: paagal

abeer: good night vedh da...

Scene shifts to abhaya room... *song still playing*

abhay again kisses piya and this time she gives in! she holds the back of his head and pulls him towards her feeling the response.abhay got happy and made the kiss deeper. While with his fingers he starts to untie the dhori's that are located at the back of piya's lengha!

He pins piya's hand to the bed and slightly move on top of her (his face to top of hers, not the body! Relax girls, i hope not fainted)

Her eyes closed and he admires her!

Slighty goes in to her face, he kisses her nose, eyes, cheeks forehead and then finds his way to her lips which was light pink! His kiss was full of passion and love! piya response his kiss with love as well!

He slips a ring on her fingure, and unzip her lower part of her lengha! and lifts her up again! (what to do? hes a macho man)

Puts her in the middle of the bed! Then you see the white silky bed sheets on piya and abhay is still in black suit..he removes his shirt and untug his buttons

Then abhay holds piya close and starts caressing her and she moans a little ! He closes his eyes with her voice ecoing in his head! He pins her hands against the bed and she moans in his ears! piya finally grip her hand to his and they become one!

The wind blows the candles and the room has only moon lights which makes the whole scene natural!

The sun rises and brings a new day, piya sleeping on abhays Bare chest and their clothes is on the floor!

so friends here i end the story..here i tried to make some natural scene...hope you will like them...

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@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Part-9

pia is sleeping on abhay bare chest...piya slowly opens her eyes...sunlight is welcoming piya for her new life...piya smiles at abhay and goes to take shower...abeer and vedh were worried because metri and guru ma is coming...

piya comes after taking shower..

abhay was sitting on a bed when piya comes out of shower with only a towel wrapped around her as she forgot to take her clothes inside! abhay, who was sitting looked up and was mesmerized by her beauty!

She was like an angel indeed. HIS ANGEL!

Her skinny white legs with water dripping from her hair and she had no make-up! he couldnt take his eyes off her! abhay comes to piya.. piya feels shy... he pulls her waist and make her come close to him... piya hairs were wet...

abhay gently careeses her hairs... her fragrance was making abhay crazypiya closes her eyes...abhay comes more close to piya...

piya {slowly whispered}: abhay...

abhay: hmm

piya: let me go i have to get ready...

abhay: no i will not allow you to go...

piya: but

abhay: shhh you kya tum is lamhey mey khona nahi chahti...

piya: abhay tum nahi jantey tumney mujhe zindagi ki kitni badi khushi di hai...

abhay: I love you piya {he kisses on her lips gently}

piya holds abhay shirt... and wrap her hand around abhay neck... after few min abhay leaves piya...piya smiles...piya goes to wardrobe... piya is confused...abhay comes and hold her from ack..

piya: i dont know what to wear...

abhay: then dont tum aisey bahut khubsoorat dikhti ho...

piya: oh common abhay...after wedding its my first day in this house atleast i should wear somting tradtional but what?

abhay: confusion!!! confusion!!!!! confusion!!!!

piya: ya totally

abhay: ok wear this {he gives piya sky blue and golden saree}

piya: wow abhay its baeutiful...but

abhay: but what piya ...

piya: actually {grining her lips} i dont know how to wear saree... {piya turns to abhay}

abhay: very simple...

piya: but abhay...

abhay: shh {abhay makes piya turn} go and wear this {he gives jupon and blouse}

piya goes to washroom and wear saree jupon {petticoat} and blouse...abhay was still standing there in black ganji and his black tracks piya comes out abhay was looking constantly at piya. she goes to mirror and tries to tie the Dhori's... but cant. He smiles and walks towards piya with a naughty expression.

piya still struggling with her dhori didnt notice abhay!

abhay touches piya's back and she gasp!

He tells her how beautiful she is looking. piya looks down and abhay caresses her back & starts tying her dhoris one by one!

After tying all of them he kisses her neck and turn her to him & kisses her lips (i hope no1 fainted yet!, another intimate scene on the way, WATCH OUT girls😉😉😉}

abhay smiles and take the saree and pin it in piya's petticoat touching her waist.. piya smiles shyly but doesnt pull away cause shes loving this feeling (im loving it tooo)...

abhay: pichley janam mainey kuch achey kaam kiye hongey that why i got you?

piya: i feel very lucky to be your wife...

abhay: i love so much, dont ever leave me...

piya: I cnt imagine life without you, i wont ever leave you *tears rolls down*

abhay kisses her tears and goes to the bathroom to take a shower...

Scene shifts:

abeer and vedh were sitting with aarzoo...vedh was reading science ficition book...aarzoo was removing nail paint from her nailsabeer was thinking that how he will make setting of vedh and misha... vedh senses that what abeer was thinking,,,he sees him and then into book... here misha comes... abeer stands up with excitment vedh and aarzoo looks him...

abeer: arey misha ji welcome welcome...sit sit... {he smiles and winks at vedh}

vedh: gives angry looks to vedh and sees misha then again in the book...

misha: dude lagta hai merey aaney sey koi khush nahi hai.. {misha looks at vedh and vedh sees misha}

vedh: excuse me...aapney mujhe kaha...

abeer: offcourse bhai aap itney shant jo rehtey sabko lagta hai ki aap khush nahi ho kyu misha ji...

misha: hey good ha...keep it up...i like it...piya kaha hai...

aazroo {flew on her nails}: unka toh hum bi intezaar kar rahey hai..

here chand comes and abeer smile is gone and he sits quitely and vedh notice abeer...misha stands up and greet chand...haseena also comes sees misha and smiles... chands looks for abhay...

chand: where is abhay?

aazroo: dad da ki shaadi hui ab thoda time toh lagega na...

here abhay and piya comes piya was looking so beautiful in saree as her hairs were open and she was wearing matching jewllerey with that a small sindoor in her mang and yeah a mangalsutra cotains diamonds...it was shining..

friends she s wearing this saree and this jewellery...

piya greets all of them, hugs haseena and takes blessings...chand was hesitate to give blessings {friends he is a vampire}...chand just smiles hair put hand on piya head, but say nothing... piya goes to misha and hugs her...chand sees abhay and signals him to come in... abhay goes in vedh sees him...

Scene shifts:

chand: abhay tum jantey ho ki aaj guru ma aur metri aa rahi hai...

abhay: yes dad mujhe pata hai...

chand: hmm tum jantey ho tumhey kya karna hai...

abhay: yes dad...

abhay goes and chand sees him going from there..abhay comes to piya...

abhay: mey aap sabsey kuch kehna chahta hu

abeer, vedh, aarzoo aur piya, misha looks at abhay...

abhay: jin haalato mey meri aur piya ki shaadi hui hai usey aap sab log waa kif hai.. aaj yaha metri aur guru maa aa rahi hai...mey nahi chahta ki unhey meri aur piya ki shaadi ka pta chaley...iska kya reason hai mey nahi bata sakta {vedh, abeer and aarzoo understands}

piya looks at abhay...misha is shocked to listen this...piya goes to her room...abhay looks at piya and follows her...piya is standing beside window..abhay comes and puts hands on her shoulder...piya turns...

abhay: kya hua abhay?

piya: hum apni shaadi ke baarey mey kisi ko kyu nahi bata saktey abhay...

abhay: piyaa metri woh ladhki jisey guru ma ney merey liye chuna tha lakin mujhe tum pasand aa gayi isliye...

piya: toh abhay woh humhey sath dekhkar khush nahi hogi..

abhay {puts arms on piya shoulder}: no piya aisa kuch nahi hai...hum apna relation unke samney reveal nahi kar saktey

piya: lakin abhay, {piya hugs abhay}

abhay: dont worry mey hamesha tumarey sath hu...sirf kuch dino ki baat hai...

piya: hmm

abhay thinks and piya closes her eyes while hugging abhay...

piya:abhay mujhe tumsey baat karni hai...

abhay: bolo piya kya baat hai..

piya: abhay mey collehe join karna chahti hu,,,

abhay: piya lakin college kyu...

piya: i mean joo kuch bi hua i just need a space so i thought ki college jakar i can divert myself...

abhay: but piya

piya: please abhay

abhay: but i will also come...

aarzoo calls abhay and abhay kisses piya and leaves..piya thinks...abhay comes down and piya sees from window from where she can see hall from abhay room..

one girl with black dress...

piya thinks that she is metri and one more woman nayarni shastri she was also in black saree...

nayarni shastri {her name is sabhaa}: for everyone she is sabhaa nut in dark world she is guru maa..she is having control on the power of every vampire..she can is intelligent and very soft spoken...very confident, smart intelligent... piya sees her...

metri sees abhay standing, piya comes down... metri comes to abhay...she kisses abhay...

metri: hi sexy howz life...

piya sees this and she was boiling inside...misha holds her hand...abhay senses that piya is feeling jealous... guru maa {sabhaa} sees piya and she comes to her...

guru maa {sabhaa}: kaun ho tum pehaley toh tumhey kabhi nahi dekha...

haseena: guru maa woh aarzoo ki dosti hai...

guru maa {sabhaa }stares her for a min..abeer comes to guru maa {sabhaa}.. he hugs him...

guru maa: abeer bahut sharati hogaye ho tum..

abhay, aarzoo, vedh and chand, haseena bows their head in front of her...she smiles and tell them u to stand up...misha and piya looks themm

misha: piya mey ja rahi hu this is so strange...

piya: but misha dont go na mujhe bi ajeeb sa lag rah hai...

guru maa {sabhaa} turns and see piya. she comes to piya...piya feels nervous..

guru maa: kya ajeeb sa lag raha hai...

piya is shocked to hear this...

piya: nothing, {sees abhay} i am not feeling well {she smiles at guru maa and leaves to abahy room}

guru maa: insaan na jaaney kyu itna darta hayee reh insaan... {she smiles}..

T is waiting for someone in a cafe.. she is looking at watch... someone comes in a black BMW.. someone is a grey suit...T smiles and hugs him... they sit in a cafe..

Person: hey T toh kyu bulaya mujhe yaha pe...

T {gives piya pic }: yeh piya humhey isey khatam karna hai...kimat tum jo bolo

Person: hmm kaam ho jaayega...

T: lakin dhyan sey iske sath aur ladka hai jiska abhay raichand...

T smiles go and that person goes from there..she smiles and thinks

"piya ab dekhti hu tumhey kaun bachayega mujse..."

piya goes to her room and decides to clean the room as its messy.

While doing the bed, abhay comes in quitely, locks the door and hugs piya from behind..

piya jumps but doesnt pull away as she knos its abhay.

abhay kisses her neck and pulls her closer and closer till he feels her blood rushing in her body. He kisses her ears and takes her earing

off and she pulls away.

piya: What are you doing?

abhay: love

piya: its nt the right time

abhay: there is no right or wrong time in love..

piya: But look around you, the room is so messy..

abhay: i dont care, i only want you

piya: let me clean the room first.

piya bends to pick up her earing and abhay picks her up and puts her on the bed!. She gets angry and goes red.

abhay kisses her forehead not caring about her anger and continues to go down and kisses her nose then lips then neck and then he untie 😳

one dhori and piya couldnt pull away as she couldnt control her feelings. piya lays down and abhay covers her face with his head and

the screen blurs... ( i hope you got it lool, this is for those people who wanted abhya to have a round 2, OMG Im so besharam)...😳

so friends here i stop here today hope you will like it...

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

part-7

abhay is standing with chand and man in black coat comes in with a papers.. two more people were standing there piya comes down and sees that person. abhay sees piya coming down... abhay smiles at piya...

piya: abhay yeh sab kya hai...

abhay: i told you na piya that hum kal shaadi karengey toh yeh court sey aaye hai... we will get married today..

piya: abhay but sab kuch is terha i mean i am not understanding at all...

abhay: shhh {puts finger on her lips} ab mey tumsey aur dur nahi reh sakta piya...aur shaadi toh honi hi thi na aaj nahi toh kal then why not today...

piya: oh abhay i love so much...

abhay: i love you too now go and get ready..surprise is waiting for you sweetheart...

piya goes and get ready... piya is thinking looking into mirror... abhay comes in hold her from back...

abhay: kya soch rahi ho jaan...

piya: nothing abhay...

abhay: dont lie to me i know something is there on...

piya: i am just sacred abhay to lose everything...

abhay hugs piya tightly...😊😊😊

abhay: dont think too much i will never leave you.. you are my reason to live..

piya: and you are my heartbeat abhay which can never stop until my death comes..

abhay: today is the happiest day of our life dont spoil the mood... i just want to see you happy piya...

piya: i will abhay hope everythings gonna be okay soon..

abhay: yes abhay it will be soon

abhay kisses ob piya lips gently and piya also gives.. piya holds abhay...and feels the deapth of their love. after few minutes abhay stops and leave piya... piya smiles..abhay also smiles... they hold each other hand and they come down. chand and haseena are ready for court...

Court scene...

abhay and piya are standing with chand and haseena...registrar fills some paper and tell abhay and piya to fill them indvidually.. abhay and piya does the same.. registrar says that we need two peole for witness...

someone calls from back " we are here". piya and abhay turns.. abhay sniles and piya is shocked to see misha and kabir.. they both come to them

piya {hugs misha}: misha tum yaha...how come and how you came to know?

misha: chillax babes... humhey yaha abhay ney bulaya hai sorry abhay jeezs ney...aur mey kaisey nahi aati humarey ghar mey jo bi conflicts huey after all you are my best friend and always be I love you so much...

piya is in tears and she hugs misha...

kabir: waah piya {oops} piya bhabi ji saara pyar is mishu pe luta dogi kya? hum bi line mey hai...

misha {jokes}: who you kabir?

kabir makes his collars up and sees here and there

kabir: well college ka abhay ke baad sabse handsome dude toh mey hi hu aur ab toh abhay bi shaadi karke suli chadney waaley hai toh its all me the king of college...

misha: dude tumhey na bahut badi galat femi hai...

piya: cool guys tum log kab sudhrogey.. yaha pe bi jagada shuru atleast not here in public..

abhay smiles seeing piya talking so cutely..misha comes to abhay and kabir stands with piya...piya sees both of them..

chand and haseena smiles.. misha and kabir signs on the paper. misha gives garland to abhay and kabir gives to piya. pia abhay ko haar pehnati hai abhay piya ko they both smiles. haseena opens the tiny box of sindoor and brings in front of abhay...abhay puts sindoor {BG music starts} in piya maang.. tears rolls down from piya eyes..abhay kisses on piya forehead... abhay puts mangalsutra in piya neck... registrar congrts them...misha comes in between...

misha: hey guys stop this rona dhona...just think about the new life and begining...

kabir comes to abhay and hugs him...

kabir: congrats dude... ab aap shaadi shuda hogaye..

abhay: dude tum bi jaldi shaadi shuda ho jaayegey...

kabir: kaun me no abhay...abhi toh aish karney ke din hai...

abhay smiles piya comes to kabir and misha...

piya: mujhe kaun congrts karega.. hmmm common guys give me a hug

piya hugs kabir and misha... abhay hugs chand and haseena...piya also hugs them...

piya: you two are my best friends always lovable to me

haseena: welcome to our family piya beta...

piya: thanks aunty [sry mumma}

chand: abhay lets go to home...

everyone goes home.. misha and kabir also goes with them... they reach home... abhay opens the door... he is surprise to see his friends and his cousins... its a party time... {friends i am intrducing 3 more characters in the story}

1. aarzoo { parmeet chauhan}:

a sister...she was in greece with her boyfriend... roshini has a very special powers in her...she can sense the future {just like alex in twilight, but friends story is different}t.. she is very close to abhay abhay loves a her lot than anyone. she is sweet and kind..

2. abeer {karan tacker}:

abhay cousin and aarzoo boyfriend... loves a aarzoo a lot.. he can attract anybody by his killer looks and yeah he can enchant anyone... he is very cool and party animal..

3. metri { jasveer kaur}:

she is reserved and very agreesive and he loves abhay a lot. she cant see abhay with anyone.. metri doesnt know that abhay got married to piya..

4}. vedh {iqbal khan}

well very hot and angry, very resreved like abhay not interested in love and all and he can transforms himself into any shape size and most powerful vampire...vedh can reads mind perfectly like abhay...he is intelligent and he likes to read more sciene orieented stuffs...

abhay is shocked to see everyone. all of them are standing accept metri and arzooshe is late...abhay sees both of them and hugs them...misha sees vedh.. vedh ignores misha..

abhay: hey i am missing some people

abeer: on the way da

kabir: da 😛😛!!!!

abeer: da means dada {in bengali}😉😉

kabir: oh ok hi i am kabir rathord...

misha: hi i am misha..piya best friend

abeer: hi kabir and nice to meet you lady

misha: aapke jo sath waaley hai yeh kuch nahi boltey hai kya?

abeer understood that a girl {misha is taking interest in vedh}.. kabir also notice this...abeer makes a joke

abeer: jaaney do yeh thoda sanki type ka hai...he is not yours type...

misha: chillax dude...misha apney types khud dhundti hai...misha dont want

anyone...

abeer is surprised to see misha attitude... he is happy that someone is taking interest in vedh... abeer comes to vedh...

abeer: wow man aatey hi asar dikhana shuru kar diya...mey yaha ladhikya

patatey thak jaata hu aur ek tum ho ladhikya tumari taraf magnet ki terha khichi chali aati hai...

vedh: toh {rudely} mey kya karu?

abeer: woh kya keh rahi thi misha {chillax} dude...

abhay calls abeer...abeer smiles vedh and goes from there

vedh: yeh nahi sudrega kabhi bi... jaha ladki dikhi nahi wahi shuru hogaya saala...

haseena welcomes piya...piya comes in with abhay...everyone smiles..abeer and vedh hugs abhay and congrats him... abhay was worried... piya goes for a change she comes in a pink and blue lehnga..

it bought by misha and her mother madhu...and matching jewellery with it... misha

comes and make piya ready is looking just like this pic...

Scene shifts:

here T gets the information that abhay and piya got court marriage.. she is so angry

that she start breaking glass and all the stuff here and there..she is so mad...

T: piya i will not leave you..you snatch my abhay..i will make your life hell...

she makes a calll to someone...

T: now please come i want your help...

she cuts the phone and smiles , wipes her tears

abhay is usually in black gucci suit...he is just waiting for piya to come down... everyone watches she was looking dam beautiful and little different..abhay smiles...

so friend here i end hope so you will like it

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

part-11

Night scene:

abeer and aarzoo was in one bed and vedh was next to piya {both have different beddings} abhay was about to sit with piya, metri comes and takes abhay with her in her bedding..piya was face was like a crying baby..abhay cant see tears in piya eyes...he was becoming frustrated...metri put her head on abhay shoulder.. piya and abhay

were looking at each other... they were sharing a eye lock... vedh sees this and understand, here comes the naughty abeer...

abeer: bhai logo mey kya bolta hu...kya hum puri raat aisi hi ek dusrey ko dekhtey rahengey...have some fun...

aarzoo: shh abeer...we are not here to play some games...

abeer sees aarzoo and becomes naughty...

abeer: acha toh kya karney aaye hai... {he trys to kiss aarzoo}

aarzoo: stop it you naught man...

abeer: no i will not..what can you do...

aarzoo: abeer da is here i dont like this...

abeer {puts hands on his head}: da ki toh khudh wattt lagi padhi hai ek thi pehaley sey ab yeh dusri...hmm kash humari kismat aisi hoti...{then he see vedh} ek humarae vedh bhai ko dekh lo jab dekho ya toh chup rehtey hai ya phir kitabo mey khoye rehtey hai...

vedh sees abeer and smiles...abeer feels strange.. piya feels awkaward and she sleeps and turns her face from abhay..abeer sees this and looks at abhay...abhay sees piya like this... aarzoo sense something about abhay da she smiles...suddenly aarzoo takes metri somewhere for work...abeer and vedh also goes with them...

abhay comes to piya..she closes her eyes... piya was sleeping...abhay comes to piya... abhay kisses on piya neck... piya tears rolls down from her eyes... abhay turns piya towards him... piya crys... she didnt look at abhay... abhay kisses on her eyes... piya turns from abhay...abhay comes up and piya is down

abhay: piyaa kya hua?

piya: abhay please you go from here, i dont want to talk with you...

abhay: piya you know the reason then why?

piya: yeah you are right isliye tum chahye kuch bi karo... i know the reason, islye she got the reason to touch you...

abhay: someone is jealous...

piya: no i am not jealous but abhay mujhe dar lag raha hai ki kahi metri tumhey mujse dur na le jaaye...

abhay: shh shh no one can take me from you piya...

piya cries...and abhay kisses piya on her lower neck..she closes her eyes... abhay kisses her forehead not caring about her anger and continues to go down and kisses her nose then lips then neck...piya lays down and abhay covers her face... piya sees abhay...

piya: abhay please leave me...

abhay: why?

piya: please...

abhay leaves piya and piya gets up and runs from there..she was crying badly... piya goes to her room and locks the door. piya sits down and crys...abhay senses piya is upset and sad because of him..abhay thinks

" mey kya karu piya, sab jantey huey bi merey hath bandey huey hai...mey tumhey is terha nahi dekh sakta lakin phir bi mujhe tumhey aisey dekhna padh raha hai... merey liye bahut mushkil ho tumhey is terha sey dekhna... lakin mey kya karu..."

In the morning:

piya gets up and her eyes were swollen and she came down..vedh, abhay sees piya...abhay trys to talk with piya but she didnt talk with abhay...piya was feeling dizzy at that moment...abbhay watches piya...he comes to piya...

abhay: piya are you okay?

piya: hmm i am fine you dont have to bother?

abhay: tumhey fever hai piya dont go college today ghar pe rest karo..

piya: mujhe koi rest nahi karna hai abhay...

abhay: piya i said go to your room, and dont argue...

piya: abhay but

abhay: piya go {he shouts}

piya sees vedh and vedh looks at abhay...piya goes to her room..piya jumps on bed and crys, abhay comes to piya...

piya: why abhay why are you doing this to me?

abhay: I love you piya dont do this to me? mujhe kuch time do? i will sort out.. something...

piya: abhay u have to tell metri and gurumaa about this bec i cant take it anymore...

abhay: yes jaan i will dont worry now stop crying...

piya hugs abhay and abhay too...abhay makes piya sleep...abhay thinks again...aarzoo and abeer is doing shopping...abeer is annoyed little bit..

abeer: yaar aarzoo pehaley hi itney kapdey hai tumarey pass and now again..

aarzoo: what do you mean?

abeer: fisul kharchi kyu yaar?

aarzoo: acha aur jab tum kartey ho tab kuch nahi...

abeer: oh madam i use money on good things not on unccessary things...

aarzoo: oh really..

abeer: yes..

aarzoo: dont talk with me nw...

abeer: really [he hugs aarzoo] do you think ki u can leave without me?

aarzoo: yes {she thinks} no...no..hmm kitny naughty hogaye ho tum sab jantey ho.. then also...

abeer and aarzoo goes for home...vedh is reading something...suddenly he feels visualization that someone is asking for help but he cant see clearly... vedh opens her eyes...gurumaa comes to vedh and sits...

vedh: gurumaa aap..

gurumaa: ha hum vedh...

vedh: kuch kaam tha...

gurumaa: nahi hum bas tumarey baarey mey soch rahey they...tumara satthi kaun hai vedh...{saathi akka girlfriend}

vedh: saathi...

gurumaa: ha saath yani girlfriend..

vedh: koi nahi gurumaa

gurumaa: hum jantey hai jo tum abhi ho bhavisya mey waisey nahi raogey..

vedh: mey samjha nahi..

guru maa: samay sab tumhey batyega...

here arnab dobiryal is in gret loss and he is thinking to get a project in any cost otherwise he will lost everything..he has to compeite with raichand company...arnab is in great tension and abhay gets a call and he simles...

so friends here i end today...

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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@imkt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Thank you friends for reading and appreciating my ff.. love you all

Part-19

piya is unconscious, she is sleeping on bed... doctor is examining her... aadil and ajay {karan wahi} is sitting with him...piya ko hosh aata hai..she opens her eyes slowly and slowly...she sees here and there

piya: yeh mey kaha hu...

ajay: woh aap...

piya sees some one and shocked to see him...ajay was about to say something when she gets and runs to him...she hugs him tightly...she starts crying... it was aadil...he was shocked and seeing ajay surprisingly...

piya: abhay tum aa gaye i know tum mujhe chodhkar nahi ja saktey...i love you so much... {tears roll down from her eyes}

aadil looks at piya and wipes her tears...

aadil: what's your name ? and who is abhay? i am aadil not abhay

piya was shocked to listen his name...piya takes a step back from aadil...aadil was just mermerized by that innocent beauty...he was just seeing from up to down {like his eyes were scanning}...ajay noticed that and was giving naughty smile...piya was crying and that was making aadil heart torn from inside...

piya: i am sorry...i thought...

aadil: hey hey...shhh dont be so panic...

piya: no i am fine mujhe ghar jaana hai...

aadil: but

piya: no i have to go home {crying again}

aadil: okay okay just dont cry, i will take you home

ajay: yes but what;s ur name? but we don;t know about you anythng

piya: my name is piya and i live in a city...

aadil: piya

piya looks at abhay...she was not looking in his eyes...aadil sees ajay who was giving naughty smile on aadil reaction...ajay went out to take out car...

******************************************

panchi. sid and misha was worried about piya. sid was making some calls and he was really in tension even panchi was making calls...misha was making prateek sleep...when a door bell rings...panchi sees at misha and then at door...she rushes at door...panchi opens door...she was shocked to see piya standing at door...and then aadil comes...panchi is again shocked😲...

piya: panchi this is aadil

panchi was just looking at aadil only.. {he was just looking like abhay}..misha comes and sees piya and then aadil...her mouth was open...seeing aadil...aadil was surprised by this strange marriage , he looks at ajay...

aadil: hi i think i should leave...mey koi bhoot nahi hu

panchi: yeah

aadil: what

panchi: no not at all please come in...

aadil: thank you...

misha was just looking at aadil...aadil sees misha and then here and there he comes to ajay and sees in his ears

aadil: dude lagta hai family ke sath kuch problem hai

ajay: yes dude you are right...so wired ?

aadil: hmmm

sid comes to aadil and sees aadil..he was shocked to see aadil

flashback: sid meets arrogant abhay and shakes hands in business deal..

sid comes back to his senses and see piya who was looking down...sid makes them sit...aadil and ajay sits...panchi and misha also...piya also sits

sid: thank you so much Mr

aadil: yeah aadil oberoi

sid: okay thanks Mr oberoi

aadil: dont be so formal call me aadil

sid: ok aadil..but where you found piya

aadil looks at piya and smiles...

aadil: actually she was unconsious at road...me and ajay was crossing road and and found piya there...

sid: thank god piya tum theek ho...

ajay: waisey piya ji ko running ka bahut shok hai

aadil hits ajay with his foot

ajay: oouch

sid: what happened?

ajay: nothing...kuch bi toh nahi {looks at aadil with angry looks}

aadil: i think we should move now...its getting late

ajay: yeah ab toh milna hoga hi

sid and panchi looks at each other...

aadil: ajay ke kehney ka matlab hai ki see you later...

sid: oh no no aadil hum toh aapko theek sey thank u bi nahi bol paaye... i guess we should have dinner together...

ajay: sur sure why not hum time pe pahunch jaayengey

aadil looks at ajay and they both go...aadil looks at piya...piya sees down aadil and ajay goes...

*****************************

ajay and aadil comes from piya house...ajay was whistling at that time and this was making aadil mad...

aadil: ek baat bata kya zaruart thi dinner pe aaney ki...dont u see woh sab humhey kaisey dekh rahey they...

ajay {smiles}: dude mey yeh bi dekh raha tha ki tu piya ko kaisey dekh raha tha...

aadil: what do you mean?

ajay: i mean that i love piya...and woh mujhe bahut pasand aayi,,,,toh mujhe laga ki baat aagey badhani chaiye

aadil: aey dont you dare to say that ok...she is mine

ajay: oeey dekhaaa dil ki baat aagayi na zubaan par...hmmm {ajay dance} ho mere yaar ki shaadi hai ho merey yaar ki shaadi hai...

aadil smiles and they both sits on the car...and both of them goes...

*************************************

piya was lying on her bed and seeing abhay pic...she was saying to herself

" ek dam tumari dikhta hai abhay woh...yeh kaisa mazak kar rahey ho tum merey sath...keh do ek baar ki tum hi aadil ho na merey abhay...jisey mey apni zindagi sey jaayada pyar karti hu..." {tears drop on abhay pic}

here aadil is driving...

aadil: apni zindagi sey bi zayada pyar karunga mey piya ko...ajay tumney uski aankhey dekhi hai...so innocent...uska chehra... kitney sawaal hai uske chehrey pe...lakin ek baat samaj nahi aayi...

ajay: kya

aadil: usney mujhe abhay kyu kaha...

ajay: hmm ho sakta hai ki shayad woh hosh mey nahi thi toh tumhey abhay samjhney lagi ho... a kind of resambles...

aadil: yeah u know i wanna meet her again...i just wanna know him yaar

ajay: kya baat hai dude...so romantic hmmm i never saw you like this...

aadil : yaad i was saying you that the day i will get that girl sabko proud hoga...ho sakta hai yeh ladkhi wahi ho jiska mujhe intezaar tha...

ajay: wait a dude but what about tanisha...

aadil: oh my god i just forget about him...what to do man

ajay: i dont know...us bala sey bhagwan hi bachaye...

aadil thinks...

***********************************

aadil car stops at signal...aarzoo and abeer cars come opposite to aadil car.. {frnds camera was focusing on aadil, then aarzoo and abeer and then aadil}...abeer was looking here and there...he saws aadil...but he cant see him clearly bec mirror was there...

abeer: kahi yeh abhay da toh nahi...no dude he cant be he is dead...but mujhe aisa laga ki mainey unhey dekha...oh common dude dont think too much...

aarzoo: abeer tum kisey baat kar rahey ho...

abeer: no one i was just thinking something...{he sees aarzoo} agar mainey aarzoo ko kuch bataya toh uska woh madness phir suru ho jaayega... i think i should tell vedh da... but let me know first...

signal goes green and cars go from there to opposite direction...

******************************

piya was standing beside window and looking at window and missing abhay here aadil is also standing in front of window...piya closes her eyes

and remember abhay and talks to herself:

piya:abhay i miss u please come soon...

aadil: I love you piya...please always be mine...

abeer: abhay da i miss u...

ajay: hmm aadil aur piya ka milan hokar hi rahega...

{abeer thinking}

{ajay aadil bst frnd}}

so frnds here i end dear...hope u will all like it...

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

thanks frnds for the comments...really love u all...

part-20

next day:

aadil was looking his wardrobe and scratching head, ajay enters and sees aadil like this...he nodes his head...

ajay: yaar tu bi na kamaal karta hai...chal classes ke liye late ho raha hai...

aadil: i knw dude but i m confused what to wear?

ajay: hmmm confused are you joking? tera wardrobe duniya ke latest brand sey bhara pada hai see what r u saying...oh god...

aadil: stop it ok dude...and help me out

ajay: dinner pe ja rahey hai na ki engagment pey...

aadil: woh bi ho jaayegi

ajay: hmm filhal chal guru..

aadil: okay okay...

piya is also getting ready for radio station..she was looking herself mirror and making her hairs..here she gots flashback...

"piya was getting ready and abhay comes from behind put his head on her shoulders"

piya: mil gaya time Mr raichand ko

abhay: yes i have always time for you

piya: no ways kal raat kaha they tum

abhay: well i was in someone beautiful arms...chodh hi nahi rahi thi...

piya {shyly}: tum na bahut naughty hogaye ho abhay

abhay: hmm {he hugs piya} i want to be {kisses her forehead}

someone : piya piya

piya comes to her senses

panchi: piya arent you getting late hmm chalo jali karo

piya: yeah i was about to go...

panchi: r u ok

piya: yes

college scene:

aadil and ajay comes to college...he stopped hi sports car... a girl in a heals and red skirt {mihika verma see on google} comes to aadil, ajay sees her...his eyes becmes curious

a girl: hey sexy looking hot...

ajay: what about me...

a girl": oh shut up

aadil: hi tanisha

tanisha: hi lets go to canteen

aadil: no i have to smewhere else

tanisha: never time for me

ajay: i have all time for u

tanisha: get lost fool

ajay: and u gobi ka phool

tanisha: what

ajay: bye...

scene shift

piya in radio station gets a call...

a man: hi piya ji meri ek problem hai aap solve kar sakti hai

piya: ji bilkul aapki problem ka solution deney toh hum baithey hai..waisey apna naam batiye

a man: ji ajnabee hi keh lijiye

piya: ok mr ajnabee baitye kya problem hai

a man: mujhe kisi sey pyar hogaya hai lakin usey keh nahi pa raha hu

piya: oh wow u r in love who is the lucky one

a man: you

piya: pardon

a man: yes you

piya looks a karan {rohit} karan signals to listens and answers...

piya: ok toh you love me but why

a man: just like that

a man cuts the call an piya is surprised...

evening scene

aadil was very excite for the dinner an ajay knows that very well...aadil and ajay reached home...aadil rushes to his room and ajay follows him..sudenly

an old woman: rukiyee

ajay stops and turns...

an old woman: kaha ja rahey hai aap

ajay: woh nani kahi bi toh nahi

an old woman: hum sab jantey hai kya chal raha hai aapke dimaag mey

ajay: kuch bi toh nahi nani

aadil comes...

aadil: hey sexy

an old woman: aadil hum aapke nani hai girlfrn nahi

aadil: dadi aap hi meri gitlfrnd hai..

ajay: chaley ab late nahi hao raha hai

an old woman: kaha ja rahey hai aap

ajay: aapkey liye bahu dekhney

an old woman: kya

ajay: sach nani...

an old woman {sushma seth} is ajay nani {ajay is aadil best frnd and his brother also surprise for my frnds}...ajay hears a car horn and aadil gets nervous...

so friends here i end hope u will enjy...sorry for short update

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Part-21

thanks friends for liking my ff and commenting...love you all

Some one calls there name, ajay and aadil gets worried he was none other than his father {ronit roy his name is rishab oberoi and aadil mum is sakshi talwar her name is megha oberoi, ajay parents were died in accident so he stays with them only}.. aadil an ajay turns...

rishab: so kaha jaaney ki tayari ho rahi hai

aadil: woh papa hum toh bas aisey hi masti karney ki soch rahey they dadi ke sath

ajay: ji badey papa actually humney socha ki nani ko tang kiya jaaye kyu nani

nana/dadi: yeh bachey na bahut shetaan hogaye hai rishab beta...

rishab: masti karna chodho aur thoda business pe dhyan dena shuru karo...bachey nahi ho tum dono...

ajay: badi maa kaha ho aap...{he thinks}

a lady in a green saree sitting in front on krishna idol and doing prayers, reciting mantras...and putting flowers on krishna idol... she stands up and comes down see aadil an ajay and gives smiles...rishab was about to say something..

megha: aap bi na bacho ke pichey hi pad jaatey hai...ab kya kiya inhoney

rishab: tumarey hi laad pyar ne dono ko bigad kar rakha hua hai..pata nahi kab zimedar banegey dono

megha: jaisey aap toh inhey pyar kartey hi nahi hai...merey laakh maana karney pe bi aapney aadil ko flying club join karney ki permission di..aur ajay ko credit cards and all.kyu boliye aur aapko ab meri galti dikh rahi hai?????????

aadil and ajay smiles 😊

rishab: abey marwa diya na mujhe apni maa ke saamney tum log kabhi nahi sudhoregey

megha: unke kaan mey , kuch mat boliye aur yaha aakar jawab dijye...

rishab: woh kya hai megha ki mey chahta hu ki bachey ab apni zimedari sambhaley, mujhe bi apni biwi ke sath time guzarney ka mauka dey {rishab about to hug megha}

megha: kya kar rahey hai, yaha sab hai aur bachey bi dekh rahey hai

rishab: in bacho ki toh mey {looks at aadil and ajay} ha toh dekh kya rahey ho jao jaha ja rahey they ab yaha khadey kyu ho...

aadil and ajay smiles and takes their grandmother with them

rishab {smiles}: ha toh bachey gaye ab woh mey kaha tha abhi

megha: aap kahi nai they chaliye jaaiye aur fresh ho jaaaiye mujhe naukro sey kuch samaan mangwanna hai...

rishab: kabhi yeh bachey toh kabhi maa aur kabhi yeh naukar...oh god...

megha smiles and goes from there...

scene shifts:

panchi and misha is preparing food meanwhile pia comes and sees them...panchi looks at pia...

panchi: hi pia how was the day

pia: good...

panchi: mumma aur papa ka call aaya tha, make them call

pia: yeah i will make call...so wats up kya banaya ja raha hai...

misha: dumbo you forget aaj humarey ghar mey guests aa rahey hai dinner mey

pia: guests??????

misha: dont say you totally forget what we are up to?

pia: sry misha i am so exahusted today...

panchi: go and have rest and please can u see prateek...

pia: yeah sure...

panchi and misha starting doing work again... after 1 min

misha: hey mey kya soch rahi thi ki agar piya ki zindagi mey kisi aur ko laaya jaaye toh ho sakta hai ki woh puri terha sey theek ho jaye...i mean see her condition is little bit improved...why cant we try?

panchi: but kya pia manegi

misha: yes you are right...woh ab tak abhay ko bhuli nahi hai...

panchi: yeah jab tak uski life mey koi aisa nahi aa jata ji usey abhay sey bi jayada pyar karey...

misha: wait a min what about aadil?

panchi: shut up misha...tum bi na...aadil no ways...he is just a guess or hum usey jantey hi kitna hai...

misha: but what a big deal?

panchi: stop it and do your work...

servant comes and tells panchi that prateek is crying...

panchi: misha please see the food and let me check prateek...i dont know yeh piya kaha chali gayi hai...

flashback:

pia: mey yaha hu...

abhay comes and hugs her from behind...

abhay: dekha dhund liya na mainey tumhey...

pia: oh hello tumney mujhe nahi dhunda mainey tumhey dhunda hai

abhay: i cant find you from my close eyes also

pia: really abhay

abhay: yes

pia: i love you abhay so much

abhay: i love you too piya

pia: acha agar mey kabhi tumhey nahi mili toh tum kya karogey...

abhay: aisa ho hi nahi sakta mey toh tumhey kaisey bi dhund sakta hu

pia: band aankho sey bi

abhay: yes aur jab bi tum apni aankhey khologi mujhe hi samney paogi...

scene shift:

abeer was roaming here and there...he is just thinking about that fragrance only...

abeer: i have to find out in any cost...

abeer closes his eyes and sees some blured pics of cars...

abeer: oh god but how i will find it. i just need a one chance...

aarzoo: kya hua abeer you are so tensed...

abeer: nothing jaan...just missing vedh da...i think we should call him here..

aarzoo: {teary eyes} pata hai abeer mey aaj abhay da ko bahut miss kar rahi hu...jab bi mey udas hoti thi he always make me laugh... and you tum toh abhay da ki shadow bankar ghumtey they...

abeer: i know khushboo...but you know life needs change and changes needs hours.. and it is totally changed...i miss abhay da a lot

aarzoo: socho jab hum abhay da ko itna miss kartey hai toh bechari piya bhabi ki kya halat hogi...

abeer: i know...lakin woh dur hai isi mey hi bhalai hai

abeer sits on the chair and looks at the newspaper and tuns the page...he was shocked too see...aarzoo sees...

abeer: aarzoo see this i cant believe...

aarzoo: kya hua abeer...

aarzoo comes to abeer and abeer shows the newspaper to aarzoo and she was also shocked to sees this...

abeer: i think now its time to call vedh da here...

aarzoo: yes you are right...

abeer makes a call and vedh picks a call... he was standing at window listens it and cut the phone...

abeer: i am coming... {he thinks}

Night Scene:

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aadil and ajay reaches sid and panchi house...panchi opens the door and welcome them...aadil eyes were looking out for piya and ajay can feel that very well... they both

come in and sit with sid... panchi joins them with misha

ajay: ahmm ahmm {clear his throat} i think someone is missing

misha: who

ajay: yeh toh aapko pata hoga

misha: o piaaa she is in her room...she doesnt like to interact

panchi: {pinches misha}: iski toh aadat hai mazak karney actually she is bit moody and reserved...

ajay: ohh

aadil: can i go and see her..

sid: yeah offcourse why not... go straight and then right...

aadil: ok thanks

ajay: i would like to meet her too

sid: yeah sure why not

aadil: you stay here...and talk with them

misha understands and smiles...

ajay: but why

misha: arey samjha karo...may be he wanna do some private talk with her

aadil: no its nt like that...

misha: really

aadil: yeah

misha: okay then take ajay with you

aadil: ok come

ajay: i was kiding go

piya opens her eyes and sees aadil is standing there...

pia: abhay tum

aadil: yeh abhay kaun hai jab bi hum miltey hai tum hamesha uska naam leti hu...let me clear you i am aadil not abhay {he smiles}

pia: oh yeah i am so sorry...

aadil: its ok

pia: thanks us din ke liye

aadil: its ok...waisey mey dosto ki thanks accept nahi karta

pia: what?

aadil forward his hand to shake with piya

aadil: friends...

pia smiles and shakes hands

pia: well nice to meet you but mey itni jaldi kisko apna dost nahi banati

aadil: not a problem but jald hi bana logi

piya looks at aadil {she remembers abhay}

aadil: well aapke yaha jab koi guest aata hai toh aadey log room mey hi beithey rehtey hai kya

pia: ji

aadil: arey your family invited me for dinner and you are surprised

piya {smiles}: no its nt like that i was about to come

aadil: thank god you smile...waisey kya mey jaan sakta hu yeh abhay kaun hai

piya: hmm abhay merey jeeney ki wajah {she whispers}

aadil: what

piya: nothing lets go...

aadil: ok

pia and aadil comes down and misha was happy to see both of them...they come and sit in opposite direction for dinner...ajay and misha was observing them...panchi serves food to them and ajay was very impressed seeing lots of dishes...

aadil: bhukadh dekh kya raha hai kha ley

ajay: what did you call me

aadil: bhukadh

ajay : what about you? susti

aadil: shut up and eat

misha: stop it guys i mean i cam bel u guys are fighting like a child

ajay: o dont wrry ji sab chalta hai

aadil: yeah aisi fightings to aam hai...

all of them start eating pia was quite so as aadil was ajay was winking at aadil {to see pia}

misha was observing that very well...

ajay: misha do you beleive in love?

misha was silent for one min

{flashback of vedh comes in her mind} pia sees this and looks at panchi...

ajay: kya hua mainey aisa kya pooch liya

aadil: abey yaar kahi inhey gussa na aa jaaye...abaey bhagney ki tayari kar le

ajay: chill yaar kuch nahi hota

pia: its not like that misha dont believe in love

ajay: okay and what about you? {aadil was controlling his smile}

pia: {looks at ajay}: well no comments on love bec it cant be expressed...woh toh bas ho jaata hai {abhaya BG music starts and aadil was just listening her }

ajay: wow nice thoughts...

aadil comes back to his senses... misha mood was off... she was thinking about vedh

here someone entery in black armani suit, having laptop bag and cellphone...wearing googs... girls were seeing him and admiring his personality...his walk describe his personlity...he was none other than vedh...comes out from auckland, nz international airport..

so friends here i end hope you will enjoy and have fun...