FF-pati ya vampire updated {the end, page-117}

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys writting one new ff for PKYEK fans.. hope you all will like it..so please friends read this and do comments...all the characters are same...little bit change in story...



abhay raichand: abhay is a son of big business tycoon chand and haseena they are vampires...nobody knows about this secret...abhay is a hot, smart and handsome guy in college. all the girls having crush on him...



piya: very sweet girl, down to earth... misha and piya are best friends...she is orphan girl..



kabir: kabir loves misha but misha is not awared about that, she always act childish and do silly mistakes...



panchi and sid are happily married couple. here sid is not a vampire, but he doesnt like abhay raichand...




jay khurana: likes T but she ignores him because she love abhay... jay is also very hot and handsome but he hates abhay because of T and yeah they both are competitors...



so my story concept is that abhay and piya get arranged marriage and i will start my story from their marriage...hope you will like it...

so shall i start my ff with your permission friends... do comments friends...





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Posted: 14 years ago
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Engagement Day


PART-1

The secne start from thw hall, where everyone is busy in hall.. kabir is giving instructions to decoraters to adjust the settings... panchi and sid is also there...sid is on phone...angad is giving list to arnab,,, abhay was selected by aranb and madhu for piya bec they consider piya as their daughter. her father and mother died in a car accident, misha and piya are best friends so they took her responsiblity...piya just saw abhay photo and piya liked him, but they never talked or called each other as abhay was in US

arnab: arey yaar jaldi karo, ladke waaley bas aatey hi hogey...
angad: uncle yeh samman jo pandit ji ney kaha tha abhi tak aaya nahi...
aranab: hey bhagawan itna time hogaya hai ab tak samaan nahi aaya...acha ek kaam karo yeh lo chaabi yaha pass mey dukaan hai jakar samaan le aao...
angad: jee uncle...

here madhu is getting ready with other girls...and ya our cute piya...misha and panchi are making her ready for engagement...piya is silent...


panchi: kya hua sweety...darr lag raha hai...
piya: ha dar toh lag raha hai mey toh aaj tak abhay sey nahi mili hu...
misha: oh god humari dulhan...apney honey waley so called husband sey dar rahi hai...Mrs raichand...
piya: oh common misha yaha mujhe dar lag raha hai aur tumhey mazak lag raha hai...aunty {madhu} dekhiye na yeh mujhe kaisey tang kar rahi hai...

madhu comes, sees misha and holds her ears...

madhu:kyu tang kar rahi ho meri pyari si pari ko...
misha: mumma agar piya pari hai toh panchi leaf aur mey kaanta,,,,,
madhu: no baby tum kaanta thodi na tum toh monster ho...

everyone laughs...here piya gets ready she was looking like a doll, piya was looking like a doll she was wearing a golden lehngaa...with half open hair...

madhu: {puts kajal back on her ear} kisi ki nazar na lagey bahut pyari lag rahi ho...
piya: thank you aunty...

she hugs piya...misha mouth was opened...
misha: i dont believe piya tum itni sunder lag rahi ho...
madhu: tabhi keh rahi hu ki kuch ladhikyo waali bi harkat kar liya karo...
misha: mom not again please stop it...

panchi comes, sees piya and she smiles...

panchi: mom abhay aur uski family waaley aa gaye hai they are calling piya

abhay was wearing black suit.. obviously he was looking hot, smart and dashing..


madhu, panchi aur misha piya ko lekar aatey hai...they come from stairs..abahy was talking to friend and he turns { BG music starts mahiya}..he sees piya...he smiles little...haseena comes to abhay an takes to hall...abhay and piya are standing in front of each other...piya is not looking at abhay she is feeling shy looking here and there...abhay is staring at piya...at the back abhay friends was laughing and same as piya also...

pandit: ab tum piya ko yeh anguthi {ring} pehanao...he sees piya then ring, he kisses on ring...{hold piya hands gently} and put ring... shower of rose petals are there on abhay...

now piya turns...she sees to abhay takes ring and put ring to abhay and smiles... again the showers of rose petals are there on both of them...

misha: hey congrts jeezs and piya...yaar ab toh you can hold each other...ab toh u people are engages...abhay smiles, he gently puts her arm on piya...piya feels shy and looks at abhay,,,and misha takes a pic...

all the couple are dancing...piya and abhay...kabir and misha...panchi and sid... anagad and ruhi...all others guests were enjoying the party and some are eating drinking...music is going on...

abhay { looking at piya eyes}: tum bahut sunder ho piya, i am lucky that i am getting the most beautiful wife soon...
piya: {she is lost in abhay}: abhay tum jantey ho mainey is shaadi ke liye ha kyu kaha...
abhay {pulls piya closer, slowly in her ears}: kyuuu...
piya { in his ears}: because tumari photo dekhtey hi mujhe tumsey pyar ho gaya tha...

abhay loos at piya...piya looks at abhay {BG Music mahiya is going on}

abhay: really...
piya: yes abhay..
abhay: acha tell me how much you love me?
piya {shy}: tell me what i can do for you? i will make it up to you?
abhay: {naughty}: i will tell you not now...
piya: okay...

abhay hugs piya tightly...misha looks at piya and abhay...
misha: look it them dude...love birds...they never talked to each other but today they are so lost in each other...
kabir: kaash humhey bi koi aisa pyar karney waala mil jaaye
misha: yaar kabir tum bi looser ho yeh pyar vyar kuch nahi hota...just time waste...
kanir: jab tumhey hoga tab pata chalega
misha: no dude misha ko kabhi pyar nahi ho sakta...
kabir: oh reaaly i challenege u will get fall in love within one week...
misha: misha ke sath panga lena bahut mehnaga padega boss...lets see
kabir: ok lets see...

haseena, chand and madhu, arnab are talking...they were discussing about abhay and piya marriage..abahy sees that elders are busy in talking he took piya outside...

piya: abhay yeh tum mujhe kaha lekar ja rahey ho..
abhay: mainey kaha tha na ki mujhe jo chahiye hoga mey tumsey maang lunga...
piya: yaha is time acha tell me what you want?
abhay: i want you to kiss me...
piya: what abhay lakin yaha...
abhay: you only said ki tum merey liye kuch bi kar sakti ho..its just simple...
piya: but abhay...
abhay { puts finger on her lips} shh apni aankhey band karo piya...

piya closes her eyes...abhay pull piya closer gently...

abhay: apni aankhey kholo piya...
piya {opens her eyes}: abhay...
abhay: now do you feel scare of anything...
piya: no abhay..i dont feel scare...but mujhe sharam aati hai...so you close your eyes...

abhay smiles like a naughty kid...piya sees abhay...she goes one back and runs..

piya: if you have guts then do catch me...
abhay: piya...i will catch you...

they both run...piya runs and reaches hall...abhay is also running...abhay runs fast and grab piya arm...

abhay: now tell me piya...i catch you..now where you will go?
piya: stop it abhay...
abhay: no
piya: please
abhay: no
piya: ok wait...

she comes close to abhay and kisses on his lips for a second then she runs and misha mouth was open...

hope you like it,,,first attempt so please ignore mistakes friends...









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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
last part:


a scene starts from hall is decorated by white and red flowers... vedh and abeer ordering workers to decorate house fully... piya is normal and getting ready for the marriage with panchi and misha... misha is happy...misha puts hand on piya shoulder...

misha: piya are you okay...
piya: yes misha... are you happy...

misha smiles

flashback...

ajay brings misha and vedh was standing there... misha is shocked to see vedh with abeer...

misha: ajay yeh tumara surprise tha
ajay: misha just chill... i knw tum aur vedh ek dusre ko pyar kartey ho aur yeh sab possibel hua hai abeer ki wajah sey...
abeer smiles...
misha: what
ajay: yes misha... us din shaadi ka card lekar dad ney mujhe vedh ke ghar bheja tha... jaha vedh aur abeer ki baatein mainey sun li thi...vedh keh raha tha mey misha sey bahut pyar karta hu lakin mey usey woh dukh nahi dena chahta jis dard sey piya aur abhay gujrey hai...
ajay: bas wahi mujhe pata chala ki ki vedh tumsey bahut pyar karta hai...

misha comes to her sensed back...

misha: {sees up} thanks abhay jijz i know yeh sab tumari wajah sey hua hai... i know yeh saari khusiyo ki wajah seirf tum ho { tear drops } ... yo man i miss u...

piya was in tears...

scene shifts:

aadil was getting ready and aarzoo comes and sees aadil...aadil turns...

aadil: hey sis come in... aisey kya dekh rahi ho...tell me kaisa lag raha hu mey...
aarzoo were having tears in her eyes...

flashback:
abhay use to ask her like this...

aadil comes and hugs aarzoo...abhay ko yaad kar rahi hu...

aarzoo: no bro god ney mujhe abhay da bi diye aur aadil da bi...
aadil: that's like my sister... mey bi bhagwan sey hamesha choti behan maangta tha god ne bhai {ajay} ki kami toh puri kar di...aur behan ki bi...
aaroo hugs aadil tightly...she crys...
aadil: hey hey... common sis mood kharab mat karo... love u so much...i cant see tears in ur eyes... hmm

flashback

{aaroo was sad on her birthday and she was seeing abhay pic, she was crying... here vedh and abeer comes and sees aarzoo} abeer comes and hugs aarzoo and vedh also...}

abeer: jaan abhay da ki miss kar rahi ho...
vedh: aarzoo aaj ke din koi rota hai kya...
aazroo: mujhe abhay da ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai...
abeer: acha agar abhay da tumare samney aa jaaye toh kya hoga...
aarzoo: toh i will hug him and never let him grow...
vedh: hmm toh aankhey band karo...

abeer and vedh takes aarzoo to hall...

vedh: aur apni aankhey kholo...

aarzoo opens and he sees aadil ... but thinks she is abhay ... she sees and run to him and hugs her tightly... and crys a lot... aadil console aarzoo...

aadil makes aarzoo sit and hugs her like ahhay use to hug aarzoo...
aadil: mey abhay nahi aadil hu lakin tumara bhai hi hu...
aarzoo sees aadil
aadil: toh ab sey mey {aadil wipes her tears} apni behan ke aankho mey aansu nahi dekhna chahta...samjhi
aarzoo: kya mey aapko da bula sakti hu
aadil smiles and hugs aarzoo...


scene shits:

misha was in green saree with long hairs and she was instructing workers to do it fast... vedh comes from behind and hugs her...

misha: kya kar rahey ho vedh... chodho mujhe... yeh romance ka tyme nahi hai...
vedh: hmm romance ka nahi toh kiss karney ka time hai {he turns misha}
misha: chodho mujhe stop it vedh... sab dekh rahey hai dude
vedh: dekhney do...
misha: koi aa jaayega
vedh: aaney do...

someone in between ahemm ahemmm... they look at that side it was abeer and aarzoo...

abeer: aa jaayega nahi aaney do... waisey { he and aarzoo walks to them} kisi ne socha nahi tha ki humare akadu vedh da itney romantic bi ho saktey hai...
aarzoo: hmm woh toh hai ...lakin misha i mean misha bhabi... tum handle kaisey karogi mere akadu bhai ko...
vedh: aey abeer aur aarzoo mey akadu nahi hu aur tum dono kawab mey haddi jab dekho chaley aatey ho...
aarzoo { makes faces}: mey kawab mey haddi...

here comes the aadil: kisney meri behan ko kawab mey haddi kaha...
aarzoo winks and misha laughs... ajay comes in between
ajay: ha bhai logo kisney kaha ...
aarzoo: ab bolo hogayi na bolti band...

abeer and vedh smiles...
abeer: tum toh pehaley sey hi abhay da ki chamchi thi aur ab aadil da ki bi...
aarzoo: any doubts i love him so much...
aadil hugs aarzoo and smiles...
all of them smiles...

scene shifts:

piya was in bridal dress

piya was in deep maroon lehngaa with jewelleries on her... she looks at abhay pics and talk to herself...

" lo abhay aaj tumari piya saz gayi kisi aur ke liye... yeh haatho ki mehandi... yeh laal joda sab uske liye... aur tumare liye abhay piya ki aatma jo sirf tumari hai... is janam mey toh hum mil nhi sakey lakin agley janam mey sirf tumari hungi abhay sirf tumari.. bas ek baar sirf ek baar aakhri baar mey tumhey dekhna chahti hu abhay..."

piya closes her eyes and here the light flows in front of piya... she opens her eyes...
some sparkles were running down and abhay in white clothes comes... he was shining and smiles...piya looks at abhay... abhay comes to her


{ background music mahiyaa starts}





abhay looks at piya and piya also... tears were rolling down from piya eyes... abhay was smiling...



abhay puts both of his hands on bride piya and piya smiles little...piya was about to say something...



abhay puts finger on piya lips

abhay: shhh piya...abhay sirf piya ka hai ... is janam mey aadil hi abhay bankar tumarey sath har kadam par sath rahega... tumhey kabhi chodhkar nahi jayega...

piya: abhay ek aakhri baar mujhe achey sey hug kar lo...

abhay smiles and brings piya close to him...



piya holds her abhay tightly... she was feeling his touch so as abhay also...



abhay kisses on piya eyes and piya eyes were closed...piya knows that she needs abhay badly...but she cant becuase its not in her hands now... only god can make this possible...



abhay sees piya closed eyes...
someone calls piya and abhay was about to leave... but piya hugs abhay tightly...



abhay hugs piya tightly ... someone knocks at the door... abhay was disappear... piya looks her and there...

piya: i love you abhay...

here piya opens the door and panchi , misha comes to her and take her down to mandap...haseena and chand was also there with madhu and arnav... megha , rishab and rohit khurana was also there including nani and ajay...vedh and abeer was happy to see piya and aarzoo was standing with aadil...

piya looks at aadil... at last three steps ... aadil comes and makes his hand to piya to hold her hand... piya gives her hand and aadil takes her to mandap...

pandit start his mantras and all... piya smiles... so as aadil... pandit ask aadil to put sindoor and mangalsutra and here the abhay spirit comes and waves her hand... piya looks at abhay with teary eyes... piya and aadil takes all elders blessings...


scene sifts:

aadil was standing in front of window and he was looking at stars when piya comes with a glass of milk... aadil turns and smiles... piya puts glass a of milk on table and looks at aadil...

piya: aadil mey woh
aadil: mey janta hu tum kya kehna chahti ho...
piya looks at aadil...
aadil: mey janta hu ki tum abhay sey pyar karti ho aur mey yeh bi janta hu ki abhay kaun hai...
piya is shocked...
aadil: mey janta hu abhay ek vampire tha ,,,,,yeh vedh, abeer aur aarzoo chand uncle and haseena aunty sab vampire hai...
piya is shocked to listen this
piya: but how do u know that...
aadil: tumari diary padhi hai mainey...

flashback

" piya was unconscious and aadil makes her lay down on bed when diary fall on floor aadil looks at dairy and opens it... the first thing was abhay pic... in diary"

piya: toh tum sab jantey ho
aadil: ha piya... mey sab janta hu ...aur mujhe koi farak nahi padta bec mey tumsey pyar karta hu sirf tumse...
piya was in tears and looks at aadil...
aadil: dont cry piya... pyar sey na sahi lakin dosti sey toh is rishtey ki shuruwat ki ja sakti hai...
piya smiles and nodes her head and hugs aadil..."

uske baad piya aur aadil ki dosti sey hua yeh rishta pyar mey badal gaya... vedh aur misha phir ek hogaye ... misha ne decide ki woh kabhi shaadi nahi karegi hamesha vedh ke sath hi rahegi ... so as vedh... abeer aur aarzoo ki bi shaadi ho gayi... aur bechara ajay aaj kal nani uske liye ladkhi talash rahi hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aur mey abhay

" mujhe bhagwan ney mukti de di... ek naye janam mey jaha mey sirf insaan tha aur us sabhi ehsaas ko mehsoos kar sakta tha jo abhay bankar mey mainey puri terha sey nahi kiya... is waadey ke sath ki piya aur mey ek din zarur milengey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


here i end this part...i hope u all enjyed my ff- pati ya vampire... thank you very much frnds for your love and support... love u all...





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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART-2


aranb raise a toast of champign...

"hey friends want to say something"

everyone looks at arnab...

"aaj mey bahut khush aur aap log bi bahut khush hogey...because aaj meri beti piya ki sagaayi hui hai...mainey kabhi bi misha aur piya mey koi farak nahi samjha...bhaley hi piya ka janam is ghar mey nahi hua lakin mey isey apni beti ki terha pyar karta hu...yeh ek aisa ehsaas hai jo shabdo mey bi explain nhi kiya ja sakta,,,,{😭😭😭} i think thoda emotional ho raha hai hu

misha: common papa...

aranab: yeah yeah i should not be toh abhay {a looks a arnab} mey janta hu ki tum piya ko bahut khush rakhogey..forever isliye pandit ji ney shaadi ki taarikh ek week decide ki

everyone claps...👏.. abhay and piya smiles..abhay takes piya in the corner of window...

piya: so abhay raichand you are mine and only mine...
abhay: really...aur agar koi aur mujhe tumsey chura kar le gaya toh?

piya with teary eyed turn her face...abhay gets worried...abhay piya ke pichey sey aakar usey apni baaho mey bhar leta hai...

abhay:hey hey piya mey toh bas...
piya: no abhay
abhay: so possisve about me...hmm abhi toh bas engagement hui hai...
piya: abhay mey bahut choti thi jab papa aur mummy mujhe akela chodh kar chale gaye...kuch dhundali is yaadein hai unki merey maan mey... i never get anyone love...phir misha aayi uski mummy papa ney woh kami bi puri kar di...lakin aisa lagta tha ki mey hamesha apney aap sey sawaal puchti hu ki piya aakhir tumari life ka motive kya hai...but i never got ans abhay...

abhay makes turn piya towards him..he hugs him tightly piya also hugs him...

abhay: mey aa gaya hu na tum akeli kaha ho...
piya: i know abhay...

haseena calls abhay...

abhay: mom bula rahi hai lagta hai we have to leave now but i will call you back ok sweetheart...common lets go {he kisses on piya lips gently, piya closes her eyes}

abhay holds piya hands goes from there...

Party ends arnab family see off raichand's family...they go and dobriyal family was happy eveb panchi also leave with sid...

panchi: papa hum ja rahey hai... actually sid ko kal kahi jaana hai..toh shaam mey i will come with my luggage...
arnab: yahi ruk jao sid yahi sey chala jaayega...
panchi: he had to take something from home...toh kal toh mey aa rahi hu...
aranab: okay beta aisa you wish...but kal pakka...
panchi: ya sure mom kaha hai...
aranab: yahi hogi i will see...
panchi: no papa its too late...
aranab: but...hmm meri panchi samjhadar toh thi but ab bahut badi hogayi hai...

panchi hugs aranab tightly...arnab kisses on her forehead...


Scene shifts... {raichand house}

haseena: abhay tum khush ho na mom...
abhay: mom aap janti hai ki mey piya sey kyu shaadi kar raha hu...
haseena: i know abhay lakin ek na ek din toh usey sachai pata chalegi na
abhay: mom jab tak pata chalegi tak tak piya puri terha sey meri ho chuki hogi..
haseena: dont say ki tum piya sey pyar karney lagey...
abhay: abhay raichand kisi sey pyar nahi karta...
chand: abhay jo bi kadam uthana soch samaj kar uthana..kisi ko bi khabar nahi honi chahiye...
abhay: dont worry dad i will handle it...

tabhi abhay ke phone ki sms tone sunai deti hai {beep beep}.. abhay checks it and smiles...abhay goes.. haseena and chand looks at abhay...

sms from piya: hey abhay wats up?
sms from abhay: nothing just taking shower...
sms from piya: shower itni raat ko...
sms from abhay: yeah mujhe garmi lag rahi hai...leave that tum kya kar rahi thi
piya smiles sms: thinking about you?
sms from abhay: hmm sounds interesting...kya soch rahi thi?
sms from piya: oh tum sawaal bahut puchtey ho
sms from abhay: tum jawab bahut kam deti ho...
sms from piya: ok gn love you
sms from abhay: okay gn...

piya goes to sleep..abhay sits on bed and thinks...

Next morning:

piya wakes up late...she takes shower and get ready...she comes down for breakfast...every one is sitiing there...abhay is also there...piya gets surprise..
she feels shy...piya comes and sits opposite to abhay...they see each other..misha looks at them...

misha: abhay tum yaha kaisey
abhay: misha bataya toh tha abhi kyu aaya hu...she has to go with mom...
madhu: lakin mujhe kaha janna hai misha
misha: oh mom common aap bulakad ho gaye ho..you have to select bridal dress for piya...
madhu: really mainey aisa kaha tha...😕

arnab smiles and misha also...everyone laughs...

madhu: misha tum kab sudhrogi...jhooth bolney ki aadat kab jaayegi tumari...piya kahi nahi jaana hai humhey tum abhay ke sath shopping pe ja sakti ho...
misha: so mrs raichand aaj toh jeejz ki pocket fully khalli karney waali ho...
piya: shhh u just stop it ok...
misha: ha ha ab toh bolo gi...kuch kuch hota hai misha tum nahi samjhogi...
piya: do your breakfast now...

abhay takes leaves with piya...misha arnab and madhu smiles...piya and abhay sits in a car...abhay was usually in white shirt, grey jacket and black jaeans.. piya in white sleves less top, with dark green skirt with light scarf on her with starighten hair...having one hand bag...abhay starts car...piya looks at abhay..

piya: abhay
abhay: hmmm
piya: you are so silent today...kya hua? mood theek nahi hai...
abhay: no aisi baat nahi hai..i was just thinking...
piya: what? batao na abhay...
abhay: nothing piya just like that...
piya: abhay you have to tell me... {abhay stops car}
abhay 😡: {shouts} stop it piya ek baar kaha na kuch baat nahi hai...why are you irritating me?
piya: am i irritating you abhay {she start crying 😭}

abhay starts car again he is driving and piya is weeping she wipes her tears..abahy sees it form front mirror...abhay puts his hands on piya hands... {BG music starts mahiyaa}

abhay: i am sorry piya mujhe tum par chilana nahi chahiye tha...
piya: no abhay i am sorry mujhe itna over react nahi karna chahiye tha...
abhay: its okay piya some time it happens now dont cry...

piya puts his head on abhay shoulder while abhay is driving>

piya: i am sorry abhay...
abhay: its ok...
piya: i love you so much...
abhay: (slowly. looks at piya): I love you too...

abhay and piya reaches at shopping mall...abhay saw T there and he stares at her...

so firends here i stop ...hope you will like it...







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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
thanks for your support friends here i come with the next part. hope you all our enjoying..

Part-3

abhay stares at T. T also sees abhay.she comes to abhay to greet him. piya sees abhay.

T: hey abhay? {she hugs abhay and kisses him on his cheeks}
Abhay: hey T what's up? you are looking stunning, so howz life?
T: thanks by the way tumhey toh mey hamesha stunning hi lagti hu. {she looks at piya}
abhay: she is piya my feyonce
T: what!!!!! you got engaged and you didnt told me..
abhay: all of sudden, didnt get a chance to tell.

T noded her head.T sees abhay and piya also sees T. piya gets annoyed...

abhay: lets go piya we are getting late {abhay holds piya hand}

Abhay goes from there. T looks at abhay.T stops abhay..abhay turns and see. here T comes to abhay. she again kiss to abhay. piya is shocked to see this.

T: Goodbye abhay and you also {T stares piya}

abhay and piya goes. abhay and piya goes. they went to shop. a person shoes them a bridal lehnga.piya looks on various colours and designs. abhay is busy on phone. piya feels sad..

after few minutes

abhay comes to piya. piya was sitting on chair and abhay was standing and he bends down. she kisses on piya neck.
piya closes her eyes.

abhay: kuch pasand aaya tumhey.
piya: no abhay mey bahut confuse who ki what should i wear?
abhay: jo tumhey acha lagey.

piya and abhay goes to park and sits there. Some childrens were playing there. piya smiles at them. abhay puts his arms around her piya looks at abhay. they are lost in each other.

piya: abhay mainey kabhi bi kisi sey itna pyar nahi kiya. i love u so much..
abhay: i know piya, lakin agar mainey tumhey kabhi chodh kar chala gaya.
piya: toh mey apni jaan de dungi...
abhay: {puts finger on her lips} tumari jaan ab merey pass hai...

abhay sees piya and comes close to piya.. piya also comes near to abhay, abhay puts his hands on piya cheeks... piya also looks at abhay with love filled in her eyes... abhay hugs piya tightly. Suddenly rain starts piya and abhay runs and came under the shed of tree. abhay pulls piya towards him and her lips brushed against his chest. he bought her face closer and whispered "you are mine piya and i will never let u go"

Suddenly, Abhay released her and moved back in an instant. "Oh! I'm sorry, I got out of control. I'm extremely sorry", he said gasping for breath. piya feel strange but she didnt say anything


In the night:

piya didnt buy anything, they decide to go home as piya was tired. they sit in a car.. abhay sits in a car. he puts seat belt, piya put his head on abhay shoulder.she thinks something

abhay: piya kya soch rahi ho..
piya: nothing abhay yeh sab kitna sapney ki terha lag raha hai...
abhay: kya?
piya: yeh shaadi, mey tum..but
abhay: but kya?
piya: abhay
abhay: hmmm
piya: should i ask you something?
abhay: you dont need to take permission? pucho
piya: woh T i mean is she feels something for you?

abhay looks at piya he stops the car in between of jungle, he comes out of car and take piya out..

abhay: tum kehna kya chahti ho?
piya: abhay mey toh bas apney doubts clear kar rahi thi.
abhay: what doubts? you think mey tumsey kuch chupaunga.
piya: no abhay i was just.
abhay: tum girls ki yahi problem hoti hai, pass raho toh problem, na raho toh problem.
piya: but i was just..
abhay {angry}: just shut up and stop your nonsense.

piya gets scared and she is quite now. abhay turns his face. piya comes to abhay puts her hands on his shoulder. she holds her ears with teary eyes,

piya: i am sorry abhay, my intentions were not to hurt you..
abhay: no piya i really didnt like this and now till marriage we will not meet and i will not talk with you.
piya : but i said na sorry abhay.
abhay: no piya...

abhay sits in the car and they go, piya was crying but abhay ignored her tears. abhay reaches home he comes out from the car and he opens piya side door to let her come...piya sees abhay...

piya: abhay...please
abhay : enough piya go home {his eyes become red, he shouts} i said go...

piya cried and she runs from there...

raichand house:

abhay reaches home he is very angry. haseena looks at abhay she stops...

haseena: abhay kya hua? tum bahut gussa lag rahey ho sab theek ho?
abhay: please mom leave me alone

Abhay goes from there, haseena trys to stop but chand makes haseena to stop her.

Dobriyal house:

piya reaches home as she was crying, in middle of door she wipes her tears. So that nobody know that abhay and piya had fight..panchi sees piya madhu, misha and aranb was selecting jewellery for piya ...

panchi: here comes Mrs raichand...
misha: woh toh sab theek hai lakin piya why ypur hands are empty...shopping bags kaha hai...ooo abhay jeeju lekar aa rahey hai kya? gud yaar nice job

madhu brings a glass of water and make piya sit...

madhu: arey piya beta tum toh shopping karney gayi tha..toh tumney bridal dress select pasand nahi ki...
piya: woh actually mujhe kuch samaj hi nahi aaya. i wish aap merey sath hoti toh shayad mey kuch different select kar leti, but bad luck...
madhu: its ok piya beta dont worry mainey kuch design selects kar liye i know ki humari piya ka taste zara hatke hai toh shaadi mey uski dress zara hatke hono chahiye na kyu panchi?
panchi: yes mom you are right? arey meri shaadi mey jo mera dress select kiya..all of them were praising...mom always select best..
piya: yes panchi you are right..
misha: oh behan logo itna bol kar mom logo ko seer pe mat chadao zara humarey papa ke efforts ko bi appreciate kar lo aakhir paisey toh wahi detey hai...kyu papa?
madhu: misha ki bachi jab teri shaadi hogi na tab i will ask you samjhi?
misha: common mom aapki beti ke liye koi nahi hai ...

piya was lost in her thoughts misha sees this...
misha: abhay jeeju...aap yaha

piya sees back no one is there...

misha: good joke ha ha ha ha ha
piya: mey soney ja rahi hu..i am so tired..excuse me please...
madhu: misha tu bi na...kyu tang kart rehti hai..
panchi: no mom waisey bi piya ab kuch dino key liye hai is ghar mey toh i think piya ko bura nahi lagega...


Piya opens the door locks the door, she goes to take shower she comes and wear light pink night suit..her hairs are straight and opens...she fells into bed and start crying...crying and crying.abhay got to know that piya is crying...he get horrific...first abhay decided not go but piya is crying so much that he cant see now he gets worried.. he sees on phone and do sms...

sms from abhay: stop it piya dont cry

Beep beep {sms tone} piya sees her phone...she wipes her tears and sees

sms from piya: how do you know that i am crying...
sms from abhay: i know everything...you know that i dont like tears in your eyes...
sms from piya: i am not crying...but
sms from abhay: no but go to sleep now...
sms from piya: mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai...
sms from abhay: ok i am coming... just close your eyes...

piya thinks abhay is joking...she closes her eyes...she heard her name "piya", piya" . she opens her eyes and she is shocked to see abhay 😲...

piya: abhay tum i mean how you can come so fast?
abhay: do you want me to go?
piya: no abhay no...

piya makes abhay sit on bed, abhay is wearing white shirt and black jeans {hotty hotty} piya comes to abhay and lay her head on his shoulder just like as shown in this pic which is i am showing:



piya: abhay abhi mujse naraz ho..
abhay: nahi piya mey tumsey kabhi naraaz nahi ho sakta, tum meri zindagi ho...
piya: promise me ki tum kabhi bi mujhe chodh kar nahi jaaogey..i love you so much
abhay: I love you...chalo so jao ab
piya: but mujhe neend nahi aa rahi..
abhay {playing with her hairs}: try karo i am here na..common sleep

piya sees up to abhay. abhay looks down...now abhay and piya are like this {see pic and imagine}





Raichand house:

haseena feels something and she stands up.

haseena: chand abhay jo kuch bi kar raha hai...galat kar raha hai..
chand: tum janti ho na abhay aisa kyu kar..
haseena: ha ha mey janti hu ki. kis terha us raat ney merey betey ki saari khushiya chin li
chand: haseena control...apney zasbaato pe kaabu rakho haseena
haseena: nahi chand abhay is ladki ki taraf khicha chala ja raha ji na hi abhay ke liye acha hai na piya ke liye..
chand: hum jo kuch bi kar rahey hai soch samjkar rahey hai abhay bi yeh baat achey sey jaanta hai...

haseena looks worried...

here i end this part friend...

kya hua tha us raat for that you have to wait for the next part...
hope you liked it...










Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Part-4

piya sleeps well, abhay sees piya sleeping he puts her arms gently down... abhay goes back to his house. abhay goes to his room and sits on a chair...haseena comes to abhay...she puts hands on her shoulder. he
opens eyes...he looks at her...

haseena: abhay mujhe kuch baat karni hai.
abhay: yes mom...boliye
haseena: tum sab bhul kyu nahi jaatey...ismey piya ki kya galti hai...
abhay: kaisey bhul jao mom..
haseena: merey liye bi aasan nahi hai lakin piya...
abhay: mom aapko piya ka khayal aur pihu uska kya? uski bi koi galti nahi thi...
haseena: abhay samjhney ki koshish karo, us baat ko beetey huey itney saal ho chuke hai...
abhay: no mom aap bhul sakti hai apni beti ko lakin mey apni behan ko nahi bhul sakta...aur jab uska hatayara meri aankho ke saamney ho...

haseena with teary eyes...looks at abhay...

Flash back:

{pihu abhay lovable sis}

pihu {ashnoor kaur, human nt vampire } was a orphan, chand brought
pihu at home because haseena always want one daughter..pihu makes their family complete. she was very close and lovable to abhay...one night raichand family was coming from the party and abhay,chand, haseena and pihu were sitting in car and abhay was driving, suddenly a truck hit a car and abhay loose his control from the car they fall from car...abhay, haseena and chand was saved as they fell down in a forest but pihu falls from car as she was small.. she fell on the middle of the road...a car hit pihu and she was dead...

abhay {shouts}: pihu... haseena and chand reached there... haseena
fells down seeing pihu like this and abhay was shocked...

abhay sees the car he runs behind that car {super power run} he reached that house. a man was none other than arnab dobriyal.. he was shivering and sweating abhay was looking at him...he sees visual that how arnab car hit pihu.. after that abhay went to US

according to plan he decided to marry piya...


abhay: " no mom aap bhul sakti hai lakin mey nahi bhul sakta..."

jab tak mey dobriyal sey badla nahi le leta tab tak mujhe shanti nahi milegi...aur isey acha aur kya ho sakta hai mom uski pyari beti piya se
mey shaadi kar raha hu...jab woh apney kisi ko takleef mey dekhega tan samaj mey aayega ki dard kya hota hai...
haseena wipes her tears and she goes from there...

abhay thinks " mom lakin pata nahi piya ko dektey hi mujhe kya ho jaata hai mey sab kuch bhul jaata hu...mey uski aankho mey
aansu nahi dekh sakta...

abhay sees at moon...piya is sleeping..

hope friends i have cleared everyone doubts here..sorry thoda short hai...











Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Part-5

abhay is seeing pihu pic...abhay apna hath uski pic par pherta hai and he is in tears...


In the morning:

piya opens her eyes and smiles, she looks here and there.abhay was not there..she removes her blanket and goes to take shower...she comes out after taking shower..she was wearing a pinkish purple knee length dress , some of her hair were tied at the top with a clip whereas her curls were left open... she was wering purple heels ... her makeup was light and clean... she came down and sits with madhu..

madhu: yeh dekhp piya betey kuch design aa gaye hai tumhe jo select karna kar lo
piya: ok sure aunty but i love to wear of your choice,
madhu: ok baccha then look this how about this maroon lenga with golden embroidery on it..you will look like a doll...
piya: yeah its nice...but i want something in red
madhu: ok lets see this yeah
piya: this is so beautiful aunty, i wil wear this only...

piya calls abhay..abhay was sitting on bed with his lappy... abhay pics up the phone..

piya: hey sweetheart howz u
abhay: good
piya: what's up?
abhay: nothing mom and dad are busy in shopping and all.. wedding arrangments...
piya: are you missing me abhay...
abhay: hmm not really ...
piya: why ?
abhay: my wish
piya: how mean abhay?
abhay: leave that..lets go for dinner today..what about waterfront resturant
piya: sounds to be nice...okay
abhay: i will pick you at 7:30 am
piya: bye love you
abhay: bye

romantic date:



piya was wearing this dress { above dress} with long straight hair with white pencil heels and she was havinf white purse wth that, she was wearing diamonds earings
she was looking so gorgeous.. and abhay in black suit...

abhay picked piya right on schedule...abay was mermerized by piya beauty as she was looking perfect as abhay likes her.. pia got surprised when abhay told her that he already spoken to arnab..piya was getting more attracted to abhay..


they both get into a car...Silently abhay drive over the bridge down to the waterfront resturant.

it was not croweded so much when they both reached there... but few people was enjoying themselves.. piya was nervously happy and abhay knew that piya is getting nervous...

piya: this is wonderful abhay..thank you for asking me to come...
abhay: My pleasure {abhay said sincerely}

piya looked out the window and stared at a boat that was passing by the resturant, its lights blazing, for a moment piya was lost in wonder...

piya: It's so beautiful here..
abhay: So are you...

piya blushed: you don' mean that
abhay: yes, I do

abhay and piya held hands while they waited for dinner... piya talked about their future plans.. abhay was looking worried because when piya will come to know that he is vampire, i dont know how she will react? after that they had their dinner...meal was so good...


abhay: piya lets dance.. {abhay takes piya to floor}

he puts his hand to piya waist and make her come close to him, piya holds abhay and they start dancing on music "khuch khas hai kuch pass" a song from fashion movie..

music starts abhay holds piya and start dance by waving..they were lost in their eyes...



(Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai
Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaa

{piya sees abhay and abhay sees piya dance with him}

Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad)


{abhay turns piya and kisses on piya neck}
{abhay sings this stanzaa}


Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye
Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye
{abhay take piya in his arms}


Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..
Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
{abhay and piya lost in each other,}
kuch khass hai kuch pass hai kuch ajnabi ehsaas haishayad yeh pyar hai, pyar hai shayad...
{here songs end}


all people claps..abhay and piya come to their senses...abhay smiles, piya looks here and there..abhay holds piya hands and they move to car but piya stops them..

abhay: piya kya hua...
piya: lets walk na abhay..i want to spend more time with you...
abhay: okay lets walk..

abhay takes piya in his arms...

abhay: are you happy
piya: offcourse i am happy bec you are there with me...
abhay {thinks}: i know...

abhay and piya reaches home...piya was about to go , abhay stops piya, piya doesnt turn to him. abhay pulls her arms and make her come close to him slowly and slowly and piya closes her eyes...abhay kisses on her neck... .she becomes restless..





piya {slowly whispered in above pic position}: abhay...let me go...

abhay slowly remove her grip. piya turns to abhay...

piya: I love you
abhay: i love you too...


after spending 3 days went like this piya and abhay was full in love and piya was flying like a bird in a sky..during thess days piya did her wedding shopping.

Wedding day...

its a wedding time piya is getting ready for sangeet and mehandi...she is very happy that piya is finally going to be with abhay forever...

Girls applying mehandi on piya hands and the design

{piya mehandi for abhay}

abhay comes with his family and see piya she is smiling at abhay and shows her mehandi too abhay...abhay also smiles...

But suddenly T comes there and shouts...

T: rok do yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti...

piya stands up in shocking 😲😲 stage... she looks at abhay..abahy is also confused..chand and haseena looks at abhay...abhay comes to T

abhay: kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum...
T: mey sach bol rahi hu abhay...I just wanna say that i am pregnant...

everyone is shocked especially abhay...haseena and chands is also shocked... piya comes to piya and slaps her tightly...

piya: what the hell are you saying?
T {having hand on her cheeck}: Piya mey jo bi keh rahi hu sach keh rahi hu...
piya: no this cannot be happen? abhay tum kuch kehtey kyu nahi...
abhay: believe me piya yeh sab jhooth hai...

T shows some pics to piya and she is shocked to see that pics...she looks at piya and she start crying...aranb and madhu couldnt understand anything...panchi and misha console piya... T also crying...kabir and sid are also shocked...








so friends here i end hope you will like it...dont forget to comments dear its a request ...






Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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friend i am in a great shock trying to get recover from it...

hope you all will forgive me for the delay...


PART-24


aadil is thinking about piya in his thoughts... ajay comes and sees aadil thinking about piya...

ajay: aadil what happened are you okay?

aadil: nothing ajay just thinking that piya...{a pause} bhagawan hamesha achey logo ke sath hi bura kyu kartey hai..

ajay: aadil badi maa kehti hai na bhagwan hamesha achey logo ki pariksha leta hai... aur unke dukh dur karney ke liye koi angel bhejta hai... bas tum wahi angel ho jo piya ki udaasi ko hamesha ke liye dur kar degi... usey itna pyar dena ki woh apney sarey gam bhul jaaye.

aadil smiles and hugs ajay...

scene shift:

piya getting ready and sees abhay pic...

abhay shodow comes... piya turns

piya: abhay

abhay: maan bahut udaas hai tumara

piya: tum wapas kyu nahi aa jaatey

abhay: piya mey wapas nahi aa sakta

piya: mey tumarey bina nahi jee sakti abhay

abhay: islye aadil tumari zindagi bankar aaya hai.. mey jaha hu waha sey wapas nahi aa sakta piya... mey tumhey khush dekhna chahta hu.. tabhi eri aatma ko shanti milegi piya...mey tumari yaado mey hamesha rahuga piya... lakin yaado ke sath puri zindagi nahi ji ja sakti islye aadil ka hath tham lo

piya: but i love u abhay

abhay: i know piya... lakim jo log mar jaatey woh log kabhi wapas nahi aa saktey

and suddenly abhay disappear

{piya was just holding abhay pic with teary eyes and the song finish. someone knocks, piya wipes her tears}

Scene shifts:

the house was decorate with white candles and white and purple flower.. waiters are serving soft drinks and beverages... food also... girls are just waiting for aadil to come ... here the spot light goes on aadil and ajay also comes... girls were becoming flatterer... aadil was in black suit.. and ajay was in white shirt with brown gucci jacket... black jeans... everybody wished him ... aadil was waiting for piya and his family to come...


megha: aadil beta chalo cake kaat lo everyone is waiting... aadil: ek min mom piya aa jaaye... megha: ok beta but dont make late too much

ajay comes to aadil

ajay: yaar tu tension mat le piya aati ho hogi

here tanisha comes and greets aadil,,, aadil smiles and here piya comes... she was wearing black full sleeves top with dark pink skirt and then pink muffler... her staright hairs... light pink lipstick...she was looking awsome... aadil was just watching piya only... tanisha sees this and gets jealous...ajay gives her a glass of water...aadil comes to piya.. piya smiles a little


piya: happy birthday aadil...

here aadil parents along with ajay and nani comes to them.. megha looks at piya...she smiles at piya... piya greets megha and then rishab.. then nani...


all of them gather around the birthday cake...aadil sees piya... piya was looking here and there


so friends here i end hope u will enjy ... firnds i will continue this part further because its too short... i am sorry frnds...














Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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part-25

misha sees vedh and vedh sees misha.. both of them were shocked to see each other..



misha was having tears in her eyes...
vedh was seeing misha only.. the motions of feelings were attacking misha and vedh...

flashback:

when misha use to come see piya and abhay.
abeer and misha laughing...
misha and aaroo looking at vedh when he drops piya at college...

misha turns and goes from there...

rishab: mr raichand aaj project ke barey mey nahi discuss nahi kartey ... lets have a party...aaj merey betey ki engagment hui hai

vedh sees aadil and piya and gives a little smile... he goes with from there and piya sees him going... piya comes in a side and she wipes her tears... piya comes and put her hand on misha shoulder... misha turns and sees piya.. she hugs piya..

misha: piya woh yaha kyu aaya... apni zindagi ke jis hisey ko mey bhula chuki hu aaj phir woh merey saamney aa gaya hai...

piya makes misha sit and gives her a water to drink...

piya: aksar life mey kuch aisa ho jaata hai jo humhey accept karna hota hai aur phir tum toh vedh da sey pyar karti ho..zindagi sabko baar baar mauka nahi deti misha .. us samjho vedh da ka dubara wapas aana matlab kudrat ka ishara hai jo woh tumhey samjhana chahata hai... baki as u wish misha life toh tumari hai...

piya goes from there...

Scene shifts:

vedh was talking on phone ... he was speaking to abeer...

vedh: u were right... tum sahi keh rahey they...

song starts:

Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{vedh turns, it was misha who was singing}
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
{misha goes to panchi and sings this lines}
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
Rab Di Kasam Sach Bole Mere Mitwa
Haan Raab Di Kasam Sach Bole Mere Mitwa
{she looks at vedh and vedh looks left}
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{girls starts dancing}
Haan Jaldi Meri Doli Mangwade
Aage Meri Chaahne Wale
{she comes to piya}
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{aadil and ajay smiles}


Saare Panchi Ud Jaate Hai
Saab Pardesi Mud Jaate Hai
{piya start drinking, ajay sees this, he comes to misha, misha holds him}
Haan Saare Panchi Ud Jaate Hai
Sab Pardesi Mud Jaate Hai
{misha start loosing her sensed, and points out at vedh}
Dekh Zara Tu Kya Hota Hai
Pyaar Mein Jaab Dil Jud Jaate Hai
{misha puts both of her hands on ajay shoulder}
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Haan Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
{misha leaves ajay and takes another drink, vedh looks at misha}
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul

{misha imagines vedh coming to her and they have dance, one girl
pulls her and she comes to her senses, she sees piya and aadil}

Tum Ko Mubarak Ho Yeh Shaadi
Yeh Band Baaja Ghode Haathi
{misha comes to aadil and piya holds their hands together}
Tum Ko Mubarak Ho Yeh Shaadi
Yeh Band Baja Ghode Haathi
{misha turns from bck of piya and hugs her and sings}
Dulha Dulhan Jeevan Saathi
Apna Kya Hum Khaali Baaraati
{misha tears rolls down and drops on piya shoulder, looking at vedh}
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
Haan Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
{piya turns and sings this line}
Jhoot Bole Jo Use Kaat Khaaye Bichoowa
Dil Mein Hai Pyaar Tera Hoton Pe Gitwa
misha sings and dance, piya was in tears and sees misha}
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Haan Jaldi Meri Doli Mangwade
Aage Meri Chaahne Wale
Jaldi Meri Doli Mangwade
Aage Meri Chaahne Wale
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
Ek Tha Gul Ek Thi Bulbul Bulbul Bole Sun Baabul
{all the girls sing this line chorus, everyone claps}


vedh goes from there ... piya sees misha and vedh.. vedh was in tears..
piya calls vedh...

piya: vedh da
vedh wipes her tears and turns...he sees piya... vedh trys to leave... but piya hold his hand...vedh looks at piya
piya: vedh da apni behan sey bina miley hi chale jogey..
vedh: aisi koi baat nahi hai piya mey bas
piya: mey toh kya vedh da...
vedh:{ fake smiles} kaisi ho tum...
piya: apney vedh da ke bina piya kaisey ho sakti... jab sey abhay gaya hai tab se sab badal gaya... aap badal gaye ... kya yahi rishta tha humara...
vedh: nahi piya aisi koi baat nahi hai...

some claps from there side...

misha: kaun keh raha hai yeh piya... mr vedh raichand...
piya: mishaa..tumm
vedh stops piys saying
misha: kyu rok rahey usey bolney sey kehney do wat she wants to say? uska right banta hai bolney ka...
vedh: {serious} tum kehna kya chahti ho... woh meru behan
misha: rishto ka matlab bi samjhtey ho tum...
vedh: see misha... tum kyu purani baatein ko phir sey start kar rahi ho.. hum miley... u liked me thats it... its all over..
misha looks at vedh and piya also...
vedh: waisey bi i am in relationship with someone.. so carry on ...{he turns} koi acha sa boyfrnd dhundo aur shaadi kar lo.. merey aur piya ke bich mat aao...

misha in tears run from there... piya looks at vedh..she also goes from there...

vedh thinks

"misha mey jo kuch bi kar rahi hu ...sahi kar raha hu,,, meu janta hu tum mujse bahut pyar karti ho lakin ek vampire aur insaan kabhi sath nahi re saktey.. apni aankho ke saamney abhay da aur piya ko alag hotey dekha hai... piya kis halat mey hai mehsoos kiya hai mainey.. aur mey nahi chahta hai ki tum is dard aur takleef sey guzaro"


scene shift:

ajay and aadil was siting and ajay was thinking...
aadil: kya hua kya soch raha hai...
ajay: boss bahut bada locha lag raha hai ...sochna padega {ajay was in thinking mode, aadil sees ajay}
aadil hits ajay...
aadil: bol na kya hua tujhe... kya soch raha hai.
ajay: abey kya hai yaar mey kuch soch raha hu tu bas abhi piya bhabi pe concentrate karo samjhey
aadil: dekh bata kya chal raha hai terey dimag mey...waisey bi i knw u terey pet mey koi baat nahi pachti...
ajay: kya matlab
aadil: tu mujse baat kiye bina reh nhi sakta i knw u...
ajay: yaar tune misha ko dekha hai...
aadil: oey kahi tujhe misha toh pasand nhi aa gayi
ajay: abey kya bol raha hai tu... tujse na baat hi karna bekaar hai... dekh piya bhabi aa rahi hai...

scene shift:

piya: a,, aadil can u please drop me home?
aadil: kyu kya hua?
piya: nahi i am not feeling okay...
ajay: bhabi agar tabiyat jayada kharab hai toh yahi rest kar lijye...
aadil: ha piya ajay theek keh raha hai...
piya: nahi woh
ajay comes and holds her shoulder...
ajay: arey woh woh kya chaliye aap ...
ajay goes with piya and aadil sees them and smiles...


scene shift:

ajay takes piya in aadil room..piya sees aadil room.. it was quite big and in one corner they were having family pics ...ajay and aadil pic, megha , aadil and ajay pic, then nani pulling ajay ears pic... , rishab-aadil- megha- ajay and nani pic...piya looks around...

ajay: bhabi
piya looks at ajay
ajay: abhi toh yeh room mey aur aadil share kartey hai...is ghar mey bahut rooms hai lakin i love to be with him...
piya smile a little bit...aadil comes there and ajay winks and goes from there...

piya looks at aadil... here abhay shadow comes piya just seeing aadil

"abhay was shining and he was in black, the glow was shinging"

abhay: piya yeh dekho mey aa gaya tumare pass abhay bankar nahi lakin aadil bankar tumare pass hu... abhay tumari aakho sey bahut dur hai piya lakin aadil bankar tumare pass hai, isey hamesha sambhal kar rakhna

after saying this abhay disappears...



so friends here i end hope u will like it...




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part-6


abhay sees piya crying😭. abhay sees T with angry looks.. abhay comes to T

Abhay: T what the hell you are saying?
T: mey sach bol rahi hu abhay yeh bacha tumara hai abhay.

abhay eyes suddenly become red and T notice that and becomes scared, T trys to go but abhay pulls her back and grabs her neck...Abhay was looking so dangerous..😡

abhay:what did you said that mey is bachey ka baap hu
T: leave me abhay
abhay: I will kill you now... I will not let you go that easily..

T was trying to remove her hand but nothing was effecting abhay. he was making his grip very tight. T was not able to breath and suddenly T push abhay and run away... abhay comes to piya,,,


abhay: mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...
arnab {angry}: tumhey jo bi baat karni hai mujse aur yahi baat karo.
abhay: mujhe piya sey baat karni hai.
arnab: itna bada dokha deney sey pehaley ek baar piya ke baarey mey toh socha hota...
chand: Mr arnab yeh ladki jhooth bol rahi hai...
arnab: koi bi ladki apni izat ka is terha sey tamasha nahi banati Mr raichand. Mainey faisla kar liya hai yeh shaadi nahi hogi...

everyone is shocked especially piya. Arnab folds his hands in front of people and request them to go. All people goes from there. arnab comes to piya. only raichand and dobriyals are left with kabir..

piya: Uncle i love abhay a lot and i cant live without him.
arnab: i know beta but yeh insaan tumara pyar deserve nahi karta.
piya: but uncle...

abhay comes to piya {BG music mahiya start} gives his hand, piya looks at abhay with teary eyes..then piya sees arnab who was very angry.

piya: Uncle just let me talk to abhay once and i think apni life ka faisala mey khud le sakti hu.

Madhu comes to arnab and puts her hands on sitting arnab shoulder...

madhu: arnab let them talk after all yeh unki life ka sawaal hai.. and you know piya bi humari beti hai, humney aaj tak apney bacho ko kisi cheez ke liye force nahi kiya...toh phir ab kyu?

arnab sees madu and then he nodes his head...he let piya go with abhay to room...piya and abhay goes. Arnab stands up and look at them..

SCENE SHIFTS:

abhay and piya goes to room. abhay locks the door.. piya turns to abhay..she is crying and angry.



piya: kyu abhay kyu why did you do this to me? mainey tumsey apni zindagi sey bi jayada pyar kiya aur tumney mera vishwas todh diya.. mujhe dokha diya kyu abhay kyu? mere pyar ko sharmindaa kar diya sabke saamney... {piya crys very badly}

abhay comes to piya and sees her...



abhay: kya tumhey lagta hai ki tumara abhay kabhi bi aisa kar sakta hai.tumhey dokha de sakta hai piya. mey nahi jaanta ki T aisa kyu rahi hai lakin mey sach bol raha hu piya T jhooth bol rahi hai. mey tumarey alwaa kisi aur ladhki ke baarey mey soch bi nahi sakta..

piya: i want to believe you but jo T bol rahi hai usey i mean how i can ignore that abhay?

abhay: tell me piya tum T ko kitney dino sey janti ho...sirf ek din aur mey we spend so much of time together and tumnhey lagta hai ki mey tumhey dokha dunga... {abhay have tears in his eyes}

piya sees this and she was so sad..she comes to abhay and hugs him..she cries very badly... abhay wipes her tears..




piya: I love you abhay and i know tum mujhe kabhi dokha nahi de saktey... mey tumarey bina ji nahi sakti abhay...humarey bich koi nahi aa sakta...

abhay hugs piya tightly... and caresees her hairs..



abhay: I love you too and no one can take you away from me, you are mine and only mine...

piya: but uncle...

abhay: dont worry i will explain him...

abhay kisses piya forehead and hugs her tightly again. piya closes her eyes and feels reliefed.. arnab was walking here and there in tension, haseena and chand are standing while sid is also looking at panchi and kabir and misha are standing... here piya and abhay comes down... abhay goes to chand and haseena arnab comes to piya.

arnab: piya bachey tum theek toh ho na.. {arnab puts hand on her cheeks}
piya: yes uncle i am fine...

arnab turns to abhay and comes to him. he stares abhay with angry looks...

arnab: so get lost abhay from here i dont want to see you again. agar tum piya ke aas pi nazar aaye toh tum nahi jantey ki mey tumara kya haal karunga...

piya: no uncle dont say this

Arnab turns and he is shocked to see everyone. camera focus on everyone bec all of them are shocked..😲

arnab: what? kya kaha tumney?

piya: yes uncle mey aur abhay ek dusrey sey pyar kartey hai aur humney shaadi karney ka faisala kiya hai

panchi is shocked and comes to piya...

panchi: are you out of your mind piya? yeh kya keh rahi ho..is insaan pe kaisey vishwas kaisey kar sakti ho {she pointed out her finger at abhay}

piya: panchi i know sab ko aisa lag raha hai ki abhay jhooth bol raha hai lakin mera dil jaanta hai {she goes to abhay and hold his hands} ki abhay mujhe dokha nahi de sakta...

arnab: tumara dimag kharab ho gaya hai aur tumhey kya lagta hai ki tum yaha aakar humhey apna faisla sunogi aur hum maan jaayengey... piya enough now...tumari aur abhay ki shaadi nahi ho sakti... bas

piya: toh phir mey kehna chahti hu ki mey abhay sey pyar karti hu aur uske bina nahi ji sakti...

aranb and panchi are shocked...abhay goes to arnab but arnab was so angry that he he gives a tight slap to abhay.. chand was about to go but haseena stops him..

piya {angry}: uncle aap merey honey waley pati ko is terha sey insult nahi kar saktey...

arnab is shocked again so as misha...

arnab: what ?

piya: yes uncle mey aur abhay shaadi kar rahey hai...

arnab: dekha madhu {camrea focus on madhu} is ladhki ki himat dekho kya bol rahi hai?

madhu comes to piya...

madhu: piya betey yeh tum kya bol rahi ho...yeh insaan galat bi toh ho sakta hai...
piya: aunty mey abhay sey pyar karti hu aur mey uspey trust karti hu jaisey aap uncle pe karti ho...
arnab: fine fine agar tumney abhay sey shaadi karney ka soch hi liya hai toh humari permission ki kya zarurat hai jao kar lo apney maan ki . lakin ek baat mey ya mere pariwaar ka koi bi insaan tumari shaadi mey na toh aayega aur na hi aaj ke baad tumsey koi rishta nahi rakhega...

piya is shocked to listen this. misha comes there

misha: but papa...

arnab was so angry he slapped misha also. misha start crying, abhay and piya was shocked to see this...piya comes to arnab

piya: uncle mainey hamesha sey aapko apney papa ki terha samjha hai mey yeh kabhi nahi chahungi ki meri wajah sey is ghar ke kisi bi insaan ko dukh pahucnhey lakin mey yeh bi janti hu ki i love abhay papa he is my life...isliye mey yaha sey ja rahi hu uncle hamesha ke liye... {she crys}...agar aapney kabi bi mujhe apni beti samjha ho toh aashirwaad deney zarur aayengey...

arnab sees piya...piya looks at arnab with teary eyes... piya folds her hands...

piya: i am sorry uncle, aunty panchi and misha...

piya comes to abhay.. abhay sees piya...piya {controlling her tears} piya was about to say but abhay puts his finger on her lips and sees him...

abhay: shh piya kuch kehney ki zarurat nahi hai ab tum meri responsiblity ho... lets go...

Raichand goes out from dobriyal house along with piya.. aranb sees this and he goes from their to his room...sid comes to panchi and console her and misha was crying..kabir comes to misha and puts hand on her shoulder...

SCENE SHIFT:

abhay reaches home with piya, haseena and chand goes to her,,,abhay takes piya in his room... he opens the door and piya enters, the room was classy with perfect interior as abhay wants...with piya fav colour...all the stuffs was classic and beautiful. A shelf which was covered by a huge books... piya goes and sits on the bed and she starts crying while abhay comes to her...

abhay: piya dont cry i am here na with you...
piya: abhay mainey kabhi nahi socha tha ki aisa bi din meri life mey aayega...sab khatam hogaya abhay {she cries}
abhay: kuch khatam nahi hua hai piya its a new begining of our new life and i am sure time ke sath sab theek ho jaayega..
piya: abhay prmoise me... that you will neve leave me otherwise i will die abhay i will die..
abhay: shh no i will never leave you now come on jaan try to sleep...

abhay makes piya lay on bed he also comes and sits beside him.. piya puts her head on his shoulder... abhay kisses on her forehead piya is still crying.. abhay understands that piya is in pain.. and he had to take care of her...abhay make her hairs side...

abhay: piya...
piya: hmm
abhay: hum kal hi shaadi karengey...

piya looks at abhay..abhay smiles...

abhay: piya what happened? tum khush nahi ho kya?
piya: nothing i am happy, abhay jaisa tum chaho...

piya again hugs abhay tightly...her lips touched his body and abhay makes his grip tight on her...

abhay: now close your eyes and go to sleep. i am here with you always...

piya goes to sleep and abhay sees piya.. abhay thinks...

IN THE MORNING:

abhay sees piya sleeping, she was looking like a angel... he kisses him on her cheeks.. piya opens her eyes slowly and slowly as her eyes were swollen.. piya stand up and goes to take shower..Abhay goes down to chand...After taking shower piya comes down...she sees abhay, chand and haseena is standing with a man who is wearing a black coat...

so friends here i end this part...
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Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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