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Loved it, amazing.plsss update soon.
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I wish Maan hadn't gone the crook way :-(
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Maan's so evil
i'm mad at Maan for acting that way!
it's not like Geet left him on purpose it's his fault anyways
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PART- 45

When they come out from airport at Delhi she got the call from chethana aunty. "hello , geet sorry we have mistaken maan sir. Really he is a gentle man. Actually we received the wrong information by manager. They broken only compound walls bcoz those are already damaged. So they stated to re-construct new compound walls again and another happy news maan started to construct new small building for school . Sorry geet I disturbed you."

Geet:"Ok chethana aunty. Ill call you later." She saw him by her eye edge. He is walking with her like a lion. Every thing is well planned. Already he shifted even her baggage to car. He grabbed her waist and made his way to KM.

At KM , dadima and anni playing with kuhu. She is running here and there. dadima tired to catch her due to her age. Anni running in behind of her. kuhu running she is just two years but she is too active and clever. She know how to make tired her anni aunty. Some time she go under the dinning table , chairs every where. Everyday there is a big task for anni to feed her food. Same repeated even today.

Anni warning kuhu again and again." Kuhu , pls come out…I am getting angry…then aunty won't talk to you." She is hiding under the dining table.

But kuhu know very much about her aunty. She will never angry with her. she came with full of smile from her hiding place by knee walk.

Anni rubbed her forehead." Dadima, our kuhu become too naughty. We should do something for that…"she turned to kuhu" wait let vicky come. only he can deal with you…"

Kuhu didn't understand much…only she know her bhuwa complain about her with chachu. She smiled with innocently. she know even her chachu will not punish her.

"deko na dadima, kuhu smiled like geet…."dadima eyes wetted remembering geet. after geet dead ,there is know light in KM. only bcoz of kuhu all are smiling. What a magic she is done with everybody.

Door bell ranged. Nakul went and open the door. He stood with shock. Maan singh Khurana in front of him. after two year he is in door step of KM. after geet death, after dadima punishment , he didn't dare to step on KM. but today …"nakul khon hain…" anni come with little front…maan bhai…even dadima came front "maan …" a word slipped from her lips. after two years he is in her door step.

maan try to come inside , dadima stopped him "maan don't dare to come inside…"

anni hugged kuhu tightly. She scared whether he came to take Kuhu. Kuhu scared looking maan remembering about him what anni told her about scary stories. Even she hugged anni neck tightly closing her eyes with fear.

Maan didn't cared, Darley he walked inside, before entering inside he pulled geet in front of everybody who is standing out side. Dadima surprised. Anni eyes widened. Looking her geet.

"dadima you have punished me that day bcoz of me geet dead, but today I proved she is alive. No one can stop me to coming inside my home and take my baby back. dadima pls give my kuhu at once I want to touch her, I want to feel her…" anni didn't speak a word. Just she handover kuhu to him. maan horridly move to her and grabbed his daughter for a first time in his life. he hugged her, he kissed her madly…tears flowing from his eyes.

Kuhu scared due to his madness. She started to cry. Geet standing and watching all these…even her eyes filled looking his love towards her daughter. Kuhu started to cry..hitting him with her tiny small legs and hands." Weee…weee.."

Geet come forward and she is taken her daughter to her arms. Kuhu immediately she crossed around her neck and closed her eyes tightly. still her sobbing is not stopped. Geet slowly rubbing on her back. after few minutes dadima came out from her shock. "geet tum jindha hain…thank god….tum vapas milgayi.." she is very happy. Anni and dadima hugged her at a time. Their eyes filled tears with joy. Even geet is in same stage. She love whole family like her sole. But compare to maan everything is nothing to her. how mad with him…really no one can believe it.

Geet and maan both touched her feet. Still dadima and anni wondering about how she is alive. They saw her dead body..they made all the formalities to that body. there is lot of emotion where no one could be bare it. It is a very beautiful movement. there is a dilemma, here there is a love, emotion, happiness everything mingled no one come out from their happiness.

Same time vicky came from his room looking geet he went and hugged her cried like small kid. how bad he felt, he done all formalities( karmas) as her son. How he feel now when she is in front of her.

even maan he is in same situation. After two years he brought his wife to his house, after two years he touched her own child. First time he kissed her, he hugged her…today if he got billions of money in front of him it is nothing for him. today he got his family back, he got his daughter, his geet…everything. He saw geet. she is quite happy .her happiness is visible from her face.

Maan is in dilemma .Geet questioning her own child about her name how bad…her own mother don't know her baby name.

Still maan had the doubt how they declared about geet death.

Vicky cleared " geet when I enquired in bus station they found your photo and told me you went in Amritsar bus. The same bus accident and we got the dead body which can not be recognized by face. She is wearing the same sari what you ware that day, we thought that might be you and we brought…" he couldn't finish his words. He sobbed , geet rubbed his back.

She didn't expected this from her family. She really don't know after her separation from KM will cause so much of problem . she surprised…when they told how they declared about her death…she freezed. Yes its true she planned to go Amritsar but again she changed her mind and went to Bangalore. Her decision save her life.

Maan got his answer. now he is not bothering about past. Now he want to full fill what he missed all these days. He hugged every one at a time." Dadima , now you will forgive me na…"dadima hugged him.

anni and vicky hugged from backside. "sorry maan bhai, we have punished you so badly.." anni crying bitterly. All are in guilt.

Dadima once again cried" sorry maan beta, I have punished you very badly. I have not let you to touch your child at once. In court also no one give such a punishment to anybody …but I have punished you very badly.."

Geet really felt bad. She thought all will be happy in all these two years but still every one are remembering her. their love and care make her speech less. Bcoz of her this house happiness vanished.

Specially maan the main reason she left him he should be happy but what happened nothing is remained with him after she left him. kuhu still hiding her face on geet shoulder. She is trying to convince her ,but she is not convincing. She don't want to see maan again. She is scaring about him , anni told such type of scary story about him. now she is in guilt. She moved to kuhu" kuhu don't worry ,deko wo tumari papa hain…"

Still she is crying" weee…weee..papa mathlab…wo bhuri hena.."maan knotted his eye brows with painfully. geet couldn't see him in this situation.

Now geet speaking to her " no kuhu, papa mathlab wo bhahuth achchi hain…he will bring many toys , he will take care…he love you.." now she stopped her sobbing, but still her fear not gone from her eyes.

PRECAP: MANEETS WITH KUHU …..DID HAPPINESS BACK.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments

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Posted: 13 years ago
haiu

that was awesome
cute happiness
hope remains same
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...geet is back, happiness is back to KM...hope baby accept her papa...

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