Into the Unknown w/ Pradeep (first fan ficition)

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My first fan ficition. I'm not a writer.

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Into the Unknown with Pradeep

It was a dark, October night at the Chandigarh bus station. Pradeep was heading to Shimla for a two day break from work and some R&R (rest and relaxation). Pradeep boarded the bus and chose to sat in middle of the bus. He brought a copy of a business book by Jack Welch to keep him company during the 4 hour bus ride to Shimla. "Oye Shimla, Shimla, Shimla, Shimla" - the bus conductor was shouting, searching for any other passengers to board.

2 hours into the trip, Pradeep felt a jolt of excitement he hadn't felt since he was a college student. Working in a office had taken the youthful joy, Pradeep once had. I'm going on a adventure...mazza aayga thought Pradeep. Working at Nestle in Mohali, Pradeep had the most strict and boring boss, Mr. Sharma. Pradeep, being a fresher, felt overworked and underpaid by the company. Mr. Sharma knew this and took full advantage of it.

More to come later...

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During his first of work at Nestle, Pradeep recalls a incident with Mr. Sharma that almost got him fired. He had forgotten to contact a distributor in Mumbai, much to the dismay of Mr. Sharma. "Pradeep, why did you not contact the distrubtor?!" Mr. Sharma says angrily.

"Sir, it slipped my mind. I won't make the mistake again." Pradeep says.

"If you do this again, you will be fired. Got it?" Mr. Sharma responds.

Meanwhile, on the bus...

A passenger nudged Pradeep. "Sahib ji hum Shimla pauchne hain". Pradeep got off the bus and headed toward Mall road to find his hotel and rest for the night...

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Pradeep arrived at the hotel. After having dinner, he turned on the TV and fell asleep.

The next morning, it was a chilly October day in Shimla. He decided to have a 'veggie sandwich' at Subway. Eating Subway in Chandigarh/Mohali always gave Pradeep the energy he needed for the day.

What Pradeep enjoyed about Shimla and why he frequented the area numerous times; the kindness of the locals and the natural beauty is what keeps bringing him back over and over again.

Pradeep is a relatively tall man. Around 6 feet and he felt like a giant walking among the crowd on Mall Road. He received unnecessary attention due to his height but he enjoyed it.

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Pradeep felt he was going into the unknown, on this 2 day adventure in Shimla. He chose to sit and meditate for a while. He found a seating area on the outskirts of town, which did not have very much of a crowd.

"Ooommm. I am the universe. The universe is inside me." Pradeep chants and meditates.

He continued meditating and felt as if he was reaching an enlightment stage...

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I feel so much peach and tranquility while I meditate, Pradeep thought. He continues to meditate and sees a vision of his future, not working in a office, but in an ashram.

Am I meant to be a spritual guru? Pradeep thought.

Pradeep felt a sense of personal power, confidence and inner strength, while meditating and chanting on this seat on the outskirts of town.

"Young man, what are you doing?", a man asked Pradeep.

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"Sir, can I help you? I am just meditating with the beautiful Shimla scenery in the background, " Pradeep responds.

"Carry on! Very good." The man responded with a smile.

Pradeep felt a more isolated place within nature would have been better for his meditation today; but unforunately it was not within his walking distance.

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Pradeep ends his meditation and starts singing a song, "I'm coming home. Coming home. Let the rain wash away. All the pain of yesterday. Tell the world...that I'm coming home..."

Nearby a group of people hear Pradeep singing and join him. They begin to dance with him as well.

Pradeep is happy again. This two day adventure in Shimla has been awesome.