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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

wow awsome yaar ...loved it so much !!! continue soon

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

amazing concept...really i like it...👏👏👏
👏😊

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

OMG luv this OS
It's so gripping
Wonder why maan rejected her and yet he felt guilty for breaking her heart
Can't wait for the next part...
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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ixiaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

loved it ... it is amazing os

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Wonderful story Madhu 👏

Loved every bit of it 👏

Sad to hear about Geet's parents. What does Maan want ???

Am dying to read the next part 😛

Thanks for pm ...

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

is their reason why maan reject geet

wonder why his feeling guilt

i'm glad atleast she won medal

& make her parent proud even

though not with her

madhu yu did mindblowing job👏👏⭐️

simply beautiful

love the flaw of ur writting

& the way yu narrated each details

waiting eagerly

ty pm

Edited by sharmake11 - 14 years ago

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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

nice one.. but I don't understand Maan.. On one side he is saying harsh words to her (which is causing her to gain more strength n win), not to mention presenting with another girl as his fiance, but on other hand he is cheering her (this can be taken professionally) and kissing her randomly.. This Maan is really complicated.. I think I will wait to see how you take this story ahead..