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Riddhi

@Riddss

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

nice part
continue soon
update a longer part

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hey it waz nice part... quite an interesting story ...loved the way u described riddhima's feelings anywaz pls continue soon ...n thanks for pm ...take care...love aish...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Lovely starting... do continue would love to read more...

Really hope the bridegroom is our Armaan😊...

DO CONTINUE SOON😍

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

damn yaar...my parents did the same wth me too...newaz i loved the update(duh)..but what touched me more was the agony of shilpa...i dnt knw but i could relate to it..dnno why...it really seemd genuine..and i felt sad aftr reading this..i guess thats the essence of a gud writer..but i want u 2complete this ff befor ur college starts...plzzz

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Yashi

@.SaduFarzi.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Congo Dear...But Edit dis Comment Soon After Reading it...🤣 Sorry a Bit Busy..😊

Love Yashi

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Awesome update

loved it loadzz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhh

Xxx

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517780

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

hey sri, wow new ff

nice concept

hope riddhima is married to armaan and she gets all the love she deserve

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Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Sri, first off, congrats on getting into college 🤗

I loved the first part of the ff. I could feel all of Riddhima's frustration and loneliness and her longing for some happiness. You wrote it all out so beautifully. I felt really sad for her getting married to someone she doesn't know, but I am sure he will be her knight in shining armour (a.k.a Armaan) na 😉😳 Can't wait to read on.

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Medha

@Medha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Hey Srish! That was awesome! I feel really bad for Riddhima as she has to live a life like that. I just hope her marriage turns out to be good for her. Please try to update soon and thanks for the PM.

-Medzi-

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abcd12344

@abcd12344

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Sri it was amazing i hope its an ff i love long stories when it comes to KaSh, i hope her broom is Armaan :D nd if its not then change it to be Armaan =]

Great work sru :)

plz continue...