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Posted: 14 years ago
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srish
loved the concept
plzzz continue soon n add me in the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
very interesting concept.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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seems interesting sri...do cont soon...
love meeru
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOOO hey the CONCEPT iz quiet interesting n beautiful
count me in
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear..

sounds gr8888 yaar...

hoping to see the first part soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concept... DO CONTINUE...😊
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nice concept dear
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HMPH!!!!!kamini chudail...u didnt send me pm..big HMPH 2u...
i am trying my level best not to have very very high hopes(but let me tell u i am failing..the concept is so mesmerizing!!!) from this ff cz everytime i falll in love wth ur ffs and then u dnt cont them...and i even end up f8ing wth u...lets see what u do this tym!!!!
ti be frank this is an amzing conceot..the prologue has kept me drooling..but as i said...wts the point if u dnt update???
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Originally posted by: sacred shrine

HMPH!!!!!kamini chudail...u didnt send me pm..big HMPH 2u...

i am trying my level best not to have very very high hopes(but let me tell u i am failing..the concept is so mesmerizing!!!) from this ff cz everytime i falll in love wth ur ffs and then u dnt cont them...and i even end up f8ing wth u...lets see what u do this tym!!!!
ti be frank this is an amzing conceot..the prologue has kept me drooling..but as i said...wts the point if u dnt update???


sorrryyy dear :) :p
hawww...not to use swear words :)...i dint sent that to manyyy :p...almost none...:|

well...Thank you uuu sooo muchhh...you make me feel like at the top of the world...

Thank you... :D

muah muah muah muah muah...

I hope i dont fail your expectations this time :)


Keep loving me ;D

love you HMPH..
take care!
Edited by -KaShti- - 14 years ago
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Poo-
Believe me I am writing that SS's part for you..ab toh comment UNreserved kardo.
me pookie pieing applepie poo;)


Sabrina-
ah! I dint sent it to many.!uff...will reply in detail to you soon HMPH!
Keep Loving me and my Works ;D

Zarqaa- Ravisseur Update is on its way too :)...Hopefully soon! ;)


Others,
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Love you all.
Thanx for appreciating and liking my work!
it means A LOT!
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Update Time!

Tu Na Jaane Aas paas hai khuda!


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Chapter 1

Environ-ed in complete Darkness, you never knew what will happen next.everything depends on the omnipresent,and then all a person can hope is to come out of that unwanted painful situation...

But what when you are in that situation since years...Its difficult to live life then! All thoughts then are full of depression with not even a tinge of hope.No God seems to exist then!

But still there are some people,who in-spite of suffering the worst emerge out as one among the most optimistic being. Trying to live life to its fullest. Trying to be content with whatever life is providing them with!

Though they seem to be happy but are one among the most injured soul. They will not speak that out ...for they don't trust this world enough to share themselves so that the world could re-open their un-healed wounds furthermore...

"Hey Mom!"She greeted her mother cheerfully while entering through the main door.She moved forward to hug her mom as she met her mother after a week! She missed her mom,But was she missed. Oh well who cares,her mom was near her now and that is all that mattered to her.

She knew that her mother's hug was not straight from heart.not probing further,she dejectedly, yet cheerfully asked her mom about her trip.

"It was fine.and..."Her mom spoke...and finally looking at her daughter's face tried to spill the beans out.It was not that her daughter will not obey to what she has plotted but still with stammering, she continued, taking her daughter's hand in hers, "Riddhima,there at maasi's place I came across a very good family,they are very decent and..."

Well that was enough for Riddhima to depict what will be coming next.

"Mom!" She was not astonished but dejected. She could not say anything further still before she could gain more courage to deny or question about her mother's intentions, her mother continued "beta! I know it must be too early for you but dear many get married at the age of 22...and not only that's the reason.The boy whom we have selected, he is very good.He is one in million.We are very lucky to get them...and plus I know you will listen to me.whatever I plan is for your betterment only my child.You trust me beta.right!" More of a question it sounded like a statement. Well that was her life, written and planned by everyone except her.

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Two weeks later,

Marriage fixed. Who is the bride's bridegroom? That is not known to the bride herself.What is his name, how does he looks, who is he? ...answer to every question is unknown to her...as always!!!

Sitting in her wedding attire, alone in her room, the 'new bride' feeling was eating her.

It was not like she had a great time living in her birth place, her childhood home, or that she was attached with any sweet memories, still the feeling of leaving something was continuously conceiving her. Frustrated with the whole events taking place, she sighed!

"Get ready for a new life Riddhima beta!...and don't get all those scary feelings of leaving something and that too here, where you don't have single memory to rejoice...But..." She felt like she is standing in a high cliff, where there is no way to go back, as there was nothing she hold for herself and if she move forward...the thought makes her shudder...her feeling of emptiness was of no compare...she was feeling a lot but none to share and guide her through...once again!

"Let's hope for something good." She tried reasoning herself.Looking up at her reflection in the mirror, giving a forced smile to herself, she continued "Though the words like hope, happiness, love and care isn't meant for you... still what's the harm in dreaming for it...one more time." She tried to be happy for this one moment in her life...her marriage, as usual not expecting much from her fate she just wanted to smile, straight from heart, at least today...for only the GOD knows what more is she to suffer from her marriage life.



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Writer's note:

How was the update?
:)
I know short -_-
still

Waiting for your reviews
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P.s.1- If Readers interested then only
I will be continuing the story if not then also I will continue the story but will end it in two/three shots.
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P.s.2- The whole plot of the story is yet not planned so your suggestions after the parts I will post will be worth a wait for me so as to decide the story further.

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"Likes" and "Comments" warmly welcomed.

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God Bless you.
Cheers,
Sri


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Chapter 2 - Page 9


Edited by -KaShti- - 14 years ago

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