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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmm...seems to b pretty interesting!mr. bajaj-prerna,sujal-kasish n last bt nt da least owr own MAANEET r deir to entertain us...
readers gonna b "madly in love" wd ur ff! :D
updt nxt..
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Hi there...Congrtas on the new FF! all the best! Waiting for updates! Thanks 4 da pm! Please include me in ur pm list! 😛
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Interesting concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FF:Madly in love with you

Part 1

In the morning,Meera was trying to wake up geet.

Meera(Pleading):Please geet uth jao, 8 baj gaye hain.Aaj humara university ka last day hai.

Geet(Irritated):Kabhi tu sone diya karo na meera...Acha tum ja kar ready ho jao.Main thori daar tak uthti hoon.

Yash came in the room.

Yash(Looked at meera):Motto abhi tak nahi uthi?

Meera nodded her head in negative.Yash gave evil smirk to meera.Meera raised her eyebrow.Yash went to the washroom and brought bucket of water and threw water on geet.Geet quickly rised from the bed.She looked at herself then she looked at yash angrily.Yash took this as a signal to run.Geet started to run after him.

Geet(Angrily):Idiot,stupid,ullu,gadda!!

Then she stopped running.Yash looked back and saw her teary eyes.He came infront of her and sat on his knees and held his ears.

Yash(Made a sad face):I'm sorry mott..I mean my sweet friendy!

Geet:Ok just wait here for 1 minute.

Geet went to her room and then came back to yash and threw water from the bucket on yash.Meera was watching the whole scene.She started to laugh.Geet and yash gave evil smirk to eachother and threw remaining water in the bucket on meera.They started to laugh at their childish act.Suddenly they heard a loud voice from downstairs.

Geet/meera/yash(Shouted fearfully):Papa jee!

They quickly went to their rooms for changing clothes.

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He was standing in a beautiful garden.He saw her spreading arms and moving in circle while the petals of flower were falling on her smiling face.He wanted to feel her and tell her that he loved her soo much but he couldnot reach her...

Maan woke up with a jerk when his cell phone started to ring.He attended the call.

Romeo:Good morning Sir, aap ko remind karwana tha ka aaj 9 baje aap ke meeting hai.

Maan:Good morning,Thanxx for reminding me romeo,I will be there.

Maan started to get ready,he came downstairs for the breakfast.He saw sujal kissing kashish's hand.He cleared his throat.

Maan(Controlling his laugh):Its ok,Main breakfast apne kamre main kar leta hoon.

Sujal came and hugged him.

Sujal(Lovingly):Beta tum kab aaye England se?Tumne tu bataya tha next week aao ga.

Maan(Hugged him back):Bas dad kal raat ke flight se aaya tha.Woh kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya tha aur main aap logon ko bohat miss kar raha tha iss liye maine socha ka aap ko isse week wapis aa kar surprise doon.

Kashish(Hugged him):We missed you too beta!

They started to eat breakfast.

Sujal:Maan tumhara business bhi theek ja raha hai tu hum soch rahe tha ka ab iss ghar main ...

Maan:I know what you want to say next...Iss ghar main bahu ke kami hai.Right?

Sujal(Smiled):Exactly...Let me guess aap ka jawab ye hoga main bhi iss ladke ko dhond raha hoon.Right?

Maan(Smiled sadly):Don't worry dad and mom,I will find your daughter in-law soon.

Kashish(Caressed maan's head):I know you will find her soon.

Maan(Smiled and kissed his mother's cheek);Now i have to go.Take care mom and Dad hurry up.Aap ko bhi mera saath office jana hai.

Sujal quickly finished and kissed kashish on the cheek.Maan and sujal left for the office.

Precap:Dev's entry!

Promo:

Maan attended adi's call.

Geet(Angrily):That's not fair,aap ne promise kiya tha ka aap aaj humain lunch per le kar jaiyein ga.

Maan felt like he heard this voice before...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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NOTE:

Thanxx for commenting on the character sketch😃.

Actually i was searching for sweet father for maan when i couldnot find a sweet father then i had searched for sweet guys.I had found sujal so i have made him maan's father.I know he didnot look like father of maan but i couldnot find a sweet guy😳.

By the way i have added the readers in my pm list.If u change ur ID.Pleasee inform me.

In the last,i know this part was not that good.But Pleasee leave ur comments even if u don't like this part😭.

I'm sure abt one thing that if u liked maan's character in revenge from the lover u will like his character in this ff too😳.

Love,❤️

Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yipeee
me first for first part
wowww loved it
love the way yash,geet n meera r playing around
n also maan n his parents relationship is very sweet
promo is awesome
n maan's dream wowww
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 14 years ago

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