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ishita

@chelsi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

nice part ...
and congratulations fr new thread

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

freaking awesm upd8 n that too so fast.. love u maha for this...

i cried in this upd8...i felt so teribble bt i m happy that ridzi is safe n sound n bak to amy

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MaNaLoVeKaSh

@MaNaLoVeKaSh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

FOR 4TH THREAD
LOVE THE PART
HAYE ARMAAN MERA HERO
I HOPE EVERYTHING WILL BE OK WITH RIDDHIMA 'S EMOTIONS
THANX FOR THE PM
CONTINUE SOONBYE GOOD DAY:)

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Anushka

@Athena.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

C O N G R A T S Maha :)

Gotta catch up on ur FF, have no idea where I left off. Stupid exams :|

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517780

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

very emotional part , lovely portrayed emotions

continue soon

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Superb part.
Very nice.
Finaly they r back.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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unknown

@Rapunzzel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Congratulations for the new thread 🥳🥳

the part was awesome👏👏
loved it...
finally Armaan rescued Ridhima

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Anushka

@Athena.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Okay.. I read the last 2 parts.. and I think there were both nicely written.

In the previous part I felt Armaan wanted to do a lot to help Riddhima, to find her but he couldn't do much. I think that was good because it was quite believable for me.. for once Armaan was not "superman" or a "hero".

In this part, once Armaan got his hands on them, the other characters took a back seat. But this is not exactly bad.. becaue I didn't feel like Armaan was being heroic.. he seemed to be more in anguish. That being said, I hope u dnt mind.. but Raj seemed to be comedic at the wrong time. The fighting scene was intense.. but then Raj added comedy in it.. and that didn't click with me. But everything else was very good! Great going:)

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pragatisk

@pragatisk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

hey maha

loved the updates

finally u rescued riddhima safely i was so worried the way u ended the previous one

hope armaan will be able to remove riddhimas fear

continue soon

congrats for new thread

Edited by pragatisk - 14 years ago

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Killer

@Hello_01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Athena.
Okay.. I read the last 2 parts.. and I think there were both nicely written.

In the previous part I felt Armaan wanted to do a lot to help Riddhima, to find her but he couldn't do much. I think that was good because it was quite believable for me.. for once Armaan was not "superman" or a "hero".

In this part, once Armaan got his hands on them, the other characters took a back seat. But this is not exactly bad.. becaue I didn't feel like Armaan was being heroic.. he seemed to be more in anguish. That being said, I hope u dnt mind.. but Raj seemed to be comedic at the wrong time. The fighting scene was intense.. but then Raj added comedy in it.. and that didn't click with me. But everything else was very good! Great going:)

Heyy,

Agreed, Raj was showed this way, as it had it's own reason... I didn't wanted the atomosphere to be damn serious, i wanted it to be mixed up with a fun, so a funny dedective came in the scene, who should created a bit of ease in the atomosphere, from the very moment of the entry of the Character Raj - he had been a 'funny guy' person, who uses his brain to join pieces together and not the other way( as in use pysical power - as Armaan does).

Armaan is a heart person, and uses physical heed most of the time, and does not even think with a proper mind; as you saw he respected his friendship with Vivek..if he used his brain he might have suspected him a bit least but he didn't.!

so i wanted to create a character(RAJ), who would use brain and reach to the culprit. the comdy was just to make his character live up!

its okay, i m happy to know you liked the rest.😳