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Posted: 13 years ago


thanks dear 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

That was a really nice part...romance plus action...rather suspense!! 😃👏
Thanks a lot Sumi!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

RN romance was hot...😆...even in the rain...and Arjuhi romance was really cute!! In fact...I found Arohi really cute...😊
Yes she is i really love her 😃 😃 😃

Arre haan...beginning me Shalini n Abhimanyu talk was really nice...😊
She was trying to explain him the importance of life and love 😛 😛 😛

And Aalekh & Huda did a gud job I guess...bas agar Rajveer ko inform kar pate to achha hota...lekin Captain is busy in romance..😳😆
Haan aaj koi disturb na kare to behtar hai. 😳 😳 😳

Waise abhi to dushman ko pata hai Naina ki previous name...😕...and they are definitely onto sumthing!! Hope Raj will handle it all...😊
Jab Raj hai to kya tension hai na sab samhal jaayega. 😊 😊
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Continue soon dear...😊



Thanks for such wonderful comment Sumi 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesum update...cont soon plz...



thanks a lot 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aahaana

Reopened upon members req:)



Thanks mod 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


Will be updating soon 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Vertu, really sorry Destiny pe comment dena bhool gayi thi abhi padha to yaad aaya. Great part 👏, Raj aur Naina ka romance was really sweet and passionate and u know mujhe vaise bhi tera romance writing kaafi pasand hai.😉 Arjun and Arohi were sweet 😊, ab pyaar kiya hai to Arohi ki har wish poori karna hi Arjun ka farz hai 😃 aur ye wish vaise bhi itne badi nahi thi.😛 Shalu was worried about call and she must be.😕 Yahan Raj ki absence me Chaubey pe hamla ho gaya 😲 and i am damn sure ye sab Ritu ne kiya hai,😡 thank god Alekh aur Huda vahan time se pahuch gaye.🥱 Raj and Naina were damn romantic 😳 and Raj ne pehli baar Naina ko itna free and happy dekha hai. Waiting for some more romantic scenes between them.😳
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Great yaar, par sab se pehle sorry boloongi ki mai padh k pehle reply nahi kar paayi.
Extremely sorry dear 😕
Arjun Arohi and Raj and Naina both were truly amazing. 😳
Arjun and Arohi were so cute,😉 they gave them enough space for sharing some special time.😃 The song was perfect and i love this song of PBDHH.👏 Raj ne to Naina ka doosra hi roop dekha hai jo us ne kabhi socha hi nahi tha.😊 Naina khush hai isiliye apni khushi vo is tarah se dikha rahi thi aur ab Naina ki khushi dono k beech ki saari dooriyan mita dega.😃 I am waiting for a die hard romantic update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey friends, 🤗

Finally i have given u much awaited update of Destiny and i hope i didn't disappoint you guys. I know i am late but i think all is well if end is well. I have finally decided to continue my all FFs. 😊

Hope u guys find it worth reading. 😃

Waiting for ur lovely and long comments.

Love u all
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Part 26:-


Naina was shivering with his touch, this time she could feel a sensation in his touch. Her heart understood this sensation or it should be said that this was the same sensation for which she was waiting for so long. Shayad aaj ki raat hum dono ki dooriyan mita de. Naina was thinking it when Raj suddenly carried her in his arms and she became surprised by his action.

"Veer ye kya?"

"Kuch nahi, mai chahta hoon ki aise hi apni Naina ko apni bahon me le kar andar jaaon." He said huskily in her ears making her shiver more. He bought her in their room and Naina said, "Veer mujhe neeche utariye na." and Raj obeyed whatever she said.

Naina got up and went straight into washroom to change her dress as she was feeling cold, being wet now and Raj was still thinking about those passionate moments he shared with Naina. He knew the things were hidden from Naina, specially the truth that he killed Naveen himself after seeing the verge of torture he was going through. It could have been disastrous whenever the truth comes out but presently it doesn't matter to him. All he wanted right now to make his Naina his completely and he wanted to give her all those rights which he wanted as well.

She has changed clothes and came out from washroom in her nighty and found Raj gazing outside from the window still in his wet clothes. Naina called him from there, "Veer..aap abhi tak bheege kapdo me kya kar rahe hain? Jaaiye change kar lijiye varna aap ko thand lag jaayegi."

Raj came back from his dreamland and turned to find his lady love trying to dry her wet hair and he was again lost in his Naina land and he walked to her, "Mat karo na, aise khule aur geele hi acche lagte hain."

Naina felt a shiver down her spine when he touched her hand and it was not new for her. These days she was feeling more than a strange sensation in her. Was that a symbol of something more than just friend's relation? Do they want to precede their relation as being a husband wife. Whatever she dreamt of from many days now do Raj still want that? Is it the right time to take such step ahead in their relation?

Raj found her lost somewhere and her eyes were speaking through her soul. He wants her and he could see the same desire in Naina's eyes for him. All he has to do just move forward and take the next step. "Naina...kya soch rahi ho?" he asked knowing very well the answer.

Naina frowned, thinking whether Raj could read her mind? But it was now unable for her to hide her feelings as well, she embarrassed and said, "kuch nahi."

Raj just smiled seeing her red cheeks with embarrassment and said, "Vaise mujhe acche se pata hai ki tum soch kya rahi thi." Raj said teasingly.

Naina didn't know how to react but she was still blushing at her thought. Raj move closer to her ear and said, "kya tum jaana chahti ho ki maine kya dekha hai tumhari aakhon me?" he asked naughtily and his husky voice made her shiver more.

She couldn't control herself because of the magic that intimacy created she just nodded her head in affirmation and Raj said, "Maine dekha...maine dekha ki...ki..." and Naina gave such a look to Raj which meant she wanted to know the thought he has. "Mujhe lagta hai...mujhe lagta hai ki ...mujhe abhi change kar k aana chahiye." And he walked straight to the wash room leaving a puzzled and surprised Naina behind. She was surprised and more than that she was highly disappointed.

"Kya Veer vakai me nahi samajh paa rahe hain ki mai kya chahti hoon?" she was confused. "Ya phir mai ye chahti hoon ki vo samjhe aur jab mujhe laga ki vo nahi samajh paa rahe hain to mujhe bura lag raha hai."

After a while Raj came out from the washroom and found her readying their bed, he smiled to see the irritated expression on her face. Naina was purposely ignoring him when Raj started with a topic which took all her attention, "Naina tumhe yaad hai jab hum ghar pe the to maa ne kya kaha tha hum se?"

Without saying a word she nodded her head in a manner which showed that she truly didn't remember. Raj smiled again. "Ye baat to tum ko mujh se bhi acche se yaad honi chahiye na Naina?" Naina didn't buzz to look at her and still behaved ignorant. Raj went to her and hugged her from back, "Maa ne kaha tha ki unhe bahut jaldi...", taking a small pause he again whispered in her ear, "ek pota ya poti chahiye."

Naina was already trembling with his touch but somehow she was managing to control herself when Raj said those words it made her cheeks red with blush. She couldn't hide her blush and Raj continued, "To start karein?"

Naina asked blushing hard, "Kya?"

"Mom dad banane ka programe." He said naughtily and now Naina's cheeks turned into bright red.

Arjun and Arohi:-

"How sweet na Arjun. Kitna accha hota hai ye barish ka mausam jab sab kuch naya naya sa lagta hai. Ek fresh sa ehsaas mitti ki sondhi mahak, aur is mausam me pakode mil jaayein to kya kehne."

Arjun was lost in Arohi's gaga land and he was simply staring at her and she was as usual busy in her chatar patar which was never ending. She continued to speak some more time when she found him gazing at her and she stopped, "Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahe ho?"

Arjun smiled and said, "Dekh raha hoon us Arohi ko jis k andar abhi tak kahin ek choti se bacchi chupi hue hai jo mauka paa kar bahar aa jaati hai."

Arohi smiled and said, "haan aur khaas kar k tumhare saamne to kuch jyada hi."

He saw something stuck at her lower lips and signaled her to clean that but she couldn't understand. "Kya hua?"

"Kuch laga hai"

"Kahan?" she tried to sweep but she couldn't when Arjun bend at her and with his finger he removed that piece. His touch on her face ignited the fire in them. His hands automatically started caressing her cheeks and Arohi closed her eyes feeling his touh which arosed her feelings and she felt as if she was melting in his arms. She hissed softly, "Arjun..." And soon he shut her mouth with his lips.

Raj and Naina:-

Naina blushed to the core, "Veer...aap bhi na."

"Naina...i love u na." ye keh kar Raj bahut kareeb aa gaya tha Naina k aur us ne apne hothon se pehle ek baar Naina k gaalon ko kiss kiya. Naina shivered by his touch. Next he proceeded towards her lips n pasted his lips with hers. This was a sweet and gentel kiss firstly but soon it became heated when his tongue started playing with hers and he was unable to control the heat dwelted b/w their bodies. Raj was unable to hold his desire more.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara

"Kab tak Naina mai door rahoon tum se. Mera man ab nahi manta aur koi bhi control nahi hai ab mujhe apne par. Mai tum ko choona chahta hoom mehsus karna chahta hoon. Mere hothn tumhare jism k har ek hisse ko choona chahte hain Naina. Aaj mujhe mat roko Naina apna bana lena do mujhe khud ko." Raj soch raha hai.

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh

Paas Aa Jaaye Hum

Hum Tum Tum Hum Tum

Hum Tum Tum Hum Tum

"Pata nahi Veer mai apne aap par kaboo kyoun nahi rakh paa rahi hoon. Shayad mujhe isi pal ka intezaar tha ki kab tum mujhe poori tarah se apna bana lo humesha k liye. Ab koi nahi aa sakta humare beech na. Mujhe pyaar karo Veer itna ki zindagi bhi kam pad jaaye." She thought.

Aankhon MeinHumko Utharne Do Zara

Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa
Jaaye Hum

Hum Tum Tum Hum Tum

Shayad Naina ki chahat ko kahin na kahin mehsoos kar liya aur ye samajh liya tha ki vo waqt aa gaya hai jab us ko apni aur Naina k man hi nahi tan ki bhi dooriyan mitani hongi. Naina bhi kahin na kahin aisa hi chahti thi tabhi Raj ki kisi bhi harakt ko protest nahi kar rahi thi balki bilkul same passion me jawab de rahi thi.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

His hands were moving on her nighty he opened its buttons and as his hands entered in it she felt a joy in her heart. She was surprised first but she didn't protest. Raj encircled her feminine curves n she felt blessed.He started careesing them with his hands n traveled his hands downwards. Soon his fingers were playing with her navel n she was feeling a g8 pleasure beyond anything.

Salvatein Kahin
Karwatein Kahin

Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera

He left her lips and soon unbuttouned rest of her nighty. He started kissing her chin than preceded towards her shoulders wildly. He licked her neck and shoulders and she stiffened. Her breaths were grewing faster n faster with each passing minute with passion.

Nazron Mein Ho Guzarta Hua

Khwabon Ka KoiKhafila

He threw her nighty off now n first he looked her in this s**y form. He wanted his eyes to trace that beautiful treasure wildly and his hands to touch each and every part of hers which is only his. He was unable to blink her eyes when he looked at her bare beauty. She was just perfect n her beauty was creating havoc inside him. It feels as if she her self wanted to be explored by him. Her well tonned curves n perfect feminine parts were so s**y as if they were inviting him to be touched n explored by him n all Raj want to love them n make her feel blessed.

Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara

Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh
Paas Aa Jaaye Hum

Hum Tum Tum Hum Tum

"Veer ", she called softly still closing her eyes as she was feeling shy to open them.

"I love u Naina," and she pulled him to her and started kissing his face and his neckline. She started unbuttoning his shirt and threw it anywhere smelling his body odor which was making her crazy for him. Now she wants him only to start pleasure making n bring them to its highest point of satisfaction.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

She started kissing him wildly on his chest n licking them by her tongue making him loose all his senses. He liked the way she was behaving with her and inviting him to do more and more how much he could do to love her and satisfy her.

"Nainaaa," he hissed but she didn't pay attention n proceeded towards his belt of paint. Raj was surprised but he liked it so much so he just enjoyed it.

Choo lo Badan
Magar Iss Tarah

Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho

Her next action turned him completely on and he again pined her in bed. By this sudden action she opened her eyes and looked at their bare form and blushed.

"Tum hi ne to kaha tha ki kya kya dikha sakte ho na to ab dekho na." Raj said slowly on her ears n he leaned over her n started kissing her stomach still playing with her navel.

Andhere Chupe Tere Zulf Mein

Kholo Ke Raat AzaadHo

He moved upwards and looked at her feminine curves and he freed them with usual ties n looked at them. He loved them. His lips dwelted the sweetness on its tips. Naina overjoyed at his action n felt to be loved by him like this always. His lips were countiously kissing them n licking them purposely to make Naina moan with pleasure. He rubbed his fngers gently on its tips, pempering them n soothing them. She pulled him closer as if she wanted to have more and more by him.

Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara

Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara

"Naina can u tell me how r u feeling?"he asked looking at her face n continuing his action.

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai
Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye

Hum Hum Tum Tum Hum Tum

"Pata nahi Veer but it's really beautiful." She replied as if she was responding with a g8 passion.

Soon he took out last piece of cloth separating them n as his fingers touched her feminine delecatness she shivered with estacy. "Veer... ye... tum... kya?????????????????"

"Shhh, kuch mat kaho." He sealed her mouth with his and started plundering her feminine delecatness with his fingers soon he got down kissing her honey like softness her peaks with his lips and leaving her to moan louder and louder with each passing second.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Bahon MeinHumko Pighalne Do Zara

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh

Paas Aa Jaaye Hum Hum Tum ...

After some time, "No Veer stop now, pls." she pleaded him to stop as the passion in him was buring her but he didn't.

"Mat karo Veer pls..."she was feeling as if she will be burst out anytime with passion if he would continue.

Raj bent n his hungry mouth now tasted her feminine delecatness. Naina was now on her hights in passion. Raj's tongue started to play again the same game which was initially played by his fingers with her now.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Bahon MeinHumko Pighalne Do Zara

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh

Paas Aa Jaaye Hum Hum Tum ...

His hungry mouth was tasteing her desires making her more and more hungry for him. His tongue countinously playing with her feminisim making her really go crazy n Raj became really wild.He continued it more 5 minutes and Naina was dying with a different hunger to make him hers and to possess his body in hers and to satisfy her female needs.

Raj now parted her legs n leaned on her. Naina took him gladly in her n he started pressing his hard n rough body on her. When he entered in her she felt as if she is laying in another world which is really beautiful and all her dreams to be together one day were fulfilled now. She was really enjoying the moment n Raj's wildness on her. She was blessed n now transformed into a complete woman. He satisfied her and his male needs too. He loved doing this to her and finally making her his now all gaps b/w them were filled.

At 5 in moring:-

At moring when Raj got up he found an undressed Naina wrapped in a sheet besides her n he himself with her.He looked her how satisfied she was after that beautiful night. He got up n found their clothes lying on the floor. He tied the sheet and picked all clothes and kept them besides her. He moved towards Naina n kissed her lips.

"Not now Veer abhi sone do na." she said.

"Theek hai, vaise good morning." And he briefly kissed Naina n left for washroom.

After an hour:-

Naina got up n when he looked at her condition she blushed hard at her self. Raj came out n found her blushing to mauka kaise jaane deta na. He came to her n whispered in her ears, "Naina..."

She blushed more and was about to got up when Raj held her hand n pulled her towards him,"U r looking fabulous without clothes."

"Hato Veer please jaane do vaise bhi tum ko morning walk pe nahi jaana hai kya?" She was blushing to the core.

"No aaj mera morning walk pe jaane ka mood nahi hai, na hi exercise karne ka so ek doosri exercise kar leta hoon to better rahega." And he again trapped her to love her. Soon the whole room filled with Naina's moans and Raj's heavey breathing.

"Bus Veer please...", she said.

"Please Naina...aise nahi." He was requesting her sweetly and she herself was unable to deny his sweet request having urge to love her. He still loved her body n Naina was encouraging him and soon he again gave her the satisfaction she wanted. After sometime he said, "khud ko rok nahi paa rahi ho mujhe kya rokne ki koshish kar rahi ho." He teased her.

She blushed but she replied naughtily, "Ladki ka no means yes samjhe."

"Oh yeah."

"Yes off course, maine mana kabhi nahi kiya hai. Jo bhi tum chaho kar sakte ho mere saath, actually I enjoy it the most u know."

"Pehle kyoun nahi batya." And he started kissing her peaks again and pinching them with his teeth. "Still I will say, u look fabulous without clothes."

It made her red, and his mouth again started fulfilling it's hunger by her twin peaks. He was making her moan with pleasure but soon she said, "U know Captain now I think we should get up otherwise u will be late for your classes," and she pushed him from her and said standing clutching the sheet tightly on her, "U will have enough chances to make me without clothes and love me completely. U can do it anywhere anytime, its ur right. One more thing I will be happier every time to be without clothes by you. She winked and rushed into the washroom without waiting for his answer and Raj just smiled at her naughtiness and decided once again that he will love her more than any person in this world.


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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is not at all good but the hottest
haai bythe part for which i was waiting for so long finally u up it
raj carried naina in his arms to their room
naian and raj both wanted to reduce the distance btw them became a couple in a true sense
and finally it happened
raj made naina his and naina she was so much happy
the morning scene is equally romantic
raj cont his action or better say his excercise
plz cont soon and pm me

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