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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Hi Abi,

vice nice but shocking update.

i felt very bad for maan...especially, seeing the pictures you have included, OMG!!!! my heart just went out for MSK😭.

though i know that no one can come in between Maaneet, i couldn't ignore the shock just like that of Maan.

my brain is not working in shock. so i couldn't guess anything about this Nikhil...lol...

thanks for this thriller update dear.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: tonyahk

Hi Abi,


vice nice but shocking update.

i felt very bad for maan...especially, seeing the pictures you have included, OMG!!!! my heart just went out for MSK😭.

though i know that no one can come in between Maaneet, i couldn't ignore the shock just like that of Maan.

my brain is not working in shock. so i couldn't guess anything about this Nikhil...lol...

thanks for this thriller update dear.

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Tonya





thanx tonya for wondeful comment dear

love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
lovely update
Just like MSK me too 😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭
but plz do something to nikhil, geet is only maan's
continue soon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
the update was awesome..
sorry for late comment..
But it was so sad..
Maan's tears.. noo.. I can't bare that..😭😭
Jaldi se sab acha acha kardo..
Intresting precap.. but mee wondering..daadi faint kyun hunyi..
PS: Its ur b'day today naa.. a very happy b'day 2 u :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
PART:32
Nikhil is so happy that his geet is back...for this day he waited for many years...
geet u know from my child hood i use to come near u ...but everytime me & papa use to meet u in amritsar with the help of mama ...
we use to be with u for 3-4 days then we come back but i use to cry for u geet...u are my life but i never helped u at all
when u are here we are in london but when i came abck i thought u to get back but i heard what darji did u?
now i wont spare anyone of them...
no...pls dont do like that
what had happened is over i dont want to think baout it!!!!
i made brij veerji to be behind the bars now evrything is over i never goes to HP again so why to think about that
he keeps his face puzzeled...
yes what i m saying is right...pls dont make thsi complicate for me bai...
geet!!!!!!!!
i am just want to hear this from u
pls say agian
bai...she is in tears
i want to meet papa soon pls i want to see him pls take me near him bai...
i ll geet...
first say how did u know mann?
he helped me in the HP ...today i m alive means beacuse of him only bai he is bvery kind,nice person,
she goes on saying about mann's chracter as if nikhil dont no
she is smiling a lot with his name he keeps his face ina confusion by seeing her like that because he never saw geet in so much happy that too she is takling about mann he dont no what to do
becoz nikhil knew that mann had a past in his life
KHURANA MANSION:
here mann cant bare the sight of the geet with nikhil
he dont no but his hear is aching like anything
he is practising his tai_chi with heart break he dont what to do to feel happy that geet is happy or think about his fate
he is out of control today he is not even knowing what he is doing
he is in a fear ...he dont want to loose his geet but geet seems to be happy with nikhil but how do i dont about geet if she is frd of nikhil...
why did nikhil never said about her?
he is with me form the kid but how it happens he is my best frd in my life but he also did not say about geet anytime and he is speaking as of he knews geet whole family...
how come he knew her...
dev said she dont have any boyfrd and from 6 years nikhil and mamaa are not here then how come he knew her...
how...
he is unable to get the answer...he is frustated ...he dont no but he cant leave geet...it is his geet...only his but how can nikhil said that geet is his how he said that?
he slips and falls on the ground
he controls and thinks why it is happening to me...when i belived a girl in my life first she said that is love is said ok...but she betrayed me
now when i truly loved a girl so why she also left me
i cant leave with out her...
why u made like this...i hate u for this god
u are never with me...whom i loved much u took me away from them so only i hate emotions...
i want geet happiness for that i can do anything
if she is happy with nikhil i ll them to be happy...
i want her happiness
dadimaa is watching everything from there she cant take it anymore
she cant see her mann shattered once again she faints
dev sees that and call dadimaa!!!!!!!!!!!
by hearing to the voice mann see dadimaa is fainted in the hall
he keep her head on his lap!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and say dev to call doctor
she is not opening her eyes he is so petrified...he is waitng for mr.chohan to come
when he enter he check up dadimaa and says she is alright...but give her rest
mann goes to see dadimaa but she says she want to meet geet once
mann cant say no for dadimaa so he calls for nikhil say about dadimaa and geet arrives there
she says that she want to speak with geet alone so everyone are left from there
dadimaa calls geet near her and make her to sit and say geet!!!!!!
today u have seen me i dont no still when i live so i want to ask a favour form u beta!!!!
yes dadimaa u can...
pls search a girl for mann so that he can be married and he ll be settled in his life by that i ll be happy dear
dadimaa can observe the changing expressions in geet face but she dont want to say about that...she some where knew that geet likes mann...
so only she did this plan...
geet!!!!!!!!!! now we all leave for shimla for new project so u pls search him a girl there,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so that my problem ll be solved ...
geet dont want to show her expressions becoz she want to be far from mann so she thinks this is good
so she accepts...
she says i ll ask mann about this
dadimaa also says yes
here mann is waiting for geet to come outside so that he can talk to her
when she came out he asks what dadimaa said ?
she said dadimaa said me to search a girl for u?
he gets angry on her
what the hell u are saying he pin her to the wall
yes what u heard is right?
and that is not the hell got it!!!!!!!!!! and one more thing i ll search girl for u so say me which type of girl u want?
u are asking in such a way as if u dont no
he gets her close to his body so that he can hear breath
she controls herself and say how come i know about ur choice so say me which type of girl u want
he cant bare further and think if she wants me too get married ok geet i ll do for it u...
ok then...
listen
i want a girl who ware skirts...he thinks geet in skirt on that day
next small hair...he feels her when she is juliet
fianlly a girl whose is not from the small village...he saw her in the party...
she turn her gaze from him becoz he is staring at her
he is too irrated by her act now ...she dont want to see my face ok geet that is fine
she says ok and want to leave...
but he stops and ask by what time u get the girls for me
before we go for shimla
he cant control her answer now she is coming to shimla with us yes why not...she is life of nikhil
geet i want the best one i mean the best girl
dont worry i ll get angel for u and she says and leaves form there
he stood there and says himself that u are the angel for me so where u can get another one
now the mission begins geet ...u can get how many girls u wan but u can hear only one word that is NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he smirks...in angry


precap:mann saying no
geet complaing to dadimaa before him

sorry for mistakes
pls do comment press like button
nikhil is geet's bro how i ll say it later in the story so pls accept this track dear

TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY
SO HAVE CAKE FROM MY SIDE







Edited by abisamratgunjan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
me first
happy birthday dear🥳🥳🥳
👏awesome update👏
😃finally nikhil is geet's bhai😃
continue soon😍


Edited by allibr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: allibr

me first

happy birthday dear🥳🥳🥳
👏awesome update👏
😃finally nikhil is geet's bhai😃
continue soon😍





thanx dear
yes nikhil is her bro...


love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Happy birthday dear
awesome upd
superb
fabulous
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
happy birthday once again keenu...
i do like ur track...more because of the simplicity in it...will want to see maan's reaction once he learns that nikhil is geet's bro...
i really love it wen a bf by mistake gets jealous of his gf with her own bro...
hv a nice day...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
great part continue soon 😊

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