'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143 - Page 99

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: missglam


Awesome update! Heena, thankuuu so much sonia😊
loved it glad u loved it😊
brilliant. . Dear 😊
😊😊 chandeena r the best 😊
saas-sasur , any1 can ask for! hehe heheheh...hope har kisi ko aise hi in-laws milen
abhay n david fight was superb. . David ka band baj gaya! dat was sumthing david called up himself
Awww. . KR proposed jamie . . Wow . . But will he be able to accept jamie? I hope he does accept her ! he wl , bt needs some time😉
Abhiya moment were cute n romantic thankuuu
eagerly waiting for the next chap
thanx for the pm ma pleasure
continue soon sure wl try
tc u too

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Neytiri

Beautiful updtethankuuu so much dear.eagerly waitng 2 kno Kabir's decision.l try to update soon nd thnx a lot fr pm ma pleasure😊.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

wow
wonderful
awesome
fantastic
fabulous
amazing
sad for jamie
great

thankuuu so much dear for ur wonderful words

continue soonsure wl try😊
plz pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Hi Heena..hi dear😊 Nice update!!thanx alot😊 Loved the way you narrated the fight between Abhay and David..glad u loved it Kabir.. WIll he accept the truth?? just wait till nxt partReally waiting for it!! 👍🏼This time you didn't PM me ops i m so sry, nxt time i wl tk cr dear .. Please dear PM me next time you update..sure i wl😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: minibsp2007

👏really nice super update with lots of abhiya momentsthankuuu so much dear

I am sure that though Kabir will take some time but finally he accepts his love jamie inspite of her being a vampire ofcourse he wl..😉😉
looking forward for abhiya honeymoon.😳😳 nxt part wl b starting of their honeymoon only
update soon sure wl try

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great part...loved it...

thankuuu so much dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

Oh Oh looks like things have really gone for six now. Will Kabir ever acccept Jaime. And Abhay looks like he lost a friend. Waiting to see the final showdown of Abhay and Maithli as it looks like the prize she was waiting for is almost close.

thanx alot dear for reading n posting ur comments
cn't say nything abt final showdown , bt kabir-jamie's part, u wl get all ur answers in nxt part😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya7fan

superb update heena...👏 thankuuu so much dear😊

finally one villian dead...one to go...she wl nt go so soon

kabir finally knows the truth...hope he accepts jamie soon..😍.after all if piya can accept abhay why cant kabir....he wl surely!!!😉

abhay is very naughty.😉.. he loves teasing piya...bt their romance is out of the world...true love...😛☺️ glad u loved their part!!!

thanks for the pm👍🏼 ma pleasure😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: renuka1997

Lovely update...thankuuu so much honey😊
I always love the way you explain abhay's feelings...glad u always love them
Abhay's understand every heartbeat of piya...yes he is d one who doesn't need her words to understand her!!
At first he promised that every this will become normal...
Wid our supernatural angel...it was so sweet...
N in the last part i loved abhay-angel-piya convo...glad u enjoyed reading dat part n loved it!!
I was really excited about what's next while i was reading...
Then when angel kicked piya...
I was like from were do u get such ideas.hehehehe dear even i don't knw, while writing these ideas got struck to my mind😆..
N then loved the way u explained that piya the sunshine for both Abhay n his family...again thanx
I hate that stupid, idiot , fool, shit , David...
I felt disgusted when i read his dialogue...
How can he fall for piya...stupiddd...
N Im so happy Abhay killed that yuck guy...yipee..hehehehe bt i enjoyed writing his part n happy dat i gave an end it 😆.
Abhay...piya romance was as usual romantic...n superb...
Loved the way piya called haseena for help...hahaha...
N loved the part where piya didn't hear abhay's condition...n said okay...:-)
Haseena is really a concerned mother-in-law...

hey dear i m feeling wow d way u commented, thankuuu so much for this wonderful n deep comment😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Piya punishment for kabir was like a shock...
I thought he wont do it but he proved...believe me even i didn't think abt dat scene bf4 writing it
And the revelation of the dark secret of Jamie would really have startled him...
Hope he accepts Jamie n proves his true...he wl 😊
😊Last bit not least i was happy...
When piya proudly said she is also loving a vampire...awww i m in awe of ur words..😊
😊😊Thanx for the pm...ma pleasure dear
Continue soon...ure wl try
I will be waiting...
love u...
Renuka...
luv u loadsss
heena
thanx once again😊


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Posted: 14 years ago

😊As usual Fantabulous Update and I enjoyed each and evey bit of it..thankuuu so much hun n glad u enjoyed reading it😊.Thanx for the Pm ma pleasure and sry for late commentno worries😊 Update soonsure wl try and u know wat U r a fabulous writterthankuuu so much for ur kind words dear...[/QUOTE]

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