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Posted: 14 years ago
part-20
Jamie went down on her knees, for d first time in her 100 yrs of life, she was feeling d pain of nt being a human'she was cursing d moment when she turned into a vampire'.her dead heart was in pain!Pia n abhay both came to her n pia hugged her,carefully coming to her position!!

Pia- jamie, he wl come back, I knw him, he just need some time, its nt easy for him to accept all this thing!!!

Jamie while separating herself frm pia- pia I told u , he won't b able to do this, its all my mistake I shouldn't let this happen, how cn I forget who am I, falling in love wid a human, its all my my fault!!

Pia was feeling terrible- jamie, pls trust me, he wl come back!!

Jamie gave hopeless looks to pia n got vanished in d dark bf4 pia could av reacted!!!

Pia looked at abhay wid dat helpless feel , abhay came n made her stand n took her to d car!!!

Pia 'abhay cn v go to d church???

Abhay was all confused !!!

Pia- I wanna talk to kabir n I knw he wl b there only, I cn't see two of my frnds in so much pain!

Abhay simply drove to d church, he himself didn't knw , how to see d whole thing!!! He found himself in a deep mess, where his mind was fighting nt b/w right n wrong, bt for something else,coz he knew falling in love cn't b right or wrong , its all abt d situation, they four were in!!

Pia entered d church n abhay was behind her!!!

Pia knew very well, dat when ever kabir get into a situation where he couldn't decide b/w his heart n mind, he find solace at only one place, where he was sitting nw!!!

Pia made her way to him n abhay kept standing few feets away!!

She sat next to him n kabir knew dat only pia could be there, coz except her no one cn even think of kabir in a church!!!

Both were sitting there folding their hands n their eyes towards GOD!!

Pia- still fighting b/w ur mind n heart!!

Kabir- don't knw, how to believe on d things, going on around me!!!

Pia- d same way v believe on GOD, try to believe on his creations also, try to believe on HIS supernatural world!!! Believe on ur love for once!!!

Kabir- I cn't b strong like u!!!

Pia- I was nt , bt my love for abhay gave me d power to accept him as he is n believe me kabir, no one in this whole universe , nt even in ny other life, cn love me more than abhay n she looked at abhay who was standing there, kabir also turned to see him n then he realized dat even human cn't b as human as abhay was n what made pia fall for a vampire rather then a human being, he looked into his eyes, which were telling him, dat watever happened it was nt his fault , if anyone would av been at his place, he would av reacted in d same manner!!

Pia kept his hand on kabir's n said- kabir u love jamie n just ask frm ur heart for once, dat does it reli matter to u, dat wat she is???

Kabir kept looking pia silently n then after a long pause, he asked- where is she???

She looked at abhay wid a smile n then kabir also looked at him wid those sorry filled eyes!!!

Abhay came to him n while placing his hand on his shoulder, its ok kabir, this all was expected n she is nt angry frm u, she is angry frm herself!!!

Kabir- bt abhay I av hurt her!!!

Abhay- kabir . this is nt d time to think abt all this, come wid us, I wl tell u where u wl find her!!!

Soon three of them reached near d forest, kabir looked outside, then at abhay!!

Kabir(confused)- abhay , r u sure I wl find jamie here!! I mean its all dark n dangerous outside!!

Abhay smiled- don't worry, she is a very strong vampire kabir!!

Kabir smiled a little- oh!! I forgot!!

Abhay ' come wid me!!

Kabir- ah!!! Abhay I wl go at my own,its nt good for pia to walk so much n leaving her alone here at this time is also nt a good idea, so u guys leave , I wl manage!!!

Abhay n pia both smiled n he said- go straight n u wl find her soon, I m sure she has got ur smell till nw!!!

Kabir chuckled a little n then left!!!

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kabir was nt very comfortable while walking down d dark pathway, there was nothing normal, bt still his love for jamie was enough strong to deal wid his fears!!! soon he reached to his destination, jamie was standing silently in d middle of dat area, kabir was facing her back!!!

jamie- u shouldn't av come here kabir, its nt safe for u being here !! anyone cn hurt u!!

kabir noticed her low n lost voice, he walked towards her, while standing behind her, he said-same thing applies on u also!!! nyone cn hurt u!!

jamie turned around to see him n found those fearless cool eyes, which were trying to reach her heart once again!!

jamie- no one cn hurt a vampire so eaily kabir, specially physically no one cn!!!

d deep meaning of her words didn't go unnoticed by kabir, he made his eyes go down !!

jamir- kabir u don't need to feel guilty!! i cn understand!!! i m sorry for everything, everything kabir, she looked at him wid immense pain in her eyes!!!

kabir- jamie when u cn understand everything thing, then u should knw y i m standing here infront of u!!!

jamie kept looking at him silently when kabir brought his hands near her face , cupped it gently, he was afraid may b his touch brought cracks in her smooth, flawless, mirror like face, he felt strange , her icy skin under his hands giving shiver to him, he said- i m here for my love, i m here for u, i love u jamie, i knw i av hurt u, bt nw i knw dat love is love, it never counts whether its for human or for someone supernatural like u!!!

jamie was confused dat wat to say n so was kabir ,, bt not abt his decision, bt abt his nxt step. he slowly kept his lips on her cold one's , a sudden spark ran down his body, jamie closed her eyes, she wanted it to b a gentle -one n same wid kabir, they were living their perfect moment!!

kabir gently stopped himself n smiled a little looking at jamie- i love u jamie!!

jamie- bt kabir!!!

kabir while placing his finger on her lips, i want to explore this vampire love of mine!!

jamie smiled a little n hugged him!!!!

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while driving back to home, abhay found pia was all tired , although she was trying her best nt to doze off,she was looking content coz finally jamie-kabir were together, she was sure kabir wl bring her back, although kabir-jamie incidence had disturbed her both phsically n emotionally earlier!!!

abhay- pia u should sleep, u r looking so tired!!

pia smiled a little n said- ur angel is nt in a mood to sleep, she is playing tae-kwon-do inside me!!!

intead of smiling at pia's words, abhay got worried n asked- is she hurting u??? pia replied- nt xactly abhay, watever she is doing, its all human n so special for me, she gently placed her hand on her tummy n smiled!!

abhay-bt pia, angel cn't control her powers!!!she is so young to do dat!!

pia- abhay i understand, bt i don't want her to stop these small human acts of her,just coz of those supernatural acts which she herself doesn't knw properly!!

abhay went all quiet, pia's love for him n his child, has already crossed d human boundaries!!!

abhay quietly connected himself to angel n said- angel b carefull my princess!! i knw u cn't hurt ur mom, bt u knw na u still cn't hold ur powers!!!

angel- i knw dad, i won't hurt mom, bt i cn feel her happiness when she feel me inside her!!!

abhay smiled while looking at his small human-supernatural world!!

soon they reached home, bt even after trying her best, pia dozed off!!! abhay smiled looking at his sleeping beauty, he parked d car n came to her side, he gently tucked few strands of her hair behind her ears n kissed her forehead, he bent down n carried her in his arms, wid utmost care, like she was a flower n a little hard touch would crush her!! he took her directly to d room n made her lie down comfortably on d bed!!

he was abt to cover her frm sheet, when he noticed few light bluish marks around her tummy,he slowly touched them, they were so light, dat pia was nt feeling ny pain, bt abhay was!! he kissed those marks, so dat his cold touch brought her skin color back to normal!!

abhay covered her wid sheet n left !!!

he came out of washroom n took out pia's night clothes frm wardrobe n came to her, he helped her in changing n again she dozed off quickly,

...

nxt morning pia woke up around 6, she was looking fresh n when she saw him , he had almost done wid their packing!!!

he came to her n while rubbing his lips on her he said- morning love!!! pia resting her head on his shoulder- mrng abhay!!

abhay- ready to explore austria wid me?? nxt 144 hours just 2 of us!!!

pia smiled shyly while entwining her fingers in his n said- hmmm!!! bt u r wrong abhay she said while looking at him, nt just two of us, three of us!!!

abhay smiled n said- ofcourse three of us!!

...

after a while raichand family reached at airport!!

haseena was instructing abhay regarding pia's health while chand n pia were all enjoying looking at abhay's condition, during their whole journey frm home to airport abhay was just listening to haseena's words, which were basically carrying d same meaning through different ways ,"tk cr of my daughter"

when finally pia came to haseena n hugged her n said- mom, when abhay is wid me, u don't need to be so much worried abt me n i knw ,u knw this!!

haseena smiled n said- i knw pia, bt still, i cn't take ny chance wid u, there is no room for ny mistake, u knw this!!

pia- i knw mom. bt

haseena while cressing her cheek- i knw pia, abhay cn take care of u in all best possible ways, he won't allow nyone to come near u n i trust my son!!!

abhay-pia both smiled n hugged her n haseena n chand left after some time!!!

pia- abhay both were waiting for d last announcement when they saw jamie-kabir, dat joy ,contentment n peace on their faces were enough to xplain d story of their last night!!!

d four hugged each other

pia- i thought u two might av forgotten, although i understand, it happens!! she winked at both of them

jabir- finally someone has got a chance to pull my leg

pia- how cn i leave it!!!

last announcement was made soon!!!

finally kabir while hugging pia said- av fun chimpunk wid ur love all alone there!!! pia smiled n whispered- u too kR n tc of jamie!!

kabir hugged abhay n jamie also n after wishing them all d best, they left to their home n abhay-pia to their dream desitination!!!

...

abhay-pia's journey was of almost 10 hours long!!

after 10 hours they reached to their destination" AUSTRIA"

they came out of d Munich airport n pia 's baby brown eyes leaving all d unrest behind, started cherishing d beauty of their first n foremost destination munich !! it was all peace around, cold breeze was touching her beautiful milky skin, temperature was quiet low there, giving shivers to her, abhay noticed her beautiful smile first n then her shivering body, he took out her warm jacket n covered around her!!!

pia smiled looking at him n said- splendid!!!

abhay brought her closer n said-beauty lies in d eyes of viewer!!!

pia smiled still admiring d scenic beauty of d place, while standing in his strong arms, d most safest place for her

abhay hired a cab n then he had a talk wid d driver in german n he told him to take them to hotel vier jahreszeiten kempinski!!!1

while taking their seats at back, pia aksed abhay- u knw german!!!

abhay while smiling he said- frm last so many years, i av learnt many languages pia n german is one of them!!

pia while snuggling a little in abhay's arms, she asked cn u pls tel me a little abt this place!?

abhay while covering his arms around her- pia in short ,munich is located on d river ishar north of the bavarian alps!! the amazing danube river serves as a divinding line b/w the modern linz n its old soul, with its castle, churches n early buildings, all which fan out frm the central hauptplatz(austria's medieval town square) n its capital is bavaria!!!

Soon abhay-pia reached their destination, pia's couldn't stop herself frm admiring dat snow covered building, looking like a royal palace , decorated specially for them!!

Abhay took pia to their suite which kabir booked for them'pia was in awe of d beauty of d place n abhay was simply amazed by kabir's choice!!! It was classy!!

Suite was housed silk upholstered walls, fresh flowers, and ornate crystal chandeliers that glitter from seven-meter high stucco ceilings.

Fashioned in the manner of the Schnbrunn Palace, suite was featuring one luxurious bedroom with a possibility of three additional connecting rooms and a grand living area bathed in natural light. Authentic nuances come from antique porcelain ovens and star-patterned parquet floors that have been preserved and carefully restored
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Aristocratic, padded double-folding doors open to generous, historical bedrooms.

Marble bathrooms present a soothing, end-of-the-day sanctuary supplemented by exclusive Bulgari bath amenities!!

Pia was admiring each n every single thing of dat suite!!! Finally she came n stood near d window n found dat whole area was covered wid white sheet of snow, giving heavenly feel to her!!!

Abhay came n stood nxt to her n while entwining his fingers wid her, pia smiled n said while looking at him- isn't this moment perfect???

Abhay bent down towards her n said- nt yet, then he took her cold face in his hands n touched those pink soft lips wid his, pia literally got shivered coz of his cold touch, she felt her lips got free zed for a moment bt finally she brought her soft cold hands around his neck, pia controlling her shivers, she responded to his passionate kiss wid her all energy, bt soon abhay found pia's body going numb due to extreme low weather n his cold touch, he gently stopped himself, holding her securely frm her waist!!

He carefully took her to d bed, made her sit, he took out her slippers n then he covered her frm warm, fluffy blankets!!

Pia was all smiling shyly n then she said slowly- abhay I need to change!!!

Abhay smiled- let me help u, u cn change here only, bt bf4 dat I need to make a call, abhay ordered two coffees wid some hot pancakes!!! Meanwhile pia thought of ,to go n change herself, bt playing wid her vampire husband was nt possible for her, he held her back frm her wrist, while giving smirk to her, he said- y u always try , when u knw I cn get my work done very easily by putting least of my efforts!!!

Bt bf4 abhay could av done nything, his cell starts ringing, pia while raising her eye brows said- better luck nxt time, she quickly took something warm n comfortable for her n ran to d washroom!!

Abhay- I won't leave u for this pia, while cursing his bad timings, he answered d call, it was haseena's call, just to knw whether they reached or nt !!!

After hanging down d phone, abhay was waiting for pia to come out, soon she came out wearing her lowers n warm hoddie , she was all smiling!!!

Abhay was abt to take his steps towards her, when someone knocked at d door, abhay literally closed his eyes in lil frustration while pia was all trying to hold her laugh, she went n took d order, which abhay placed !!!

Pia came n sit on d chair while placing d tray on d table!!

Pia- abhay u won't give company to me??

Abhay- ya sure, he came n sat infront of her, y only company for this, nw for nxt 6 days I wl give u company for each n everything which u wl do n he winked at her, leaving her cheeks turning scarlet red!!

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow heena Awesome.I loved it.Finally jamie-kabir r together😛.Happy 4 thm but more excited 4 Abhiya lil honeymoon.Oh I loved the way haseena was giving instructions 2 Abhay haha😆.But above all tht lil teasing scene of Abhiya.In all fab update😳

LUV U🤗
Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome heena. great to see kabir coming around.
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Superbb update Heenu 👏 👏
Ok I will start from the start coz u know meri analysis lambi hone wali hai 😆
Jamie and Kabir...emotions were very well described Heenu...love u for that... specially Jamie's 😳
Now coming to Haseena... show me bhi she's the only one jiske samne Abhay ki bhi nehi chalti 🤣 Abhay confronts Chand but Haseena k hissing ke samne Abhay bhi chup...i totally felt the vibe here too 😆
Hai... aise saans mile to kya kehna😍
Now coming to my Abhiya... i have a thing for the Europe u know and I have few countries in my list which are for must visited before death if god helps me to...austria is in num 3 of tht 😳
Absolutely loved the description of hotel, interior and weather...have u been thr? it was perfect dear 👏
and offcourse abhiya naughtiness loved it... lots of honeymoon romance wanted in next update 😉
Luv u 🤗

P.s: we updated at the same day again...kya pyaar hai 🤣

Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey heena di...awsm updt dear...👏lvd d way u portrayd kabir n pia's frndship n undrstandng...m so glad kabir acceptd jamie...😃dt church thng ws truly beautiful...⭐️awww...i lv haseena yaar...c s a splendid woman...😳so abhiya finally off to dr honymoon...😳my goh...u av dscribd d plc beautifully...hats off to u 4 das...👏abhay ka to kya kehna...😍har mauke pwe chauka maarna chahta hai...☺️*ahem ahem* so hes gonna gv xmpany to pia 4 everythng,ehh????...mai to avi se oxygem mask pehen ke baith gai hu...🤣do cont soon wd ur sizzlng abhiya ronance...😳me wtng eagrly...lv ya loadxsss...🤗
Edited by purple_shadoz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
the way u gave details abt this heavenly place munich nd abhiyas room i thought i m seeing dem frm my eyes over der... i loved ur post dear... u r really good... hats off to u 👏 🤗 plz update soon cant wait
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it
Finally kabir accepted Jeremy
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Edited by Pari-Gupta - 14 years ago
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Hey heena u r jst awsm.i dont hav any words to describe how much i loved this update.superb n thanks 4 d pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
what to say another fab update
truly out of this world👏👏👏👏👏
jamie and kabir part was very well written
u have expressed their emotions really nicely
angel abhay's little convo was so cute really she is a blessing to abhiya😃
haseena teaching abhay in the car about pia''s health and he was listening like an obedient student😆😆😆 really gr8 only haseena can do this
and ur explaination of austria was spectacular now i will consider it to be a place to elope with my boyfriend if i will find one😉😆😆
but i think i will never becoz i m so much in love with abhay that i can't even look at anyone else and ur ff has really hightened this love😳😆
😆😆the way abhay is looking after pia has really made him too high in my eyes☺️
hoping to read gr8 honeymoon romance in the coming update
thanks for pm and update soon

Edited by shivanirajput - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...

thanx for pm

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