'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: abhiora

nice 1 thanx dear 😊!!plz pm me wen u update..thanx.sure i wl do it😊.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: renuka1997

lovely update thanx dear😊

pleeez pm me sure😊
continue soon wl try to do so😊
love u
renuka😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Wow...kya likha hai dude.thankuuu hun😊..me toh kho gayi awww😊😛...ff me...u r sch an awesum writer thankuuu so much glad u r liking ma story😊...me toh chullu bhar pani me doob marungi...😆...loved the way u described their lob...their intimacy...piya pain.😊..wht's up with abhay-metz...??? i cn sense tht its nt the truth...he loves her...the new char is really vry interesting...abhiya's child...photo dikana dude.yaar let her take birth ...the i wl paka try to find out a photograph specially for u😉..😆....continue soon...zyada intezar mat karwana...Im vry impatient...😆😆😆 sure wl try to do it asap 😊...waise i m totally flat on ur superb cool comments😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Woww... that was awwsomeee Henna 👏 👏 thanx hun😊

Wanna read more...please continue soon...sure dear wl try to do it asap Abhay's pain made me saddd 😭 I guess he didn't cheated and it's all a misunderstanding..u wl come to knw abt this very soon 😉.please bring them together soon ops...it wl take some time😉... and add me to your PM list plz sure dear😊 😃

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part-2


flashback ends...

piya came out of her thoughts
jamey couldn't believe what pia told her about abhay...bt she said nthing...she just hugged pia...n told her dat everything wl b fine...bt she knew dat a bigger thunder is waiting for them... pia-abhay -mathali- pia's child...she needs to connect these broken pieces bt don't knw how...
jamey after separating piya frm her- pia frm where did u confirm u preganacy...
pia- i knw jamey dat ma child is nt a normal one...i just took a risk n went to a near by hospital to get it confirmed ...bt then i called u up...coz i knw i need someone like u only
jamey(this gal..i cn't believe this is doing al possible things to save our clan by putting herself in danger)- thanx pia for trusting me
pia gave her a smile n hugged her...
jamey-pia i knw some one who cn help u here!!
pia- who??
jamey- tomorrow wl b going there to meet him...
pia (while smiling)- sure...nw u r wid me...i av no worries
jamey(in her mind)- thanx for ur trust bt pia u urself don't knw dat this decision is going to change ur life 4ever
..................
nxt early morning piya n jamey reached at a hospital...it was on outer skirts of new jersey near a forest...
pia was quite confused coz she was xpecting something reli different nt a hopsital thing...bt she said nthing
jamey- pia (at reception) ...jamey- i want to met DR david
receptionsit- do u av any appointment ma'am
ja- ya i do av...frm d name of piya jaiswal..
recep- ya...ma'am u just go straight n take a left...room no 111...u wl find him there
ja- thanx
pia- y v r here jamey...
ja- pia dr.david ...he is vampire...(bt after yrs of practice...nw he is one of most famous doctor of new jersey..n u cn trust him...jamey assured her...that she n her baby wl b in safe hand)
pia found dat trust in jamey's eyes...
finally they entered dr david's room
dr. david- hi jamey. hi pia- av a seat ( he gave his best smile)
(ok guys i av chorified this character frm twilight character of dr. carlisle...n in d same way david was smart , handsome, pale in colour bt he was just in his late 20's)
ja- hi david...thanx alot for taking out ur precious time for us...bt its important u knw...she said while moving her head towards pia...who was already quite unsure abt trusting david
david- hi pia...how r u?
pia( quite worried)- thanx dr...i m fine !!!
david(directly coming to d point)...pia i knw u r nt aware abt this whole stuff n being a human being u av already seen enough coz of us...bt i cn assure u cn trust me...i promise i wl b always at ur side wnever u need me...bt for dat u av to tel everything to me whatver u r feeling frm last few days n most important thing pia i knw abt u n abhay looking towards jamey...so u cn tel me nything whatever u feel like!!!
pia this time(although she thought dat was quite fast bt didn't say nything) m gave a satisfactory smile to him...
david-pia thanx for trusting me...!!
pia(trying to b normal bt there was a hesitation in her voice n then jamey placed her hand on shoulder while giving everything wl b ok look to her)- dr actually i knw a bit abt pregnancy symptoms bt in my case i don't knw sometimes i feel xtreme pain at a sudden n sometimes i feel d baby is trying to talk to someone n i feel like eating each n every moment ...like ma diet has increased 4 or 5 times frm ma normal diet wid in just few days
david-ok pia as u knw this child is a vampire's child so abt diet it wl increase more wid ur passing pregnancy months...coz pia till d time this baby is inside... he/she wl survive on watever u take in ur diet bt ofcourse quantity wil more like 4 or 5 times more than ur normal diet...n it wl b difficult for u to av so much of food coz u r just human...u feel like puking most of d time...n many more symptoms like this due to over eating...
n rest abt d pain thing n talking symptoms i need to check u first...pls cn u just come wid me...
pia(this time a bit relaxed)- ya sure
three of them moved towards a door inside dat room only...david open dat door n pia n jamey followed him...
david- pia cn u just lay down on ur back on dat hospital bed...so dat i cn xamine u properly!!
pia followed her instuctions!!
david started wid his xamination...n as soon as he placed his hand on pia's stomach...he felt somethimg very strong...bt he kept himself calm n composed...n wid few more of his xaminations...he helped pia to come out of dat room ...n three of them made their way towards d earlier place where they were sitting
pia was looking anxiously towards david
david- pia listen to me carefully...tel me r u sure u want to keep this child??
pia ( a bit scared bt still)... yes dr!!! widout any second though she said
david (quite surprised coz he knew dat mom's r like this only bt carrying a vampire child in her womb in such a small age...n fully aware of d consequences)-pia ur child is a hybrid child n going to b one of most powerful child in our clan...carrying her for 9 months in ur womb going tob most difficult 9 months of ur life...she is much powerful den u cn even think of...u r body is nt so strong...n ya ofcourse ur child is baby girl...
pia (hearing this a smile crept on her face n now she got it dat all this is supernatural stuff although she was a bir scared bt still happy)...)
david- n d most important thing pia...this child cn connect herself to her father...i mean she is already trying this bt wid in a month or 15 days she wl b able to dat easily...
pia felt a pang of pain hearing those words n (jamey was also shocked)...this could av been d last thing pia would av ever wished!!!
pia(trying nt to cry) so it means dr abhay wl come nt knw abt his child??
david- yes very soon!!! n one more thing pia after xamining u n d way u telling me abt dat pain...i m nt sure bt i think d baby inside u cn't hold emotional pangs eassily...so u need to control ur feelings n emotions specailly d pain, d hatred, d anger!!
jamey- pia u reli want to keep this child...??
pia(was now frustrated)- how many times i need to tel u jamey...at any cost i wl nt abort this child n dats final...n suddenly pia felt immense pain inside her stomach
pia(while holding her stomach) =--ouuuch n tear rolled down her cheek..
jamey kept her hand on pia shoulder in worry...n david came to her while giving her support he said ...calm down pia...n don't get hyper...plsss it wl hurt u
finally after few min. of pain pia felt relief n david understood he was right abt emotions thing...
jamey- i m sorry pia...i didn't want to hurt u...
pia(also feeling guilty)-- me too sorry jamey..
they both passed a smile to each other
jamey- david so wen v need to come again...
david- i wl give a call jamey...first i need to do some more research!!
pia- thanx dr...
david-- no need of thanx pia...bt i av request to u...pls call me david...(while passing a genuine smile)
pia- ok thanx david...
david gave side hug to both d gals...n they left...
...............

on their way pia was driving...
jamey- hey piya so tel me...where is ma party...(she was trying to b normal...like no more worries)
pia-party for wat??
jamey(while giving a saddy look)- dats nt fair pia...we av a sold reason ...i m going to become "maasi" soon...so i want ma treat
pia( somewhere she also wanted a break frm all this scary things going around her)- she passed a sweet smile to jamey...maasi...wow jamey nt bad...seems u av spent many yrs in learning hindi...
jamey- ofcourse pia i knw most of d languages dat d biggest advantage of being a vampire u cn get as many degree as u want
pia n jamey laughed ...
pia-..ok tel me where do u want to go
jamey- wat abt a disc + bar...n she winks at pia
pia(rolled her eyes)- jamey...
jamey- pls na pia...don't give me those teacher like looks..
pia(while smiling)- fine...v r going to reverb ...
jamey--- wowww...i thought u wl say no...bt seems this place has changed u...n cn i call david also (she gave her chreppy smile to pia)
pia(scrastically)- wats going on
jamey-- hold on ...there is nthing like this...i just want a male company for both of us..u knw...
pia- ok gt it (while smiling)...bt bf4 dat i need to finish some of ma pending work...bt most important thing i wanna av something nw i m hungry...
............
after few hours...pia stuffed herself wid as much food as she could av for her whole day meals...
jamey was nt surprised...
............
n after dat pia n jamey reached pia's office dat was an interior decoration house...
jamey-- wow pia u worked as an interior decorator...i m impressed
pia- thanx...actuallly this is ma frnd's decoration house...v both worked together...
they entered into a well furnished, beautiful office...everything was prefect there...
they moved towards a cabin...
pia(at d entrance)- may i come in sir
d guy who was there in d cabin...looked at pia n flaunted his best smile...n said ...frm when av u started asking me bf4 entering into cabin...my chipmunk
they entered d cabin n d guy came towards n they both hugged each other...
guy- where d hell were u...no calls...no msg...i was missing u...
pia( while lookiing at guy)- oh!! i m sry KR...i was busy wid some stuff ..i m sorry(while making those sweet puppy like faces)...n then she looked at jamey
pia- KR meet jamey...n jamey he is KR...ops i mean kabir rathore...ma boss, ma bestfrnd...n ma partner in crime...
kabir(giving a genuine smile to jamey)- hi jamey...nice to c u here...n i must say u r truely beautiful...n hope u r single n ready to mingle
pia(while hitting on his shoulder)- shut up KR..stop flirting...atleast for a moment cn u behave like a gentle man...n don't u think dat was quite fast
kabir(while pouting)- dats nt fair chimpunk...look i m flirting like a gentleman n i cn't afford to lose any single moment of ma flirtng wid such a beautiful lady!!
pia(giving him.."stop it nw" KINDA looks)
kabir- ok fine..u knw na i cn't say nything infront of u...i m like a "bheegi billi)
pia(smiling)- no one cn win frm u KR...
kabir- i knw ma swt little chimpunk...while pulling her cheeks...
n jamey was smiling whole d time by seeing dose swt moments b/w pia n kabir
pia- pls don't mind jamey ..KR is like this only...
jamey- dats completely fine pia...i cn see he is a big time flirt..
kabir- oh man u gals r too much
pia- ok fine KR lets go back to d work...just give those pending project files...i wl finish this work by tomorrow...
kabir- ya sure...just give me a sec...
kabir handed few files to pia...n said- v need to finsh this project by this week pia...
pia- ya sure KR..v wl surely do this...n yes would u like to join us??
kabir(while giving confused looks)...where?
pia- ur fav place
kabir(like an impatient child)- reverb...
pia while nodding her in yes...
kabir- wowww...n r u going to pay for ma drinks(while winking at her)
pia- ya ma poverty ridden KR
kabir- lov u n it means jamey n me wl b together
pia- ops sorry kabir nt possible ...jamey has already found someone else
kabir(while placing his hand on his heart ) - u broke ma heart jamey
jamey- sry kabir...ma partner is a doctor...if u reli want he cn make it...
kabir-nt reli i i wl find some else for this job...wat say pia
pia(while smiling )- ya KR as always...ok v r leaving nw.n u r going to meet me directly at reverb sharp at 8 ...
kabir- dat wl b gr888...c u at disc chimpunk while giving hug to pia...bye tk cr both of u n reli nice meeting u jamey
pia- u too tk cr KR
jamey- bye kabir...c u soon!
...

pia-jamey n david reached d reverb...where kabir was waiting for them...
pia introduces david to kabir...
pia- KR u r looking reli nice...
kabir- ...n u r also looking pretty...like u laways look chimpunk...
n they enetered d disc...
they four were dancing...
kabir to david- dude u look so young...bt ur achievements r like wowww...
david- thanx kabir...
kabir found david very nice n same wid david...they four were reli happy in each other compnay..
pia- KR i wanna av something to drink...lets go...u guys enjoy till then she said to david n jamey...
david n jamey passed a smile to her...
kabir n piya headed towards bar...kabir ordered a coke for piya n a drink for him n then they found a place to sit there only...
pia while sipping her coke...
pia-kabir i wanna tell u sumthing
kabir who was busy wid his drink n looking towards a group of gals...looked at pia...he understood dat there was sumthing serious dats y pia was calling him kabir...nt KR
kabir- ya tel me pia...
pia(while gasping)- kabir i m pregnant!!!
kabir was shocked...although he always felt this dat pia was aving some past bt ...
kabir was quite for few sceonds n looking directly into pia's eyes...n then he kept his hands on her hands...
kabir politely- congrats pia...n don't worry i m nt going to ask nything abt this...i m reli happy dat u trusted me to this xtent n told me this at ur own...n suddenly a tear fell down frm her eye...she always knew dat kabir was someone who understands her...bt like dis she never expected...
kabir- oh chimpunk pls don't cry n he came towards her n gave her a hug!!!

...

in india...at raichand's mansion


abhay opened his eyes wid a jerk...he was sitting on a rocking chair
haseena who was sitting near abhay placed her hand on his shoulder...wats wrong wid u abhay...u r always so restless...i knw watever has happened b/w u -pia- mathali ishurting u...bt u need some peace abhay.. look at urself...
abhay while looking straight ( pain n hatered both were visible on his face)
abhay- mom...i don't knw bt i think someone is trying to connect her/him self wid me...i cn feel someone!!
haseena was confused at abhay's words...wat r u saying abhay...u want to say pia is trying to ...
abhay while cutting her in b/w- no mom its nt pia...she wl never try to connect wid me...never mom i knw...bt there is somone very close to me doing this...
haseena was reli feeling bad for her son...n she said abhay av some rest...atleast for sometime...
abhay- how cn i rest mom when ma heart ( he stopped in b/w)
haseena while completing his sentence when ur heart is still in pain...right abhay
abhay while looking at mom like a child in pain...mom i want to knw where is she, i want to knw is she fine...i want to appolizise her...for once i want to c pia mom...!!!
haseena while looking at him helplessly ...bahay u knw v cn't do nything, untill unless she wl try to connect herslf to u again
abhay - n she wl never do dat...
haseena left dat place widout saying nything more...
n abhay closed his eyes...started thinking abt dat moment when pia left him forever...d moment she ran away frm d jungle...
...

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awesome update very interesting..liked it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yaar awesome update.Ur FF is so nice.Now I really wnts 2 know story frm Abhay's point of view.I hope soon Abhiya meet agn😊.Thnx 4 PM.plz update fast😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow really i m in owe at ur writing skills👍🏼 gr8 depiction of turmoil going inside piya really liked the way piya ready to sacrifice everything for her baby
sop here kabir dont know about abhay he is just piya's boss interesting i hope soon the baby will connect to abhay and piya and abhay will clarify their differences😊
thanks for the pm
very excited about the next part do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update, hope Abhay ko Piya or baby ke bare m jalde pta chl jae, or Abhiya sath ho jae.
thanx for pm dr.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww! Its so lovely Heena! I love pia's confidence n love fo her baby. I hope Abhay finds out soon. And Kabir! Oh he's so adorable. I would love him and Jamie as a couple. David is very very kind. Love him just like Carlisle. KEEP IT UP HONEY!

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