'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: I-love-Roses

Awesome! Lovely! Fantastic! Fabulous! Heart touching! You're a terrific writer Heena.omg shalini...i cn't believe this...u made ma day dear...thanx alot for such wonderful comments😊 Hats off to you. thankuuu so much 😊The story'r really beautiful.😊 Jamie reminded me of A Walk to Remember u r right i chorified her name!!!šŸ˜‰. Feeling so sorry for Pia. There has to be a reason that Abhay did this.wait n watch Continue soon wl try to do so😊.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Wow...kya likha hai dude...me toh kho gayi...ff me...u r sch an awesum writer...me toh chullu bhar pani me doob marungi...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...loved the way u described their lob...their intimacy...piya pain...wht's up with abhay-metz...??? i cn sense tht its nt the truth...he loves her...the new char is really vry interesting...abhiya's child...photo dikana dude...continue soon...zyada intezar mat karwana...Im vry impatient...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Woww... that was awwsomeee Henna šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Wanna read more...please continue soon... Abhay's pain made me saddd 😭 I guess he didn't cheated and it's all a misunderstanding...please bring them together soon... and add me to your PM list plz 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: M2NZ

Wow !

nice story line building up thanx dear😊
too much eager to read further
please add me in ur pm list sure😊
and update sooon! wl try to do so😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! thanx alot hun😊 glad u liked it...So by the looks of it, Abhay is hiding something from Piya and hasn't technically "betrayed" her.wait and watchšŸ˜‰ Eagerly looking forward to the mystery behind this!😊 Continue soon 😊 surely try to do so😊 Oh and can you please add me to the PM list? ya sure😊Thanks!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ifrah.

hey liked it awesome part...:) thanx dear...glad u liked it 😊poor abhay...really interesting...:) thanx and thanks for the pm :) 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sunu123

I JST LUV UR FF..thankuuu so much hun😊.CONT SOON wl try to do do AND ME ADD IN UR PM LIST sure 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: minibsp2007

Nice story line😊 thanx dear😊, Pm me when u update sure dear😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

wow what a cool story awww thanx dear...glad u liked it 😊trust me while reading i can almost feel the pain of abhay and piya i was almost 😭 realising the grief of piya i m reli touched by ur words dear...😊😊

i hope soon abhay will get a chance to explain everything to piya and he will be happy at the news of becoming father for this u need to wait for some timešŸ˜‰
i really loved ur story thanxkuuu 😊so add me to ur pm list sure😊
plzzz

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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: missglam

wow !! wat an update...šŸ‘ thanx 😊

the story is awesome...i m glad u r liking ma story😊
i felt so bad for pia..how can abhay betray her?..😭
but then while reading the last part..i felt that abhay also loved pia..but something is stopping him from accepting his love...šŸ˜• wait for sometime...u wl surely come to knw abt d whole truth behind al thisšŸ˜‰
GOD! maithli makes my blood boil...😔 i cn assure u after knwing d whole truth u would like 2 kill heršŸ˜‰
i hope..abhay clears all the misunderstandings...soon😊 nt so soon n easilyšŸ˜‰
thanks for the update & pm.. u r most welcome😊
continue soon...wl surely try to do so😊
do pm me .. when u update ! sure
tc u too😊

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