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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

W*F 😲 this neel guy deserve to die I hate such ppl ...

u knw I really appreciate u for writing this story ...this is a hard truth that such nasty things actually happns in reall ...but each girl doesn't have maan to save her 😊 hope he is always able to save her ...its really scary nd sensitive topic the caution given by is indeed needed...

applause to you 👏

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

awesome story! that neel is disgusting :@

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

lenaaa i read both the parts...

i'm drenched in sadness..coz it all seems so true. this is the reason y i didn't pusue social work. though i luvd the cause but it was choking me to death...and..now i think u'll b the death of me 😭

the way the story is going i can't even hope that maan will b there everytime. he is only 16..can't really start living in geet's room or can't marry her to free her from neel forever. only geet herself has to eventually fight the demon..lets c how u write the story...

well written, well chalked out and thus a major reason contributing to my watery eyes and heavy heart.

i wish u were a horrible writer, with half sentences, horrible grammar and cliche' lines...then i wud happily walk away from u'r writing. 😒

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

lena do u remember

the story where the girl actually chopped off his part 👍🏼

that was real too...oh comon lena i had to give myself sum hope here.

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Alisha

@luv angel

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Amazing!! So simple and the story is well written!
Thanks for the pm

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Eww that Neel is

I so hate him

Maan is fab

Loved his care n concern

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fizza25

@fizza25

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

😭

hope geet gets saved 4 the devil neel!!!!

continue sooon!!!!!!!

Edited by fizza25 - 14 years ago

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XXaquafireXX

@XXaquafireXX

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

I want to tie Neel's d*** to a big boulder and haul him off a cliff over the ocean! GRRR I loathe him so freakin' much!!!!😡😡😡

I'm happy that Maan came to Geet's rescue...i just hope that he is there for her when she needs him......especially whenever that pedophile is hovering around. How come her mother doesn't see through him?!🤢

Wonderful update, waiting for the next one!