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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#291

dear i just compete dis ff...

its really very nice n intresting story...

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

WILL BE UPDATED SOON.
LIVE UPDATE.
(Idk if it'll be completed today.)

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

REMOVED FOR PERSONAL PURPOSES

Edited by .Lena. - 13 years ago

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XXaquafireXX

@XXaquafireXX

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Oh no no no no no no Lena no no no no no you didn't!!!!!😡

I'm not liking this mentally imbalanced psychotic freakazoid wielding any style or form of weaponry, ESPECIALLY near the presence of Maaneet. Poor Maanu got sliced...😭

Well, all I can hope for now is for them to run like there is no tomorrow and for Mr. I'm Going To Chop Anyone Because I Am Your Father to fall in a ditch...a very very deep ditch.

Update soon!⭐️

EDIT:

I totally forgot to talk about Vicky. The way you narrated Vicky's dismemberment was very accurate. I can see that entire scene replaying in my head even as I type this...thanks a bunch.

Lol jk...

Poor Vicky. Neel is so horrible...he's the one who deserves to go up in flames.

Edited by XXaquafireXX - 14 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#295

awesome update i was more violent than previous parts plz dont do anything to maan and also geet continue soon

Edited by abinash079 - 14 years ago

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#296

the way you described Geet , feeling peaceful, as if drugged by the lulling monotonous visual of passing trees.. super.

rest, sounds ominous.😳.. waiting..

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WHA-!! WHAT!!! WH-- !

'HAPPY READING'?!!!😲 REALLY?!!😲

I am not even sure I wanna continue at all!! I'm..am... stunned. and.. and... sickened.

that was one brutal narration. so well written, I don't think I m sleeping tonight.😳

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#297

awesome ... superb ... loved part 6

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#298

i skimmed through to just get the jist of it as i can't really take the details😳...but i think it was a very dumb move of maan to run after neel like that...he should have never gone into the woods...ufff i hope somehow maan grabs the ax an dends neel's life for good...i hope that neel does not get a hold of geet...or maybe geet grabs the ax and ends neel's life...somehow neel has to end now...😭

and you are writing superbly😊😃👏 (we should give you more smiley faces)