Once upon a time in a fairytale - P7 Pg18

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Hey Mohini...🤗
Love the update dear.

You can feel Arnav's restlessness at not being able to control the situation or his feelings. I love the effect Arnav and Khushi have on each other...its unexplained but so apparent.

The rain at the end was a great touch. It completely adds to the scene and the attached feelings. Arnav's dialogue about the rain and love towards the end was fantastic!!!

Great work hun (sorry for going on a bit...😆)

Looking forward to the next part!!!

😊

Hey Zeba 🤗

Wow thank you so much for such beautiful comments. Thanks for liking Arnav's dialogue! His dialogue meant a lot to me! Hey don't worry about going on at all 😳 it is all very humbling!

Thanks again for your lovely comments darling! 😊

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Traxy101
Very nice chapter and story

Thank you so much dear! 😳

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Zahra

@Minnie.

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

lovelly update sisss thanks 4 linkk

ohh look at khushi all snappy snappy lol

cant tell u that lmaoo

bless ya lovely update thankss 4 posting up

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Awesome awesome awesome You should try in films for the stories, update soon👍🏼

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Minnie.
lovelly update sisss thanks 4 linkk
ohh look at khushi all snappy snappy lol
cant tell u that lmaoo
bless ya lovely update thankss 4 posting up

Hey thanks so much darling for the sweet comments😳!! 🤗

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: murphy369
Awesome awesome awesome You should try in films for the stories, update soon👍🏼

WOW!!! That is a seriously humbling compliment! I never thought of it that way but thank you so much for liking my FF so much! I truly appreciate the encouragement. 😳

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Awesome work Mohini!

LOL Iti's such a wannabe, following my ASR everywhere *sniff*

Aw I liked both of ArHi's interactions :)

Iti told Khushi that she's Arnav's gf...AS IF! In her dreams *snorts*

Ooh lost in each other's eyess! Aur woh bhi baarish mein!! how romantic!

seriously, loved it!! sachi muchi fairytale...and you fairy writer😛

Edited by Suvi7884 - 14 years ago

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Suvi7884
Awesome work Mohini!
LOL Iti's such a wannabe, following my ASR everywhere *sniff*

Aw I liked both of ArHi's interactions :)

Iti told Khushi that she's Arnav's gf...AS IF! In her dreams *snorts*

Ooh lost in each other's eyess! Aur woh bhi baarish mein!! how romantic!

seriously, loved it!! sachi muchi fairytale...and you fairy writer😛

Aww thanks darling! 😳🤗

Yeah Iti's a bit annoying and dreams up a lot of crap 😆

WOW girl you are giving me serious compliments here ☺️ thanks again dear you are a ⭐️

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: mohini4u

Aww thanks darling! 😳🤗

Yeah Iti's a LOTannoying and dreams up a lot of crap 😆

WOW girl you are giving me serious compliments here ☺️ thanks again dear you are a ⭐️

You're welcome🤗, and u get it because you deserve it, itna sharmao mat😆