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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rahul - oh god pregnancy main u couldn't stand that cheesy smell.
Nt - ussen bhi kanha pasand tha
then they both said it together ..uske genie.. ka fav .. pasta.. uff!!
rahul sighed - u were 7th month pregnant right!
Nt - nahi nahi.. I was 8th month when I shifted here.
Rahul - oh yah.. rany was born after wat... 25 days of shifting here right
Nt smiled .. she was so excited. Yaad hain pura room decorate kiya tha usne
rahul - u remember how she used to see rany in awe..
Nt - not only rany.. she used to see also in awe
rahul - wat?
Nt - she is to love the way u used to manage rany & the way u used to care abt me..
rahul.. could feel the invariable emphasis she brought in while saying used to care abt me. He softly kissed her shoulder. She snapped & looked away.. ignoring his care.
Nt - she used to relate our relationship with hers & genie's
rahul - arren uska naam Maan hain..
nt - yah right!! how am I supposed to know.. she always addressed him as genie
rahul shook his head.. I know.. uska genie kisa start hota tho khatam nahi hota tha.
Nt - remember that bday gift..
rahul - OMG how can I forget that, u actually confused her that day
nt - wats the point she still didn't realize

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they couldn't stop rolling back to her first bday without genie in US. Rany was just born so Nt & rahul both were home for a week together. Geet was really excited. She had ordered cake. Made mama-papa send her new dresses & gifts for rany. She had received a whole bundle of stuffs from India. After cutting the cake she actually fed Maan's photo & that was the first time she had tear in her eye.
Nt - wat went wrong between u both?. nt asked her after holding back that question for so many days..
Geet - wat wrong? She almost got angry.
Nt was a bit taken a back to see her get angry - I mean why r u not together here, did u both have a fight or something?
Geet smiled.. he never fights with me. Main hi fight karthi hoon.
Nt - when he loves u so much then why is he not here with u
Geet fell off laughing..
Nt & rahul looked at each other & then at her.
Nt was irritated now.. she shook her.. Geet..
Geet was taken a back seeing Nt getting serious abt all this
Nt - he never told u he loves u
Geet - no ways.. he loves.. parul, simran.. kavitha.. ..aur. Aur..
nt eyes popped out..
Geet - we r more closer than that na.. then how could he love me.
nt rolled her eyes & looked at rahul.. wondering how on earth to explain her.. that it was more than friendship.. & it was love. But dodo was busy arguing that it was bigger than love their friendship.
Nt - so he had girl friends
Geet giggled .. lots of them.. actually one every semester .. last sem main tho do thi.
nt - u didn't have problem with that
she shook her head & then - actually ek problem thi
rahul & nt again looked at each other.. getting ideas there, which was not far fetched hearing wat her problem was.
Geet - every time he fought with them.. he gets angry at me actually he gets very upset & that hurts.
Nt & rahul wanted to strangle themselves to have even thought otherwise.
Nt - so u r just good frds, like u & rahul
Geet - nahi..nahi.. we r closer .. we share things that no one would.
Nt - like me & rahul
Geet - nahi ussen bhi close. U can't be close like me & genie. We r much closer
there was strange secretive.. naughty smile in her face which they didn't realize then .
Nt - I am with rahul since school. We were best friends all the while.
Geet narrowed her brows getting confused - but u r married
nt - thats because we love each other & we want to be together always
Rahul put his hand around nt, Geet looked at his hand..so protective & lovingly only the way her genie used to hold her. Especially when genie kissed her forehead.
Nt - don't u want to be with ur genie always
rahul - don't tell he never said he wants to be with u
Geet - he said, thats why he brought this house for us.
Nt - so u don't want to be with him
Geet - nahi.. I want to be with him..always.. but then
Nt - so u love him
rahul - he loves u
Nt - so u both should get married like us
Geet - we are best frds. Aur shaadi mama-papa karthen hain na. How can I decide all that. Veerji bahut gussa ho jayen ge. waisen bhi mujhe genie se shaadi nahi karni.
Nt - we r best frds.. see we r married now & we can always be together
geet was getting disturbed with the thoughts here.. marriage can get genie to be with her but why do they have to be together.. they are together anyway right. when were they separated she wondered
geet - hum tho humesha saat hi hain na
Nt - but its not like being together..& having rany as proof of our love our togetherness, this just completes our realtion
Geet was feeling little odd calling their relation incomplete, feeling the distance which she could never accept between them - but he is marring kavitha
nt & rahul - WAT???
Geet - haan thats why he didn't come here. Our relation is much deeper than love & all. Waisen bhi love wala relations are very shallow.
Nt - u think my relation with rahul is shallow?
Geet - nahi mera matlab woh nahi tha
Nt - then wat do u mean? How can any relation be more deeper?
Geet was totally confused now. She knew she was really close to her genie & their relation was more stronger than all the love affairs he ever had, then why was Nt not accepting their relation as close.
Nt - maan kyun nahi lethi u love him
she makes a baby face - I don't just love him.. like parul, simran..& all..yuck. He means more than that to me.
Nt - koi issen samjavo.. ussi ko pyar kahthen hain
Geet - nahi di.. we r more than all that.
Nt - nothing could be more than two people in love Geet get that striaght.. she wanted to rightly address her as dodo now. Geet kept quiet not able to understand all this. Even genie was not there to clarify her doubt.
Nt pulled out all the gifts that Maan had given her for her previous bdays.
Nt - see all this gifts r so special. U do such things only for the person u r in love with Geet.
Geet never used any of those gifts, she used to only keep them close to her.
Nt - no one buys a house on a best frds name.
Geet - woh tho .. main gussa thi tho he brought it
rahul - sweety mana tu gussen main thi .. teehk hain.. but buying house is a very big decision. Woh bhi..joint! There is so much of money involved.
Geet - but uncle ji paid for it. genie didn't.
Nt - oh god Geet, ots not abt the house or money.. yaar.. it is abt commitment, it abt trusting each other.
Geet - he doesn't trust me..at all.. mujhe aapni gadi nahi deta
nt hit her head. Now I know why he never could tell u how much he loved u. bolta tho bhi tu samjhthi nahi.
Geet - bolne ki kya zarorat hain. I know mean more than anything to him.
Rahul taunted ..more than even kavitha?
Geet - haan.. more than kavitha, more than simran ..more than every one else.
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They smiled.. till then end she didn't accept nt said
rahul - she never understood anything then.
Nt - kabhi kabhi tho mujhe iss genie pe itna taras aata hain ki pucho mat.
Rahul - pata nahi how did he manage with her all those 4yrs


Mean while in the garden
Maan tucked her closer. Oh god!!! yah sab kya hogaya..dodo. How could I let this happen to u. sab meri galti hain .. he cried. He knew she was too innocent to understand a relation between a boy & a girl.

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He was terrified to even think if someone forced her, especially thinking abt the the first prom night in college, when a senior had taken her to the hostel saying he will give her some notes. She just blindly went with him. Luckily Maan noticed & got her back saying that she had a call from home.
When he questioned her why she went like that .. can't she use her brain.. it was prom night, when every one is partying out here, why should a guy take a girl to his room that too hostel, she fought back with him saying he is jealous that some sr is sharing his notes with her not with him.
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He held her even more closer. He knew her more than anyone else, more than her parents at certain point. For them she was smart & independent, least did they know abt her being so nave & unaware of the world. Was it coincidence or was it just meant to be like that.. he was always there for her, then why didn't he take care of her now. How could he let anything like this happen to her. Now it feels god only created him for her, actually her for him. She filled his world with life. She was his reason to be happy & alive. She was his maitri, his reason to love his life.. learn to love himself yet again. ... She never failed him..but he did.. he failed her. He left her alone to face the hardship of life one wrong decision & it ruined everything. She probably would never accept she needs him.. but he should have been there for her not for her but for him.. for his soul, his life dwell in her. Dodo mujhe maaf kardo.. I will do anything to sort this out for u. just tell me who is that guy I will make sure he accepts u & amy. The question she couldn't answer. The truth she feared to face.
Geet - abhi insab baat ka koi faida nahi
She didn't have to say anything else. It was all there, in that one sentence. he glanced at the words again & again in his mind, and a millions of meanings came to them. He stared at her downward blankly for a while, dumbfounded.

He held her from arms & pulled her away to meet her eyes..that looked every where else but him.
Maan - dodo kaun hain woh? Kanha hain?
She stood quiet like she had forgotten to talk..to utter.
He fiercely held her by the arm, dodo ? The expression on his face frightening her. He left her arm in disbelieve of her silence. He picked up the glass bottle & sent it crashing on to the ground. He couldn't believe she was actually hiding something from him. They never had to .. they never did.. His dodo fearing to confide in him for some reason. The things she couldn't tell him horrified him. The possibilities he could imagine appalled him. he didn't know what to say. He didn't know what to do. There he was, thousands of miles away all this years, not hearing her screams, not hearing her pleas, and when no one to turn to; no one who could help. But every time he thought abt the past 8yrs, his dodo being alone, amy out of wed-lock.. his heart cried. His heart cried because it was real. His heart cried because he felt as helpless as she was.

She began to sob silently seeing his anger which was actually pain..the pain she was giving him. Cold sunk into her bones, and darkness surrounded her. The fear of volume of pain that he would face if he realizes the truth. She couldn't even imagine his plight, his anguish..She was shaking and sobbing her heart out. She reached down and wrapped her arms around her stomach as Maan faced his back to her. She sat their rocking back and forth hugging her stomach crying. The terror of her worst night mare still had her in its grasp. She could not shake the fear of seeing her genie shattered if he found out the truth of amy's father.

-BLOG maitri part 56-
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Precap
geet breaking down
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

me first yooohuuu

the memories were cute .. but the last part was sad 😭 ... geet's fear is correct .. Maan will be shattered completely once he finds out the truth ... after just knowing that Geet had to go thru all this alone he is unable to forgive himself ... when he will find out that he is amy's father ... God knows wat will he do to himself ... but muski ab wait nahin ho raha hai ... plzzz jaldi reveal kero naa .. btw am missing Amy's and Maan conversation ..
cant wait to read more
love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~Edited~

Dodo is really scared for his Genie ...but she can't hide for long ...one day he needs to know what ever is the truth & Genie is blaming himself for Dodo's condition.

Dodo is right ...their relation is something more than love which can be named.

loved the whole Geet-NT-Rahul convo.

Wonderful update!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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suprb didi
she did not even known that she loves him
and mann too a taht time
omggg she is too innocent
make geet to say that
we cant see her break down didi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg why geet not telling him clearly and is become monkey not realize he is the person dono ko peetne ka man hai muskaan such mein
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
plz plz update next part asap

cant wait to read it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part geet thinking that when maan would come to know about amy being his son he would not be able to handle it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Muskan Geet is thinking about Maan's pain... when will you think about our or rather my pain 😉 PLZ... ab toh raaz khol do... its really very hard to bear this pain... 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congratzzz on new thread...
great update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update. loved the way nt. and rahul tried to confess geet that she loved maan but never got successful. poor them. geet is still hiding form maan. why is sooo scared to tell her. in this way he is in more pain than knowing the truth.

thanks for nice update and pls update soon

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