~maitri~ MAANEET FF THREAD 7 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
this is killing me now
humm how is amy is maan father?
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww awesome simply awesome update muskan😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
🥳cong congo
& many many
more to come
the past
beautiful memory
love how NT & Rahul narrate
everything about geet & the love
she has for genie
oh the present
it's true what geet said he i'll
sharttered when genie find out
he his the father of amy
fascinating part
love it core
pls pls pretty pls di
can we have one more
muah
bless yu
plsss one more
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved the memories.
buhh is Maan truly Amy's father, if yes then y doenst he remember.
the last part was beautifully written
i am really interested in the precap
plz update soon

~Jessica😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG dnt knw wat is going to be dodo's condition after amy's truth comes out...if Maan's condition is like this nw god knws wat will he do ihmself wen the truht is out as he was the man who broke the glass after they slept in the same bed...
Edited by aarthirajendran - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

will geet tell about amys father first?????or maan will find out and remember allthings himself????????????i wish for second one...plz reveal this secret soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
congrat on the new thread
fab update::
Loved it x
Awww luv how geet was trying to explain her an maans relationship
Ooh hope geet tells the name of that person
Poor maan is just breaking down each minute wiv the pain he'z getting...
Cont soon Xx..
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Posted: 14 years ago



Nidddz .. how are you dear.?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!! waitin eagerly!! muskan plz update aparichit too!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 57

She reached down and wrapped her arms around her stomach as Maan faced his back to her. She sat their rocking back and forth hugging her stomach crying. The terror of her worst night mare still had her in its grasp. She couldn't shake the fear of seeing her genie shattered if he found out the truth of amy's father.

All Maan could think abt was her & amy. How to sort out all this mess. How to get the best treatment for amy. He knew things would be much easier if his father was around. He doesn't even know wat happened actually, did she love someone, & believed him innocently like she believed him. & he left her like he did. He couldn't even stand up to face the reality that guy..who ever he was..how ever demon he was..he himself was not any every better than him. It was first him who broke her trust at the first place. He just walked behind a mirage leaving the reality to fetch for itself. He had no one to blame but self. Had he not left her alone all this would have never happened. He was wrong..just him. She was just puppet in all this. Now she is hiding his name..that is her true love. He could imagine dodo doing that. She would never give up on him.

Even after being such a mean B****** she never gave upon her genie he thought. Out of no where he shows up after 8yrs & now he feels differently abt her... not even once he thought abt her all these yrs..all he cared abt was himself..how that b***** kavi ruined his life. Well here too it was his mistake.. he trusted a wrong person with his heart, when even that was never his.. it was always his dodo's.. doesn't even know since whne & how. But wat he did he accused the whole women species for that, forgetting the angels in his life too belonged to that species..his dodo..his Daadi..his mom.. how on earth was he anyway less worst than that guy how betrayed his dodo. he couldn't get words to curse himself. he would have just killed himself at that every moment..the self hateredness was at its peek.

They stood in the darkness of the night for hrs..he not able to face her & she curled up in the floor..sobbing. He eventually couldn't take it any more seeing her sob like this, especially taking his anger..when it was all his mistake at the first place. He turned to face her a fierce warmth radiated through him as he saw the sight of her curled up like that. He hastened down to raise her.

She melted in his arms as he bent over her.
The anger fell away, leaving behind a new warmth & something more, something deeper that he could no longer entirely conceal. Drawing her closer he kissed her forehead...crying..dodo. losing himself in the heady flood of emotions & the tender benediction of her touch. Emotions welled within him, clamoring to escape their bonds, he kissed her madly.. I must have done something right to have found u ..he murmured against her temple..as he continued kissing her. Oh dodo.. I can't stay without u. how did I let anything happen to u. dodo .. he kissed her yet again..

for a moment he didn't realize he had spoken aloud certainly he had simply felt that phrase in his heart & soul all this while. But then he noticed the way she stiffened in his arms. Drawing back he met her gaze aware that he had not only uttered the words but that she heard them. Her almond big eyes stared at him..with those big tears..still threatening to fall..rather than letting the silence lengthen he bent & swept her into his arms cradling her high against his chest.

He held her close as he carried her to the room. He slowly rested her on her foot & slowly cupped her face. Yes he was in love with her!!! wondered how did she feel in return. He ignored the sudden pain blossoming around his heart.. he looked away... she knew wat he was hiding within.. & wat he was concealing. But why was her fear.. may be he shouldn't be... thats why.. knowing her genie; he wouldn't leave a chance to claim her .. but he didn't means there was something stopping him she though as he walked out of the room closing the door behind.


Next day

after the children went to school. Maan spent the day very respectfully around rahul trying to work out a solution, Geet watched him silently from the kitchen pretending to cut vegetable, while Nt watched her. Rahul showed him all the research work he had put in last one year. He tried explaining him about the donor bit & ten cribbed.. amy ka blood grp bhi itna rare hain
Maan sipped his coffee looking into the file - uska blood gp kya hain
rahul - AB negative.
Maan almost jumped up in joy.. woh toh mera blood gp hain
Geet cut her finger when she heard him say that.. Nt immediately walked her to the washbasin & placed her finger under the running water. ..tears flooded as the cold water washed away her cut. Nt pressed her finger below the cut to stop it from bleeding.

Maan - can I be a donor he asked curiously.. just praying secretly he could.
Rahul looked at him in shock..in disbelieve.. something he wanted to request, plea..to him ..& here he is pleading to him wat an irony he thought. When Maan saw him silent for a while..staring blankly at him, he asked again
can I be a donor..
rahul held his arms & nodded..we could check. though he was 100% sure their blood grp matched.


Geet hugged nt & broke down completely
Nt patted her back.. why don't u just tell him.
Geet - di main kaisen usen kah doon. Ussen tho kuch bhi nahi pata. He will feel guilty & blame himself. Woh aapne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar payaga.
Nt - lekin he deserves to know..amy is his son
tears welled down her eyes as she held Nt tightly. Nahi di.. he won't be able to take it.
nt - wat is stopping u..
nt pulled her away to read her face
Geet - he is married di.. he may be having a life of his own
nt - I don't think so.
Geet was suddenly very excited.. how can u say that.. how she wished it was true.. but then that was mean.. she couldn't be so mean when it came to her genie
nt - tu sach main dodo hain.. if he was married he won't come so close to u

geet looked thoughtly before saying anything.
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-BLOG maitri part 57-

Precap
dodo & her fundae
-PREV PART 56 NEXT PART 58-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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