MN ff~ LOVE???!!!~chap 9 on page 43 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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gud idea ridi...

i liked this ss oops now ff a lot...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Glad u decided to convert it to FF
i'm already in love this story
looking forward to read more
update soon n thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good idea Dear
so Update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
good idea ridi
waiting for new updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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yeah...!!! that would be great!!!!...would love it...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats even better ridi..good decision..looking forward to the next update...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res

need time to read 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i guess this is the wise decision by u
Continue soon ji
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey frnds...here I'm with next chapter of 'LOVE???!!!' ...I know I'm late..but frnds I'm busy with my study as my exam is coming...so please try to understand...love you frnds...enjoy this chapter...


02.

Green- Nupur

Black- third person view nd dialogues

I return home after a hectic day in college. My final exam is coming and I have no time to take breathe. After the exam I will be a graduate….then no study….. no exam….I enter into the house. My mom is sitting in the living room with some guests. I don't give any attention to the guests as usual and directly go to my room. Actually I never give any attention to the guests who come to my house until my mom call me and introduce me to them. I enter into my room ….throw my bag to a corner and sit on the bed. Then I remove my shoes and throw them to other corner. As I am a disorganized girl it seems a tornado is going through over my room. Nothing is in its right place and I am okay with this. Actually I am used to of it and now when someone tries to organize my things I can't able to find anything. So no one tries to organize my room except my mom. She is continuously telling me that why don't I organize my room…b/w who is going to hear her blabber. God give us two ears and we should use it properly. So I take her words into my one ear and throw it from the other one. Okay where I am….after removing my shoes I sit before the computer and start chatting with my friends. I don't have so many friends in my real life but I have so many net friends and I love to chat with them. I am busy in my chatting when mom calls me. Firstly I try to ignore but then she calls me again. So I have to go……there are some people sitting with mom…a middle aged man and a woman and a young boy……I never see them before……who are they……relatives or family friends…actually I don't know all my relatives and family friends and I never try to know them……but my mom always tries to make sure that I interact with them more and more …….because according to her I am one of the most unsocial girl in this world….so here her try is going on……

Nupur's Mom: so here is my daughter….Nupur…..MBA kar rahi hey…..aur Nupur ye hey Mr. & Mrs. Khurana aur unka beta Raj….

I greet them…..who cares who they are……

Nupur's mom: Pata hey Mrs. Khurana meri beti bahut assi hey…..meri beti isiliye nehi keh rahi hoon…..bahar toh jaida rehti hi nehi……no party.. no late night……university se sidha ghar ata hey…..maine kabhi isse leke koyi tension nehi kiya….

Am I hearing right…may be I become deaf…….my mom just praises me….though she is right…I don't like parties…and I always come straight to home after classes……but the question is not that she is praising me….question is why she is praising me before these people…..something really fishy…..Nupur be careful…

Mrs. Khurana: ye toh bahut assi baat hey…..nehi toh aj kal ki ladhkiya parties, late night, dosto iss main itna busy rehte hey ki kya bolu…..mere bete bhi bilkul apki beti jaisa hi hey..no party…no late night….

Nupur's mom: ye toh bahut assi baat hey…..b/w Nupur Raj ko apna ghar dikahu……

Now what is this……am I looking like a guide….and why I show him my house….firstly I think to deny my mom….then I remember if I say no now then after the guests go my mom will give me a long lecture……and right now I have no mood to hear her lecture….I want to concentrate on my study fully……so I agree and take that guy to show my home…..I am showing him my home…..we reach the terrace when he starts talking……

Raj: hi….toh app MBA kar rahi hey?

Nupur: hmm….

Is he deaf…..my mom told that then why he is asking me again…….

Raj: toh apne bare main kuch batayiye?

Nupur: kya?

Raj: yehi ki apki hobbies kya kya hey? Apko kya assa lagta hey aur kya nehi?

What the hell is going on……firstly my mom praise me…then I have to show this guy my home…..and now he is asking me some stupid questions….my friends are waiting for me online and I am here with this guy and his stupid questions….why I answer his questions…..it is better to avoid them and show him the house silently……

Nupur: ab humhe niche chalna chahiye…..

Raj: aise kaise…..agar app mere sath baat nehi karenge toh hum ek dusro ko kaise janenge…..

What? Why this guy wants to know me………someone please tell me what is going on……..

Nupur: sorry……main apki baat kuch samji nehi.

Raj: apko sach main nehi pata ki hum yaha kyun mile?

Nupur: nehi.

Raj: okay..actually humare parents chahte hey ki humari you know what I mean…

Nupur: I don't know what you mean.. But I really want to..

Raj: actually they want us to get married……….

Shit……I have to understand it first when my mom praises me and then tell me to show this guy our home….Nupur how could you be so dumb……… forget it Nupur…..figure it later that how dumb you were….now here is another big big problem…and I have to solve before it would be too late……..

Nupur: what the hell are you talking about?

Raj: apko sach main pata nehi tha…..

Nupur: agar pata hota toh app yaha nehi hote….

Raj: app itna gussa kyun kar rahi hey….listen hum beithke baat kar sakte hey…

Nupur: no you listen……main ye shadi nehi karungi..kabhi nehi…

Raj: kyun? App kisi aur se pyar karte hey kya?

Nupur: nehi….

Raj: toh phir kya problem hey…dekhiye app humhe bahut pasand aye…….

Nupur: what? App humhe jante bhi nehi hey aur apko hum pasand a gaye….what rubbish!

Raj: apko dekhte hi humhe laga ki you're the one….

Oh no another crap……I couldn't understand how could people think like this…..don't they have any brain to think…may be they don't think…they only hear their heart……they were the believer of 'listen to your heart theory'….how disgusting…..

Nupur: really…..chale hum niche chalke sabko ye batate hey….

Raj is surprised to see the change in Nupur's behaviour….some minutes ago it seemed she was angry and now she is telling to tell everyone that Raj likes her……this girl is strange…..

Raj: matlab app ko iss rishte main koyi problem nehi hey

Nupur: mujhe kya problem hogi? Chaliye niche chalte hey….

Let's go Mr. Raj……now you are going to watch with whom you mess up……..

A smile come on Nupur's lip….Nupur goes to the downstairs where her mom is sitting……Raj is following her….

Nupur: mom ye sab kya hey?

Nupur's Mom: kya Nupur?

Nupur mom is trying to talk normally but she knows it very well that what is going to happen…….

Nupur: apne mujhe pehele kyun nehi bataya ki ye log a rahe hey?

Nupur Mom is shocked….she was expecting that Nupur would be shouting but she is so normal….she is smiling….

Nupur's mom: matlab tujhe koyi problem nehi hey kya?

Nupur: problem.kaisa problem..mujhe toh bas ek ghar se dusre ghar jana hey…..par baat yeh hey ki inn logo ko koyi problem hey ki nehi?

Mrs. Khurana: humhe kya problem hogi beti……..humhe toh tum bahut pasand ayi….

Nupur: assa.but aunty mujhe bhi kuch baat puchni he app logo se…

Mrs. Khurana: ha beti pucho na…

Nupur: apko khana banana toh assi tara se ati hey na…..aur kamre ki safai…..

Mrs. Khurana: kya?

Nupur: ha…wo kya hey na mujhe khane main koyi compromise pasand nehi hey……aur you know mahine main ek baar kamre ki safai toh karna chahiye na nehi toh kamre main rehene main problem hoti hey….

Mrs. Khurana: tum ye sab kya keh rahi ho?

Nupur: kyun mom ne apko bataya nehi hey kya ki mujhe ghar ki koyi kam nehi ate...ye sab toh apko hi karna padhega na……..

Wow my target reached it's right place…..I could see it…..wow Nupur you're too good….

Khurana family was shocked to hear Nupur's words……and Nupur's mom…..forget about her……she was very angry but she couldn't show her angriness before Khurana's.. so she was trying to change the topic…..

Nupur's Mom: aisa kuch nehi hey Mrs. Khurana…….Nupur toh majak kar rahi hey…

Nupur: nehi mom…inn logo ko bhi toh pata hona chahiye na ki main kaisi hoon…aur ha ek aur baat batana toh main bhool hi gayi aunty……wo kya hey na main shadi ki baad bhi aisi hi rahungi jaisi ab hoon…..ap main se koyi bi mujhe kisi bhi kam ke liye kabhi mana nehi kar sakte..wo kya hey na mujhe wo pasand nehi hey……aur ha main kisi baat ke liye compromise nehi karti…….

Mr. Khurana: ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

Nupur: yes uncle……main jo keh rahi hoon wo sola ana sach hey..ab app batatiye app logo ko koyi problem hey kya….

Khuranas are looking at each other….they are surprised…..they never meet any girl who talked like Nupur…..

Mrs. Khurana: okay Mrs. Bhushan hum chalte hey….

Nupur's mom: par…..

Khuranas: Namaste…..

Khuranas leave the house……..Nupur's mom is following them to forbid them goodbye…..when she come back to the living room Nupur is lying on the sofa and eating an apple….it makes her mom more angry……

Nupur's Mom: Nupur ye sab kya tha?

Nupur: kya?

Nupur's Mom: tumhe unn logo ko ye sab keh ne ki kya jarurat hey?

Nupur: maa….unn logo ko sab janna chahiye tha na…..nehi toh baad main problem ho jati

Nupur's mom: Nupur tum bahut assi tara se jante ho kit um jaise ho waise tumhe koyi apne ghar ki bahu nehi bana yegi….

Nupur: wohi toh main chahti hoon….maa ek baa tap kan kholke assi tara se sun li jiye main kabhi shadi nehi karungi….aur hya iss baar maine koyi tamasha nehi kiya par agle bar agar apne aisa kuch bhi kiya na toh app aise tamasha dekhenge ki jaise tamasha kisi ne kabhi ticket karid ke bhi nehi dekha hoga…..

Nupur's mom: par Nupur….

Nupur: par bar kuch nehi…..assa main chalti hoon…mujhe bahut sare kam karne hey…..bye..

You all are thinking that I was rude…….ya I was…this is me…….how could I change myself….and why should I change…..so that my mom will become successful in her mission to get me married…….no way….how could I allow her to destroy my life by getting me married……it doesn't mean that I don't love her…..I love her….but I love myself too……so I do this…..but I know one thing also that she will try it again……so I have to do something very soon…very very soon…….

love
ridi

Edited by ridi_onasis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just loved the way she treated the people by God maza agay...u know i m just loving this nupu...too good...wah wah...
im so enjoying this ff..
cont soon ridi pls

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