We r meanT to be togthr..REALLY?(AR OS)ud-2 pge 4

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fri42911

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Posted: 14 years ago

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lovely part.

please pm me when you update next time.

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Nandini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Hey Shilpa

first of all a biiig congo for ur 1st os

its awesome

luvd it yaar

Ammy n Ridz r so dumbos

try karne se pehle hi haar maanke baith gaye

Awe I so luv nikki, at least she drilled sum sense into those dumbheads

i really admire her courage to stand for her friends' happiness.

Sooo sweet.

And I think at the end she saw Shashank.

plzzz update the nxt part soon.

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shonadesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

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heys guys i completed Os.i hope u liked it...thanks everyone u commented my os n press like button i will indivizdual reply later...

PART 2

We r meanT to be together...REALLY?????

P:yey kya ho rha hai???
N:(stammering)tum...tum yahan kya kar rhi ho
P:yey mera ques ka jawab nhi hai??
N:i can explain
P:really...care to explain...
N:voh...voh muski actually i want armaan n ridz apni puri life ek dusre k sath spend kare...i just want to help them n main apni puri life regret nhi karna chti ki main e apne friends k liye kuch nhi kiya
M;really, phir u idiot tune mujhe kyo nhi btaya????
N:bcoz i scred tu kaisa react karengi tu mera sath dengi ya nhi???
M:offcourse main tera sath dungi those two idiot ko ek karne k liye
N:love u muski
M:bt nikki tu kya karegi, or tu Armaan se baat ph chat kar rhi thi na par kaise?
N: vo main aur AM fb par chat karte hai tabhi he gave me his number...n main shanky uncle se milne ja rhi hun, is bare mein baat karne...
M:bt nikki u sure
N:i m 100% sure.n don't wrry main ridz ko probs nhi dalungi...uncle se is bare mein directly baat nhi karungi...pakka ridz n armman k koi prob nhi hogi...
M:i knw.
N:chal main jati hun...ridz ko kahna mainujhe kuch kaam tha mai use call karungiii
M:okay, bye, ALL THE BEST
N:bye
they hugged

Niki went shashank office
knock knock
S:come in
N:hello uncle...how r u???????
S:fne n hw r u? Kya logi
N:i m also fine., coffee chalegi
S:k, nw tell tumhe kya baat karni
N:sit alert:vo uncle aapse kuch puchna hai
S:haan pucho
N:uncle meri ek frend hai she love sumonebut her dad doesn't like that boy dad, n they love each other so much
S:in stern voice:so main kya karun
N:scared n think sab aap hi kar sakte ho uncle n said uncle main puchna chati hun agra aap meri frnd k dad k jagah hote to kya aap is par ko kaise lete i mean aapko isse prob hoti???
S:hmmm agar main uski jagah hota to mujhe koi prob nhi hoti, bcoz sahdi bacho ko karni hai unke dad ko nhi so isme mujhe kya prob hogi...agr bache khush hai to...parents to bacho k khushi chate hai bas(look niki seriously n nikki is hell shocked when she heread shanky words) mujhe armaan n riddhima k rishte se bhi koi prob nhi hai bsa dukh is baat hai riddhima ne kabhi mujhe is baare baat nhi ki
shanky chuckled saw niki face n niki look shanky wide eyes n open mouth
S:niki muh band karo makhi chali jayegi
N:closed her mouth n think OH GOD main sapna to nhi dekh rhi hun kabhi main sapne mein hi ridz or AM k liye itna kar rhi hun...ya jo maine suna vo dream hai haan yey ho sakta hai main galat suna hai hai...ya maine bilkul sahi suna hai uncle ridz n AM k bare mein jante hai oh GOD koi mujhe pinch karo, her thought broke with shanky voice
S:i knw u r shocked niki bt ydy sach hai i knw about them n wait kar rha tha k ridhima mujhe kab btayeg
N:(innocently)aapko koi problem nhi hai
S: nhi. mujhe jai(armaan dad) se bhi koi problem nhi hai...yey humari aapas ki baat hai...yey dislike hum apne bacho ki khushi k beechnhi aane denge
iN:happily...really uncle u r best uncle...vaise uncle ridz aapko kabhi is baare mei nhi btati bcoz vo dono idiot maan kar baithe hai ki they aren't meant to be togther or yey bhi ki aap kabhi is rishte k liye nhi manoge
S:really
N:vaise aap ko iske baare mein kab pta chala
S:hamesha se
N:really
S:yes, vaise i hurt meri dono betiyaan ne mujhe yey chupaya
N:plz uncle dn't say this i know we hurt u but if u want to give ur ladli beti a punishment...i will help u in this
S:kaise??????
N:i will gve u solid planned, n it will be fun
S:so kya plan hai????/
she explained shanky everything...n shanky ginned after listen plan
S:armaan manega
N:yes uncle but aap jai uncle se baat kake sab bta do...
shanky called jai n tal to him 10 min n set everything
N:happily:thank u uncle so muc
S:thanks se mujhe kahna chahiye ki tum Ridhima k liye itna sab kuch kar rhi hao
N:comeon uncle yey main ridz k liye nh apne liye kar rhi hun...
S:matlab?
N:matlab yey uncle agar main yey nhi kartito ridz shadi kisi aur se hoti or ridz zindagi bar mera dimaag khati apni gisi piti story lekar to save side maine apne aap ko bacha liya
they laughed n say bye each other

N comw out shanky office, msg muski to meet n call AM
A:hey nikki, kya hua, uncle se baat hui kya kahan uncle ne tum chup kyo ho??
N:in mind:shut up AM,stupid, idiot, moron,mujhe kuch bolne
dega abhi to bolungi n speak:i m so so aorry AM, i try my best mujhe maaf kardo i m sorry, uncle maan gayye hai (happily)
A:dammit i knew it uncle kabhi nhi manege, (suddenly her word registered his mind) n shocked nasked what did u say?
N:laughed:yey pagal premi uncle maan gayye
A:oh my God i m so happy thank u niki, u r best, bt uncle kaise mane?
Niki explaned him what happend in shanky office armaan
shocked, happy after listen what nikki told himn nw he is so much happy
N:but we made plan to punish ridz n u better be follow it
warnannn...
A:k, but plan kya hai????/
niki told him ,Armaan is so happy after listened plan
A: ofcourse i wil follow it
N:k AM tom mrng mein milte hai, rid ki call aa rhi waitng mein agra nhi pick ki to mujhe maar dalegi vaise kal to pakka mar dalegi agar aaj bach gai main
A:laughed :yaeah vo jungli billi to hao
N:yeah u right but abhi k bye, take care n safre journey
A:bye, take care u too, ALL THE BEST FOR PLAN
N:okay, bye
they disconnecyed call

then her cell ringing n screen showed ridz callin
N:in mind hey kahna bacha lena:hiii ridz
R:i want to talk to u urgently
N:why? i mean what happened?
R:come home, then i explain main muski ko bhi bulaya hai
N:okay, i will there in 20 min
R:okay, bye
N:bye

Nikki n muski meet n there nikki explain everything what

happened in shanky office n their plan to muski ,
M:ab to bda maja aayega badi bolti hai na ridz vo aur Armaan aren't mean to be togerther ab dekhte hai kya hoga... they hi-fi n laughed...they went ridz home
padma opened the door,
N: hi aunty hw r u???/, where is ridz?
P:hi, i m fine ridz in her room
M:okay, hum usse vahi milte hai,they winked padma n go ridz room
N&M:hi ridz
R:hi , guys gadbad ho gai
M: kya hua
R: yaar dad called me n said mera liye ek proposal aaya hai, dad bahut exicted lag rhe the is proposal se, unhe ladka bda pasand hai
N:hugged ridz n said: congrats yaar, i m so happy for u
R:surprised:nikki yey kya kah rhi hai
N:mujhe lga tu yahi sunna chahti hai, iske alawa hum kuch aur kah nhi sakte, jjo bakwas ki baate hai
R:nikki
M:ridz to yey chod, tu uncle ko mana kar de
R:yarmaine kaha tha but dad kah rhe pichle last 2 rishte unhoane meri suni thi ab is baar unki maan lun,or ladke se milun,yaar dad kafi happy lag rhe the
M:yaar tu uncle se kah na tu abhi shadi nhi karna chati
R:i said but dad yey kahan vo kal hi meri shadi nhi kara rhe, bas baat chal rhi hai, or shadi k kamo mein tym lagta hai, itne main apni iPG puri kar lungi
M:yey bhi thi hai to mil le na ladkese
R:but Armaan
nikki cut her
N: what Armaan haan ridz jab u guys aren't to be toghther to tu kyu wrong hope rakh rhi hai, or yey to ok na ek din hona tha toh better hai aaj ho jaye, jisse tujhe jyada hurt na ho
R:almost tears come her eyes:nikki tu aisa kyun kah rhi hai
N:softly:ridz ek baat to tu bhi manti hai jo hota hai ache k liye hota hai, vaise uncle is right abhi sirf proposal aaya hai baat nhi bani or vaise bhi tu aur AM try to karoge nhi its better be tu apne aap ko ready kar le kise aur se shadi k liye
M: vaise tune armaan ko btaya
R:he didn't pick my call n msg kiya hai yey btane k liye
N:its okay seweetheart, everything is going to be good
R:i hope vo mujhe pasand na lare
N:taange tod dungi uski agar usne tujhe reject kiya, kissi ki bhi himmat nhi hai meri pyari si frnd ko reject karne ki
now atmostphere is ok
R: yeah yeah, vaise tu subah se kahan hai
N:kuch nhi kaam hai abhi mujhe jana hoga(in mind agra thodi der or hi to ridz ko doubt ho jayega ki main kuch chupa rhi hun)
R:kyu???
N: yaar kam hai, dn't worry bta dungi kay kaam hai but time llagega so kal btati hun, or haan kal main late aaungi, okay
R:okay, bye
M:chalo main bhi chalti hun
R:ok bye
N&M:bye, take care, don't worry sab thik hoga
they went

In Night
ridz thinking in her room:yey sab kya ho rha hai, nikki mujhse thik se baat nhi kar rhi, n armaan na mere msg ka reply kar rha hai na call.oh God yey itna confusing ky hai...vo kal us ladke se milo...vaise mujhe aisa kyun lag rha hai kuch bahut acha hone wala hai...nikki sahi kah rhi sab acha hoga...ab sona chahiye

In Morning
Nikki is going to pich Armaan
N:hi AM hw r u???
A: hI nikki i m fine, wow u look beautiful fb pic se bhi jyada
N:thank u, kash main bhi tumare baare meinrhi kah sakti
A:means?
N:kuch nhi, yey btao sab set
A:yup
N:i will drop u in ur house, phir mujhe jana hai
A:k
In Car
A:hw is jungle billi
N:raised her eyebrow:dn't u dare to say my frin jungli billi
A:or tum use khud sheri bulati ho uska kya
N:main kuch bhi kah sakti hun use but tum nhi spc mere samne
A:main bhi kah sakta hun, k
N shut up AM, jyada bologe rhi utar dungi phor jate rehna khud
A:ohhkkk, but hw iis she?
N:pta nhi bas kahna aaj mujhe bacha le...
A:mujhe bhi
they looked each other n laughed
Nikki droped armaan n said meet in eveng

whole day passed, in evening ridz room
R:mom mujhe yey dress kyo di hai
N:show k liye, ja jakar college k notice board par laga aa
Muskan laugh
R:(frusted n irritated nikki behaviour)shut up nik help nhi kar sakti to chup rha, pta nhi kal kya ho gya tujhe, har baat par taunt kar rhi ho, it better bhi main tyujhe kuch btati nhi
looked nikki, n realized what she said, n said to sumthing but nikki said
N:hurt but ignored her comment:ok, but muski idea bura nhi hai na college NB par yey dress...n laughed(nikki, ridz n muski ralation like that they never said sorry to each other n other didn't take in heart other anger)
R:now not a word from u nikki, bas jo puchi uska ans dena
N:k, but yey dress is so beautiful n tu usme angel lagegi
M:yeah ridz nikki is right
R:but guys...thodi overheavy nhi lag rhi ?
N&M:nopeee
R:okay
ridz changed her dress
M: ridz t did AM called u ????? vo aaj Delhi aaya gya hoga...
R:nhi he didn't call me n not reply my msg,(in angry tone) ab uska cell bhi swichted off aa rha, u know what t dn't care acha hai nhi kari caal nhi to pareshan hoti ki vo thik hai ya nhi, agra aaj us ladke ne mujhe pasand kar liya na to main haan kar dungi, mujhe nhi karni Armaan se baate samaj kya rakha hai usne mujhe khud ka mood hoga to baat karega nhi to nhi
N:its ok ridz busy ho aaj aaya hai family mein busy hoga
R:i dn't care, ab chale sab wait kar rhe honge
N:ok,lets go

they r going some resturant, when they entered in resturant,

there r darkness n suddenly a light spot on ridz n another on

Armaan
Ridz is hell shocked, ki kya hua armaan yahan kay kar hai n why is so darkness ther???but she happy to see him n she remenmbered she is angry with him
Armaan come forwad n sit in his one knee(ridz is shocked):he held her hand n said:I love u so so much Riddhima, i want to spend my whole life with u, i want to share my each n every happiness n saddnes with u...i want when i need u main tumse phone par nhi balki face to face baat karun n share my feeling with u... i don't say i will alwayz keep u haapy but i promise i will try to make u happy alwayz...i don't say i never fight with u bcoz i know in my angry mod i alwayz fight with u but i promise u i alwayz make it...(n laughed lightly) i love to fight with u ...n if i bwill brrek those promis u can beat me, hold my ear n yeah u can kiss me also...i know i m one complicated person mere saath rahna itna aasan nhi hai but i know jo mere saat puri life spend kar sakta hai vo tum hi h...will u marry me????
ridz who listened armaan foget her all anger, forget her family n friend also ther...she lost in his word n crying silently...her dreams come true...she also sit her knees n her Armaan tightly n said: yes Armaan i will marry u n i love u so much...
Armaan wore her ring n ridz is so happy
suddly light on n ridz come in reality.now she lokk shanshank who seems so angy, then padma,muski, nikki whi\o gave her blank expression, n then look Armaan who blinked his eyes
Riz go near shashank
R:(crying)dad
S:ridz mujhe tumse yey umeed nhi thi jab main hamesha tumse shadi ki baat karta tha tum mana kar deti but aaj u engaged without thinking ur study n all
R:dad.i m sorry...i m really sorry
S:nhi Ridhhima.tum kyun sorry bol rhi ho sorry mujhe bolni chahiye
R:dad nhi...main abhi Armaan ko mana kar deti hun
S:i m happy for u.armaan jaisa ladka tumhe kabhi nhi milega
R:i m sorry day...(shanky word registered her mind n she loo shanky with shocked face)...dad asapko koi prob nhi hai...
nikki come n said:noope dear uncle lko koi prob nhii hai, yahan par kissi ko koi prob nhi hai or na thi is relation se bas prob thi vo tujhe...
now ridz looked everyone n all smiled
R:what?????
Nikki explain her everything.Ridz hugged nikki tightly...
S:hume to is rishte se kabhi koi prob nhi thi...hum to hamesha se yehi chate the chahe mere or jai k beech kitne differences ho
J:or humne to 2 baar tum logo se baat bhi karnichaha but u guys so amadent to first do sudy complete
N:matlab jo har baar jis ladke k baare mein uncle baat karte the vo AAM tha
S&P&J:yesss
parents smiled n kids r shocked
J:yey naina ki last wish thi...tum dono ki shadi
Armaan n ridz looked padma n she nodded
N:now sab thik hai to kyun na ridz bhi armaan ko ring pana de but usse pehle is PP ko ridz k liye ek song gana padega if ridz wore armaan ring n she have to alsoo sing a song to reply AM song
everypne hooting n ridz blushin n armaan shook his head
A:okay, i will sing song n but after that i will take ridz with me n u nikki u won't distub us
N: okay

Armaan start to sing looked ridz n sing
(idn't know which song should i choose but personally i lve this song)
Tu Hi To Jannat Meri, Tu Hi Mera Junnon
Tu Hi To Mannat Meri, Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun
Tu Hi Ankhiyon Ki Thandak, Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak
Aur Kuch Na Janu Mein, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu..
(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu(he bowed head towards ridz, everyone shocked to see imesse love of Armaan)
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..
Kaise Hai Yeh Doori, Kaise Majboori
Mene Nazaron Se Tujhe Choo Liya
Kabhi Teri Khusboo, Kabhi Teri Baatein
Bin Maange Yeh Jahan Pa Liya
Tu Hi Dil Ki Ha Rounak, Tu Hi Janmon Ki Daulat
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu..(ridz wore him ring, he is so happy)
(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..

Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi
Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi...
Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi

Cham Cham Aaye, Mujhe Tarshaye
(ridz come towards him n danced with him)
Tera Shaya Ched Ke Chumta..
O O, Tu Jo Muskaye, Tu Jo Sharmaye(ridz smiled towards him)
Jaise Mera Hai Khuda Jhomta..(he danced around ridz)
Tu Hi Meri Barkart, Tu Hi Meri Ibaadat
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu..
(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu(he bowed his head)
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi
Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi...

Ridz start singing
Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Manga
Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Diya
Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola
Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya
Tu Hi Dhoop, Tu Hi Chau
Tu Hi Apna Paraya
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun) - 2
Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun(she also bowed her head in front of Armaan)
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Rab Ne.. Bana Di Jodi

they hugged, n everyone so mych touched to see thier love n compliment them
nikki said:now u moron believ it that u guys r "meant to be togther
R&A:smiled:yes we believe WE ARE MEANT TO BE TOGATHER
they went to spend time with each other

completed

P.s: i don't know whatt i write but i hope liked u like it...plz press the like button n leave ur precious comment...it means a lot to me

Edited by shilpI007 - 14 years ago

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Samica Mehta (Mrs.Mallik)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Resss [yeah first one to comment even before you PM'ed me😃]

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Hey shilpaaa

The part was seriously awesome yaar! And especially the way you showed the story! It was very realistic you see, as saari love stories itni philosophical nahi hoti, nad yours was very simple and awesome! Just like we say beauty lies in simplicity...

Awesome and please do write more OS's and if you write them please do PM me as I love the way you portrait it..Thanks a lot for such a wonderfull OS shilpa😊

Xoxo

Edited by ksgforever10 - 14 years ago

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Niketa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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👍🏼👏Hey Shilpu Sweetheart👏

I love u i know vo mujhe tujhe humesha bolti hun

Yeh isliyye for completed so fast and that too so beautifully

Well coming to the part it was awsome,mindblowing and beautiful yar

Aww Shashank ko sab pehle se pta hai he is darling dad

And stupid Ridzi-Ammy bta hi nahin rahee

But Thank God Nikki is there nahin to pta nahin LOVE BIRDS kya karte😆

I love when Armaan says FB pic se bhi jyada sundar lag rahii ho

I love the complete OS more⭐️

And Nikki's plan to give Shashank's laadli beti punishment was fun

And armaan too involved was so much fun after all teasing ridzi is armaan's Favourite time pass

The song sequence u know i just love it it was my favourite one

And Armaan propsed riddhima was so touching I love u so so much Riddhima, i want to spend my whole life with u, i want to share my each n every happiness n saddnes with u...i want when i need u main tumse phone par nhi balki face to face baat karun n share my feeling with u... i don't say i will alwayz keep u haapy but i promise i will try to make u happy alwayz...i don't say i never fight with u bcoz i know in my angry mod i alwayz fight with u but i promise u i alwayz make it...(n laughed lightly) i love to fight with u ...n if i bwill brrek those promis u can beat me, hold my ear n yeah u can kiss me also...i know i m one complicated person mere saath rahna itna aasan nhi hai but i know jo mere saat puri life spend kar sakta hai vo tum hi h...will u marry me????

Hayye yar kitna achaa proposal tha and when riddhima say yes i am so Happy yar

And Ending Line was fab when nikki asked now they believe they are Meant to be???

And They SAID ''YES WE BELIEVE WE R MEANT TO BE TOGETHER''❤️

Hayye fab ending shilpu👏

Sabke pas Armaan-Riddhima jaise lovers hone chahiye😃

Aur ekk nikki jaise friend😆

And one more thing aab mujhe aur bhi stories chahiye u get it😈😉😃

With Lots of love

Nik

Edited by niki.5 - 14 years ago