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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Great update..
Thanks for the PM...

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nazsij

@nazsij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

don se pyaar karne ka jurrath karega geet?no wayyy it will be interesting...update soon...

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holyangel

@holyangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

whats next..????? what happend next...!!! cant wait for next update...😍

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

DON nd ips officer ki love story. . . . Interesting.

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kanika

@20tullip2000

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

hey jaan

thxxx for pm and another awesome part

i loved the way u potrayed him during the meeting ...haaaye !!!!!!!!! ekdum expressionless and calm !!!!!

saare kitna darte hai usse ... koi expression hi nahi show karta ... bus a world class lop sided grin di ... i love this smile ...its so so evil!!!!!!!!!

oh sameera koi doodh peeti bachi hai jo don ki godh main baithi hai ...lolipop ka intezaar karte hue !!!!!!!!!!!!

haaye sherni toh bohot tagadi nikali ... kya band bajai un gundon ki ...haaye ...maza aa gaya !!!!!!

i loved the entire fighting sequence of geet !!!!

hayo rabbaaa...adi is aditya handa ...acp ...haaye main mar jawan ...!!!!!!!!!!!! kitna smart lagega yaar ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
matlab he is playing a double games ... sher ke den main ghus kar sher se panga ... bada dildaar hai adi !!!!!!!!!

abe yaar yeh geet ke would be patiparmeshwar ka chakkar kya hai ... feeling leti rehti hai par pata hai nahi ki banda akon hai ... vry strange ...hmmm!!!!!!!!

matlab inko koi bhi jagah pe kaisi bhi sthithi main bass eyelock hi karna hota hai ... i wounder inki ankhon main aisa kya heere moti lage hue hai !!!!!!!!!

Listen, don't try to become a hero, just get lost or we'll smash your head...the jerk standing on the right said on which HE started laughing like a maniac...

Oh man, you are too funny...he said in between his laughter while the goons and geet looked at him with surprise

What a pathetic adjective for DON...!!...his tone suddenly changed to a dangerous one

yaar anu yeh lines mast thi ...fantastic !!!!!!

maza aa gay don ki fighting sequence pad ke !!!!!!!!

geet ko gundon se toh bacha liya par ab don se kon bachayega !!!!!!!!!

hamesha ...hamesha ...tum jaan bujh kar khatar nak cliffhanger par story chodti ho ... aur phir badi innocently kehti ho apne aap ho jaata hai !!!!!!!!

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Minz aka Minnie

@*Dakoo_Minzy*

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

wowowow!!!!! 🤗 hugs to you dearie for making it unpredictable...it was so beautiful 🤗 i am in love with this FF ❤️

And yes, so does her IPS bro want her to marry Maan aka Don? hehe...you are unpredictable..i know tere is a lot of mystery...who is really who... 🤣 i love this suspense you are creating... 😳

Go with the flow...and the fanfic is gonna be the best..you are a marvell at writing 👏

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Deeksha

@annie.shona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

that was... fantabulous..

lets see wot happens next

continue soon :)

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

wow!

geet's fighting skills were amazing..!

i luvd d entry of don...

actually i em worried for adi even more..

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

You proved me wrong anu...
adi is a spy dea n he is an ISP so he is there to find out what DON guys r going to do next...
geet is dreaming bou her hone wala husband...😆
loved the way she kicked dos gundas...😆
she knows kung-fu 😛
maan n geet met the first time n both got lost in each other's eyes😳...
geet got terrified wen she realised that he is the DON>>!!!😲
maan being naughty wid her saying that he is sexy...
little did he know that she was terrified wen she came to know that he is the DON who had saved her from the gundas even after her beating them abit...😆
loved the update anu...😉
Thanks for the PM...🤗

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