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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Lovely update
piya loves him
thnx for the pm
Continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: renuka1997

Lovely update
piya loves him
thnx for the pm
Continue soon...
Love u
renuka


Thanx dear.Ya she's in love with him.😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
gr8 update
so finally pia gets to see abhay
i want to know that whether pia here also has that memory loss problem that's why she is attracted to abhay or in ur story the plot is different from serial
thanks for the pm
update soon very excited about abhay's entry
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing dr... dis boy might be abhay. na????? me waiting 4 next update... update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8t updt
updt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8 update yaar.. Carry on..thanxx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update! Looking forward to the next update when Piya gets to see him in college and hopefully know more about him! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivanirajput

gr8 update

so finally pia gets to see abhay
i want to know that whether pia here also has that memory loss problem that's why she is attracted to abhay or in ur story the plot is different from serial
thanks for the pm
update soon very excited about abhay's entry



Thanx.No,dear m plot is different from serial bcoz i don't want any memory loss track in my story...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update
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continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-6

Piya is still standing in the jungle n lost in the eyes. suddenly some1 puts hand on her shoulder.She looks back n sees that it's jay.She is surprised to see him.She asks him,"jay u?what u r doing here?"Jay says,"oh thanx god i found u. Angel,u know i was so worried abt u?"pia says,"I'm sorry jay but i had something important work so i,..." jay stops pia n says, important!!! uhad important work in the jungle????R u mad?plz angel come 2 ur sense." pia says,' k u'll not understand. et's go home.' jay n pia leaves for home.

Pia n jay comes home.Misha goes n hugs pia.N tells,'Where were u mad girl?I was so tensed for u."Pia smiles n tells,"OMg i was away from u all for just few hours n u all r so tensed. dont worrynow i'm back." Misha says,"ok but bfore going anywhere plz tell m,e ok?" Pia says,"ok". pia goes upstairs. Jay smiles n tells,"ok mishu so,i'm also going.Bye." misha says,"Ok jay.Thanx for bringing pia back."jay smiles n leaves.

In her room pia is in the bed.She closes her eyes to sleep but sees the boy again in her dream.she opens her eys n looks at the clock it's 12.30 am.She gets up from the bed n goes to the window. she watches the calm atmosphere outside. she smiles looking at the moon. she talks to herself," Oh what a day 2day!!! I just loved that moment.Finally i saw him.But he left so early.why he's bhaving like this.I have know abt him.I wonder who he is n why he's hiding like this...N what's his name?Omg he's so mysterious. But he's so handsome n he's so helpful..." Pia smiles n looks at the moon again,"Oh,plz help me i want to find him..."saying this pia goes to sleep.But the cold breeze is going n the moon is smiling like it's saying that pia's wish is fulfilled.

next morning in the college everybody is having fun.Pia,jay n misha r sitting 2gether.Misha says,"i heard that a new boy is entering in our college.Did u heard abt it?'jay replies,"No yaar.i haven't heard abt it.Btw who is he?" Misha says,"I don't know.may b some1 new in dehradoon.' pia is quite n thinking abt something.Misha taps her n says,"hello,pia where r u lost?R u listening to me?"pia looks at them n says,'Oh,ya.may b he's new in the college" Misha n jay laughs n says,"Town yaar." Then pia also smiles n they all laughs together.Ruhi comes running n says,"Misha,pia,jay what r u doing here guys? let's go.The new boy is coming."They all goes with ruhi.

Pia,misha ,jay n ruhi n all others goes to see.They see a very lavish black car is there.The door opens.Everybody is very curious to see.They see that a boy comes out of the car.he's very much handsome n he's wearing black.attitude is in his eyes,n rudeness in his face he has no smile in his face. he walks to them n stands bside pia for a while n looks at her then he continues to walk. pia remembers that boy who saved her.n says in mind,"omg it's he.it's he who saved me.he's in the college!!!!" pia turns back n looks at him. He is going in such a style n looks back n smiles shortly at pia..Everybody is in the shocked mode.Girls r super excited.They r saying,"Omg he's so hot.he's so handsome.He's so stylish,he's so rich..." Misha says,"he's so rude yaar. he ignored us like we r no one."Jay says,"leave it na,mishu.we don't have anything to do with him.let's see how everything goes on"They goes to class.

In the class everybody is sitting.They sees that the boy is coming in the class.they all stares at him.he ignores all of them.n goes n sits alone in a bench.pia is sitting in front of him.She looks back n smiles at him.But he looks at others.Pia is some kind hurt.The teacher comes n greets the boy.She asks him to come in front n introduce himself.He goes there n says,"Hi,I'm Abhay raichand." Everybody is looking at him.

PRECAP: Everybody is again looking at Abhay.This time he says,"Why u all r looking at me like this.I'm not an alien."

Edited by princyz - 14 years ago

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