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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
Plz do continue it is awesome yaar šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue sooonn šŸ‘ šŸ‘


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Posted: 19 years ago
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I knew you guys wouldnt like this part. i should have thought about it more. so this time i'm gonna think about the next part and make the next part better. hopefully then you guys will like it. 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i just read the whole fanfic it's great šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ please con. soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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RECAP:
You see angad kissing kripa passionately and the camera is focused on the radio that is playing the song " roop tera mastana..pyar mera deewana...bhool koi hamse na ho jaye."

Part 13

Its morning and angad wakes up to see kripa missing from the bed. He wonders where she is and then hears the shower in the bathroom and realizes that kripa is taking a shower. he sleeps again. he remembers last nite with kripa and starts smiling. It was the most beautiful moment of his life. It wasnt the first time he had made love to someone but it was definitely the first time he had made love to someone he truly loved. He wishes he could have frozen that moment when they became one. This was one memory that would be part of him forever.
After a while he hears kripa come out of the shower and pretends to sleep as he is expecting kripa to come over to wake him up. but he is disappointed when kripa completely ignores him and goes to the dresser. He looks at her from the corner of his eye still expecting her to come to him but she doesnt.
Finally, he gets up and goes to her. he hugs her from behind and buries his face in her neck.
A: whats wrong sweetheart? ar you upset?
K(pushes angad a little): uh angad...nothin..i'm just
A:(looks into her eye): oh come on...tell me whats wrong!
k(looks into his eyes as well): angad..kal raat...jo kucch bhi hua...nahi hona chahiye tha..i mean..it was a big mistake..and
A: oh..to kal raat...it dint mean anything to you?
K: nahi angad...it did..but i just..u know what i mean. hu behek gaye. we shud hav controlled ourselves.
A: ya i understand. i thought you...forget it. i guess somethings are just...not as special to someone else as much as it means to you.
With saying this he left to go to the bathroom for a shower.


k(thinking): angad..u will never understand how big of a mistake we committed. hume aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. lekin ek ladki ke liye yeh kitni badi baath hai yeh tum kabhi nahi samjhoge.

After angad comes out of the bathroom, kripa is waiting for him all dressed up. She looks really beautiful but angad is still mad at her. he stares at her for like a minute and then he looks away when she looks at him.
a(thinking): kripa..you look so beautiful...but whenevr i think of touching you i feel like i am doing something wrong. i dont know what to do.
He goes to the dresser to get a hair brush.
Kripa: (trying to say something to angad): Ang...
Rite then the phone rings and kripa picks up the phone
k: hello?
K: mom? ap...
k: WHAT??????????
Kripa screams this out and angad hears this. he looks at her in shock. After a while kripa hangs up the phone and is in shock.
She sits on the bed clueless and angad goes to her.
A: kripa???? kripa?????


ok here is the part. hope you guys like it. i know its short. šŸ˜•


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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's very very very short and drepressing 😭 😭

takle care of urself
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57

guys im really sorry for the really short part last time. i was really busy so here is the next part. i hope you guys like this one much better.

Recap:
Kripa get a phone call from her mom and is shocked to hear something. she hangs up on her and is sitting on the bed with a blank look on her face and angad goes towards her.

Part 14:
A: kripa?? kripa?
Kripa looks at him but still has a blank expression on her face. Angad looks at her scared coz he wants to know what happened but is not able to get it out of kripa.

A: kripa! whats wrong. kya hua? kripa? (shakes her violently)

K: (looks at him but this time with tears in her eyes): ang...angad!!
Kripa gives angad a BIG hug and starts crying like a baby. Angad is shocked but consoles her.

A: hey kripa...whats wrong. tell me!! come on.

K: An..ang..angad...dad

A: dad? what happened to dad? kripa???

K: dad...heart attack
She starts crying even more and angad is also shocked.

A: kripa....yeh sab..what happened?
KRipa doesnt answer so angad gets hold of her arms and asks a little forcefully.

A: kripa!!! what happened tell me!

k: angad...woh...sab meri wajah se....its all coz of me. 😭 😭

A: tumhari wajah se? kripa yeh sab tum kya keh rahi ho? dont think like that. tumne kuch nahi kiya. yeh to...

K: no angad! yeh sab mere wajah se hua hai. nahi me ghar chodti aur nahi dad...(she starts crying again)
Angad hugs kripa again and in really sad for her.

A: kripa...i think we should go to the hospital. i mean to see your dad.

K:(looks at him): yeah. hume jaana chahiye. chalo lets go
Angad gets ready and grabs his keys and they go to the hospital. When kripa is about to get out, angad starts to get out as well but kripa stops him.
k: uh,,angad ruko!

She kinda yells at him and he stares at her in shock.

A: kripa?? whats wrong?

K: uh...angad..woh.i dont think you should come with me. i mean...main nahi chahti ke dad tumhe mere saath dekh kar.. you know what i mean rite?

a(disappointed): ya kripa..i understand.
Kripa kisses his cheek and hugs him tightly. He doesnt hug her back. She lets go of him and gets out of the car and leaves to go inside the hospital.
Angad is waiting in the car for kripa for a long time and is very sad about everything that is happening.How can kripa treat him like that? For a moment he felt like she didnt love him anymore but just the thought of losing someone he loved so much gave him goosebumbs.

A(thinking): yeh sab kya ho raha hai? kripa i want you to involve me in your problems. dont push me away. if i cant make you laugh, i want to cry with you.plzz kripa dont do this to me. if anything happens to our love, i cant live. mein apni jaan de doonga kripa. tumhare liye mein kuch bhi karoonga. kuch bhi!

Just then kripa walks out of the hospital with prithvi. Angad looks at them and is shocked. Kripa and prithvi look at angad and kripa tells prithvi something and they walk to her car where angad is. Angad is still looking at kripa. she comes and sits next to him in the car and prithvi is standing outside.

A: kripa? yeh sab? wats going on?

K: i dont know how to say this. mein...i'm really sorry.

A: sorry? for what? kripa yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? i dont understand anything?

K: angad...mein...hum...I think..I DONT LOVE YOU ANGAD!
Angad is shocked. he cant beleive he just heard kripa say that.

k i hope u like it. i tried ending at a shocking point this time.

coming up: what really happened between kripa and prithvi.

leave commentsšŸ˜›


Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
nooooooooooooooooooooo........... don't separate a-k 😭 Prithvi stay out of Kripa's life 😔 anyways please con. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
desiigirl19 did you read my fan-fic please read if you can and please continue yours soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
yaa aise shocks dena band karo tum mujse heartattack ho gayegi kripa ki dad ki tarahšŸ˜†

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