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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx for the comments guys.i'm happy that you guys like it. so here goes the next part.

Recap:
K: Angad, prithvi ke khushi ke liye maine tumhe mere ghar me rehne diya. aur ussi prithvi ke khushi ke liye maine tumhe apni dil ki baat nahi batayi. jaana chahte ho meri dil ki baat? jaana chahto ho? to suno..Mr Angad Khanna...I LOVE YOU. DO YOU GET IT? I LOVE YOU!

PART 10:
Hearing this Angad is a little shocked. He wanted this to happen but didnt expect kripa to fall in love with him.
A:(looks into her eyes): Kripa.....

K: Ha angad. mein tumhe bohut pyar karti hoon. apne aap se bhi zyada. main tumhare saath apni zindagi bitana chahti hoon. I want to grow old with you Angad. I want to...

A: Nahin kripa. yeh sab...yeh sab impossible hain. prithvi mera best frnd hain. main uska bharosa aise nahin tod sakta. prithvi ka......

K:(gets angry) Prithvi!Prithvi!Prithvi! kya mera koi bhi importance nahin hai? kya tum mere feelings ke bare me care nahin karte? Don't you love me angad? DON'T YOU????
Angad does love her but he doesnt wasnt to betray prithvi. He thinks that the only way to do that is to lie.

A: (not looking into kripa's eyes): no kripa! I don't love you.
Kripa is shocked.She knows that angad is lying but she wants him to tell her that he loves her and hug her. She wants to feel his arms again.

K: tum mujhse jhoot kyon bol rahe ho angad? Look into my eyes. Mere akhon me dekh kar kaho ke tum mujhse pyar nahi karte. LOOK INTO MY EYES ANGAD AND TELL ME YOU DONT LOVE ME!
Angad looks into her eyes and sees pain and tears. He knows he loves her and cannot lie.

A: No...kripa me...me...
He hugs kripa.
A: YES I LOVE YOU KRIPA!! I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH!!
Kripa feels a sense of relief and joy. She had found her true love and no one could ever stop her from getting it.
But her bubble bursted when angad said his next sentence.

A: I do love you kripa. Very much....but..I cant love you.
Kripa suddenly lets go of him

k: Angad? Yeh tum kya...

A: Ha kripa. Prithvi mera best frnd hain. me uske saath aisa nahi kar sakta. He is like my brother, for gods sake.

K: Prithvi? prithvi ek aisa dost hai jo tumhe apna dushman ssmajhta hain. usne jab mujhe phone par kaha ki..

A: phone par? prithvi ne tuse kya kaha?
Kripa tells angad about the whole phone incident with prithvi and how he accused them of cheating on him.

A: What?? Nahin mein yeh kabhi nahi maan sakta ke prithvi mere bare me..no!never!

K: even i cudnt beleive that prithvi said all this. pehle maine to apni dil ki baat nahi mani kyonki me prithvi ko hurt nahi karna chahti thi. Lekin yehi sach hai. THIS IS THE TRUTH!

Angad turns around to kripa. He is shocked to hear all this and is very angry.

K: (in a low tone): Angad I really love you. and i understand how you feel. lekin hum kab tak apne feelings ko nazar andaaz kar denge? Kya hume pyar karne ka koi hak nahi hai? kya muje khushi pane ka koi hak nahi hai? aaj tak maine sab kuch doosro ke khushi ke liye kiya. lekin aaj maine yeh realize kiya hai kabhi kabhi apne bare me bhi sochna chahiye.

Angad is still quiet but has tears in his eyes.

K: tum kya soch rahe ho angad? tumhari yeh khamoshi mujhe tumhare na se bhi zyada dard de raha hai.plzz angad kuch to kaho. plzzz

Angad looks into her eyes with so much passion that kripa's heart starts to melt.

A: kripa....aaj tak maine bhi ddosro ki khushi ke liye apni khushi qurban ki hai. lekin aaj mein tumhare saath itna bada anyay(injustice) nahi karoonga. you deserve much more than a life of compromises. I lovr you too much kripa. i can't loose you.
He hugs kripa. and you see kripa smiling with tears in her eyes. He slowly lets go of her. She looks into his eyes and he looks into hers.They are drawn towards each other. They get closer and closer andangad kisses her with so much passion that her heart skips a beat.

K:(thinking): This is the most wonderful moment of my life. I can't let this pass by me. i won't let anyone ruin this for me this time. No one!

After a while kripa and angad let go of each other and spend the whole day on the beach. They get occasional stares from a few people but they ignore them. After a long time, they decide to go home as it is already 9 in the night.
They get into kripa's car and drive home. When they get to kripa's house and hug for the last time and get out of the car.
In the house, kripa and angad enter to get a big surprise.

K: Mom, we r home!! mom....PRITHVI?

P:kripa!

Prithvi comes over to kripa and hugs her. Kripa and angad are shocked that prithvi is here even after everything has happened.

M: kripa, maine aaj subhe ka paper pada to...woh prithvi ne right time par a kar sab kuch clear kar diya.

K: prithvi ne?

P: ha kripa. paper mein jo kuch bhi ho. I believe you. I'm sorry for what i said before. woh me ghusse me..anyway ab mein a gaya hoon aur sab kuch theek ho jayega. so give me a smile now!
Kripa is shocked and looks at prithvi with a confused look.

k(in a whisper): prithvi yeh sab tumne...

P(in a whisper): i know kripa. lekin tumhe thnx kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.everything is fine now.

Prithvi hugs kripa again. Angad is watching all this and is very sad but is controlling himself.Prithvi looks at angad standing behind kripa.

P: angad...i'm really sorry. maine jo kuch bhi kaha. i dint mean it. i was just..u know what i mean rite. I'm really sorry man!

Angad had no choice to say anything. he looked at kripa who was on the verge of tears.

A:(turns around trying to control himself) nahi prithvi. main tumhe itni asani se maaf nahi kar sakta.

P: lekin angad..okay!okay! I promise mein tum dono ko treat doonga. okay? now forgive me.

A:not knowing what to say, just gives prithvi a fake smile.

p: alrite then!!! kal hum dinner pe jayenge. okay?

A: gives another fake smile.

K: looks at prithvi with a blank expression.

Kripa goes to her room and both angad and prithvi look at her leave.

P:(to angad): so angad? tumhe kripa kaisi lagi?

A: kripa? ha achi ahi.

p: obviously achi lagi. un photos me to yeh saaf dikhay se raha tha. am i rite? (starts laughing thinking he's funny but angad doesnt laugh. he's still in a shock)

A: prithvi im tired. mein sone ja raha hoon. i'll talk to you tomorrow. okay. good night.

p: ha theek hain. mein bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon. mujhe kripa se kuch akele me baath karna hain.

They both go upstairs and angad sees prithvi going into kripa's room. He goes into his and sleeps on his bed and turns on the radio. there are tears in his eyes and keeps remembering the moments he spent with kripa and at the same time the song "zindagi mein koi kabhi aaye na raba" is going on. He looks at the wall between his and kripa's room and wonders what krip and prithvi might be doing. He feels really sad but knows that he can't do anything about it if kripa is quiet.

k guys. thts all for today. i know you guys might not like the twist to the story but beleive me A-K will be together. so dont worry.
plzz continue leaving comments.
😛
Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
u 😡 😡 😡
prithivi ko acha banane ki kya zarort thi? 😆 😆 😆 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
i knew u guys wudnt like this new twist but dont worry prithvi is not the good guy
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
very nice!!!!!!!
awesome 👏

I believe u 😃 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
gr8888888888888 part con soon plzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46

recap:
They both go upstairs and angad sees prithvi going into kripa's room. He goes into his and sleeps on his bed and turns on the radio. there are tears in his eyes and keeps remembering the moments he spent with kripa and at the same time the song "zindagi mein koi kabhi aaye na rabba" is going on. He looks at the wall between his and kripa's room and wonders what krip and prithvi might be doing. He feels really sad but knows that he can't do anything about it if kripa is quiet.

Part 11:
In Kripa's room:
Kripa is standing at her window staring at the moon so she doesnt realize prithvi coming in. Prithiv comes from behind her and puts him arms around her waist and buries his face in her neck. Kripa is taken by surprise. She is disgusted and pushes prithvi away from her.

k: Stop it prithvi!!!

P: arre kripa. ab kya hua? maine sorry kaha na tumse. tumhe aur kya chahiye.

K: sorry? kya is shabd ka koi matlab bhi hai tumhare liye? you don't even mean it.

P: no kripa..i really mean it. maine sorry bhi kaha aur ab mein tumhare saath spring concert bhi chaloonga. khush?

K: (whispers) Spring concert?
Then kripa has a flashback of a moment she spent with angad on the beach today.

In the Flashback:
Angad is carrying kripa on his back and they are having fun.

K:(laughing) angad! angad! stop...let me down.
Angad lets kripa down and they fall on the ground laughing. Angad brushes kripa's hair off her face and gives her a very passionate look. He gently kisses her on her cheek and she gives him a quick kiss on his lips.

A: what was that for?

k: For falling in love with me.(gives him a cute smile)
Angad gives her a hug and she rests in his arms.

A: kripa?

K: hmmm?

A: can i ask you something?

K: ofcourse you can....what?
Angad lets go off kripa and stands up. clueless kripa gets up as well.

k: what happened?

A: Look at the sunset
Kripa looks at the sun setting at the horizon and is thinking that this is the most beautiful moment.

A: Kripa....
A: Will you go to spring conert with me?

K: Spring concert? (She gives him a big cute smile)
K: Ofcourse I will. You don't have to ask!!

She kisses him and you see the sunset in the background.


P: kripa tum kya soch rahi ho?
Suddenly kripa comes out of the flashback when she hears prithvi's voice.

P: kripa??

K: kuch nahi.

K: prithvi mein concert nahi jaana chahti. I dont want
to go.

P: what???dekho kripa tum mera ghussa spring concert pe kyu nikal rahi ho. I know you want to go and we will go. understand? Besides, i dont want to miss this oppurtunity of spending time with you.

k: prithvi plzz leave me alone for now.

P: lekin kripa....okay fine. tumhe waqt chahiye na? ok i'll give you some time. me tumhe kal subhe phone karoonga.

Kripa doesnt reply and he irritated and leaves closing the door behing him really hard.

Kripa watches him leave the house, get into his car and drive away. There are tears in her eyes, tears of pain coz just the thought that she can lose angad forever is piercing her heart.

After a while kripa goes to sleep. She dreams about losing angad and getting married to prithvi. She wakes up with a jolt all sweaty and scared. she gets really scared and can't go back to sleep. so she sneaks into angad's room. She gets into bed next to angad.

A: Kripa??

K: angad...woh mujhe neend nahi a raha tha to maine socha ki mein tumhare paas a jau.

A: kripa...lekin..

K: plzz angad ab kuch mat bolo. Let me feel your arms and your presence. plzz.
Angad doesnt say anything. not because kripa told him to not speak but coz he doesnt have anything to say.

K: angad...yeh sab kya ho gaya? yeh achanak..jab bhi mujhe thodi khushi milti hai kuch na kuch ho jata hain. yeh kya ho raha hai angad?
Angad still doesnt say nething

K: I dont know what to do angad. agar mein hamare bare me sochti hoon, to mujhe prithvi ka khayal aata hain. i really dont want to hurt him. lekin yehi sach hai ki main usse nahi tumse pyar karti hoon. I love you angad. i love you.

K: angad tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahe ho? plzz say something. I want to hear your voice.

A: mein kya kahu kripa....prithvi...hum ab kya karenge yeh to mujhe nahi pata lekin mein bhi tumhe khona nahi chahta. I can't loose you. you are the only thing i have.
He starts getting tears in his eyes. One of the tears falls on kripa's face and she looks up at angad.

K: angad? angad if u will cry, mera kya hoga? I cant afford to lose you either. (she starts crying too)

Angad stops crying and tries to hold kripa tighter to stop her from crying. After a while, they both wipe their tears and hug each other tightly. Even though they are not crying, their hearts are. They fall asleep in each others arms.


k guys this is part 11. i hope you guys like it. thnx for believing in me. continue leaving ur wonderful comments. 😊

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ANGAD AND KRIPA FOREVER


Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47

😭 THIS IS SO SAD 😭 I WANT TO CRY !!! but plz make angad and kripa together plz i can't see them separate !! 😭 😭
anywes nice part 👏 👏

take care of urself
Laiba



Edited by a-k-fan17 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
Thanks anyways
Do you mind doing me a favor???If yes can you open a new topic named Angad's and Kripa's Romance FAN-FIC?????
And I could continue that as my story by tommarow if you can't I understand. Thank YOU FOR YOUR TIME.
BYE!!!!!!!ALSO CONTINUE YOUR STORY PLEASE SOON 😊
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it was sooo sweet! please continue 😛
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RECAP:
Angad stops crying and tries to hold kripa tighter to stop her from crying. After a while, they both wipe their tears and hug each other tightly. Even though they are not crying, their hearts are. They fall asleep in each others arms.

PART 12:
In the morning kripa wakes up and realizes that she is in her room and not angads. She wonders how she got there coz she has no memory of getting there herself. All she remembers is falling asleep in angad's arms. Then she thinks that maybe angad brought her here before everyone woke up just to avoid any more problems. She smiles imagining angad carry her to her room. It must have felt so good, only if she could remember. She gets up and takes a shower and goes down for breakfast. But she has a horrible surprise in store for her.

K:Angad????
She sees angad downstairs with his suitcases and all his other luggage.

k: Angad yeh sab...what is all this? Tum kaha ja rahe ho?
At the same time prithvi comes.

P: Kripa, angad mere saath a raha hain.
Kripa looks at prithvi surprised.

K: Prithvi...tum yaha is waqt?

P: ha kripa. maine kaha tha na. Angad will stay at your house only until i come. aur aaj woh mere ghar chalega.
He gives kripa a big smile but kripa looks at him angrily. He feels a little awkward but brushes his feelings off.

P: Angad I'm waiting for you outside. Hurry up.
With this prithvi leaves.Kripa looks at angad who is looking down.

K: Angad? look at me. LOOK AT ME ANGAD!!

A:(looking at her): kripa...mein..

K: oh to ab tum bhi mujhe chod kar ja rahe ho?

K: kyon angad? kyon? tum yaha bhi to reh sakte ho na? plzz don't leave.plzzz.
Kripa runs to him and hugs him. he hesitates at first and then hugs her back.

A: I'm sorry kripa. Mein iss bar kuch nahi kar saka. kya kehta mein prithvi se? ke "mein tumhari gf se pyar karta hoon aur mein uske sath rehna chahta hoon"? I'm really sorry kripa. sorry

K: oh angad...ab hum kya karenge? what will happen?
Just then kripa's mom comes in the living room and looks at them shocked.

m: Kripa????
Kripa lets go of angad and looks back in a shock.

K: Mom?? woh..mom...

m: kripa yeh sab kya ho raha hain? aur tum angad? maine tum par itna bharosa kiya aur tumne? Maine to socha tha ki tum prithvi ke dost ho aur ek ache ladke ho. tumne meri beti ke saath aisa kyon kiya? achi tarah jaanti hu me tum jaise ladkon ko...
Angad is silent but is hurt. But kripa fights back.

k:Mom!!aap ko angad se iss tarah baath karne ka koi haq nahi banta. hum dono ek doosre se pyar karte hain. usne mujhe apne pyar ke jaal me nahi phasaya.

M: oh just shut up kripa!! tum nahi jaanti tum kya keh rahi ho. arre prithvi jaisa heera tumhe kabhi nahi milega. aur tum usse is angad ke liye khona chahti ho? tumhara dimak to theek hai na? Whats wrong with you kripa?

K: mom plzzz!!! aur kuch mat kahiye. aap meri mom hain is liye me aur kuch kehna nahi chahti. warna agar ap koi aur hoti to...
Prithvi enters from the back.

p: to?
Kripa turns back in shock.

K: prithvi?

P: ha kripa to kya keh rahi thi tum? agar koi aur hota to? to kya karti tum? agar me hota to kya karti tum?

K: prithvi..mein..tumse kehna chahti thi...lekin..

P: aur angad tum? tumne dost hone ka matlab hi badal diya. itna bada dhoka? how could you do this to me angad? aur tum kripa? kya tum mujhse kabhi pyar nahi karti thi? Never?

K: prithvi...
Kripa doesnt know what to say. she is feeling really bad about how prithvi came to know about the whole thing.

P: tumne mere saath theek nahi kiya kripa! aur tumhe iski saza zaroor milega. me tumhe itni asani se khushi pane nahi doonga. aaj se...

A:(IN A LOUD VOICE) STOP IT PRITHVI!!!! enough is enough. HOW DARE YOU TALK TO KRIPA IN THIS WAY? TUM USSE DHAMKI DE RAHE HO? ISSE PEHLE KI TUM USKA KUCH BIGAD SAKO TUMHE MERA SAMNA KARNA HOGA. U GET IT MR PRITHVI BOSE? YOU BETTER DO!

A: (looking at kripa): chalo kripa!
He grabs her hand and they drive away in her car.
Prithvi watches them and thinks:

P(thinking): Kripa yeh tumne theek nahi kiya. tumhe iski saza milegi. lekin agar kuch hoga to woh angad ko! mein tumhe kuch nahi karoonga. aur phir tum angad ke liye zindagi bhar tadapogi.

In the car:
They have driven for almost an hour now and both are quiet. Kripa is crying silently and even angad is shaken at what just happened.

A: kripa..are you okay? i'm sorry. i really am. mujhe..

k: nahi angad. kasoor tumhara nahi hai. mera naseeb hi kuch aisa hai.

A: tum aisa kyon soch rahi ho? everything will be fine..i'm sure.

K: nahi angad. mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai. prithvi ne jo kuch bhi kaha woh...

A: nahi kripa. mein prithvi ko kuch nahi karne doonga. aakhir woh kabhi mera dost tha. mein usse achi tarah se janta hoon. woh kuch nahi kar sakta.

K: phir bhi angad...i'm scared. really scared. aisa lag raha hai ki ab hamare zindagi mein koi toofan anewala hai.
Coincidentally it really starts raing heavily and angad finds it really hard to drive. so they stop at thid hotel. They are now far far away from home in a small town.
Angad and kripa get out of their car and run into the hotel. They are all wet now and ask for a room. the receptionist says that all rooms are full but there is only the honey moon suite. They go in to their beautiful suite and kripa goes to the bathroom to change.
Angad puts on the radio and sleeps on the bed. He falls asleep.But he wakes up when he hears kripa come out of the bathroom. All she has is a bathrobe since all her clothes are wet. Angad looks at her and how beautiful she looks with the wet hair on her face. He gets up and goes to her.He looks at kripa, who is blushing since angad is staring at her.

K: tum mujhe ghoor kyon rahe ho?

A: kyonki aaj tum hamesha se zyada khoobsoorat dikh rahi ho.
Kripa gives him a big smile as her face turns red.

A: kripa...I love you..
Angad buries his face in kripa's neck and starts kissing her neck. Kripa smiles.

k: angad! plz..
Angad lets go of her and goes away and sits on the bed. Kripa goes and sits next to him.

K: Angad? naraz ho mujhse?
Angad doesnt look at her and doesnt answer.

K: mujhse baath nahi karoge? Ok come on, Smile!

k: ok! ok! how about i'll kiss you if you smile?
Hearing this angad gives kripa a big cute smile.

A: okay..so wheres my kiss?
Angad comes close to her and she pushes him back again.
She smiles.

k: Angad!tum bhi na, ur like a kid. chocolate do to kuch bhi karta hain! Tum bache ho kya?

A: bacha? mein? nahi to. kyon? you want me to prove it?
He puts his arm around kripa's waist and pushes her on the bed.

K:(laughing and amazed): Angad?
You see angad kissing kripa passionately and the camera is focused on the radio that is playing the song " roop tera mastana..pyar mera deewana...bhool koi hamse na ho jaye."

ok guys. this is part 12. i hope you guys like it. leave comments 😉

Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago

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