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OMG DO THEY KISS!!! ur awesome, great fan fic!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx for so many nice comments. here goes the next part.

Part 8:
Angad keeps looking into kripa's gorgeous eyes. he gets really close to her and then...he gently kisses her.
But before it cud turn into a passionate kiss, kripa's phone rings.
Angad comes back to reality and lets go of kripa. she gets up awkwardly and runs out of the bathroom.she picks up the phone.
K: Hello?
p: hey..how is my jaan tonight?
K: prithvi????
She suddenly comes back to the reality that prithvi is still her bf.
P: kripa???? r u there? kripa???
K: yeah. i'm here. i'm just tired. woh mein dinner cook...
p(laughing): dinner? tum? kripa r u okay? doctor ko phone kiya kya?
k: prithvi plzzz its not funny. i'm really tired. i'll call you later. okay? i hav to go. bye
she hung up on prithvi before he can say nething.She sits on her bed with her head in her hand.
Angad sees her and doesnt know what to do. He is also feeling awkward about everything that is happening. But he knows that kripa feels the same way and he goes towards her and put his arm around her.
k (gets up with a jerk): uh angad? woh...me..prithvi..phone par....
A: relax kripa. i understand what you are trying to say. I'm really sorry. mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. i dont know mujhe kya hua tha. mein bas...I'm sorry.
Kripa starts crying hysterically and angad doesnt know what to do. so he put his arm around krip's shoulder to comfort her.
A: hey kripa..i said i'm sorry. I dint want to hurt you.
k: no angad...tumhari koi galti nahin hai. sab meri galti hain. I shudnt have. I mean...maine prithvi ke sath dhoka kiya hain. I'm the worst person in this world.

She continues to cry with her head in her hand. Angad tries to stop her but she keeps on repeating that she is wrong and she has cheated prithvi and broken his trust.
At this point angad gets really angry and slaps her. Kripa looks up at angad with red innocent eyes. He feels sorry for her.
A: kripa....i'm really sorry. I dint want to hurt you...I just want to tell you that..aaj tak maine tum jaise ladki se nahi mila hoon. Tumse zyada sacha insan na aaj tak maine dekha hai aur nahi kabhi dekhoonga.you are the most special and beautiful girl i hav ever met.

Hearing this kripa's heart melts and she gives him a big hug.
k: oh angad...u are the most special person for me too. I can't tell you how much our frndship means to us. I dont know wat i wud hav done in the past few days if u werent around. I can't tell you how much I...
She stops. She lets go of him. Angad looks at her. She has a shocked look on her face. She runs away from the room.
A: kripa...kripa!!! wats wrong? are you okay? Kr...
Before he can complete his sentence, she runs away and gets out of the house. Angad chases her but she drives away in her car. Angad gets worried and runs behind the car as far as he can and then he gives up.

Angad is really upset and decides to go to the beach where he spent his whole day with kripa.He takes a cab and reaches the place.
He takes a long stroll along the beach and after he walks for about twenty minutes, he spots a girl.
A: KRIPA?
Angad approaches the girl and she turns around and angad realizes that it is kripa.
A: kripa..tum yaha?
Kripa looks into his eyes. Angad's heart melts down in an instant. he can't stop staring at her beautiful and innocent eyes that were now red with tears. The tears in her eyes had now dried up but the pain was still left.
A: kripa...yeh tumhe achanak kya hua? tum aise ghar se..what happened kripa?
K: Angad...today i have discovered something that i thought i had discovered 2 years ago. aaj mujhe kuch aisa mila hai jo mein do sall se dhoond rahi thi.
A: kripa? what are you talking about? I dont understand!
k: angad aisa nahi hona chahiye tha. I know i love prithvi but what i didnt know was that i am not in love with him. I really do care for him. and maybe that is the reason why today i feel so much pain for him. I don't want to hurt him angad. but i dont know wat to do.
She starts crying again
A: hey kripa!!!! ( starts hugging her)
kripa hugs him back and starts to cry in his arms. This time he doesnt stop her. He wants her to cry and let out her feelings. He consoles her and she continues to cry in his arms for more than 15 minutes and stands there quiet and calm but still worried about her. After she feels a little better, she lets go of him.
A: feel better?
K: yeah...thnx angad.
A: i told you kripa! no thnx and
K: no sorry. i know angad but still. i really appreciate it.
They decide to take a walk on the beach. finally after walking a lot, they sit on the sand and rest for a while.
After staring at the stars for a while, they fall asleep on the sand in each other's arms.

okay guys thats it fo rtoday. i know its short.
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Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago
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Ossom!!! i think u should contact ekta aunty. Plz do continue soon 👏
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HEY I REALLY LIKE UR STORY...............................
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Posted: 19 years ago
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k guys. here gors the next part. thnx for the nice comments.

Part 9:
Next Morning:
Kripa wakes up and realizes where she is.She gives a really cute smile and remebers what happened last nite. The whole thing flashbacks in her head. How angad held her hands while they were strolling on the beach, how he hugged her and listened to her when she was crying, how he didnt even say anything after she ran away from home. She was remembering last nite and was looking at angad at the same time. She realized that she had never really looked at angad as this really hot guy but just a nice guy who happens to be her bf's best frnd.
While she is staring at angad, he wakes up too and looks at her. She feels really embarrased and looks away. He realizes that she is feeling awkward. He gets up and starts brushing off the sand from his clothes.
K: Angad? (She calls him and he looks at her)
At this point kripa starts laughing.Angad is surprised at why she is laughing.
A: KRipa? are u alright? itna has kyon rahi ho?
K: Angad woh....(she continues laughing)
A: Kripa!!! what?
K: angad tumhare nose par sand hain.
Angad wipes him nose off and looks at her. He starts laughing too.

Next scene:
In the car...
Angad and kripa are both quiet and dont say nething about last night. They have this silent understanding that it is better if they dont talk about it.
Kripa arrives at her house and they get off. They go in and are shocked to see kripa's parents back at home. Actually they were supposed to come the next day.
K: Mom??Dad???
M:(in a suspicious tone): Kripa?? tum...tum dono itni subhe subhe kaha gaye the? Its just 8.
K: ha woh mom....hum...
A: uh aunty...woh actually..aaj subhe me jaldi ut gaya to maine hi kripa se kaha ki hume kahi jana chahiye. Kripa ne mana kiya tha.Par maine zid kiya to usse aana pada.
Kripa looks at him and thinks about why he stood up for her and lied for her.
Angad and kripa go to their rooms and continue thinking about the night before.
After a while they get ready for some breakfast and go downstairs.

At the breakfast table:
D: Kripato tumne kya decide kiya hai?
k: decide? kis bare me dad?
D: arre spring concert ke liye. prithvi a raha he kya?
When kripa's dad said prithvi she suddenly remembered how unhappy she was with him. how much she dint want to go with pritvi anymore. She felt like she deserved much more.
k: woh dad...abhi tak maine decide nahi kiya. Agar woh nahi aayega, me concert me nahi ja paugi. I dont want to go alone.
Angad is quiet but he is listening to this. He remembers what prithvi had suggested him to to....ASK KRIPA TO THE CONCERT. but prithvi had also said that kripa wud never agree to go with him. The thought of kripa rejecting him made him scared.
A(thinking): kripa...i want to go with you. par agar tumne mere sath jaane se inkar kar diya to ????
K(thinking): kaash angad yeh samajh pata ke mein uske saath jaana chahti hoon, prithvi ke saath nahin. lekin mein kya kar sakti hoon.....

After breakfast, kripa and angad set out for her college and more preparations. They get into her car and drive away. On the way they dont say nething but are still thinking about the concert. They get to the college and get out of the car. This time the whole college is staring at them and gossiping about them. Angad and kripa realize this and are suspicious about what is happening.They look at each other and r surprised. But they ignore it and go to the auditorium.
Kripa and angad arrive and anita gives them the most disgusting look.
k: Anita? tumhe kya hua? aur college me hame sab itna stare kyon kar rahe he.
An: kripa...iss ka sawal tum apne aap se pucho!
K: anita????? yeh kis tara se baat kar rahi ho tum mujhse? where r ur manners?
An: manners? tum mujhe bataogi? kripa...tum jaise ladki ko to manners kya hote hai woh bhi shayad pata nahin hoga

Kripa is shocked at the way anita is speaking this way. She looks at angad who is clueless but doesnt speak.

k: anita...stop it!!!! how dare you.....

An: oh shut up kripa!! maine yeh kabhi anhi socha that ki tum prithvi ke saath aisa karogi. wo tumse kitna pyar karta hai.

k: anita...yeh tum kya...

Anitha gives the newspaper to her.

An:yeh lo kripa...khud pad lo.

Anita leaves. Kripa opens up the newspaper and is hocked at what she sees.

k: oh my god...yeh sab..yeh..

A: (worried) what happened kripa...tum he ye hua??

He takes the paper from her and is shocked himself.

A: what the hell is is?

(he reads from the newspaper): " Kripa Sharma, daughter of the S. Sharma, has a new man in her life" and there are also pics of krip and angad hugging, holding hands, sleeping in each others arms on the beach.

This shocks both kripa and angad.

okay guys thts it for today. i know its kinda boring but i wanted to put something interesting in the next one. so hopefully u guys will like the next part. plzzz leave comments.

😛😊

Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago

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