Pyaar ,Dosti Aur Duriyan epilogue in pg 46 dt12.09 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Beautiful promo
Maaneet are having mast time in Goa
Maan is being very naughty.
Something has gone wrong
Hope it is nothing serious
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plz update soon
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precap is good

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nice promo...waiting for the update
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Hey sweetheart just loved the promo its awesome now how du u expect us to wait after this plzzz be quick okie
and du update soon will be waiting eagerly
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niceee promooo
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Very interesting FF...Waiting for the update😊
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Next Part:-

After 2days they all r ready to go in GOA but as per dadi ma first maaneet will go there after 1 or 2 days they will join them there.

GOA:-

Maaneet Reached in Goa at evening.

Maan looking at geet who is looking out side excitingly.

Maan smiles and said good evening Mrs Khurana.

Geet smiles and said so gayi thi na.

Maan just nodded and then they reached to their cottage which is already booked for them.Maan complete the all formalities then they headed towards their cottage.

Geet is looking very happy and maan thinks Thank God , no more mood swings till now.

Geet look at maan and smiles at him.

Maan give her a faint smiles and thinks iye achanak inti muskura kyuon rehi hain , aab kaunsa bomb mujh pe girane wali hain,

Geet:-Maan I was thinking about something.

Maan:-hmmm and in his mind ho gaya , kya soch rehe hain iye

Geet:-oh tum chalo mein baad mein bolti hoon.

Both enter the cottage and geet is lost in the beauty of the house and place.

Maan:- geet, fresh ho lo.today we will order something light.

Geet nodded then said dadi ma ko inform kar dena aur bolna oh log kab aarehe hain iha.

Maan frowned and said geet, we r in our honeymoon and u r waiting for ur family.

Geet:-maan,they r not coming soon, we have 1 week

Maan:- wait wait, u told them 2days , I mean after 2days they r coming now from where 1 week.

Geet :- eh lo abhi mujhe kehe rehe the I'm missing them and now.

Maan:- geet, baat ko ghumao mat aur bolo. Iye 2days se 1 week chakkar kya hain.

Geet come close to her and hugged him from his neck and placed kissed on his side lips and said huskily how I'll deprived my hubby darling on our honeymoon. Then bit his lower lips and said I'm waiting jaan and going towards their bedroom.

Maan stood rooted in that place and then got his senses and said isse kya hua, iye mere geet inti transformed kaise ho gaya then smiles, and little blushed then wickedly smiles and said well mrs khurana wait for me.

Next day morning


Geet wake up and smiles and see maan looking at her and then said good morning mrs khurana.

Maan pull her close and his hand wander around her bare back to her stomach then to her thighs.

Maan bend down and kissed her neck and then to her shoulder and look his marks there and remind yesterday night when he gave it.

Maan gently kissed the area and deepened his head on her throat and give her wet kisses. Here, Geet moaned in pleasure Maan,,ahh, then he bend on her cleavage area and gives kisses and then look at geet and pull her in his embrace and said u r so sweet geetu,

Geet who is already closed her eyes and blushed and said badmash bahut bure ho, tum.

Maan :- accha aab mein bura hoon, ha.

Geet:-ha.saara raat sone nehi dia,bhaut badhmashi baar gayi hain aapke.

Maan look at her and then wickedly smiles and said mere badhmashi aab suru hoga and then take her spread to cover them and take geet to his world and give her all love, pleasure .

At the evening, geet is walking with maan in the beach and humming some song then said maan

Maan:-ha jaan,

Geet:-tumhe pata hain pari is in love.

Maan:-hmmm.

Geet:-kya hmm, tumhe accha nehi laga.

Maan:- geet, if pari is in love then what it's her life, she falls in love or not that is not my problem and btw she is musibat for us always,I told u earlier also that stay away from her but u.

Geet::-Maan. How rude u r . she is still immature and child,we all know and we all know who she repent about her old behavior .

Maan:- geet, we r here to spend time together neither argue about some one else.

Geet:- maan y r saying like this.

Maan:- geet,meine kya kaha, just say we r here to spend time together neither talking about or argue about some one else.

Geet removed his hand from her waist and said maan ur changed now. U r become more rude, y r so full on urself, don't u see she changed and after that day she never talk with u like that or .

Maan already loose control his temper still said geet,I'm not rude, let's go from here it's already late.

Geet:- no first tell me y r u behaving like this,

Maan close his eyes and said geet, kaha ke baat kaha le jarehe ho tum, chalo iye sab baat choro aur wapas chalte hain.

Geet:- maan,kyuon sahi baat sunna nehi chahehte tum.it's pari who have crush on u not u then what is the problem

Maan painfully looking at geet and said wapas chalo, it's late and u will catch cold.

Geet:- mein sab ko phone karke bata deti hoon , oh log na aaye.

Maan:- geet, wapas chalo and just stop it here ,don't take wrong direction to the word

Geet:-par tumne

Maan now shouts almost and said no more argument geet, I never told any one like that.

I was just thinking to spend time with u as I was busy with my work and don't give u proper time nothing more and for pari, well if she never done that type of thing still I don't like her,and now let's go.

Geet:- but

Maan:- no more word, pari pari, pari who is she . look geet, I allowed her for u but it's not about she has crush on me or not and more thing today u really hurt me.

Geet silently followed him .

After dinner maan gave her medicine and then said good night, kuch chaiye toh bolna mujhe.

Then he moved to couch and laid there.

Geet looking at him and thinks she went far away with this, she don't know y she reacted that way.

Geet softly called maan,

Maan:- so jao geet, raat bahut ho gaye hain.

Geet:- maan, I'm sorry .I don't want to hurt it's just.

Maan:- no u didn't hurt me , u said true things and it's ok so jao.

Geet:-maan.

Maan:- so jao ,geet, raat bahut ho gayi and in this state it's not good for u,

Geet look at maan who is cover his eyes by his strong arms and here geet's tears automatically starts flowing from her eyes and she silently crying there and cursed herself for spoiling their time and hurting maan.

Maan turns his head and murmur,now what is this?

Maan come close to her and sit next to her kyuon ro rehe ho geetu.

Geet hugged him and said I don't want to hurt , I'm sorry I was just and sob..sob..oh but maan stopped her and said give her glass of water and said take it.

Geet who is crying just some how take a sip and again said I sob' sorry'sob. Oh ' mein'.

Maan make her lie in the bed and said so jaao geet,

Geet hugged his waist and said I'm sorry .I don't mean to hurt u.I'm sorry.

Maan laid besides her and take her in his arms and said shhh, don't ,

Geet:-I' but maan cut her and said don't kaha na, it's ok, now sleep geetu, .

Geet look at him when maan said accha kal kaha chale hum.

Geet still looking at him when maan said waise my little angel will love me more.

Geet still looking at her blankly and sobbing slowly. After lots of soothing word geet falls in sleep .

Maan looking at her and kissed her forehead and switched off the lights.

Later maan feels some wetness in his chest and then heard sobbing of geet.

Maan look at geet and said geetu , kya hua dear?

But geet who is crying and said I'm sob sorry sob maan.

Maan hugged her tight and said shhh, it's not ur fault jaan, may be u r right she is good and changed now,I know jaan, u don't want to hurt me, it's just, dekho jaan, aab bhul jao thorit thori baaton ko leke aise rone lagoge toh kaise hoga.

Geet:- no, u right sob and upar I sob hurt and sob said those sob words, I..I never sob want to hurt u sob'sob.

Maan hugged him more tight and take her beneath him and said jaan, look at me, do u want our child's health affect, do u want ur health will affect by this , u know na how I feel, and ur tears it's hurt me not those words. Jaan, it's ok, u know something and want to make me understand and we have misunderstanding about it and fight baas,now forget it about it.

Geet look at him with her big almond eyes and then again start crying.

Maan shook his head and then said jaan, ro mat, dekho mein sach kehe raha hoon,I'm not angry on u neither hurt , dekho, ha thoda sa dard hua but then think about ur view , jaan aise ro mat dekho na.

Geet :-par tum sob gussa kyuon sob nehi ho, meine galati kya, jo sob bhi ho I hurt u , how sob could I told those words to u. sob for some one else, sob .

Maan can't take it any longer and kissed her lips gently and said geet, look if u don't stop ur crying now then I'll leave from here but geet hugged him and said I'll not. When maan smiles and look at her and kissed her whole face with all his love and said love u geetu, and drink all her tears and then huskily said jaan.

Geet lost in maan's dark eyes and husky voice, maan bend down and take her lips and nibbling it gently. Slowly slowly geet also start to responding him .

After some time when they break , maan look at her and said jaan,

Geet who slowly looking at him and her cheeks look red due to shyness , maan understand her mind is diverted now and said chalo so jate hain.

Geet nodded in no and said mujhe nehi sona.

Maan smiles and said jaan, it's right for baby and ur health, we will spend more time together later now sleep for some time.

Geet nodded then said tum sach mein gussa nehi ho na.

Maan :-no.

Geet:-I'll say one thing

Maan:-hmmm

Geet:-oh pari nehi aarehi hain, uske collage ka trip hain so they I mean she and her friends will go to Shimla , manali .

Maan:-hmm,

Geet:-aur ek baat.

Maan:- kya hain,

Geet:- she want to tie rakhi on ur hand.

Maan look at her then smiles and said tum sab pagal ho, aab chalo so jao.

Geet:-aur ek baat hain.

Maan raised his eye brows when geet said oh ek nehi do.

Maan:- raat iss tarah spend karna hain kya, kal sunuga chalo so jao.

Geet:- maan.pls.

Maan:-hmm bolo.

Geet:-she want to wish us in our anniversary. So may be she will call in my cell tonight no tomorrow morning.I gave her permission , I know u might be angry but I see her intentions r good, if not then I'll never allow her .

Maan kissed her lips and then her eyes and said I know jaan, it's just my fault also and my reaction, sorry geetu.

Geet hugged him and played with his long fingers and said no ,I should tell u before and didn't tell those things to u,

Maan sighed then said accha chalo bahut sorry sorry hogaya. Raat ke 2.30 baje chalo so jate hain aur agar oh phone kare toh hum baat karenge now sleep,and no more word. U need rest also and if u wants this honey moon really likes honeymoon.

Geet blushed and maan gently kissed her little cute nose and said now good night jaan,

Next day morning , maan wake up when she is feeling some one caressed his head lovingly, he smiles and know who is and just pull her closely and gently and said good morning jaan, itni jaldi kyuon uth gaye .

Geet:-oh abhi 9.30 baaj gaye and u r late not me and dadi ma ne phone kya the and she want to ask u something.

Maan:-kya

Geet:-mujhe nehi pata aapko phone karne kaha hain .

Maan:-hmmm,

Later the morning maan called dadi ma and then booked another big cottage for others as they will come after 1 week.

Geet is cooking when maan come and engulfed her in his strong arms and said y r u cooking, m here na at ur service ma'm

Geet giggle at maan's stubble tickling her and maan placed kissed neck, shoulder, collar bone and bit her earlobe.

Geet moaned maan.

Maan smiles and licked and sucked the earlobe and geet continue her moaning when maan said many things r unfinished

Geet:- maan , but I done almost.

Maan:-hmm but here is garnishing is left and something needed to heated up.

Geet looks confused when maan picked her up in his arms and geet shouts what r u doing?

Maan:-shhh,u r bad at cooking , first le me teach u some process, how to marinate then slowly slowly cook it and then garnishing it.

Geet looks at him with wide eyes and her moths is wide open when maan said in deep husky voice y r u staring at me like this, abhi toh pura cooking learn karna hain.

After some time Maan panting hard besides geet and want to gain his breath. Here geet who is still try to control her erotic heart beats and her uneasy breathing. Then slowly maan take geet in his arms and kissed her eyes which r looking at him with all love, desire, passion.

Maan chuckle to see it and said u r looking more beautiful and gorgeous.

Geet hugged him and said all cause of ur love.

Maan see a love bites in her shoulder and he slowly kissed the area and licked it and his finger make his way in her stomach to her leg, thighs and Geet shuddered and feels chill wind blowing in her spine and she moaned maan.

Maan smiles and said let's wait and bring lunch here when geet said no take me with u.

Maan:-don't want to leave me for a moment.

Geet nodded in yes when maan take her in his arms and take her to the dining room.

At evening,

Geet is eating chocolate milkshake and said maan who is looking at her and said yes jaan.

Geet who is now only wearing only maan's shirt said aapne pari ko kya kaha ?

Maan who caressing her stomach and said nothing, just to take care of herself .and just cause of u.mind it.

Geet :-hmmm, u r my sweet heart.

Maan:- accha, my sherni,

Geet again giggles then said complete.

Maan:- what?

Geet:- milkshake.

Maan take the glass then said anything more u want.

Geet:-hmmm

Maan smiles naughtily and said I know and placed the glass in side table and placed her in his laps and said so .

Geet look at him when maan said waise my little angel will love me more.
Geet show him tongue and said no , she will love me more.
Maan:- let's see.
Maan gently kissed her lips and said geetu, take some rest, till then will finish the some work.

Geet:- but,

Maan shhh just sleep some time, and take rest, she is my sister and her birthday will be celebrate in grand way, just like kunal want.

Geet smiles and said of course.but we should tell yash or vicky to keep it surprise and hide it from her,

Maan:- already informed ur laadla devar.

Geet:- all done , my sweet heart.

Maan:-yes jaan. And peck her lips and left the room before that cover her with a blanket.

Later maan called vicky and informed him about the surprise party but guess vicky's voice is not good, he is tensed but vicky said nothing , just normal.

Here yash asked kaun maan?

Vicky nodded and said yes bro is too happy ,

Yash said something to vicky and said we should inform about this to maan.
Priya said but we should careful about geet. She doesn't know anything and hope will never know about this in this condition.

Adi:- but how and who will tell this to maan.

Vicky:- hmmm, let me think something.

Priya but one thing remember that neither mammy jee ,papa jee and dadi ma know about it.

Yash nodded in yes.then said pari kya chali gayi

Priya ha just few moments ago,Sasha and pinky and Arun went with her to Air port.

Vicky nodded and today she looks cheerful cause bro talk with her nicely after long time.

Priya:- hmm but job hi pari ne kya tha so it's natural from maan bhiya, well we all know how is he.

Yash nodded when vicky said but bhabi ne bahut acche samal dia tha baat ko and make pari understand what is good for her.

Priya:-yes ohi toh she is perfect for my bhaiya.

Yash:-priya don't feel bore to praise ur bro and bhabi continuously

Priya look at yash and said if kunal is there na then u will see what u face and left the place.

Vicky and yash look at Priya then at each other and said how calmly she said it ,.

Here, at Goa :-

Geet moaned maan, ahhh stop,
Maan smirked and said jaan what happen?
Geet badhmash,kya kar rehe the, jab dekho badmashi suru.
Maan hold her bare stomach and said really jaan.

Geet turns and said yes my dear hubby now move and let me wear something.

Maan naughtily smiles at her and pull her close to him and caressed her bare back and wear my shirt it's besides geet wear it and said but it's button is not there

Maan lay and looking at ceiling and said who rip it.

Geet blushed and just hide herself in maan's chest.

Maan hugged her back and said I love u when u showed ur passion jaan.

Geet smiles shyly but maan feel her cheek r red and hot due to shyness.

At mid night , geet said maan

Maan :-hmmm bolo

Geet:-kaha ho aap, mujhe thand lag rehi hain

Maan:- look at geet then check her forehead and then cover her with another light blanket and then get up and take night dress of her and make her wear it and hugged her tightly.

Geet just snuggle more to him to take the warmth from him.


Geet wake up and find herself in her husband's arm and smiles and hugged him and said work out nehi karna , baas staring at me .
Maan smiles and kissed her eyes and said nehi. Only want to see u .

Geet smiles and said me also only want to see u.

Geet placed her head on maan's chest and said maan, iyaad hain jab bachpan mein mein ghumne jana chathi thi ekele,tum kitne danta tha mujhe then when I went for holiday with my students but before that I have to buttering u., instead of dadi ma or munsi jee then suddenly geet stopped and said munsi jee.

Maan look at her pale face and kissed her and said shhh,jaan, don't think about him.

Geet turns and said lerki hone se unhone mujhe nehi aapna , aapne beti ko kyuon maan, unhone aise kya.I'm his daughter na, but, he abandon me, he never recognize me, I'm with him but not as his daughter but as an orphanage y?

Geet is crying and said maan what is my fault maan, pls tell me,y y he done this to me.

Maan:- geet, he don't deserve to be called as father, and u just look at me, u r strong geetu, he is not , yes he is ur biological father but it's not all , he never care for u neither done his duty as father , he never loves, neither care for u, , more he never give respect to ur mother. He only think about himself,

Geet look at maan and said I know maan and mere dukh ohi hain , how much pain my mom bore that time.and sighed .

Maan hide her geet and try to calm her and said don't think about munshi jee dear, ok u know I heard ur mom is so beautiful and very kind nature .

Geet smiles and said yes u told me this before and said maan can u ask u something.

Maan:-pucho jaan.

Geet:- oh actually, Maan if we have baby girl then.

Maan look at geet then understand the questions and said jaan, if we have baby girl I'll be very happy, baby will be replica of my geetu, and if the baby will boy then he will be replica of mine . jaan, don't think like that,u know ma na then how could u.

Geet:-I know , I just

Maan kissed her forehead and said don't think too much , every one not same.

Geet:-sorry.

Maan smiles,and huggs her tightly and said u r my life jaanu ,baby will be our love, so never think like that, u and our baby r my life jaan.

Then little pause and maan said geetu, thnks darling for come in life and make my life brighter.
Geet shyly smiles and huggs him tight.

Later they make food together where maan mainly doing naughty things sometime later maan fed her and told her about the surprise party of priya's birthday

But after 2days maaneet received a call and a msg from some one and maan looks deep tensed when geet said iye kya ho raha hain maan, asie suddenly. Oh logo ka pata chalega toh.

Maan:- ohi toh kuch samajh mein nehi aaraha hain.

Then maan said something to geet and


Geet:- maan r u sure , mujhe daar lag raha hain.

Maan hugged her and said u trust me na.
Geet placed her hand on his hand and said khud se jada.

Old Precap:-


Maan remember about something and feel sad when geet make him feel good.
Rest of the family join them. every one enjoys there.
Abhishek sleep with maaneet .
Pari's new boy friend.




Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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hi all
how r u all?

sorry for late updating as I just back from my home town couple of days ago.

Note:-
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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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awsome didi ,,
loved it !!!
wat is the suspense ??
eagerly waiting ..
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago

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