Humari Daastan FF Updated Part 7B Page 40 - Page 9

Haaye😍! Tough line to start off with babz😕! Heart is already beating faster in anticipation❤️!

'Kab hotein hain pyar ke raaste aasaan, suniye ek mohobat ki kahani, Humari Daastan'

It is such a revolutionary feeling to see a lighter and more talkative side of the male protagonist after having seen a series of serious angry young men served in a platter. Of course Arnav was quick to get annoyed at the phone ringing, but which guy likes getting interrupted while uniting with his loved one? Let alone meeting that person for the first time in 3 years😳.

Khushi's concern was justified. But why did she take the phone😕? Kha-ma-kha bechari ko taane sunne pad gaye na🤔. Waise Mami ka character is stemming out really well👍🏼. She seems like the perfect vamp😈. Sort of reminds me of current khushi's bua😆. Let's wait and see how similar the character sketches turn out.

Who doesn't love being cuddled into the warmth, protection and affectionate possessiveness of at least one person in their lives❤️? I know I do😳. It could be friends, family or any special relationship of the likes. Of course, if that someone is the one you are romantically associated with, the overall attraction level raises many notches up. If I were Khushi in the scene where Arnav notices the change in her expressions and immediately takes the phone away concluding that it is Mamiji, I would be reliving that moment, that act of protectiveness from this man, probably all night and many more to come☺️. These small sweet gestures in life are what become fuel that keeps any relationship alive and burning. Such sweetness and power of love was in that small action of Arnav. The pair's understanding of each other's actions and reactions is stupendo-fantabulously-fantastical like Geeta ma always says👏. In fact the couples in both your FFs share this divine bond☯️.

By the way I love how all lead men in your stories are very sharp and blatantly aware of their surroundings. They may be clueless and novice romancers but skillful at picking nuances of subtlety in personalities and conflicts. It's hard to find this. Oh no here I go stereotyping men again😡. It's just that I know so many men in my family who are clueless about clashes between females of the house. Whether they are truly ignorant or choose to blissfully overlook it, is unknown to me. All I know is that where I come from, unfortunately it's not widely practiced to expect this. So seeing this trait in the men of all your stories delights me dil se⭐️.

Moving on..

I went on describing a man's battles between pyar and parivaar but then it got too boring so scratched that! Jo imagine karna ho kar lena Baba ROFL! 🤣

Arnav made a note in his mind to ensure he didn't leave Khushi alone with Mami, and made a point to tell mami sternly that BOTH of us are coming home. Here he goes, protecting her again. So poignant na! He very tactfully handled and silenced mami. Loved it! 👍🏼

By the way curiosity killed the cat🤢🤣. What kind of face did Arnav make at Khushi😕? I want to know no! Was it, cute and naughty😉? Was it, shut up and let me handle it😵? Was it, don't worry darling I got this? I am telling you girl I need to imagine every single thing in your FFs now a days warna mujhe neend nahi aati. 😳🤣

Jaan Chuti, he jokes! How wicked and mischievous of him🤪! Again, I am enjoying this side of the male lead, knowing full well that I am a sucker for all of those angry young men😳.

Just as khushi opened her mouth.. mujhe laga Chup Bilkul Chup jaisa koi scene hone wala tha😆! Lekin aap ne toh mera hi mooh bandh kar diya😲. Predictability ki toh dhajjiya! Shaabash Baba👏!

A glass of water! Hmm! He went looking for her medicines then? Somehow my heart is pacing faster at the thought of the scene that will follow next.

Aww khushi has no hint of what her man is up to does she😳? Her concern was soo sweet😛. She knew and understood that his mom must be dying to see her son, and vice versa. She also refers to her as Ma😕? How endearing is that😍!

Haaye raam tadapa tadapa ke maroge aap hame writer Saab🤢! Arnav ki flirting wali line sunke hum ko bhi blushing ho gayi☺️❤️. Waise that one line itself that he had used only jokingly with her, had so much depth and significance to it. I won't indulge since I am currently hypnotized by the ongoing romance😆☺️! Baaki bacha tha toh besharam ne aankh bhi maar di😈.

The next two lines, SUPERB! "Hai Yeh sharm ek din..!" "agar apni jaan ke bare mein kuch bola toh!" Brilliant work Tinz. So much passion, love, security, concern, care, comfort, and sheer beauty of vast emotions. The entire sequence, where he held his ears and apologized cutely, her scolding back, and melting immediately by his infectious laugh! Right here Right now I want to say another long adjective: supercali-fragilistic-expialidocious!!! Yummy!!!😳🤗☺️☢️

And then came the question. "Where is Dawa?" Such is the knitted intricacy of your writing Tinz, you made me visualize her tucking a strand of her hair behind her ears in nervousness. My heart is now racing even faster.

She lied and he caught it immediately. She tried to make excuses but he kept catching on. Haaye Sweetness personified😍😍😍😍😍.

Kaka's interruption was much needed for the story progression I bet🤢. Sad but true😔.

The contemplation in both of their minds about the other was wonderfully weaved! And the fact that he decided he was going to do something about her chawl's hoodlums regardless of Khushi's pleas was alluring😍. Smart and protective enough was the man that he wasn't going to let her be any part of his plot😳😈.

😲😕 How in the world, did you manage to invoke so many emotions in your viewers by just a small sequence like- he looked at her reassuringly, she felt at peace, grabbing on to his hand slowly and shyly, and he tightened his grip. It was pouring sheer magic baba😍❤️! Simply magical and out-worldly👍🏼!

The story flowed fabulously! I thought since aaj the story is not divided into sections, I can expect my analysis to be pretty short😆. Why does your writing always prove me wrong😕? The star of the show was the dawa sequence👏. Aap bas lage raho😳. I think aap ko roz ek naya naam milega⭐️. Aap mar-tina baba nahi. Mardala baba ho🤢🤣!

Jay ho! ☯️

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Recap: Khushi's eyes welled up at Arnav's words, just as she was about to say something back, Arnav's phone rang.

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Part 3

'Kab hotein hain pyar ke raaste aasaan, suniye ek mohobat ki kahani, Humari Daastan'

'Yeh phone bhi na, kya timing hai - vah vah!' Arnav exclaimed in a annoyed voice.

'Ghar se hoga,' Khushi replied, 'aap aise hi yahan chale aye. Pehle ghar jaane tha na.'

Just as Arnav was about to reply, Khuhsi interrupted him by taking the phone out of his hands and answering it.

'Hello.' said Khushi, expecting to hear the voice of Arnav's mother at the other end of the line.

'Oh ho! Toh ab Arnav ka phone bhi tum hi utaogi! Hum logon ko apne bete se baat bhi tumse ijaazat le kar karni hogi!' The taunting voice of Arnav's Mami came through.

Khushi's face immediately fell and this did not go unnoticed by Arnav and he immediately took the phone from Khushi.

'Ji Mamiji. Boliye.' Arnav spoke in a nonchalant manner. He had always been respectful to his Mami, despite the niggling feeling he had that his Mami was not Khushi's biggest fan. Arnav made a mental note to try and ensure he didn't leave Khushi alone with her.

I loved Arnav's protective instinct as he pulled the phone from her, as well as the authority Khushi exercised over Arnav when she took the phone from him and enjoying the liberty of answering his phone. Which means considering they are childhood friends, she does enjoy a good rapport with his mother. I love how Arnav doesnt fail to notice even a slight change in Khushis change or her behavior even if it means expressions!! once again perfect detailing to the T. At this stage he has made a mental note, to make sure he wont let his mental mami to attack Khushi ever again!! nice...

'Arre beta, kab se tumhari Ma tumahra intezaar kar rahi haan. Ishq vishq ki baatein baad mein kar lena. Pehle apne parivaar se toh mil lo.' Mami scolded.

emotional blackmail 😡😡😡😡 mujhe yeh maami already pasand nahi hai ... pehle meri khushi se paise cheen liye, fir usey taana maara, aur Arnav ko suna rahi hai ... grrr...

'Mami, hum dono abhi nikal rahe hain.' Arnav replied, making sure to emphasise the 'hum dono',

i like that ... !!! 😳 he didnt say anything in retaliation but his actions, and his simple words conveyed it all to her ...i cud imagine the grit in his teeth and the determination in his voice as he broke this to his maami amma!!!😆😆😆😆

'Aur vaise bhi, Ma ko patha hai ki main yahan hoon toh phir voh intezaar toh nahi kar rahi hongi.' Arnav replied in a mockingly sweet tone.

'Arnav!' Khushi quietly reprimanded.

Arnav made a face at Khushi but didn't mock his Mami any further.

'Accha Mami ab aap phone rakhengi toh hi hum ayenge na?' Arnav said in the sweetest tone he could muster.

i totally love this man and his sarcasm ...😍

'Theek hai, theek hai. Rakh rahe hain. Jaldi ao.' With that, Mami disconnected the call.

'Jaan chuthi!' Arnav joked as soon as Mami had put the phone down.

Just as Khushi opened her mouth to tell Arnav off, he suddenly went into the kitchen and started looking for something.

'Arre, kya doondh rahe hain aap?' Khushi asked confused.

She grew even more baffled when Arnav came out of the small kitchen and handed Khushi a glass of water. Her confusion only grew when re turned around and went back into the kitchen.

Khushi set the glass of water in her hands down on the small side table and followed Arnav into the kitchen to see what he was looking for.

'Theen saal hoge hain aapko yahan aye. Aapki yaadaash itni bhi acchi nahi hai. Humne kuch hila diya hoga. Batiye toh sahi ki doondh kya rahe hain?' Khushi asked, now growing slightly impatient. She didn't know why Arnav was wasting time. Though Mami had been taunting her on the phone, Khushi knew that she was right and that Arnav needed to go home. She knew how much Ma - she also referred to Arnav's mother as Ma, had been missing Arnav. Khushi was also aware that Arnav would have missed his mother immensely in the last three years.

'Theen saal honge, lekin tumhe toh bachpan se jaante hoon na? Tum chahe poora ghar ulat-pulat kar lo - mein phir bhi tumari har cheez doondh loonga.' Arnav teased Khushi - causing her to blush. Thoroughly enjoying the redness that had taken over Khushi's face, Arnav decided to mortify her further by winking at her.

so basically he is trying to tell herr, no matter what you try and hide from me you will not be able to succeed.. I am just presuming, tomorrow if Khushi decides to relocate and move away from his life because she wishes him well, he will do anything and succeed in finding her ...😆😆😆😆❤️

As soon as she saw Arnav wink at her, Khushi began to blush uncontrollably and her face became aghast with shock.

'Arnav!' She scolded.

Arnav could not hep but laugh at Khushi's reaction,

'Hai. Yeh sharm ek din-' Arnav began but was interrupted by Khushi,

'Aage agar apni jaan ke bare mein kuch bhi bola na aapne toh!' She warned.

Arnav looked scared and held his ears,

'Acche memsaab - maafi. Humari itni majaal ki hum aapke ijaazat ke bina kuch keh dein?'

'Phir mazaak!' Khushi scolded once again but Arnav's infectious laugh meant that she was also unable to hold her anger for much longer.

Once they had both recovered from their jokes and teasing, Arnav remembered what he had been looking for in the kitchen.

'Khushi, pehle tumne baat taal di thi - tumahri dawa kahaan hai?'

yes yes yes !!! issey kehte hai gleeful excitment ...🤣 i knew thats what he was looking for ... can you see my excited face 😳😳 😃

Khushi immediately grew nervous and tucked a strand of hair behind her hair.

'Voh - humne dawai le li hai Arnav.' She replied in a shaky voice.

'Accha, theen saalon mein jhoot bolna bhi seekh gayi ho tum.' Arnav asked in a much more serious tone.

Khushi stared at him - dumbfounded. She didn't know what to say.

'Arnav...voh...hum - haan! Kal na bahut tez baarish thi toh isiliye hum jaa kar dawa nahi la sake. Jhoot kaun bol raha hai.' Khushi hoped the excuse would work. She knew she couldn't tell Arnav the real reason she didn't have any of her medicines at home.

'Tum chahe kuch bhi kaho Khushi. Jhoot toh tumein bolna aata nahi hai aur mera samne toh tum jhoot bolni ki bilkul koshish bhi mat kiya karo. Ab saaf saaf batao ki dawa kyun nahi hai?'

Just as Khushi was thinking of what to say to Arnav, there was a knock at the door.

'Arnav Baba - sab theek hain na? Mein gadi le aye hoon - tum dono jaldi neecha a jao.' Kaka's voice came in through the locked doors.

arrgghh ... why do all these people come at the wrong time .. hate it !! well, i was beginning to wonder if she would tell him the truth or she would once again lie to him, since Khushi toh Arnav ke saamne jhoot bol nahi sakti .. aur woh sach bhi keh nahi sakti .. yeh toh TV serial type dharam sankat waali baat ho gayi na ...just was i was about to start biting my nails Kaka ki royal entry ho gayi tumhare story main ...😡😡😡😡

Khushi breathed a sigh of relief and before Arnav could stall their leaving any longer with any more questions which would be impossible for Khushi to answer, Khushi replied,

'Bas aagaye Kaka.' And began walking towards the door and unlocked it. However she hesitated before stepping outside as memories of the earlier incident flooded her mind. She was used to the taunts that were thrown at her on a daily basis but Arnav - she knew his temper and was aware that though she had asked him not to react in any way to the earlier event, he was not going to let it go. Arnav wouldn't let Khushi know about it but she knew that he would definitely do something.

now thats like my man!!☺️🤗😳 loved the confidence the girl has in her man !!! though she was used to the taunts she knew Arnav wouldnt like it ... love and care apparent here .. she didnt want him to react as there would be no use, and he didnt want her to suffer.. and both of them knew what the other wanted and expected, but would perhaps end up doing the opposite .. me likes ... super likes .. super duper fruper likes .. kash mere paas bhi ASR jaisa koi AYM hota ... tab main mohalla kya saare desh aur duniya ki taane sunti ..🤢😆😆😆😛😉

Arnav noticed the hesitation in Khushi and immediately the earlier incident invaded his mind also. He felt his blood boil with anger but knew that he would have to remain calm in front of Khushi. He would deal with those hooligans later.

would like to see how !!! Baba, i would like to see this particular follow up of yours in story... because i wouldnt want Arnavs image to be tarnished, neither would i want Khushi to be talked about later .. i am excited and nervous ke aagey kya hoga ...

Arnav walked towards Khushi and held out his hand and turned to look at her. Upon seeing his outstretched before her, Khushi looked up at Arnav to see the most reassuring look on his face. He did not need to give her any verbal assurance, the look of love and understanding in his eyes said it all to her and slowly, shyly she placed her hand in his own. He tightened his grip on her hand and they both stepped outside Khushi's chawl.

🤢🤢🤢😡

Marjaawaa...
Tere FF pe Marjawaaa...
Marjawaaa...

this last part was sooo bloody beautiful ... !!! the silent and implied understanding which perhaps is best understood only when you either read it or may be feel it .. its hard to quantify or even portray !!!

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Hey my lovlies! 😃 So here's part tres - hope you guys enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it! 😳

Do remember to leave me your feedback! 😊

You just astound me with your writing and the way you convey stufff... there is always more than what one gets to read and imagine ... !!! While i am reading your story, for that much time, I become Khushi, I imagine and Arnav (dont ask who😉, wont tell u 😳) ...and get totally soaked, drenched and sucked into the story !!! and now i have to wait for another 2 days ... before you update this ... mummy ... Baba hum toh aapke fav shishya hai na .. hume koi concession nahi mil sakta hai kya? Issi baat par, aapko ek anti-stalker woman shield free 😉 main aapki raksha karoongi against all balaas ...😳

Love Always ❤️

Tina

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Originally posted by: mohini4u

Haaye😍! Tough line to start off with babz😕! Heart is already beating faster in anticipation❤️!

'Kab hotein hain pyar ke raaste aasaan, suniye ek mohobat ki kahani, Humari Daastan'

It is such a revolutionary feeling to see a lighter and more talkative side of the male protagonist after having seen a series of serious angry young men served in a platter. Of course Arnav was quick to get annoyed at the phone ringing, but which guy likes getting interrupted while uniting with his loved one? Let alone meeting that person for the first time in 3 years😳.

Khushi's concern was justified. But why did she take the phone- thats the pro-active, come bash me i am all yours Indian Lead lady calling and asking for trouble to visit her door step !!!!😆😆😆😆😕? Kha-ma-kha bechari ko taane sunne pad gaye na🤔. Waise Mami ka character is stemming out really well👍🏼. She seems like the perfect vamp😈. rofl ... maami ... like Bua .. you mean the NandaKisore waali ...🤣🤣🤣Sort of reminds me of current khushi's bua😆. Let's wait and see how similar the character sketches turn out.

Who doesn't love being cuddled into the warmth, protection and affectionate possessiveness of at least one person in their lives❤️? I know I do😳.awww... someone's in a total romantic mood ... waise you are supa right ... ☺️ It could be friends, family or any special relationship of the likes. Of course, if that someone is the one you are romantically associated with, the overall attraction level raises many notches up. If I were Khushi in the scene where Arnav notices the change in her expressions and immediately takes the phone away concluding that it is Mamiji, I would be reliving that moment, that act of protectiveness from this man, probably all night and many more to come☺️. These small sweet gestures in life are what become fuel that keeps any relationship alive and burning. Such sweetness and power of love was in that small action of Arnav. The pair's understanding of each other's actions and reactions is stupendo-fantabulously-fantastical like Geeta ma always says👏. In fact the couples in both your FFs share this divine bond☯️.

By the way I love how all lead men in your stories are very sharp and blatantly aware of their surroundings. They may be clueless and novice romancers but skillful at picking nuances of subtlety in personalities and conflicts. It's hard to find this. dont forget they are exude their charm and charishma through their eyes and the power packed looks ..we are not seeing the performance here in this story, but the description is so accurate, imagination becomes easy .. Bah-Bah ...😳😆😉Oh no here I go stereotyping men again😡. It's just that I know so many men in my family who are clueless about clashes between females of the house. Whether they are truly ignorant or choose to blissfully overlook it, is unknown to me. All I know is that where I come from, unfortunately it's not widely practiced to expect this. So seeing this trait in the men of all your stories delights me dil se⭐️.- its only cos they dont exist for real that we swoon over these men !!! 😡😳

Moving on..

I went on describing a man's battles between pyar and parivaar but then it got too boring so scratched that! Jo imagine karna ho kar lena Baba ROFL! 🤣

Arnav made a note in his mind to ensure he didn't leave Khushi alone with Mami, and made a point to tell mami sternly that BOTH of us are coming home. Here he goes, protecting her again. So poignant na! He very tactfully handled and silenced mami. Loved it! 👍🏼

By the way curiosity killed the cat🤢🤣. What kind of face did Arnav make at Khushi😕? I want to know no! Was it, cute and naughty😉? Was it, shut up and let me handle it😵? Was it, don't worry darling I got this? I am telling you girl I need to imagine every single thing in your FFs now a days warna mujhe neend nahi aati. 😳🤣

Jaan Chuti, he jokes! How wicked and mischievous of him🤪! Again, I am enjoying this side of the male lead, knowing full well that I am a sucker for all of those angry young men😳.

Just as khushi opened her mouth.. mujhe laga Chup Bilkul Chup jaisa koi scene hone wala tha😆! Lekin aap ne toh mera hi mooh bandh kar diya😲. Predictability ki toh dhajjiya! Shaabash Baba👏!

A glass of water! Hmm! He went looking for her medicines then? Somehow my heart is pacing faster at the thought of the scene that will follow next.

Aww khushi has no hint of what her man is up to does she😳? Her concern was soo sweet😛. She knew and understood that his mom must be dying to see her son, and vice versa. She also refers to her as Ma😕? How endearing is that😍!

Haaye raam tadapa tadapa ke maroge aap hame writer Saab🤢! Arnav ki flirting wali line sunke hum ko bhi blushing ho gayi☺️❤️. Waise that one line itself that he had used only jokingly with her, had so much depth and significance to it. I won't indulge since I am currently hypnotized by the ongoing romance😆☺️! Baaki bacha tha toh besharam ne aankh bhi maar di😈.

The next two lines, SUPERB! "Hai Yeh sharm ek din..!" "agar apni jaan ke bare mein kuch bola toh!" Brilliant work Tinz. So much passion, love, security, concern, care, comfort, and sheer beauty of vast emotions. The entire sequence, where he held his ears and apologized cutely, her scolding back, and melting immediately by his infectious laugh! Right here Right now I want to say another long adjective: supercali-fragilistic-expialidocious!!! Yummy!!!☢️

And then came the question. "Where is Dawa?" Such is the knitted intricacy of your writing Tinz, you made me visualize her tucking a strand of her hair behind her ears in nervousness. My heart is now racing even faster.

She lied and he caught it immediately. She tried to make excuses but he kept catching on. Haaye Sweetness personified😍.

Kaka's interruption was much needed for the story progression I bet🤢. Sad but true😔.

The contemplation in both of their minds about the other was wonderfully weaved! And the fact that he decided he was going to do something about her chawl's hoodlums regardless of Khushi's pleas was alluring😍. Smart and protective enough was the man that he wasn't going to let her be any part of his plot😳😈.are we like saying the same things today and using different ways to describe it Nicky😳

😲😕 How in the world, did you manage to invoke so many emotions in your viewers by just a small sequence like- he looked at her reassuringly, she felt at peace, grabbing on to his hand slowly and shyly, and he tightened his grip. It was pouring sheer magic baba😍❤️! Simply magical and out-worldly👍🏼!baba ka jaadooo chal gaya .. woh humko mil gaya ... seene se yeh dil gaya ... seene se yeh dil gaya ...🤪

The story flowed fabulously! I thought since aaj the story is not divided into sections, I can expect my analysis to be pretty short😆. Why does your writing always prove me wrong😕? The star of the show was the dawa sequence👏. Aap bas lage raho😳. I think aap ko roz ek naya naam milega⭐️. Aap mar-tina baba nahi. Mardala baba ho🤢🤣!

Mardalaaah!!!!🤣

Jay ho! ☯️

Originally posted by: mohini4u

My Ty -

GETTT OUTTT of my head woman! I just compared notes and we basically thought and said the same things in different words 😳

Cool na? but NOT COOL at all samjhi kuch? 🤣🤪 No taking over my mind ☺️

mar-Tiny:

Didn't get to chatter with you guys at all today 😭 I have turned DDD and GHD (Daily Dose Deprived and Group Hug Deprived 😒🤣) and am in a serious need of DDA therapy (Daily Dose Anonymous 🤣🤣🤣) where are youzzz😡🤢😭🤗❤️?

We keep missing each other!!!

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Same here monz!! and vodku you too 😭

We keep missing each other!!! 😭