Humari Daastan FF Updated Part 7B Page 40 - Page 5

Originally posted by: mohini4u

arrey nahi... I am pretty sure... when baba feels its time, he will raise the level of our heartbeats the touchy style😳! I have full faith! Tin Tin ji kissi ke bhi pressure me kyun aayenge? Baba's mein generally bahot self control hota hai don't you know! 😛

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Tina...You're a ⭐️!!

Awesome update...I totally love the chemistry between Arnav and Khushi. So simple and sweet and completely romantic...😍

I wish we could see these kind of scenes sooner on the show!!!!

This is a fantastic start to a fantastic FF...looking forward to the update hun!!!

😊

Originally posted by: mahiem94

Great update loved it 😛

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-

'Arnav - hum bilkul theek hain. Kuch bhi to nahi hua.' Khushi replied, gazing at Arnav sweetly.

'Kuch bhi nahi hua?!' Arnav stood up suddenly and began pacing around the small living area in the chawl.

'Kuch bhi nahi hua Khushi?' he asked in a loud tone,

'Aaj tum ghir jaati to bhi kuch nahi hota haina?! Tum har roz in jaanwaron hi vahiaat baatein sunti ho, itni zilaat sehti ho, itna aaphmaan hota hai tumara. Kyun Khushi, kyun? Arre pichle theen saalon mein tumne naa jaane kya kuch nahi saha hoga. Aur main! Main itni door se tumare liye kuch nahi kar sakta! Aur agar kuch kar sakta hoon to tum mujhe karne nahi deti! Aakhir main tumara lagta hi kya hoon haina - mujhe kyun apna samajhne lagi tum?!'
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to this i have an answer, kal raat Geet ke episode main there was line, where Maan says

Zindagi main agar sahi saathi ka saath na ho toh, haalat se ladne main kya maza hai...

to which Geet replies ...

Agar aap mere saath nahi hote toh mujhe haalat se ladne ki himmat kahan se milti ...

Sorry to quote off context, but here is a relationship where a man who loves his wife leaves everything else only to be with her, win over her family and finally succeeds ...

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I dont want to compare this, but when Arnav knew she was being humiliated by the chawl people, and listening to all the taanas .. and every other thing, why did he let it happen? why did he allow her to bear the humiliation? its very easy to get into the whole man like josh, but i do hope, Arnav had his reasons for not being available and do what he could, since, in terms of the strength of a character, if a man see's a loved one suffering and only exerts authority n anger later, it doesnt exactly serve the purpose!! I would love to see what this Arnav in your story would do to make sure this doesnt happen in future ...

OOPS!! sorry !! dekha.. kitna involve ho gayi thi tumhare story main !!😛🤓

Originally posted by: mohini4u

I think you are a jantar mantar baba and know jaadu tona!

I was looking forward to this part so much that I didn't bother commenting as I read. Mein bas.. padhti hi gayi, padhti hi chali gayi..😍

Kaisa jaadu daala re..🤪

Tin Tin baba monz aap ki writing se nikli hui saari bullets khaake mari hai🤢! Jail na ho jaaye kahiin aap ko!! 😆

Okay okay back in my hosh-o-hawaaas😊! Kuch serious baat ho jaaye😳!

Nahi jaane do.. phir se padh ke aati hoon hehe!😛

A big fat DITTO with all points of TY! 👍🏼

Loved 'Naa jaane yeh mohobat le jayegi humein kahaan, yeh kahani sunayegi, Humari Daastan'

You had my clutching attention from that line itself. I felt what khushi felt, every step of the way through your story. That's some powerful storytelling. 👏 The way you described their connection, it truly gave sense that they had known each other from their childhood. Again, it felt just like I was watching the show and reading the written update. You are pouring emotions into your stories loads and buckets. How you know to do that is beyond me. It's sheer magic. 😈

My likes (No no, LOVEs): Khushi's expressions at seeing "His face". Arnav's heart stopping at her uttering his name. Them getting lost in each other's gaze substantiating each other's existence. The authority which he bestows upon her. The fearless dude sees not left or right. She is his and his only.

Baaki sab TY ne bol diya. His concern, his anger, naughtiness, his sarcasm were all intense. Her reciprocation too. Her blushing, him teasing, her teasing back, the romance was celestial.

The whole progression of story alongside, her inability to buy medicines, the underlying troubles lurking her, were all too captivating.

Splendid work darling🤗! Am falling in love! ❤️

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Okay Vodku...

I'm speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲

I honestly had no idea that my FF could evoke such amazing comments from someone!

So a mahoosive THANK YOU!!! 😃

And an even bigger jhapi!! 🤗

And also - don't appologise for your lovely comments!

Gosh - I really am blown away - I don't even know what to type 😆

All I can say is that I hope the rest of HD is worthy of such amazing comments too! 😳

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

awesome

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-

Moh! can i say i cant agree more with all the additions as well... with all the excitement we forget stuff dont we?
Look at us ...

Bachke rehna re Baba!!! you have 2 stalkers on the prowl 🤣😉

One sec? Did you just smile reading that line??? OMG!! you like being Stalked...
Moh... Baba likes being stalked and being about talked ...😛