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Realisation suddenly dawned on Arnav's face. Did Khushi really believe that he would accept what he knew she was about to ask of him?

'Kuch bhi maanglo Khushi, lekin yeh waada main nahi karoonga.' Arnav replied extremely seriously.

'Arre, lekin aapko to yeh bhi nahi pata ke hum waada kis baat ka maang rahe hain.' Khushi stated simply.

'Pata hain mujhe ki tum kya maangogi. Yahi naa ki mein baar ke logon ko kuch naa karoon?' Arnav looked straight at Khushi.

Khushi looked down and said extremely quietly,

'Arnav kaamaka, bina baat ke-',

'Bina baat ke!' Arnav exclaimed,

'Khushi, tumaari beizaati main kabhi nahi seh sakta - saamne wala chahe yeh chawl wale hon yah mere hi parivaar ka koi.'

Khushi's eyes welled up at Arnav's words, just as she was about to say something back, Arnav's phone rang.

these lines said so much about them as characters. Lets see ...

1. they both have an implied understanding. He not only reads her words, but also understands her silence.

2. He as a flying temper, hence she pleads him to control it. He knows if there is anyone who can control it, its her!! Later in the story it can be used well, (well, if you hadnt intended it, you can go ahead and do it... mujhe bachpan se mooft main advice dene ki aadat hai 😆)

3. Arnav says... he will not take humiliation from anyone, not from baar waaley ( you meant bahar waaley and not us right 🤣) which means he is a man who always stands up for whats right, and he is man , who will always support Khushi no matter what!! he was always be herr source or strength...

4. Phone call- unwanted interruptions will keep arising in their sweet si cutesy love story ...!!!

Okay i am done !!😊

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'Arnav - hum bilkul theek hain. Kuch bhi to nahi hua.' Khushi replied, gazing at Arnav sweetly.

'Kuch bhi nahi hua?!' Arnav stood up suddenly and began pacing around the small living area in the chawl.

'Kuch bhi nahi hua Khushi?' he asked in a loud tone,

'Aaj tum ghir jaati to bhi kuch nahi hota haina?! Tum har roz in jaanwaron hi vahiaat baatein sunti ho, itni zilaat sehti ho, itna aaphmaan hota hai tumara. Kyun Khushi, kyun? Arre pichle theen saalon mein tumne naa jaane kya kuch nahi saha hoga. Aur main! Main itni door se tumare liye kuch nahi kar sakta! Aur agar kuch kar sakta hoon to tum mujhe karne nahi deti! Aakhir main tumara lagta hi kya hoon haina - mujhe kyun apna samajhne lagi tum?!'
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to this i have an answer, kal raat Geet ke episode main there was line, where Maan says

Zindagi main agar sahi saathi ka saath na ho toh, haalat se ladne main kya maza hai...

to which Geet replies ...

Agar aap mere saath nahi hote toh mujhe haalat se ladne ki himmat kahan se milti ...

Sorry to quote off context, but here is a relationship where a man who loves his wife leaves everything else only to be with her, win over her family and finally succeeds ...

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I dont want to compare this, but when Arnav knew she was being humiliated by the chawl people, and listening to all the taanas .. and every other thing, why did he let it happen? why did he allow her to bear the humiliation? its very easy to get into the whole man like josh, but i do hope, Arnav had his reasons for not being available and do what he could, since, in terms of the strength of a character, if a man see's a loved one suffering and only exerts authority n anger later, it doesnt exactly serve the purpose!! I would love to see what this Arnav in your story would do to make sure this doesnt happen in future ...

OOPS!! sorry !! dekha.. kitna involve ho gayi thi tumhare story main !!😛🤓

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Mohini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

I think you are a jantar mantar baba and know jaadu tona!

I was looking forward to this part so much that I didn't bother commenting as I read. Mein bas.. padhti hi gayi, padhti hi chali gayi..😍

Kaisa jaadu daala re..🤪

Tin Tin baba monz aap ki writing se nikli hui saari bullets khaake mari hai🤢! Jail na ho jaaye kahiin aap ko!! 😆

Okay okay back in my hosh-o-hawaaas😊! Kuch serious baat ho jaaye😳!

Nahi jaane do.. phir se padh ke aati hoon hehe!😛

A big fat DITTO with all points of TY! 👍🏼

Loved 'Naa jaane yeh mohobat le jayegi humein kahaan, yeh kahani sunayegi, Humari Daastan'

You had my clutching attention from that line itself. I felt what khushi felt, every step of the way through your story. That's some powerful storytelling. 👏 The way you described their connection, it truly gave sense that they had known each other from their childhood. Again, it felt just like I was watching the show and reading the written update. You are pouring emotions into your stories loads and buckets. How you know to do that is beyond me. It's sheer magic. 😈

My likes (No no, LOVEs): Khushi's expressions at seeing "His face". Arnav's heart stopping at her uttering his name. Them getting lost in each other's gaze substantiating each other's existence. The authority which he bestows upon her. The fearless dude sees not left or right. She is his and his only.

Baaki sab TY ne bol diya. His concern, his anger, naughtiness, his sarcasm were all intense. Her reciprocation too. Her blushing, him teasing, her teasing back, the romance was celestial.

The whole progression of story alongside, her inability to buy medicines, the underlying troubles lurking her, were all too captivating.

Splendid work darling🤗! Am falling in love! ❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

heyyy <3 <3 <3

this update was FABBB!!!

i like that they r togetherrr 😆😆

and arnav TEASED khushi 😲😲😲😲😳😳😳😳 tht was sooo adorableee!!

and he ALSO saved her from fallinggg!!!

haayee mar jaaana main 😍😍 😆😆😆😆

loved loved loveddd today'ss epiii 🤗

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Moh! can i say i cant agree more with all the additions as well... with all the excitement we forget stuff dont we?
Look at us ...

Bachke rehna re Baba!!! you have 2 stalkers on the prowl 🤣😉

One sec? Did you just smile reading that line??? OMG!! you like being Stalked...
Moh... Baba likes being stalked and being about talked ...😛

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Manahil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

nice😳m also crying after seeing this pic...😭lol😆

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Mohini

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-
Moh! can i say i cant agree more with all the additions as well... with all the excitement we forget stuff dont we?
Look at us ...

Bachke rehna re Baba!!! you have 2 stalkers on the prowl 🤣😉

One sec? Did you just smile reading that line??? OMG!! you like being Stalked...
Moh... Baba likes being stalked and being about talked ...😛

🤣 mohini ke jaadu aur vodka ke nashe se kab tak bachte baba 😉

Yeh to hona hi tha! unki tapasya to bhang honi hi thi!!!🤪

baba ji bas aap ko mohit karne ke aise hi mauke dete rahiyega 😳

waise yahaan situation reverse hai TY - baba daastan suna rahe hai aur hum mugdh hue jaa rahe hai (wah wah wah kya baat mohini 🤣)

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but since this is FF thread - two more cents on the story as well...

I am super impressed at the striking chemistry designed of the duo, yet without absolutely any physical contact. It's all about soul connection. I mean he did take her inside the room by her waist but the intention there wasn't to romance her it was to comfort and protect her. Just when that door closed, I was like, ab hug karenge? Nahi kiya! bas- cherished each other's company and expressed a variety of emotions. When the maahol got lighter, I thought ab koi aur physical contact, like he may hold her hand after teasing her, or they both bump heads with each other after giggling at each other's sharaarats. None of that sort happened, and yet... I was profoundly lost in the tale.

Pehle sirf TY ki daaru se addicted thi par ab toh baba ki daastaan se bhi😲! Aur haan, yeh dono mujhe saath mein chahiye 😈 baba koi chakkar chalaaiye 😆 dil ko chain laaiye😛!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Awww Arnav is so like the guy I described for my friend...he would be perfect for her :)

Anyways, fantastic update

The way you showed ArHi was adorable!

When they met each other..after so long..the way you described it..superb :)

I love how he looks out for her, and how they joke around...awww super cute!

And she doesn't want him to do anything..aww Khushi-ii

Hayyee I love these two..I wonder what it would be like to watch their cute moments when they are in love!

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Originally posted by: mohini4u

🤣 mohini ke jaadu aur vodka ke nashe se kab tak bachte baba 😉

Yeh to hona hi tha! unki tapasya to bhang honi hi thi!!!🤪

baba ji bas aap ko mohit karne ke aise hi mauke dete rahiyega 😳

waise yahaan situation reverse hai TY - baba daastan suna rahe hai aur hum mugdh hue jaa rahe hai (wah wah wah kya baat mohini 🤣)

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but since this is FF thread - two more cents on the story as well...

I am super impressed at the striking chemistry designed of the duo, yet without absolutely any physical contact. It's all about soul connection. I mean he did take her inside the room by her waist but the intention there wasn't to romance her it was to comfort and protect her. Just when that door closed, I was like, ab hug karenge? Nahi kiya! bas- cherished each other's company and expressed a variety of emotions. When the maahol got lighter, I thought ab koi aur physical contact, like he may hold her hand after teasing her, or they both bump heads with each other after giggling at each other's sharaarats. None of that sort happened, and yet... I was profoundly lost in the tale.

Pehle sirf TY ki daaru se addicted thi par ab toh baba ki daastaan se bhi😲! Aur haan, yeh dono mujhe saath mein chahiye 😈 baba koi chakkar chalaaiye 😆 dil ko chain laaiye😛!

haye yeh tumne kya kar dia .. ab agar sacchi main baba ko hot hot scenes likhne bhi hai toh pressure zone main daal dia hai ke woh na likhey ...😆😆😆😆
but i totally agree with you.. never thought of it that way, till you mentioned it, i thot there would be a devdas paro type ...
tum mujhe kab kab yaad karte the ...jab jab main saans leta tha type scene ..toh baba .. yeh kya hai.. jaadu tona ..
maine aapse pehle hi kaha hai .. vodka na nasha logo pe hota hai, logo ka vodka pe nahi ...huh ..(agitated ... 😡😡😡😳😳😛😛😉)

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Mohini

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Posted: 14 years ago

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arrey nahi... I am pretty sure... when baba feels its time, he will raise the level of our heartbeats the touchy style😳! I have full faith! Tin Tin ji kissi ke bhi pressure me kyun aayenge? Baba's mein generally bahot self control hota hai don't you know! 😛

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