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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Tina...🤗

Great start hun. It completely captures the attention. I really hope that the strong grasp that holds Khushi is our hero's entry...😆

Can't wait for the update!!!!

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

The first one said INTENSE. This one says ADORABLE!

😲

Again the same attention to detail👍🏼. You talk about the color of her clothes, it being his favorite, the state of her hair, the bangle, her limp, the phone being STD, her need for actually gathering money to pay for it, in fact money being a matter of discussion in general. The evilness of Mami was unnerving. The chawlwasi's were no less. One would think they would've been more united and sympathetic towards her no😡?

Again here she lives alone and does the best to support herself despite her physical and financial shortcomings. Impressive! 👏

Waise kaka is very chaalu I love it. 😛Teasing the poor khushi and all LOL😆.

They actually pushed her down the stairs🤢? Urrg😡! Well her knight in shining armor is there to rescue her😳☺️!

By the way, why does my heart have a strange screeching feeling that this story will soon take a tragic turn😕?

Cannot wait for Part Dos. ⭐️

See how I stayed up all night reading through your FFs 😉 Gosh I need a drink now! 🤣

Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago

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she_ratchet

@she_ratchet

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

awesome dear ! <3 I am stunned. I really love the FF, continue soon!

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635020

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

girl you weave magic with words.totally imaginable.I loved the bit and Khushi's anxiety and her excitement to meet Arnav.I could see it all right in front of me.You have ability to tell a tale and i am already hooked.When is the next part coming.
I am not going to spoil it for you but, i have already started to think what would happen next!Not a good sign for me, but a fab one for you.
I love the way you have brought out each emotion and described it in a manner that the reader becomes an integral part of your story!!You still have my attention with you ...But dont hate me the day i lose it.. it wont mean i dont like what you write, it just means my lazy bones have become active again! But do me a favor angel, just PM me the links so that i have them all in place?
Good Morning!!

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queenofhearts01

@queenofhearts01

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: aahana1
Lovely...Something very different...Update the next chapters soon dear..cant wait to read them 🤗

Thanks for the lovely comment Aahana 😃

Hope you enjoy the rest of HD 😳

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queenofhearts01

@queenofhearts01

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Tina...🤗
Great start hun. It completely captures the attention. I really hope that the strong grasp that holds Khushi is our hero's entry...😆

Can't wait for the update!!!!

Hey FebruaryFlower 🤗

So glad you enjoyed the FF so much! Hope you enjoy the rest of HD even more 😆

Hmmm - maybe it is him, maybe it isn't...😆

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queenofhearts01

@queenofhearts01

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mohini4u

The first one said INTENSE. This one says ADORABLE!

😲

Again the same attention to detail👍🏼. You talk about the color of her clothes, it being his favorite, the state of her hair, the bangle, her limp, the phone being STD, her need for actually gathering money to pay for it, in fact money being a matter of discussion in general. The evilness of Mami was unnerving. The chawlwasi's were no less. One would think they would've been more united and sympathetic towards her no😡?

Again here she lives alone and does the best to support herself despite her physical and financial shortcomings. Impressive! 👏

Waise kaka is very chaalu I love it. 😛Teasing the poor khushi and all LOL😆.

They actually pushed her down the stairs🤢? Urrg😡! Well her knight in shining armor is there to rescue her😳☺️!

By the way, why does my heart have a strange screeching feeling that this story will soon take a tragic turn😕?

Cannot wait for Part Dos. ⭐️

See how I stayed up all night reading through your FFs 😉 Gosh I need a drink now! 🤣

Monz!!! 🤗

You're such a sweetheart with your comments! ❤️

Honestly, I'm going to get a big head if you keep praising my work like this

Haha, glad you liked the character of Kaka 😃

Hmmm - tragic or not - you'll have to wait and see...😉

Awww - you're a absolute sweetu monz! 😃 🤗

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queenofhearts01

@queenofhearts01

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: mrs.luvjaysean
awesome dear ! <3 I am stunned. I really love the FF, continue soon!

Glad you enjoyed it hun!

Will defo continue 😃

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queenofhearts01

@queenofhearts01

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-
girl you weave magic with words.totally imaginable.I loved the bit and Khushi's anxiety and her excitement to meet Arnav.I could see it all right in front of me.You have ability to tell a tale and i am already hooked.When is the next part coming.
I am not going to spoil it for you but, i have already started to think what would happen next!Not a good sign for me, but a fab one for you.
I love the way you have brought out each emotion and described it in a manner that the reader becomes an integral part of your story!!You still have my attention with you ...But dont hate me the day i lose it.. it wont mean i dont like what you write, it just means my lazy bones have become active again! But do me a favor angel, just PM me the links so that i have them all in place?
Good Morning!!

Vodku 😃

You and Monz blow me away with your amazing comments! 🤗

Your encouragement means a lot to me so a huge thank you hun! ❤️

Will defo pm you the links 😃