Humari Daastan FF Updated Part 7B Page 40 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was so beautiful ❤️ Loved it. Argghh this mami, hate her 😡 Arnav's mom isn't there in all the FF's i have read so far, its feels soo nice to her in your FF 😳 Poor Khushi, Mami tortures her big time but not to worry, Arnav babu hain na 😳 Update the next chapters soon 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aahana1

wow that was so beautiful ❤️ Loved it. Argghh this mami, hate her 😡 Arnav's mom isn't there in all the FF's i have read so far, its feels soo nice to her in your FF 😳 Poor Khushi, Mami tortures her big time but not to worry, Arnav babu hain na 😳 Update the next chapters soon 🤗

Thanks so much Aahana! 🤗
Glad you liked the character of Arnav's mother! Embarrassed
Next update should be tomorrow (fingers crossed)! 😊
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Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Recap: The sight of his home after three long years meant that Arnav forgot Kaka's earlier statement. He stepped out of the car and went to help Khushi out too. As they both walked towards the mahal, both Khushi and Arnav stopped as Arnav let his eyes take in the sight of his home for as long as his heart wished. _________________________________________________________________

Part 5A
'Taqdeer ne kahin likha na ho zindagi main koi toofan, pyar se hi beethe Humari Daastan'

Aandhi ko ya toofan, saath-saath hi kategi safar, aisi ho inki daastan 😉
Arnav's reaction to seeing his home after so many years brought tears to Khushi's eyes and just as one pearl of emotion rolled down Khushi's cheek, it fell into Arnav's outstretched hand. Khushi turned towards Arnav and saw him shake his head slightly and just smile. He then took her hand and they both made their way to the front door.

oho!!! yeh ladki badi emotional hai, bilkul meri tarah !! she has the leaking tap syndrome !! aise toh bechari ko sinus ho jayegi na ...🤣 but i just love their love, she feels every emotion of his .. and thats why i call them soul mates ...!!! One verbal assurance soothes her soul ...and its as though, she would never want anything else when she is with him ... BABA ...😡😡😡😡😡😡 aap ne mujhe philosopher-ni bana dia hai ...
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As they both came to a stop, the heavy oak doors opened as if right on cue. Arnav's eyes welled up as he saw his mother dressed in a deep purple sari that he had sent her a few months ago. Arnav's mother - Savita, took in the sight of her young son standing before her after three excruciatingly long years and also could not stop the moist pools of emotions from forming in her eyes.

iss scene main fir se rula dia na ... i love ma-beta reunion scenes always .. and that too after 3 long years !!! naicee ...😳
Arnav and Khushi both stepped forward as Arnav proceeded to seek his mother's blessings by touching her feet. Savita smiled and ran her hand lovingly through her son's hair and blessed him from the bottom of her heart. Arnav then surprised Savita by engulfing her in a massive hug.
'Aapki bahut yaad ayi Ma.' Arnav said, his voice thick with emotion.

So well described, it was easy to imagine and feel this baba!!!👏👏👏🤢🤢
Savita smiled and tightened her hold on her son,
'Yaad toh mujhe bhi bahut ayi Arnav. Par ab tu aagaye hain na, ab mein tujhe kahin nahi jaane doongi - samjhe?'
'Mein toh pehle bhi nahin jaana chahta tha Ma.' Arnav said looking straight into his mother's eyes.
A guilty expression took over Savita's face as she tenderly stroked Arnav's right cheek,

'Jaanti hoon beta, main jaanti hoon.'

there is so much more than what meets the eye... shit, tension badh raha hai Baba .. tension tension ... hyper tension...!!!
Just then Savita saw Khushi bend down to touch her feet. Savita immediately pursed her lips and grabbed Khushi by the shoulders before she could reach her feet.
'Maine tujhse kitni baar bola hai, beti pair nahi choothi!'
Khushi smiled and held onto Savita's hand,
'Kya betiyon ko aashirwaad ki zarurat nahi hoti Ma?'
Savita smiled before lovingly placing her hand on Khushi's head,
'Ma ka aashirwaad humesha beti ke saath hota hai. Maangne ki zarurat nahi hoti. Aur maangna hi hai toh gale lag kar mangna theek hai!'
Both women laughed ad hugged each other as Arnav looked on - his face a picture of bliss as he saw the heart warming interaction between Khushi and his mother.

awww is all i can say to this scene, chalo koi toh hai in dono ko aur inke pyar ko support karne waala .. so dus she know of their rship or does she only think they are friends ...

Just as he was aout to tease the two, his Mami's voice came floating through the hallway.

Lo karlo Baat!! Aa gayi hello hi bye bye karne ... Grrr...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
'Arre Arnav beta! Tum aagaya!' His Mami screamed and pushed past Khushi to trap Arnav in a hug.
Arnav grimaced and cheekily replied,
'Mami, main yahan karah hoon toh aagaya hoon na? Yeh kaisa savaal hua?'

Loved his sarcasm .. serves her right ... doesnt this woman get it ... kahan kaise behave karna chahiye aur kab kya bolna chahiye ...
Everyone laughed at Arnav's cheeky retort and his Mami lightly smacked his arm before going to stand by Savita.
'Chalo chalo Arnav andar aajao ab. Apna daiyaan per pehle rakna.'
Savita then turned to Khushi and said,
'Khushi tu bhi Arnav ke saath andar aa.'
'Arre Didi, kyun apshagun ko nyota de rahi hain aap? Khushi apna daiyaan per pehle toh nahi rak sakti na.' Mami exclaimed, her voice conveying her deep dislike for Khushi.
Arnav and his mother immediately looked at his Mami - or Manorma. Anger immediately taking over both their expressions.
'Manorma!' Savita scolded.
'Didi - maine kuch jhoot toh nahi kaha na? Arnav beta itne dinon baad lauta hai. Aisa mauke par kuch ooch neech na ho isliye maine-'
'Mami please. Kuch mat kahiye. Khushi kabhi bhi, kisi bhi tarah mere liye apshagun nahi ho sakti.' Arnav said, rage dripping from his every word.
Meanwhile Khushi had been looking towards the ground, wishing that the tears that had pooled in her eyes would not fall. Just as she felt the tears threaten to run down her cheeks, she felt Arnav's hand grab her arm.
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Okay my lovlies! Joote mat marna - I know this part is very short! But this is all I have time for at the moment! I will get 5B to you tomorrow!!
Love Always
Tina
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I am looking forward to the next part ... and then will write more .. but like always ...❤️❤️🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Vodku: I'm glad to see your inner Ghalib too! 😆 So glad you enjoyed this short part!! Especially pleased that you liked Savita and Khushi's relationship! And to answer your question - Savita does know about ArShi! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks so much Ayesha! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow what a pleasant surprise the update was amazing...cant wait to read what happens next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wannabe Ghalib kaho ... mujhe force kiya to think, aur wahan bhi typos ke saath sab barbaaad kar diya maine ...

yeh tohra pyaar naaahi hai toh kaahe Baba ... jo tum humka ebry time acche acche comment wa maar raho ho ...

hum bahot hi Happy Happy hue ...😛 ( okay i suck at this ... pardon pardon .. garden garden ...🤣)

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

@ Vodku: I'm glad to see your inner Ghalib too! 😆 So glad you enjoyed this short part!! Especially pleased that you liked Savita and Khushi's relationship!

well, it was ... agar saasu ma khush toh ... fir aagey jaake problems nahi hongi na .. toh was heaving a sigh of relief ...!!! Itne K Soaps dekhe hai ke ab dar sa lagta hai ...😉
And to answer your question - Savita does know about ArShi! 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG queenofhearts01, I just want to hug you!

Now let me tell you why:

1) It's really hard for me to read fan fics because I'm a stickler for grammer and its the first thing I notice when I start reading. I'm so happy to say that your grammer is impeccable! So thank you for that!

2) Your writing style is wonderful. Each line is carefully written. I love that you use paragraphs and quotation marks (technically you're using apostrophes, but I get it), making me want to read.


Queenofhearts01, you are a very eloquent writer! Keep up the great work!


PS: Have you written any other fan fics? If so, could you provide me with links. I would love to read other fan fics you've written. I do believe i'll enjoy them :D


Thanks!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it...can't wait for the next part continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hayye I love Savitri's bond with ArHi...aww his love for his mother's so visible when he hugs her n all..hayye...and this mami had to come and spoil the moment na...how dare she say that Khushi is apshagun? :O And Arnav bhadak gaya *blushes* oooh! and u stopped there...meaaanie..update karrrooo

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