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Posted: 14 years ago
loved your ff...
it would be nice if you translate them in english
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neetusidhu

wow what a pleasant surprise the update was amazing...cant wait to read what happens next...

Thank you so much! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: trinitynyx

OMG queenofhearts01, I just want to hug you!


Now let me tell you why:

1) It's really hard for me to read fan fics because I'm a stickler for grammer and its the first thing I notice when I start reading. I'm so happy to say that your grammer is impeccable! So thank you for that!

2) Your writing style is wonderful. Each line is carefully written. I love that you use paragraphs and quotation marks (technically you're using apostrophes, but I get it), making me want to read.


Queenofhearts01, you are a very eloquent writer! Keep up the great work!


PS: Have you written any other fan fics? If so, could you provide me with links. I would love to read other fan fics you've written. I do believe i'll enjoy them :D


Thanks!

WOW! 😲
Thank you so much for such an amazing comment! 😃
I am currently writing one other FF - Kaisi Yeh Taqdeer. Here's the link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1706259
Once again - thank you! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maneet16

Loved it...can't wait for the next part continue soon :)

Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

Hayye I love Savitri's bond with ArHi...aww his love for his mother's so visible when he hugs her n all..hayye...and this mami had to come and spoil the moment na...how dare she say that Khushi is apshagun? :O And Arnav bhadak gaya *blushes* oooh! and u stopped there...meaaanie..update karrrooo

Aww - thank you so much for such a sweet comment! 😃
Glad you liked Savita's character! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: magi11

loved your ff...

it would be nice if you translate them in english

Thank you so much! 😃
I will definitely try to translate them in the future but as of now that is not a possibility due to major time constraints! 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Recap: Meanwhile Khushi had been looking towards the ground, wishing that the tears that had pooled in her eyes would not fall. Just as she felt the tears threaten to run down her cheeks, she felt Arnav's hand grab her arm.

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Part 5B

'Taqdeer ne kahin likha na ho zindagi main koi toofan, pyar se hi beethe Humari Daastan'

Khushi immediately looked up towards Arnav, her vision blurred by the tears she was so desperately trying to keep within the confines of her eyes. Arnav was staring straight ahead at his Mami,

'Mein agar is ghar mein aaonga toh Khushi ke saath. Aur vaise bhi, mere hote hua aap ne yeh kaise soch liya ki Khushi apne daiyan pair ke saath andaar nahi aa payegi?' Manorma pursed her lips and replied in a snarky tone,

'Beta, lagta hai ki videsh mein reh kar tum apne sanskaar bhool chuke ho. Apne barhon se aise baat karte hai kya?'

Arnav, refusing to back down retorted,

'Barhe hone ka ye matlab toh nahin ke koi kuch bhi bole. Agar barhe choton se ye umeed rahkte hain ke voh unki izaat karein toh phir barhon ko yeh bhi samaj na chahiye ke izaat haq se nahin, karmon se milti hai - chahe insaan barha ho ya chota.'

With this explanation, Arnav stepped inside the house with Khushi by his side. He lent support to Khushi by gripping her right arm in order to allow her to place her right foot inside the house along with him. Seeing the way in which her son handled the situation, Savita smiled - her face adorned with motherly pride.

As Manorma walked away in a huff towards the kitchen, Arnav took a moment to take in his surroundings.

'Theen saal,' he thought to himself, 'theen lambe saal. Lekin aakhir mein ghar aahi gaye.' A peaceful smile graced his lips as the feeling of being within his own home and amongst his loved ones washed over him - clearing away any tension Manorma's comments had brought.

Both Khushi and Savita looked at Arnav, both women blissful at seeing someone they both cherished so much looking so at peace and happy. Just as all three went to sit on the sofas in the large living area, a cough from a fourth person grabbed Arnav's attention.

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Arnav turned around to see Kaka standing behind him.

'Ji Kaka boliye.' He asked.

'Voh Baba, aapke liye phone aaye hai.' replied Kaka.

'Kaka - pehle toh aap mujhe tum kahiye aap nahin. Aur doosra, kiska phone aya hai?' Arnav said.

'Voh toh pata nahin Baba, naam kuch samajh mein nahi aya.'

'Theek hai Kaka mein aata hoon. Ma - main abhi aya.'

Khushi and Savita both knowingly smiled at each other as Arnav followed Kaka into one of the study rooms where the phone had come. As he stepped into the room he saw something mysterious lying on the sofa. Perplexed, Arnav moved closer to the sofa and grew even more confused when he realised that there was in fact no phone call. As he moved closer, he saw a tiny baby wrapped up in a soft pink blanket. Arnav was taken aback when he heard a voice behind him,

'Apni bhaanji kaisi lagi Arnavji?'

Arnav turned around to see his older sister - Anjali standing before him. He immediately went up to her and engulfed her in a huge hug, which Anjali readily returned. Both Arnav and Anjali had grown up extremely close to each other and these three years apart had been extremely difficult on the siblings.

As the two pulled away from each other, Arnav looked at Anjali and asked,

'Saach mein Di - yeh meri bhaanji hai?'

Anjali laughed at the innocence in Arnav's childish face,

'Kothe - hum jhoot bol rahe hain kya?'

Arnav's smile grew wider and he instantly turned towards the little bundle of joy and went and gently lifted his niece into his arms. Arnav was overwhelmed by the sheer joy and pride he felt after looking at the small bundle in his arms. He tenderly kissed the baby girl's forehead and rubbed his nose against hers whilst murmuring - in a voice laced with joy, pride and affection
'Meri bhaanji.'.
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So my lovlies! This was 5B! Hope everyone enjoyed the sweet little twist at the end! Please leave your feedback and suggestions!
Love Always
Tina ❤️
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Edited by queenofhearts01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally sorted out the fonts and colours! It was really bugging me! Enjoy guys!
Tina
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Edited by queenofhearts01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i think m 1st.wow... nIce,lovelY 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahaaan that was so awesome when Arnav made mami shut her mouth, mami is too much.Good one Arnav and awww Anjali has a small daughter, How lovely. ❤️ The baby must be sooo cute. Loved this chapter but its tooo small 😡

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