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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG - baba are you around today? 🤗
I finally get a chance to write a take on HD4 I am so excited I have soo much to say 😳
RESERVED!!! ❤️
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😲Yet another masterpiece! Romance, Comedy, suspense, tension, drama, aur action bhi😉! Waise aaj main apne hosho-hawaas mein hoon😆. Kahaani teen din pehle jo padh li thi na! 😛

'Sambhal kar chalna, yeh dil hote hain naadan, dil se dekhiye Humari Daastan'

Aaj phir se aap ke bas is ek kaafiye ne kitna kuch keh diya ms. Galib😳! Ab yeh bataaiye, naadan hai jo dil, woh apne aap ko kaise sambhaal sakta hai😕? Ek taraf aap bol rahe ho dil ko sambhaaliye, aur dusri or keh rahe ho dil se dekhiye? Yeh toh lose lose situation wali baat ho gayi na🤔? Agar dil se dekhenge toh dil ko kaise sambhaalenge batao bhala? Aise hi confused karne ka irada tha na😈? Hamare dil ki apne aap se fight karva rahe ho aap baba😉 "Jazbaato ke saudaagar!" - Aaj ka aap ka official naam. It's all about give and take isn't it miss tinz? ⭐️

Khushi turned her back to the world to lock her doors, while Arnav looked around to ensure the wrongdoers weren't around to torment her😳. Khushi is locking the doors to her sub ordinary life in the hope to take a ride to her safe haven with her man. All the while being innocently oblivious of the troubles that lurk around her at all times, as she knows she is secure in the company of her man😍. Arnav, anxious to fly her away from this hellhole, exercises extra caution that she doesn't get hurt in the process😊. His shielding instinct surfaces his resonant anger towards those cowards who gang up on this one helpless soul, but the sweet echoes of her vivacity manages to snap him out of it. Beautifully rendered baba! You incredibly symbolized the locking doors, the glance around, clenching fists, and the bangles👏!

His gesture of support during the descend are representative of his oozing protectiveness towards Khushi. One can easily misconstrue it to be sympathy, care, and compassion instead of love, need, and passion. Khushi's presence is as much a need in Arnav's life as breathing air or eating food. His anger comes from his fear of losing her to the insignificance of the world, the fear of being left alone, fear of being directionless. His tightening grip and extension of arms around her are gestures witness of his innermost insecurities. We will later see these expanded when he is faced with and reacts to an abrasive truth that she may possibly not need him altogether. You nailed it Baba. My heart kept going Dhak Dhak, Dhak Dhak ❤️ the whole time.

Kissi pe boj na banne ke liye apne aap ko cheezo ka sahaara de dena. It's so intricate babz. Let's just look beside the point you are really trying to make here for one minute and analyze it in a broader sense. Bacche jab bade ho jaate hai, maa se apni bimaariya chupaate hai. Why bother, she would worry unnecessarily. Pati apni patni se office ka stress chupata hai. Bhai apni behen se apni majbooriyaan chupata hai. Pyar ke boj ka mara har insaan apni shortcomings apne loved ones pe nahi laandna chahta. Khushi ka yeh reaction, yeh statement, kitna swabhavik aur natural tha! (wait don't swabhavik and natural mean the same thing? 🤣 ) She didn't by any terms mean it sarcastically or obligingly. She said it so casually, without thinking ahead or behind. It was irrelevant that using support of mundane things was painful to Khushi, what was important was that she didn't want to burden Arnav with her life's miseries EVER. With that said, coming back to Khushi's specific case.. She has a condition that constrains her. She has more insecurities about it than anyone without her condition can even imagine. In this case, to boost her self-esteem, to ensure her self-sufficiency, she needs and craves to be independent. How can one imagine living with such a constraint and constantly fight an inner battle every day? Must be tough right? Why do I have a striking feeling that her condition had something to do with Arnav from their childhood days? Is that may be another reason why Arnav's reaction was so drastic? Could it be his guilt? Hmm just thinking along as I write baba.

By the way, their interaction was intense! His aggression, anger, sadness, frustration, helplessness were all too distinct. He roared like a lion at her, or at least that's how I imagined it when he uttered "Sawaal ka jawaab sawaal nahi hota Khushi." Dhak Dhak! Personally I adore every role a male lover plays in a woman's life. A protector, caretaker, lover, father, brother, child, self-proclaimed lord😉😆, and many such colors are filled in a woman's life when she enters a courtship with a man. In this very instance, I imagined him as a very cute but stubborn child on a tantrum alert unwilling to comprehend reason. And as unjustified as his behavior was, it felt equally adorable. This cuteness mixed with his manly strength made him so much more yummy. As I read through that dialogue exchange, all I wanted to do was pull his cheeks and go coochie coo on him😲🤪. And the way he asked "Tum ne kyun kaha ki tum boj ho?" pierced thousand daggers in my heart🥺. It was the sweetest thing on earth baba, sweetest thayng (Okay I thought I had my emotions under control today, may be not!!!)

Moving on.. the guilt trip bit was awesome👍🏼. The inner child and the inner guardian were both on full swing. He was assertive, yet innocent; deeply hurt yet deeply in love. There was a glaring disparity between his emotional waves. It was very endearing I swear☺️. Mera yahaan baithe baithe yeh haal hai I can't imagine bechari Khushi ka kya hua hoga❤️. Her expression was aptly described by you Tinz. And still you weren't ready to give our hearts a breather just yet Ms. Baa Baa! You continued the rapport as Arnav got irked again at her saying sorry to him. He has no reservations about exerting his inherent rights over this woman and it's so far a treat to watch😳 (read/visualize).

The next statement from Arnav was very interesting. Haq bhi jata raha hai aur farz bhi. Gussa bhi dikha raha hai aur zimmedaari bhi. It's very enthralling indeed. As a recipient, I would be thoroughly confused whether to believe he is using his right over me or his duty? Here I feel you are establishing some form of suspense. I still suspect it has something to do with how she got hurt in the first place. Well established baba. Keep us gripped. (I know I know, you'll probably say you didn't see it or think of it that way. I'm going to stop believing you from now on😆!) By the way it created scorching impact when he said "Mujhe apna farz kissi se nahi baatna, deewaro se bhi nahi."🤢

Phew! Finally itni intensity ke baad some romantic relief☢️. Besharm back to his besharmi making Khushi blush and all, with his charm. Loved the character consistency in today's episode, on all of them.

"Bitiya aap ki tasveer ko hi deedar kar rahi hai aur baatein bhi usi se kar rahi hain!" Haaye😍! Daggers on Dhak Dhak. "Acha?" said Arnav Singh Raizada and Mohini went flatlined🤢. I could imagine the seduction with which he must've uttered that one word.

Here comes the matter of the material that Khushi so eagerly wishes to dodge. Again Arnav put her in an awkward position. But this time, Kaka's presence was a blessing in disguise. Have I loved this kaka from the first episode or what😎! Love you cool Kaku. You are a rockstar👍🏼. Keep up the good work. You didn't succeed today but you will, one day very soon. Kaka's sarcasm is too cute😳. Kaash kabhi aise kaka screen pe dekhne ko bhi mil jaaye (Nakul ki yaad diladi - if you know who that is)!

You ended in such a dreamy state as Arnav stood there mesmerized by the mere sight of his HOME. Aap ke kya kehne👏!

Another blazing episode ms. Jazbaato ke saudaagar. Hats off! You NEVER disappoint. 😊

A song I heard yesterday and couldn't help but dedicate to "Hamari Daastaan"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFZwqsgnYo4

Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

aww part three is so nice

ArHi understand each other so well...they can't hide anything from each other😍
Oyyieee Mami is soo mean :(
Lol Arnav teasing her's soo cute..and she's blushing so much..hayye...and ek wink se hi ghabrajati hai? O_o toh agar Arnav kuch aur karega toh... *Faints* lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aw arnav is ah-dorable...I mean..he's so sensitive about Khushi, so emotional, he cares so much, and possesive bhi hai ( he can't share her with anyone, not even wuth the dewaar lol) and Khushi, itni bholi bhali, sharmili types LOL... I love how Arnav flirts with her..how cute
I wonder how and when Arnav will find out bout mamis treatment towards Khushi :/
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Posted: 14 years ago
BAHUT HO GAYA HIDE AND SEEK ... YES I AM SCREAMING AND SHOUTING ...

I WANT WANT WANT THE NEXT PART ...

BABA...

WHEN IS IT COMING ???




P.S: i miss you 😎
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

Amazing update...love the love talk of them...

keep it up...
upload asap and thanks for the PM😃

Thank you so much Naina!
Glad you enjoyed part 4 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aahana1

Aha awesome Tina. This Arnav is soo Sweet and Romantic 😳 Loving this Arnav. i loved the way Arnav said ki tumhe mein apni Zimeedari samajta hoon. Awesome Dialogue 👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Aahana! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

amazing part tha loved the talk...

this maami na.. urgh..

do cont asap

n btw thc for the pm...

Thank you so much for the sweet comment! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
(seeing as certain words have now been banned from my vocabulary...😆)

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-


i cant help but say this, but you know what i love the most about this relationship these two share ...they were together for all this while, not once did he try to get intimate with her, or do any of the things that we get to see in all those mushy mushy stories.. as a reader i felt so comfortable... and at ease .. i wont lie, i did think, ab kya karega ... will there be one of those scenes we get to read every now and then ... but then... i was sooo floored by this couple already that i went in with the flow of the story !! the beauty of this relationship lies in its simplicity and purity and also the fact that their love emanates from every action and gesture of theirs ... !!!
Vodku I'm touched that you felt this way because it's an aspect of HD that I feel is extremely important! 😳
i was with Khushi as she tried to tel him she will do things on her own, perhaps innocently, because she obviously didnt want to trouble him .. may be Khushi was also scared from within, that she has Arnav today, but may not have him always.. after all, she had lived without him around her for three years .. today she was overwhelmed he had returned, but she also bore the fear and the pain of him again not being around her .. the little words, and the little actions, only showed she was though secure in her relationship with him, very insecure of the life she lead otherwise ...
I'm glad you support the independent Khushi. Even though Khushi (and Arnav) is dependent on her loved one, I felt it was important to remember that Khushi had spent three years without Arnav. Plus I like a bit of nari shakti in my FFs 😆
awww... i could imagine the cute child like stubborn anger on Arnavs face ...😍 yet i can imagine and feel what both of them would have felt like at that moment ... typical man behavior ...🤣🤣
Hai these men - can't live with them nor without them 😆
men will be men na ... !!!! wont say what hurt them, but will get all angry and upset, and since they are ... they want you to automatically guess.. only cos they love you and you are just not allowed to hurt them ...Embarrassed and now he is growing stern also ... cos he feels .. kameeni, itna bhi nahi samajhti ke mujhe ab gussa kyun aa raha hai ...😛
Exactly!! I have seen the same thing in my life - men will never express why they are angry but expect those around them to have suddenly developed telepathic powers and be able to understand! God these chokras I tell you 😆
Haha !!! totally enjoyed the realism in the scene!! including the irritation .. as a reader even i was like .. Duh!! usey obviously kaise pata hoga .. dude tell her na, itne tantrum kya kar raha hai ...🤣 and then the other side goes .. awww... bechara is hurting so much andar se... and then i wanna ...🤗only with Khushis permisssion ofcourse .. and a friendly hug only ...😉
Oh ho - jitni chahe jappian de dijiye Arnav ko - Khushi won't mind 😉
ouch ... yeh toh bahut naaraz ho gaya .. shit shit !!! she didnt mean it that way .. dont get upset Arnie .. please ...Embarrassed
Kabhi kabhi naraazgi mein bhi toh pyar chupa hota hai na? 😳
i am presuming his reaction was a cold and a dry one.. my own addition to this lil scene 🤣

I'm loving the fact that you are hearing his tone of voice and visualising him!! 😳

Ooohhh!!! possessive!!! i am totally loving this ...😍😍😍😍😍😍
esp the lines... apna farz kisi ke saath nahi baantna ... deewaro se bhi nahi .. i hope Khushi doesnt have a Facebook account .. else he will never let her post on them... 🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Sorry !! another bad one.. forgive me for my PJ's today Baba ...
Arre - aap ke pjs saraakhon par 😆
awww... !!!!
😳
Arrogant Ass... totally loves the effect he has on her ... !!!Embarrassed
😉 ab bechara kare bhi to kya - humari khushiji ka bp itni jaldi high jo ho jata hai 😆
i totally enjoy the transparency in their relationship that they share, and how someone like kaka who is driving the car also gets to join the jokes they share ..also shows the kind of upbringing both of them have .. and how they respect people around them ...👏 hats off to you for thinking out something like this ... !!! bravo !!!🤗
Glad you enjoyed this aspect of their relationship! And love love love the fact that you picked up on the way they've been brought up! 🤗
ouch!ouch ! ouch ...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ i can feel the tension mounting in me now .. the light hearted scene is now turning a little serious as reality might tick in anytime .. she will perhaps have to give away something she was hiding ...(biting nails nervously ...)
Sabar karo shishye 😆
thanks kaka for being a Rock⭐️ !!! n say it .. just say it .. yeh madam toh kuch bolne se rahi ...
Hai - aap bhi kuch kam nahi hain! 😉
In your next part can you please also describe the kind of clothes Arnav and Khushi wear, i would like to imagine them in their attires.. not that i dont otherwise 🤣 but i wanna see wad kinda clothes you would give them .. and i hope its not the same as the ones in the show ...!!! i wanna see babas imagination... shifting topics .. but did you happen to watch the 4Lions video of barun where he had that messy unkempt look ...i totally loved it ... can i imagine him like that for now ...please ...😍
Will defo describe their clothes from now on! 😃
Sorry, i love this bit, but the only thing that stuck in my head in this scene is kakas expression ... !!! and how he mumbled within himself ... sorry, i know i am weird ...😆😆😆
Haha - ab Kaka pe nazar hai kya? ROFL

This man is chivalrous and takes Khushi to be his personal responsibility ... and you know what .. thats what i love the most about the Arnav in your story ...Another mystery story to Sheesh Mahal... I am game ... bring it on Baba ...

Ab main aapse kya kahoon ... !!! challo .. chado, kuch nahi kehti .. waise havent i already said enough for the day today ... aapko Vodku-betes ho jayegi ...

just one last thing ...

🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

❤️ u loads Baba !!! for a splendid Sunday Treat ..now i am all ☺️
I ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ you moreee!!!!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: neetusidhu

lovely...that was just too good for words...the love that they have for one another is just amazing...cant wait to see what else you have in store for us

Thank you so much Neetu!
Can't wait to show you guys what I have in store either! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you! 😃

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