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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-
😉 FF se zyada toh aapke replies hote hai Baba ... aapko Taakat ke liye ...

Tan aur Mann ki Shakti ke liye ...

Haha - ab Baba kya karein - jab aap itne pyaare comments do ge toh humein bhi lambe replies toh dene hi honge 😆

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#112

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan
wow mast haii add me also...

Thanks so much! 😃

Have added you to buddy list so I can pm with ease 😉

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#113

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01
Okay - now that I've recovered after fainting from the effects of your AMAZING comment:

i made you faint Baba... maaf kar do baba ... maaf kardo ...galti ho gayi humse ... maaf karo ... aap apni shishya ko shyaap toh nahi denge na ...( looks at Baba scared)

Thank you so much vodku!!!! 🤗

yay !!! Baba ko gussa nahi aaya ... baba ko gussa nahi aaya ...

The little details you pick up on are so amazing and like monz you seem to notice things even I don't see!! 😆

good na, it means, you dont even know what you have in you .. and we are the true reflection of your inner most hidden thoughts ...😉

I'm so glad to see that so far I've managed to keep your interest in the film and evoke such amazing analysis from you!

well yes... and thats partly because, m sick and lying in bed all day as well...🤣 kidding... your stories have a magnetic pull in them ... when i read it, i can feel it .. and like i sed, for that moment i become the characters .. so 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

So once again from the bottom of my heart - thank you sooo much!!! 🤗 ❤️

aaj se jabhi bhi mujhe Thank you Karne ka mann kare ... cut out the words ... you can just ...

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woh bhi hai ... issi liye aapke liye taakat waali drink bhi leke aa gaye .. woh kya hai na ... har waqt sharaab pilaana accha nahi lagta na ... aapki sehat ka bhi toh khayal rakhna humari zimmedaari hai ... after all ... I am the President of the All India Baba Fans Association!!!😆😆😆😉

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Haha - ab Baba kya karein - jab aap itne pyaare comments do ge toh humein bhi lambe replies toh dene hi honge 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@Vodku:

Arre - hum kabhi aapko shaap deh saktein hain kya! 😲 Hum to chahte hain ke aapke comment humein behosh kar dein! 😆

Oh ho - ab itne bhi pyaare comments mat diya kijiye ki humare sir hi pooljaye 😳 😆

Awww - hope you feel better soon shishiye!!

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i will sniff... i willl... snifff ...🤗

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01
@Vodku:

Arre - hum kabhi aapko shaap deh saktein hain kya! 😲 Hum to chahte hain ke aapke comment humein behosh kar dein! 😆

Oh ho - ab itne bhi pyaare comments mat diya kijiye ki humare sir hi pooljaye 😳 😆

Awww - hope you feel better soon shishiye!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

I was not planning to respond to your response to my response to your episode 😆 but some of your responses were, lets say, too irressitable... I just had to indulge 😆😉😛😳

'Kab hotein hain pyar ke raaste aasaan, suniye ek mohobat ki kahani,
Humari Daastan'

Haha - I can't even begin to explain how hard it is to make my inner Ghalib wake up 😆

AWWW Ms. Gaalib, Well you better stay awake buddy! Ab chodiye bhi bahaane, dete rahiye hame aise hi nazraane 🤣

I wanted to show a much lighter male protagonist so thank you so much for appreciating that monz!! 😃

I love it. 😳 I don't know too many hot hot angry young men in my real life but I know a guy or two like this Arnav! It's fab to relate 😃.

Vodku is right here (thanks vodku 😉) - I showed Khushi taking the phone in order to convey the comfort level between ArShi as well as their 'haq' over each other 😊

It's great to see you hate Mami so much!! 😆

It was beautifully shown darling. I just jitter when the submissive good gal gets thrown around like a pingpong ball by the evil vamps, and for what? her silly innocent playfulness😒😡? Toh bas, aise hi, instant reaction aa gaya 😛

Maine kab kahaa I hate maami so much? In fact I said I love how she is shaping up 😉😆🤣

Awww - thats so sweet monz!! 😃 It's amazing the kind of small nuances you pick up in my stories - they really never fail to blow me away!! 😳

Haan magar, udd mat jaana! Hamara kya hoga 🤔😆

Haha thanks monz - I like my leads to be a little more perceptive than they are shown on tv and even how they actually are in reality! Again - you're spot on with your comment about men choosing not to get involved with family disputes regarding women!

Haaye - 😍 I need not say more!

I'm positive it wasn't boring monz!!!! 😉

🤣 how you could be so sure!

I'm glad his tact came across as I wanted to show him handling the situation maturely and despite the fact that the Arnav in my FF has a temper I wanted to convey the fact that he wouldn't disrespect any of his close ones. 😳

Hmm! That's the right thing to do. No need to lose it and make things uglier than they already are! Best handled tactfully! Well played baba!

I'm glad you asked - I should have made it clear in the FF! 😳 Well, I imaging Arnav making a sweetly angry face at Khushi 😃

😍 awww!

Haha - you me both hun 😆

Honestly - once again you've picked up on things I didn't even realise 😲

😳 so that's how natural you are at this! You don't even realize how good you are?

Dhak dhak...dhak dhak... 😆

Seriously woman! Kya story progression tha! ❤️

I wanted to show the closeness between Arnav's mother and Khushi and I thought this would be a good way to display it before introducing the character 😊

👏Well done 😛! again, woven brilliantly!

Oh ho blushing blushing haan? 😆 Imagine kar lena ki voh aapko hi keh rahe the 😃

arrey nahi na! issey hum khushi ke liye hi rehne dete hai! Mere liye ek gudsawaar hai taiyaar! 🤣 Hamaare gaal sab ki lovestories sun ke laal ho jaate hai kya kare, hopeless romantic jo thehre! 😳 Aur phir yeh to ek EPIC hai! ☺️❤️

Awww - so sweet!!! I'm amazed at the depth you see in a couple of lines - amazing monz, really amazing! 👏

Back atchya! Kaise kar lete ho aisa?

Dhak dhak...dhak dhak... 😆 Blood pressure agar badh jaye toh humein dosh mat dena monz 😆

Toh aur kisko denge bataaiye bhala 😆

Yes - Kaka was needed in order to move ArShi out of the chawl - though I would keep them both locked in there if I could 😆

😍 If I could...

I'm so glad that you got all this from that section - this is exactly what I was aiming for!! 😳

I was just appreciating the brilliance of this Arnav Singh Raizada!😉

You're just too kind 😳

It's all in your mind 😆

Forget my part monz - your analysis is always so incredible and heart warming! 😳

Thank you so much monz!!! - from the bottom of my dhak dhak dil 😆 ❤️ 🤗

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Baba and Nicky ...

Taaliyan ... Taaliyan ... Taaliyan ...

I have nothing else to say ...

Or should i say ... How dare you both not leave anything for me to say ... dono ko pata hai na, mujhe bolne ki kitni bimari hai ...😡

chal koi nahi ...❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Recap: He tightened his grip on her hand and they both stepped outside Khushi's chawl. _____________________________________________________________________
Part 4

'Sambhal kar chalna, yeh dil hote hain naadan, dil se dekhiye Humari Daastan'

As they stepped outside, Khushi turned around to lock the door behind them. Whilst her back was turned, Arnav scoured the balcony to ensure there was no one there to torment them further. As Arnav once again thought back to those low lifes who had pushed and taunted Khushi, his fists clenched automatically and his heartbeats quickened. However, the sound of Khushi's bangles as she finished locking the door pulled him from his anger and he reminded himself that he could not retaliate in front of Khushi.

'Chaliye.' Khushi smiled at Arnav and they both made their way across the balcony and down the chawl steps.

As they descened the stairs, Arnav tightened his grip on Khushi's hand as well as bringing his arm behind her to provide her with some extra support. At this action, a small smile graced Khushi's lips and she shook her head and turned to Arnav,

'Hum neeche utar sakthe hain Arnav. Deewar ka sahara lekar upar neeche karte rahe hain hum. Poori zindagi jab aise jeeni padhti hai toh phir insaan bhoj na bane ke liye cheezon ka sahara le leta hai.'

By now they had reached the bottom of the steps and Arnav had removed his arm from behind Khushi but still held her hand in a firm grip. Just as Khushi took a step towards the car, she felt herself being hindered by the fact that Arnav had not moved. Confused, Khushi turned back to face Arnav and saw that he had a somewhat hurt and angered expression on his face. Khushi furrowed her eyebrows but before she could ask Arnav anything, he began to speak.

'Tumnhe aisa kyun kaha?' He asked bluntly. His monotonic voice revealing nothing about his emotions.

Khushi grew even more perplexed by his question,

'Kya kaha humnein?' she asked in return.

'Sawal ka jawab sawal nahi hota Khushi. Tumne aisa kyun kaha?' Arnav's expression grew sterner.

However Khushi remained baffled. She racked her mind to try and think what she may have said that seemed to offend Arnav so much. When her mind came up blank she shrugged her shoulders at Arnav,

'Humein nahi pata Arnav. Ab chodiye aur chaliye Maa raah dekhti hongi.'

Khushi tried to pull Arnav towards the car but his strong grip meant she remained rooted to the same spot. By now Khushi was growing slightly irritated and she turned to look at Arnav. Irritation clear on her face.

'Tumne yeh kyun kaha ki tum bhoj ho?' Arnav asked Khushi in a tone that portrayed hurt, annoyance and anger.

Realisation came over Khushi's face as she remembered her earlier statement. At the time she had not even realised that Arnav would take her words to heart.

'Arnav, aap humari baat ka-' Khushi tried to explain but Arnav interrupted her,

'Bachpan se leke aaj tak tumhe maine humesha apni samjha hai. Tumhe apni zimedaari samjha hai. Humesha tum par apna haq samjha hai maine - bina yeh parbah kiye ke aur log kya sochte hain. Aur ab tak mujhe bhi yahi lagta tha ki tum bhi mujhe utna hi apna samajhti ho, lekin aaj pata chala ki mujhe kitna paraiya samjhti ho tum.'

Khushi was taken aback by Arnav's word. She had not the faintest idea that her statment would hurt Arnav so deeply and evoke such an intense emotional response from him. His words had touched her heart and she looked down as shame filled her.

'I'm sorry.' She mumbled.

'Kya?' Arnav exclaimed.

'Humne kaha ki-'

'Mujhe pata hai tumne kya kaha.' Arnav explained before continuing,

'Aur phir kabhi aisa kaha na toh tum dekh lena.'

'Lekin humaari baaton se aapko bura laga Arnav.' Khushi said.

'Mujhe bura is baat ka laga ke tumne apne aap ko bhoj kaha. Tumhe main apni zimedaari samajhta hun Khushi - koi bhoj nahi samjhi. Aur haan phir yeh kaha na ke cheezon ke sahara zindagi mein aage bhadna parta hai toh tumhari kasam itna gussa karoonga na. Tumhara sahara banne ka haq sirf aur sirf mera hai. Mujhe apna farz aur kisi ke saath nahi baatna - deewaron se bhi nahi.'

With these heart warming words, Arnav took Khushi towards the car whilst Khushi just stared at him dumb founded. She had no idea what she had done in some past life of hers' to have been fortunate enough to have someone like Arnav in her life now.

As Arnav made Khushi sit in the car and then got in himself as Kaka began driving. Khushi continued to stare at Arnav. Seeing this Arnav smiled a cheeky smile and turned to Khushi and said,

'Aaj suraj ulti disha se utha hai kya?' he teased.

'Kya matlab?' asked Khushi.

'Aaj memsaab bina maange hi apni sone sone mukhde ka deedar de rahi hain.'

Khushi blushed profusley after hearing Arnav's reply causing Arnav and Kaka to erupt into a fit of laughter. Khushi once again tucked a strand of hair behind her ear and looked out of the window in an attempt to hide her embarrasment.

'Arre Baba yeh toh kuch bhi nahin. Pichle theen saalon se toh bitiya apki tasveer ko hi deedar kara rahi hain aur baatein bhi usi se kar rahi hain.' Kaka joined in the teasing.

'Accha?' said Arnav,

'Phone kya udgaye the ki memsaab humari tasveer se baatein karthi thi. Kyun Khushi jab baat karne ka mann karta tha toh mujhe phone kyun nahi kar leti thi? Aur vaise - jo phone maine tumhare liye bheja tha voh hai kahan?'

Khushi immediately tensed up. She was beginning to realise just how difficult it was going to be to hide her terrible financial condition from Arnav. As Khushi raided her brain trying to find a plausible excuse, Kaka's voice brought her from her thoughts.

'Voh phone bitiya ko mila ho tab hi hoga na Baba.'

Khushi immediately looked up at Kaka and subtly shook her head. She knew that Kaka was aware of the ruthless way in which Mami would treat Khushi but she never thought that he would tell Arnav about it.

'Kya matlab Kaka?' now it was Arnav's turn to be confused.

By now they had reached Sheesh Mahal - the home where both Arnav and Khushi had pretty much grown up in together. As a sweet smile graced both Khushi and Arnav's lips at the sight of the one place that they could truly call home, Kaka's expression grew stern as well as somewhat sad as he mumbled to himself,

'Matlab tum apni Mami se poochna Baba.'

The sight of his home after three long years meant that Arnav forgot Kaka's earlier statement. He stepped out of the car and went to help Khushi out too. As they both walked towards the mahal, both Khushi and Arnav stopped as Arnav let his eyes take in the sight of his home for as long as his heart wished.

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Here's part 4 my lovlies!!

Enjoy and don't forget to leave your comments!

Love Always

Tina

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my cutesy, hot hot baba ...🤣

i have so many things to say ... but for now, i just am filled with a heavy heart ... cos ... i can feel the intense love Arnav and Khushi share... its been years since i read something someone has wriitten and have felt every inch of the emotions written and described !!

i will as usual .. do my quotes now ...

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