MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#501

res :)

wil comment later aram se :)

EDIT:

ok this is the third time i am reading this update coz i am totally in love with it...

to begin with, the story is at a lovely pace, and yes, there's no hurry at all... the minute you rush with the story, the romance gets rushed and it appears only as physical bonding rather than an emotional one...

but here, i loved the way you brought out the maturity level... both are each other's emotional supporters and its nice that there is no more awkwardness... i loved the hug in the kids room and the pecks and the glances 😳 it looks realistic...

n i love the way they are beginning to behave like a typical husband-wife... (the scene where she is in a fix as to what she would wear and he picks out an outfit for her)

waiting for the next part i.e. the outing...

P.S. : may i request one small thing kinza... please try to show a situation where nupur talks about nitesh to mayank..(?) it has always been mayank who remembers kanchi and nupur feeling a tinge of jealously... plz try to create some kind of situation as mentioned above... 😊 would love to see mayank's reaction to nitesh's story...

but well, ur the writer. u know whats best for the characters in your story...

thanks a lot for the PM n sorry for the delayed reply... 😊

do update asap 😊 take care Kinza

Edited by rapunzel_angel - 14 years ago

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#502

finally they r becoming couple!

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#503

simply getting mesmerized by seeing the couple bond thats gradually forming between mayur...living every bit of this story...continue soon.

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#504

nice part

nupur suggested they all go out, and mayank had to agree! lol, thats cute. the kids were really excited..

mayank asked nupur how she handled so much pain. and he came so close to her, and they hugged. nice! the kids saw them, and they were speechless at that time. lol

nupur could'nt pick a dress, and mayank helped her with it. she took a lot of time in getting ready, but i guess it was worth it, since mayank was totaly mesmerized looking at her ;) aww.

he came close to her and kissed her again. she was actually blushing this time, and even he noticed it, how cute! they're def falling for each other..

thanks for the pm

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#505

awww too cute for words...so finally the mayur story begins 😃

its a good thing the boys didnt catch them kissing each other!😆

Edited by sumonetolub - 14 years ago

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#506

awww my magician PT.. its d luck of v MNians tht U R A MNian..vich paved way to write such breathtaking heavenly magical beautiful ffs on MN..really thnx a zillion ton for comin to our lives n showerin this MN magic on us lik nythin..thank u thank u FOR EVERYTHING.. i donno wht to say nw aftr readin current upd8..bt i ws totally lost in MN world n usi mein aake i hv ranted all these.. n this upd8 is one of my most fav upd8s f this ff..nw w8in for ur tuesday pm for this.. :) luv u loads my PT

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#507

lovely update!!!
plzzz continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#508

Awww Kinza outstanding update dear
now mayur become very comfortable with each other...

loved d way they were passing cute gesture to each other..

wonderful part...
keep updating