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firoza malik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

superb part..

loved it

thnx 4 da PM!!!!

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Sanaa!! :(
I'm still crying... :'(
Why did Sara have to die?? :(
It was sooo emotional yaar.. :'(
My tears aren't stopping u knw...
That surely proves how well u write!
Very well written!
Keep it up! :)
Do update soon!
Love
Rhea

Edited by RheaKSG4eva - 14 years ago

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@-Spirited-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

😭😭😭oh!!look i am still in tears,i totally loved the character of sara,but as they say every nice things have to leave,so even sara left,but then she surely has made her brother a better person and also put some sense into armaan

update soon

nikki

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jiyaa_m

@jiyaa_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

sara is dead why u do this?????? i so love this lil mature gal

her letter is so emotional brought my tears too

ufff shanky n his THE LOOK hope he wount play vilain here

lovely n sid nice jodi😆 can image sid's face its so fun to read this part

anji so sweet sis

hwww ridz atul n hott???????? atul is the cutest i think

update soon

plz unite AR soon too

Edited by jiyaa - 14 years ago

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neelima

@araja1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

very sad part but awesome. Waiting to read more. Complete it soon

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scorpio95

@scorpio95

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

great part! plz don't get offended that i write a short comment, i do it for all the fanfics i read, reason being, when i try to put it into words, it's difficult. you are a really good writer 👏, and i wait for this fanfic to be updated everyday, ands when i do, i get happy, beacuse this is one of my favourite fanfics, and i enjoy reading it. also, when you write the emotional scenes, i literally have tears in my eyes (including this part), and feel sad, reason being, is that you're a realg good writer, who makes every scenes look real. you can visulise the scene you write, and you deserve having your work praised. 👏. i'm sooo sorry to have offended you, that was truly not my intention. once again, i'm sooo sorry. 😊 sorry, but you won't get these long comments so often, because i can't think of something this long to write. 😆 one again, i'm truly sorry if i offended you. 😊

Edited by scorpio95 - 14 years ago

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idda

@idda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Is it wrong that i was little happy while reading the part because that meant chapter 10 is on its way ? :)

but on a serious note,

this is one of the most touching piece of writing i have ever read. have you read marley and me ? i cried when the dog dies because i am a dog lover. from the bottom of my heart.

kal ho na ho when srk dies :/ that was SOOO touching. i could go on with my list of things that have touched me/ made me cry. the point being, that sara's death is one of them. its written beautifully sanaa di.

and im really sorry that i never commented on your story. but my mom sometimes just cuts down on the internet. these days im getting it a lot more hence the comments are more too :')

but i really do love LOOC. and i always will.

never discontinue.

and if you do ( HOPE NOT ) then PM me the parts too :P

I love this story. always :)

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

OMG!!!!That was sooo much emotional.
Sara died.
Gosh!! its sooo sad.
Anyways I loved the letter which Sara wrote to her little bro.
I hope Sara's death might bring AR more closer and they may sort out their differences.
Amazing update indeed.

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qt4ever

@qt4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

I m feeling bad that sara died! She was so gud!
And the letter which she wrote to her brother!
That was such an emotional scene!
Cont soon!

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namita

@namita18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

hey...

👏

I dont have enough words to describe dis part..

u left me speechless..

after 1st installment, i was in tears..the emotions u put in the part was so overwhelming...the breakdown of ridhima,armaan and sara's family was so emotional ,their pain was unbearable,..and her letter to rahul just shows her beautiful bond and love for her brother...

THIS WAS MY FAVOURITE PART OF LOOC TILL YET

and finally they are coming close..

their moments in the end of the part was nice..

and the way armaan supports ridzy was lovely..

pls make them together in next part wid a much awaiting confession..i cant wait more...

and i totally agree with shuru and aanya, u truly deserve much more...

I m not in ur pm list,but who need a pm to read ur ff,main to bhatakti hi rehti hun yahan..hehe..lolz..

pls pls update soon😛

P.S i know, this is small comment after so much wait,but pls bear this late latif for sumtime😆😆

Edited by namita18 - 14 years ago