Life Out Of Control #2 - Page 16

Originally posted by: scorpio95

great part! plz don't get offended that i write a short comment, i do it for all the fanfics i read, reason being, when i try to put it into words, it's difficult. you are a really good writer 👏, and i wait for this fanfic to be updated everyday, ands when i do, i get happy, beacuse this is one of my favourite fanfics, and i enjoy reading it. also, when you write the emotional scenes, i literally have tears in my eyes (including this part), and feel sad, reason being, is that you're a realg good writer, who makes every scenes look real. you can visulise the scene you write, and you deserve having your work praised. 👏. i'm sooo sorry to have offended you, that was truly not my intention. once again, i'm sooo sorry. 😊 sorry, but you won't get these long comments so often, because i can't think of something this long to write. 😆 one again, i'm truly sorry if i offended you. 😊

Originally posted by: idda

Is it wrong that i was little happy while reading the part because that meant chapter 10 is on its way ? :)

but on a serious note,

this is one of the most touching piece of writing i have ever read. have you read marley and me ? i cried when the dog dies because i am a dog lover. from the bottom of my heart.

kal ho na ho when srk dies :/ that was SOOO touching. i could go on with my list of things that have touched me/ made me cry. the point being, that sara's death is one of them. its written beautifully sanaa di.

and im really sorry that i never commented on your story. but my mom sometimes just cuts down on the internet. these days im getting it a lot more hence the comments are more too :')

but i really do love LOOC. and i always will.

never discontinue.

and if you do ( HOPE NOT ) then PM me the parts too :P

I love this story. always :)

Originally posted by: miss93

Hey:))

that was just great part and I loved it soo much, but at the same time sooo emotional and sad. My eyes are really moist and I'm about to cry...poor sara she was such a sweet friend of Riddhima and help AR to relieaze their feelings. I wish she didn't died and sooo sad for her family and I loved the letter she had written and most of all I loved the hug AR had when sara died because it was...was...sorry have do words to discribe it...

con. very very very soon

take care

love miss93

Originally posted by: ARMAAN-KSGFAN

hey i had been reading ur ff on the blog and i just love it its simply adorable.you have portrayed everything very beautifully im not going to give a very long comment even though its my first on ur ff i dont usually comment on ppls ff's because i am a person of few words when it comes to describing what i feel so im really sorry for the no comments i hope u understand.i love ur ff i hope u continue it