Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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sweetgirl555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Nice part
Loved it
Will wait for the epilogue

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nyxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

I remember reading this a long time back, and then loosing it along the way with asli duniya knocking in. But I am glad to have found it now ;-) Though Ive cheated a bit and read the ending, but I am surely going to go back and read it all over again...You have captured the essence of Armaan Riddhima, even Shashank so efffortlessly and beautifully! Cant wait for the epilogue :)

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rtjks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Lovely part.

Waiting for epilogue.

Thanks for PM.

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

LOL the Atul Anjali parts were a bonus. a great way to wrap it up Aria! i'm always so useless when it comes to commenting on updates but this was really well done..great way to end the story. very sweet and yes it did please the cheesy romantic in me :P but honestly, this was wonderful. i'm glad i discovered your writing and i'm glad that i stayed active on I-F long enough to complete reading this FF ;P

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there's an epilogue too? well someones feeling generous :P not that i'm complaining 😆

Edited by -Aliya- - 11 years ago

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Sonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

firstly congratulations on successfully completing such a beautiful story. it will always, always be close to my heart. I love happy ending, and although rushed, I'm glad you gave armaan and riddhima the perfect end.

lots of love
Sonia

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bushrayou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

It wont let me like for some reason... but I just re-read the parts and HAD to comment again before moving on

Part 32- God I feel the anguish... I dont know why but I picture the mohabbatein scene between the father and daughter and feel my heart break... how do you fight those words from that memory... you lost before you even started.

Part 33-i swear there are few writers that can actually make my heart dip into my stomach... when he found her upstairs I felt like the calm before the storm... her anchor. Strong words and overwhelming emotions. damn the cross she is at. how do you fight this! god this chapter makes my heart puddle and melt... so much to say yet no way to word it.

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

god i just re-read part 34 and it makes me so happy. I think her confidence pours through your words and seriously enters my heart. You cannot split yourself in two... she will not give up but not give in!

SO EXCITED for the last part!

I know I had commented already on the previous chapters but they deserved more :)

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

A, started the journey afresh again. 😊

I do remember the story, but rereading now is making me go back to days between 2008 and 2011(DMG days). 😳. So, yes. I am enjoying it thoroughly.

PS: chapters 1 to 10 already down . 😉

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Done till part 22. Felt so good reading your updates and my comments too. 😛😆

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
And now I can read it from the start again. 😉
A long journey A. I remember clearly we met over this and then started my never ending bickering to update further. Though I phased out in between the story for few parts, I am still happy that this story has happened for me to know you. Good work as always A.
I will be back to read it again with a fresh mind. 😊

I can't believe you are actually reading from the start😲 i had to do that before i wrote the last part, and my own reaction to what i wrote was like 😲 - 🥱-😲-😆 you get the drift!

Will wait for your comment on the last part. Btw, i saw a spammer on It had to be you (AK) someone needs to totally spam the AR version thread too. 😆 that actually means, are you up for it? 😆

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago