Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: sweetgirl555
Nice part
Loved it
Will wait for the epilogue

Thank you SG. I will write the epilogue soon and hopefully post it here too.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: nyxx
I remember reading this a long time back, and then loosing it along the way with asli duniya knocking in. But I am glad to have found it now ;-) Though Ive cheated a bit and read the ending, but I am surely going to go back and read it all over again...You have captured the essence of Armaan Riddhima, even Shashank so efffortlessly and beautifully! Cant wait for the epilogue :)

What do we have here? You read this?😲 although i can't blame anyone for losing interest given how long i took to complete this ff myself😆

@bold, Thank you for saying that. It was fun writing this FF, my first in fact and when i wrote the last part, i realized how different AR were...

cheers,

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: rtjks
Lovely part.

Waiting for epilogue.

Thanks for PM.

Thank you for still being here, reading and for commenting. It has been some experience writing this FF, all thanks to you guys :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: -Aliya-
LOL the Atul Anjali parts were a bonus. a great way to wrap it up Aria! i'm always so useless when it comes to commenting on updates but this was really well done..great way to end the story. very sweet and yes it did please the cheesy romantic in me :P but honestly, this was wonderful. i'm glad i discovered your writing and i'm glad that i stayed active on I-F long enough to complete reading this FF ;P
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there's an epilogue too? well someones feeling generous :P not that i'm complaining 😆

Hey Aliya,

@bold, 🤣You don't intend to let me forget anytime soon do you? But what can I say, you speak the truth so I'll let it pass

Yes, there is an epilogue cause like i've said all along, i wont leave this ff incomplete. Hopefully, it will be soon. But even if, the generosity doesnt see the light of day, at least, it ends in a happy place :)

Thank you for still being here, really. I cannot say that enough. Take Care :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: sonia_92
firstly congratulations on successfully completing such a beautiful story. it will always, always be close to my heart. I love happy ending, and although rushed, I'm glad you gave armaan and riddhima the perfect end.

lots of love
Sonia

Yes, better this ending than an incomplete one. I'm glad this is done too. And Thank you Sonia for sticking around to the end and for being part of this thread.

Take Care :)

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: bushrayou
It wont let me like for some reason... but I just re-read the parts and HAD to comment again before moving on

Part 32- God I feel the anguish... I dont know why but I picture the mohabbatein scene between the father and daughter and feel my heart break... how do you fight those words from that memory... you lost before you even started.

Part 33-i swear there are few writers that can actually make my heart dip into my stomach... when he found her upstairs I felt like the calm before the storm... her anchor. Strong words and overwhelming emotions. damn the cross she is at. how do you fight this! god this chapter makes my heart puddle and melt... so much to say yet no way to word it.

Hey!

Mohabbatein? that's interesting. But Ridz. wouldn't do that, I hope she surprised everyone by the end. given how she was always the one running away always.

I'm writing on AK too these days and I realized while i was re-writing this part and the last one, how different AR were. Def. the fun quotient just shoots up with these two, so it was fun writing on them. I'm glad you liked those parts too, and Thank you for staying till the end, and even re-reading the parts, Take Care!

Aria

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: -Aria-

I can't believe you are actually reading from the start😲 i had to do that before i wrote the last part, and my own reaction to what i wrote was like 😲 - 🥱-😲-😆 you get the drift!

Will wait for your comment on the last part. Btw, i saw a spammer on It had to be you (AK) someone needs to totally spam the AR version thread too. 😆 that actually means, are you up for it? 😆

I don't know about you but I thoroughly enjoy reading it from the start again. It took me back to those DMG days where I liked some of the poignant scenes between Armaan and Riddhima on the show.

It was a very good read Aria. I liked how you just gave importance to Pablo and his muse giving space and introduction and importance to others only whenever and wherever required. I loved it A. Both facing the demons of the past, present and still be confident about together for future.

Waiting for epilogue. 😃

PS: It had to be you?! Is it your new fic? I am sorry I'm lost. 😲