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Posted: 13 years ago
part 9
hello GG (good girl) Priya...
nice part...
so much past in this...
Ashwin and Mitali a piece of advice, GET A LIFE...
Raj taught a good lesson to Ashwin...
how i wish he had sent Ashwin to jail then itself...
so Mitali is having a watch on Raj and Prisha...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
For Part # 8

Once again a beautiful part...😃...its actually incredible that u manage to bring in such beautiful light moments in this fic which is rather tragic...😳

Firstly, Rajeev...❤️...I love him!! 😳😆

Haan...abhi UD ki baat karte hai..😆😆...unn bandaro ko pareshan dekh kar mujhe thodi khushi hoying...Prisha achha attitude jhaad rahi hai...😳...aisi ladkiyan mujhe pasand hai jo apne hero ke alawa sabko attitude dikhaye...😆😆

Arjun's character is really nice...liked his scenes wid Prisha...😃...and so he loves Nupur...😳...his dialogues were really funny...😳😃 & Nupur is a police officer...nice!! Suits to her persona..😆

And well, my fav flashbak...😆😆...shuru me hi hassa diya...Bike ko baccha hua...😆😆😆😆😆...🤣...chalo me eager for the race...hope tumne next part me include kiya hai...😳

And yes...its a very well written part...Rajeev ke character ko achhese depict kar rahi ho tum...me loving it...😳😃...
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Posted: 13 years ago
For Part # 9

Hehe...finally I am here for the last updated part...😳

Pehle race ki baat karte hai...Rajeev ke logics achhe the reagrding why he doesnt want to participate in the race...😆...lekin phir Dev ki wajah se usne hissa liya and jeetna to usse tha hi..😉😃...

But then gorilla ne apni aukad dikha di and caused that accident......achha hua Rajeev ne apna dimag chalaya and sab kuch sahi ho gaya...😳 Usne Prisha se ear ring bhi le li..😆...achha kiya!! 😃😆 Didnt I say he is SMART!! 😳😳

And well...Prisha ne usse hug bhi kiya...ahemz...😳...lekin Priya jee jealous ho gayi and scene rok diya...😆😆...abhi jaldi se continue karna...😳

And talking abt present...😳😳...I loved the line "tum mere sath nahi...tab main tumhare sath rahunga"...😳...and car scene was nice...Rajeev in fact complimented her...😲😆...mujhe to yakeen nahi ho raha tha...😆

And yeah...Rajeev and uska ulta jawab...awesum hai. Even I find it hard to answer any1 when asked how far is sum place...😆😆...abhi Raj ka jawab pata hai na...wahi kahungi ab se...😆😆

Do continue soon...😳...& thanks for the lovely part!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Comments part 8:

Dear loved the part...

Best was the way prisha talked to Rajeev in front of Mitali loved her attitude... Mitali needs this treatment...

Loved the way Rajeev defended Prisha ... This is the reason he has called Prisha here to get back at Mitali and Ashwin so that he can take revenge from them for what they did to Dev...

So prisha has started her work... She too understands how much Rajeev is missing Dev...

so both Ashwin is planning to hire a detective ... He doesnt know rajeev is much smarter than them...

I dont know Mitali ko apne aur rajeev ko lekar itni bari galatfahmi kaise hai...

Loved Arjun and prisha's conversation regarding Arjun's love ... So he is in love with nupur who is a cop...

So rajeev is in touch with Nupur... I can understand what prisha must be feeling seeing her friend and unable to meet her...

Arjun is so sweet the way he makes Rajeev eat his food...

Flashback was fun...

loved Dev's dialogue 'Hamari bike ko bacha hua hai'... So nice of mohitjee to get Dev another bike...

mohitjee telling them not to fight and Rajeev answer was superb ... Hum sab bahar hee nipta kar aayenge...

So Dev wants Rajeev to participate in the race against ashwin uff gorilla.. Ashwin's name is too good Gorilla...


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Posted: 13 years ago

hey prii...

nice update...parh k maza agya..
oh dev bhi na...itni senti dialogue mrta hai...acha kiya raj nai jo aik punch mara...😊😊😊
dun know much about racing but raj ki entry bht achi lagi black t shirt wah wah n helmet uff just imagine k wo helmet utar rha hai...oh woww kitna handsome lg rha hoga😍😍😍😍...wah jee kia baat hai raj ki...n ye to hna hi tha gorilla ko o harna hi tha 👏👏👏👏 ...but ye nupur jo keh rhi thi k mje to raj ki jeet dekhni hai...to ab kia aik aur scene to nhai haina?😕😕😕
and the way raj helped prisha mami was too good...how he use his mind in hospital just to start the treatment... 👏👏👏..
plese next part main flashback wala scene complete ke daina...adha adhora chor k curiosity barh jaii hai...😛😛😛
n ye raj ko koi aur kaam nahi hai...bus prisha ko dekhtahi rehta hai...kisi din ghortai hortai mirror main hole na hojai 😆😆😆😆
the car scene was a cute one...ye inqilab kaisai aya...zaror metali ko dekha hoga raj nai..
kafi bak bak hogai...now cont soon

take care

Edited by Innocent_eyes - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi priya😊
wonderful update👏👏
and a very awesome flashback👏 😊 👏
dev ka aisa emotional blackmailing dekh ke to mujhe laga ki agar thodi der bhi usne ye blackmailing ki to raj ko to koi asar nahi hoga lekin mujhe rona aa jayege😆 😆 😆 kuch bhi karke usne raj ko bike race ke liye mana hi liya aur raj jab maan hi gaya tha to uska amar se harne k to koi sawal hi nahi uthta hai😉 😉 😛
aur dekha na raj race jeet bhi gaya 👏 👏 👏 aur wo gadha amarachcha hua haar gaya 😡 😡 😡 lekin apna gussa aur khunnas bechare dev aur us trophy per nikali usne😡 😡 🤢 usko chot bhi aayi aur wo ttrophy bhi toot gayi 😒... idiot amar😡 🤢 🤢 wo bracelet le ker bhi bhaag raha tha achche hua raj ne usse leli😛 😉 😛
but iss sab chakkar mein prisha ki mamiji ka accident ho gaya raj se 😔 lekin wo log nahi jaante the ki yehi prisha ki mamiji hain😕 😕 😕
lekin hospital mein raj ne sabkuch bohot achchi tarah se handle kiya👏 😊 😊aur apna dimag zaada lagaya jisse ki medication jaldi shuru ho jaaye mamiji ki 😆 😛 👍🏼
prisha sach mein kaafi sad si lag rahi thi jab use sabkuch pata chala jiski wajah se raj ke bina kuch kahe hi apni feelings ko uske saath share kiya usne😔 😔 😭
ab present mein aate hain😆 😆 😆
smart boy side glass mein se prisha ko dekh bhi raha tha aur sunn bhi raha tha ... thodi si naaraz prisha ko bhi dekha hoga usne aur suna bhi hoga tio i am confused ki wo uss time kya soch raha hoga jab prisha apni badbad mein busy thi club mein jaane ke liye 😉 😆 😕
ab mujhe samjh mein nai aa raha ki kaun sa emticon use karun jab usne suna hoga wo sab 😆 😆 😆 waise bhi abhi bohot saare use kar liye nahi 😆 😆 😉
mujhe samajh mein nahi aata jab raj ka nature hi aisa hai matlab shaant aur alag rehne waala
to wo kyun use akdu , ghamandi and etc etc kehti hai wo to jaantu hi hai ki raj kaisa hai phir use kya problem hai yaar raj to raj hai na 😆 😉 😆 par uss ladki ko kaise samjhaya jaaye 😆 😕 😆
last waala scene to ... haaayyy 😳 😍 ☺️ atleast kuch to phir se feel hua dono ko itne saalon baad 😳 😊 😊
lekin madam ji sorry sherni ji last mein uss bewakoof mitali ko ghusaane ki kya zaroorat thi achche scene mein ye jhatka dena important tha kya 😡 😆 😆
chalo ab jaldi aur achcha waala update likho jisme sirf prisha aur raj hon aur wo bhi bina unke differences ke ... understood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😉
chalo bohot saari badbad ki maine ab tum shuru karo... are nahi badbad nahi apne update ko post karne ki baari 😆 😆 😆
byeee😊 and take care😊
shreya😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Comments part 9:

Flashback...

Dev forcing Rajeev to participate and he refusing... reason was too good he doesnt want to compete with an animal...

Rajeev was so right Ashwin toh naa dosti naa dushmani ke layk hai ... Koi standard toh ho na chahiya for dosti and dushmani...

Dev emotional blackmail se Rajeev ko convince kar hee liya...
In the present wen rajeev would think of this dialogue he must be feeling so sad... He misses Dev so much...

Dev takes nupur to watch the race... But she doesnt want to watch Gorilla's circus...too good...He doesnt tell nupur that Rajeev is participating in the race...

The way Rajeev won the race was superb...

Rajeev is going to receive the winning trophy which every time goes to a chidiyaghar... pri u r too good loved this dialogue...

Ashwin is too bad... he hits a lady and runs without being bothered ... the way rajeev handled everything was very smart... telling the doc she is his mom so that doc admits her and the seeing prisha and asking for the ear rings as he needed money... and she is prisha's aunt

Prisha makes a nice bahana that she has given her earrings to nupur...

Mohitjee rewarded both rajeev n dev... Rajeev dev n nupur go to prisha's house... i think rajeev is hiding prisha's earrings in his jacket...

Prisha gets emotional seeing raj she tells raj abt herself ...the best part was rajeev saying nothing has happened to ur aunt she is fine and prisha hugging him...

Present...


the project he has asked her to handle is bcoz he knows she can teach ashwin a lesson as she shares the same feeling as him for mitali n ashwin...

so rajeev has taken prisha to the club so that he could make mitali jealous... so he ties her laces ... hte best dialogue was wen he says would u like to go inside like this...

Pri dear u r too good the concept and the story we all love but the dialogues u write r just fantastic dear...

Waiting for u to cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great part

Dev ki emotional blackmailing ke aage, Raj agrees to participate in the race. Nupur is surprised to see Raj participating in the race. Bike ki race toh raj ko hi jitni thi, ashwin did not stand any chance.

Dev was very important in Raj's life, he loved Dev very much and so that he could not even think of living without him. And now, when Dev is no longer in his life, the only aim left in Raj's life is to punish his murderers at any cost.

Raj takes, prisha's mami to the hospital, while Ashwin had just run away from the accident site.

Raj not only takes care of all the formalities at the hospital but also manages to arrange money for the treatment. Prisha is shocked when Raj asked for her ear rings but she gives it to him, sensing the urgency in his voice.

Raj is surprised to know that the lady he had saved was actually Prisha's mami, while prisha is equally shocked to know that Raj had saved her mami and had taken her ear rings to by the medicines.

Prisha is grateful to Raj for saving her mami's life. She get emotional thinking about what would happen if anything serious would have happened to her mami.

Mohitji is proud of Raj and dev for showing so much maturity and doing the right thing.

Coming to the present, prisha is feeling uncomfortable about going to the club with Raj, but does not have any option but to agree. She does not like it when he sees Raj drinking so much. Raj assures her that he will keep a control on the alcohol and is in perfect condition to drive.

Raj wants to make Mitali jealous by hanging out with Prisha. And his plan is working perfectly.

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
Rajeev would do anything for Dev...he misses him very much
Raj and prisha are both shocked to know that the lady whom Raj helped was prisha's mami. She is very greatful for his help
Raj is trying to make Mitali jealous
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
update! upadate!! we want an update!!!

kripaya kahani ka agla ansh jald prastut kijiye. ye ham sabhi pathako ka aapse vinamra anurodh hai. ham aasha karte hain ki ap hame nirash nahi karengi, apitu hamari bhavnao ki kadr karte hue ap agla bhag jald se jald dene ki kripa karengi.
hamare is nivedan ke karanvash aapko jo bhi kasht hoga uske lie ham kshamaprarthi hain. ummeed hai aap ham sabhi tutch, lobhi jeevon ko maaf kar dengi, kyonki kahin na kahin apse ye anurodh kar ke ham apke aur ham sabhi ke hriday pe shasan karne vale sri rajeev mathur ji ke prati apna prem bhi prakat kar rahe hain. ham apke aur sri mathur ke darshanabhilashi hain, aur yah bhi jahir karna chahenge ki rajeev ji ke sath-sath arjun ji, prisha ji, va nupur ji bhi apne karkamlon se hame pavitra kare. yadi dev ji bhi kuch purvadrishyon me najar aaye to hame accha lagega. yadyapi hamare man evam mastishk me aaswin tatha mitali ji ke liye adar va samman ki bhavana shunyapray hai, parantu unke karan hamara manoranjan bhali-bhati ho jata hai, to hame bharosa hai ki ve bhi avashya katha me drishtant honge. sadar dhanyavaad.
apke aur apse jyada rajeev ji va arjun ji😉😆(aur yadi dev ji jeevit hote aur sameer sharma ji unka kirdar nibha rahe hote to unke bhi) ke agaman me palke bichaye hue

vidushi.


Edited by lallulal2010 - 13 years ago

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